Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2016 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 17

    Thanks for the new chapter. So Rikert is still alive? You do tend to drop a huge piece of information and just let it drop – for now. I have to wonder if this is one of those times.

    Time for Brian to come home. That should be very interesting. I have to wonder what part he will now play. There is lot of things to wonder about. Nice going!

    DavidR

Author's Response:
I know, I'm bad that way. But all will be wrapped up. I'm trying something new with this story and instead of a quick and easy ending I'm making it a bit more satisfying and longer. I've been told that I can end stories to quickly, so don't fret! There's still more to go and plenty of answers to come. :) Thanks so much for all your wonderful reviews!! I love them. :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2016 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 17

Aww, I'm so glad both Justin and Carl are okay! And I love that scene at the hospital, especially the one between Debbie and Carl. Amazing job again, Kristine! Now, I can't wait for Brian to learn about what had happened. To say he won't be pleased shouldn't even start to cover it up. Thank you again, for this amazing, so well-written story! Love the emotions it provokes :) But I love everything you write so...

Author's Response:
I couldn't do anything too terrible. And thanks! I didn't expect so much love for the Debbie and Carl scene but a lot of people have commented on it. :) It makes me happy haha. And you're so right - he'll not be pleased AT ALL. Thank you for all the lovely reviews!! I always look forward to hearing from you.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2016 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 17

I was thinking the other day, that I had been missing this Fic!

I love this chapter! Not only because both Justin and Carl are OK, but also because Justin is being so brave, dealing with the hospital, the MRI and the almost-panic attack! Even the reunion with Debbie and Jennifer... it's all so "normal." I'm so very happy for him!

I also love his fierce protection of Brian, and wanting to shield him from this situation. Curious about the "look" that passed between Jen and Deb... more than "Mother thing," perhaps?

Deb and Carl are too cute!

Author's Response:
Yes lots of growth for Justin here - and much more to come! :) It's like a burst pipe, it's all going to come flooding out.

As for the look, they were just reacting to his protectiveness. Because they didn't expect it from him given how he'd been the past few months. So

Thank you so much for all the support! :)

Reviewer: Alana (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2016 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 17

I'm relieved that it turns out like this and i can't wait to see Brian's reaction when he discovers everithing!

Great story!!!

Author's Response:
Hopefully it's good. I know it seems like it's building, so I don't want to disappoint anyone when he does get back. Thank you!! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 17

It's good that Carl wasn't badly hurt and that Justin is remembering. But what will happen when Brian fnds out what happened?

Author's Response:
You'll find out in two more chapters - hopefully it won't be disappointing. ;) And I have come to like Carl more and more, so I couldn't do anything too bad to him haha. Thanks!

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