Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2016 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wow... So many emotions in this chapter! I'm loving this more and more. Seriously, I can't wait to see what happens next. My heart goes out to Justin, and Brian. They are in such a difficult situation right now. I think deep down, Brian knows it can't be as simple as Justin being crazy. But anybody would question his sanity, especially when everybody (even a professional) tells Brian Justin IS crazy and needs help. It must be the worst for Brian, as he wants what is best for Justin. I hope he won't let his thoughts decide that he isn't what Justin needs in the end, because it would be disastrous for Justin. Ohh.. I can't wait!!
PS: I'm very glad you like the banner * big smile *
Author's Response: Every time I see a review from you I smile! I love hearing what you think. And you're right, Brian is going to have quite a delimna on his hands. He wants to do what's best for Justin, but he also doesn't want to admit that he's really sick and needs help. How long can he ignore what everyone else is saying and just rely on his hope? We'll have to see about that. :)
Of course I like it - it's amazing! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2016 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 8
It was very hard to read through the scene with Justin's meltdown. He must be absolutely terrified. But I am glad that Brian believed Justin and made the call to the police... even though it didn't end well. Hopefully Carl will listen to his "gut" feelings and follow up.
Love the new banner!
Author's Response: It was hard to write! :( He's going to have to overcome a lot of his troubles in the next few chapters, but I'm going to warn you that things are going to get worse before they get better. However, he'll still have Brian there with him. :) Thank you!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2016 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
This chapter left me a little unsettled. It seems that no matter what Justin does, all anyone except Brian sees is a crazy person who has delusions. And on top of that Alex is even suggesting that Justin be committed...yeah not a big fan of that idea lol. Idk...I have a feeling that Justin might have heard their conversation and won't stick around to see if Brian will truly send him away.
As for Carl, he could have easily gone into the building to check things out without his partner if he felt that something rang true with what Justin said he saw.
Author's Response: Unfortunatly everyone, especially Alex, are detatched from the situation. Brian loves Justin, so he wants to overlook a lot of things. Of course, we all see more of Justin and what's in his head than everyone else. But they just see a sick boy who hasn't gotten any better. And for Carl, you're absolutely right, but he also falls into the last catagory. He may have some pity for Justin, but he still just sees a sick kid. Hopefully that will change though. Thank you!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2016 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
Loving this story, Kristine! So engrossing, and I can see this playing out in my head. Will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: Oh good! I'm so glad you think so. :) I hope you continue enjoying it. Thanks!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2016 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 8
I'm sure that Brian wants to believe Justin and he should. Now someone is dead and nobody believes him. Kinda like Jason Kemp.
Author's Response: Yeah he may want to, but more and more people are beginning to tell him how bad Justin is doing. It might be harder for him to ignore them. Or not. ;) We'll see. Thank you!
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