Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2018 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 17- Arrival
Lol Justin really is like a jack in the box isn’t he. I can feel the excitement and nervousness jumping off the page. I think I would be the very same. I love how calm Cynthia is she grounded both boys and Brian surprising Justin with what he learned on his own. My heat broke a little when Brisn was talking to Jennifer about what the others thought. I think they will be great parents and they better not interfere.
Fantastic work x
Author's Response: They are just nervous
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 17- Arrival
I dont care how many times I read this chapter. I get all goose bumps when Justin comes rushing out. I cant explain it maybe it the talk with Jenn and Brian that was going on and then all the sudden Justin rushes out.
Jennifer reation is pricless
Thank you Love I always love this series/universe you have created and so happy that the muses will not let go :)
~Teresa~
Author's Response: So glad that you are enjoying the story. I'm always happy to hear that my readers can visualize events in their head as I write them.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 17- Arrival
And now it starts! Gus has his baby brother,Brian and Justin a baby boy,and Jenn is at last a grandma all the people that count are wildley in love with this tiny little guy, and the family can go to blazes if they don't like it.Ted and Em will back the new family and the others just don't matter. Great up date
Author's Response: I like Emmett and Ted- mostly-
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