Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2016 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 16
OMG!! So many things I LOVE in this chapter. Firstly, I love the description, the atmosphere you're able to create with your words. I can imagine everything is my head adn my heart is pounding along with Justin. And Justin's memory, aww, so well described, so well-done! And of course, there is the action itself. I need to know! I'm selfishly happy to have waited to read this one because now, I can go and read the next one immediately!
And so, I have my response regarding your vacation ;) I hope it was great! Off to the next now :)
Author's Response: Whoops! I missed answering this review for some reason, sorry! That you so much for your lovely compliments! I always like to hear that I'm able to get across the environment that I see in my head! Thank you so much for all your support! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2016 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 16
No! You can't leave us like this! I'm gonna hope that Carl isn't badly hurt and will be there to rescue Justin.
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I felt bad, but that just made the suspense that much more potent, right? ;)
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2016 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 16
Once again, thanks for the story. This chapter was very
exciting, and truly wonderful to read. However, I don’t
understand why Rikert killed Stockwell. Not that I am
complaining or sorry.
The action and drama, and intensity was amazing.
Thanks again.
DavidR
Author's Response: And thank YOU for the reviews! It's always so great to hear what you think. :)
As for Rikert, his actions will be explained, I promise.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2016 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 16
How did I miss a chapter????? I was a bit confused at first when I started reading this and realized I was missing something. On the other hand, I did get a nice ling read tonight!
There were several times I found it difficult breathe while reading these scenes... the intensity and desperation Justin was feeling was palpable! Also, the little things, like Justin being able to calm himself down and a genuine feeling of wanting to survive his ordeal is very encouraging.
Still can't help wondering what Brian's reaction will be to this frightening turn of events.
Enjoy your vacation! I'll be here waiting... and I'll be sure not to miss a chapter again!
Author's Response: Haha, I've done that before! But it's kind of like a bous when that happens, right? ;)
I'm so glad you could feel the intensity - I worry when I write those kinds of scenes that the feelings fall flat, so I'm relieved!
You'll find out about Brian's reaction soon, but not quite yet (he might not be entirely pleased with Sunshine).
Thanks for all your support! :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2016 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 16
Ack! What a place to leave this at, Kristine! But I know you won't let anything serious happen to our boys. ) I am still loving the suspesne of this story! Have a great vacation, and I'll be eagerly waiting for the next part when you return. ~Kim
Author's Response: I know! I felt terrible, but you're right - I'm not that mean! Thanks so much and I'm glad you've been enjoying it! :)
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