Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2016 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 11
It's a true testament to just how disturbed Justin is, to have his entire demeanor crushed by something so completely out of his control... but maybe that's part of the problem. He feels he has no control over anyhting in his life.
I'm guessing his mood will improve when Brian brings the news of having found Hunter, but it's still scary to have so much of your own well-being locked up in what happens in other people's lives.
“He’s not my boyfriend. He’s…Justin. Okay? Just…focus here.”
Ha! Yes, Brian... whatever makes you feel better.
Author's Response: You're so right! Justin's emotions are very much based off of other people and that is a HUGE problem. He'll have to rediscover some of his old self if he wants to move on.
And I'm glad you liked that little bit with 'the boyfriend'. Despite how OOC Brian is in this fic, he's still Brian. ;)
Thanks!! :)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2016 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love this! It's a good thing that Hunter called Ben and I love how you use canon elements in here. Also, I love how Brian wants to protect Justin but also how he reacts to the 'boyfriend' notion. Haha... Okay, I'm definitely ready for more!
Author's Response: Aww yay! I wanted to connect the two so it flowed with what people were familiar with, so I'm glad it's working. :) And yeah, despite how I have him a bit more...affectionate, shall we say?, than the show, he's still Brian. ;) Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2016 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
Thanks for this update. Poor Justin. But now Hunter is found, maybe the police will believe him.
Hugs
Author's Response: We'll just have to hope and see. Justin is still going to have a rough time of things, but have faith. Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2016 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 11
Now we get to the meat of things. Great update
Author's Response: You're so right! The next few chapters will be pretty exciting. I hope you enjoy! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2016 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh no. Brian's found Hunter which is good. But the police, unless it's Horvath, is a bad idea. Love the 315 Baker St., Sherlock!
Author's Response: Yes! A step in the right direction. :) And I'm glad someone got the reference. I didn't want to make it too obvious, but Brian has been a little detective in this story, so I figured it fit. Thanks! :)
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