Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
I never thought I'd say it but I can relate to Joan here. Fell a year ago and broke a collar bone.
:)
Author's Response: I had a friend who broke his collarbone a few years ago. That gave me the idea for Joan's injury. I hope the injury is the only way you relate to Joanie. Bill
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 7
Ugh, Michael. No progress there. Everything's all about Mikey and his skewed perceptions. How Ben puts up with him, I'll never know.
I do hope Lindsay truly wants to make an effort with the murals as well as to reconnect with Justin. Like Brian, I'm skeptical. But, maybe, she's benefitting from therapy and making progress.
I feel for Brian, having to take care of his witch of a mother. Thank goodness he has Justin to help ease the burden.
Author's Response: Mikey's world has a very different reality from the world most of us dwell in. Ben may have had enough of Mikey soon. Lindsay is a mystery that we will have to solve in future chapters. Justin wants to give her a chance to trun her behavior around. Sadly there is no one else to deal with Joan but Justin always has Brian's back. Thanks for your support!! Bill
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2016 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
Hi, Bill! Aaargh! You certainly keep us guessing where you're going with this story. Joan? Ugh! But not unexpected at all. Poor Brian - wants to do the right thing, even after the way his mother has treated him. Love how supportive this family unit of Brian and Justin's is. Shows what a true family reaily is, whether related by blood or not.
Thanks again for the update! Looking forward eagerly to more, of course. ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim, have to have a little drama every once in a while. The big mystery is where will Joan wind up. Jennifer always says their family is joined by love. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!!! Bill
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2016 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 7
Mikey is still a B-----d, always complaining about how much of Brian's money Justin spends. Don't think even if Mikey was shown a bank balance of Justin's he still would insist that Brian gave it to Justin. So love how Brian stood up for himself and Justin,but as usual it flew right over Mikey's head. Blake was right onto Mikey's verbal assult regarding Ted,supporting him and stating how ethical an effecient he is with his job, also letting Mikey know that they are friends as well as Ted being an employee of Brian's. Like some other readers I don't understand Ben's attraction to Mikey,especially with Mikey being so selfish and rude.
The boys can't seem to get a break, now Joanie. Can't see her going back and living alone. Going to be some hard times when it comes towhere she will go.
I'm with Brian on Justin's decision in letting Linz help him with the mural. Know he has good intentions but I don't trust Linz. Even with her therapy, I have a feeling she would still stab you in the back and especially now that she and the rest of the family knows about the Twins. Hate to say I expect the worst from her,plus Mikey.
Fantastic update, plus the whole fic. Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response: Hi JoAnn, always great to hear from you. Mikey operates in a different universe than the rest of us. Reality has little meaning to him. I think Brian's words may have made a little chink in Mikey's self delusion armour. I think Ben enjoys having someon dependent on him and knows Brian has no romantic interest in Michael. The options of where Jona can go are very limited. Justin likes to look for the good in people and Brian is always suspicious. Might be a good idea to be a little suspicious of Lindsay's motives but maybe it will work out well for everyone???? Glad to know you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 7
Mickey did his best to ruin everything, but he failed. I think, it´s Ben who is hurting most. Why are they still a couple? And what will Hunter think? Poor guys, poor family...! Can´t anybody stop this shit with M.? I hope Blake´s and Brian´s word will reahc his heart.
B&J have so much love! Not too much harmony - thank Joanie. Will they take her in in the end? Will she be the nice grandma like Viola, as the boys deserve so much? Hahahah - just a crazy thought, that will never happen. It seems there are always some bumps in the road. Enjoyed this chapter, not Lindsays "ideas"...thank you and go on!
Author's Response: Hello my friend, always nice to see comments from you. Mikey still thinks that Justin is taking advantage of Brian. I think Ben is happy enough with Mikey as long as they have minimal interaction with Bran and Justin. I don't really see Joan as a nice grandma, she just have the personality to it. It will be difficult to find anyone to take care of Joan she is so hard to get along with. Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for reviewing, I enjoy getting those!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
The Joan situation is scary. I'm so glad to that Brian told Michael off. I don't trust Lindsay's motive in wanting to help Justin.
