Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2016 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
Kristine!! I'm so late to read this, sorry for that. Blame RL :( But the good news is, I have two chapters instead of one! Yeah!!!
What can I say? I'm still enjoying this immensely. The connection between Brian and Justin is beautiful and I love the suspense and how smoothly you move the story along. I love the Hunter/Ben scene and how you connect all the characters. Off to read the next part immediately!
Author's Response: Oh no worries! I understand how life can get. And I'm glad you enjoyed them both! lol
I'm glad people have been enjoying Hunter's role in this; I'm not a huge fan of him and so I worried that I wouldn't pull it off. But it seems to be working.
Thanks so much for all of the feedback! :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2016 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 10
Brian - ever the detective - ha! Definitely fits in with his character. Ingenious to involve Hunter in the story, and I remember well the movie where Grace Kelly's character is almost caught snooping around.;) Still loving this one! Looking forward to the rest. And also enjoying the hurt/comfort/angst angle of it as well. Thank you. ~Kim
Author's Response: Brian just screams PI, doesn't he? I don't know what it is. ;) And I have to be honest, I'm not a huge fan of Hunter, buuuuut it was too perfect not to do it. Hopefully I get his character down right since I'm not too familiar with him. We'll see. Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2016 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
Well, I'm gld that Brian believes Justin, and wants to do something tangible to show it. But breaking into that apartment was pretty reckless! Hopefully now that he has a name, and Carl is still questiong his first instinct, and even with Debbie getting involved, Her natural pushiness penchant for gossip might just be a big help!
Author's Response: Right now Brian is operating under the belief that if he keeps pretending everything is okay, then it is. That might come to bite him in the ass soon...And you're right! Lots of people have a lot of little pieces. Maybe together they can get the whole picture. ;) Thanks so much!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 10
Hmmmm....things are taking a turn.
Author's Response: Well they're probably going to get worse before they get better. But our boys are tough. :) Thanks!
Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 10
Justin scared and Brian was there to calmed him down. I could go on for this moment forever!! Thats why I really love hurt/comfort category. I love your story authorrr. I hope Brian will all be okay because I cant imagine if something bad happens to him.. Justin may really go crazy this time..
Keep writing! Looking forward to see nxt chaps!
Author's Response: What can I say? I'm a sucker for those tender moments. :) And you're right, Brian is the only thing keeping Justin together at the moment. We'll just have to see what happens. ;) Thanks!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
I am so glad that Brian is believing in Justin. So close yet so far. How will Brian get to know Hunter? Can't wait to find out more.
Author's Response: You'll find out how they run into each other soon. :) Slowly things will come together. Thanks!!
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