Author's Response: Let's be honest, everything about Joan is scary. Hope it penetrated into Mikey world. Justin thinks the best, we will have to wait and see how that painting together works out. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
Keep up the good work with this wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments and for reviewing!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
My Sweet Baboo, this chapter was terrific! As sure as death and taxes mikey was once again an ass. The way he talked to Ted, it was apalling that anyone even speaks to that clown. I thought that Kevin was so cute when telling his mom and dad about the babies, how they would be his cousins and the uncles said he could help. The Kinneys and the Taylors have shown such love and care and Kevin justs blooms when they are together. I guess I'm a cynic, I think Lindz is only being nice to Justin to please Brian so he will take her side on some hidden agenda. As for Joan I feel bad for her she pushes everyone away, at the same time I hurt for Brian--he tries but she won't give an inch, I guess there is always hope. More chapters please. Love, your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, Always happy to hear from you! We can always count on Mikey although a review on another site was extremely unhappy with my take on Mikey. I enjoy the Kevin character a lot, he is all about love!!!!! Kevin is used to needing help so I think it is a big thrill fro him to have an opportunity to help. I think we are all wondering about Lindsay and what her plans are. Justin is being Justin and looking on the sunny side of the street. More on Joan in the next chapter. I think your mother is always yur mother even if you wish that was not true!!! Thanks for all your comments and support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sweet B
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 7
Poor boys - they seem go from one disaster to another - it's keeps life interesting. Michael is such a weasel - I'm glad Brian put him in his place and so eloquently too....LOL. I'm with Brian - I don't trust Lindsay - after everything she's done she'll need to prove she can be trusted but at the moment I keep thinking Justin will be hurt again. Ted really is a very good friend. It's a good thing that a break in Joan's habits caused the church to check on her - this could have ended so differently. I wonder how much trouble she's causing at the hospital - too much yelling could result in a doctor with a large needle of sedative and a physc evaluation - which might be a good thing. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: But no disaster can defeat the B&J team. They will even be able to overcome the Mother of all disasters (clever play on words??). Brian gave Mikey food for thought, let's hope Mikey can digest it. Justin wants to give Lindsay the benefit of the doubt, we'll have to wait and see how that works out. I think we can be sure Joan is charming the ER staff in her own unique style, hope they have the hypos loaded and ready! Always good to read your comments!!!! Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 7
great update- Poor Brian- he dislikes his mother but is the only one who can help- Of course, his mother hates him so it should be interesting
Author's Response: I think the Brian & Joan saga could be very interesting. You are correct there is no one else to deal with Joan. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 7
Had to figure Mikey would act like a baby since the actual babies are not there yet. I agree with Brian something bad will come from Lindsay helping with the murals. Time to put Joan in the nursing home because there is no where else for her to go and there is no chance of her going anywhere near Brian and Justin's house. Wow I think you are going to hit the goal I begged for thanks in advance of the third chapter in April.
Author's Response: Hope you are feeling OK, this is your shortest review ever! Justin is ready to give Lindsay a second chance, time will tell if she deserves it! Maybe Joan could rob a liqour store so she could wind up in prison with Claire. They could take care of each other. Somehow I don't think Joan will be willingly to a nursing home. Arrest may be the only alternative???? Even though it is short thanks for the review you know I love to get them!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thanksgiving and the news of the twins was wonderful news for everyone. Being congratulated hugged and kissed is it any wonder Brian took off before it could start again with all the good-byes. Michael Michael Michael. Not only is he going to lose Brian's friendship, but probably Ted's too and if not careful maybe his husband. I'm with Brian, Lindsay helping on the murals is definitely asking for trouble. Have a feeling Brian and Justin are going to be having a house guest for a short while. And Christmas is right around the corner. Think there will be a change in Joan's thinking once she sees how Brian lives his life with Justin?
Author's Response: It was good Thanksgiving and I agree Brian took as much as he could and needed time away from hugs and emotions. Mikey is Mikey. I think LIndsay and Justin paiting murals could prove to be very interesting. Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Joan staying with B&J now there is a surpirse plot twist!!!!!! That could be really interesting. Gald you enjoyed the latest chapter. Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2016 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 7
It's good to read about a couple that support each other.
Babies! I am glad to see the future of this story being laid out ahead of us. I want to keep reading about this family for a long time!
Author's Response: It took them a while to get there but they do seem to have that support each other thing down now. I think twins will yield a lot of story lines. As long as the readers keep reviewing I'll keep writing. Thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying the story!!!! Bill
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
Michael, Michael, Michael... It sounds like Thanksgiving was a success, and everyone is thrilled about the twins, well almost everyone...
Maybe with Joan being in the tub for days, it might be a good time for her to check into rehab...
Great Update!
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Mikey is never changing. It is nice to have things in life that we can count on! I'm not sure that Joan is incapacitated enough for them to force her into rehab. Nothing wrong with her legs, she can still run and kick. Glad you enjoyed the update.
Hugs back, Bill
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2016 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 7
Michael sure is trying to alienate everyone in his life.
Love Brian explaining things to him like he is mentally challenged.
Don't know if Lindsay is coming around or what.
Love Brian and Justin's relationship.
Maybe he can put Joan in a home (not theirs)
Still loving this story.
Lorie
Author's Response: I believe that Brian thinks Mikey is mentally challenged, he has known him for a long time! We will have to wait and see how Lindsay behaves. Maybe electricity was the right answer for her. All I will say about Joanie is around and around she goes and where she lands nobody knows...yet??? Thanks for letting me know you are still loving the story, never get tired of hearing that!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2016 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
I love of your stories there are too many angst fics out there between the boys I want to thank you for that anywho . This chapter was awesome I love how Blake put Michael in his place and Lindsey lol what is she up too I got a bad feeling about this
Author's Response: This is a low angst story, glad you enjoy that. The problem is Michael keeps excaping from his plave when people put him there. I agree Lindsay needs careful watching!! Thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate it!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2016 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy. Another chapter!!! Dancing for joy. Love how Blake talked to Michael. Then Mikey turns around and tells Ben but changes it. I really do not see how much longer Ben can take dealing with Mikey and his misconceptions. Love how Brian but Mikey in his place. Even Melanie wasn't please with her daughter's father. Gotta love Kevin, he's such a cutie. Poor Brian having to deal with his mother, his naked mother. Shudder. At least Justin will be there to give him some support. Great job!!!
Author's Response: I had to post a chapter, you sre shaming me with your fast updates!!! Mikey is the character we all love to hate and we can depend on him to always do something that we dislike. I do love Kevin, he is just all good feelings. I've know a few Downs people and I think for the most part they have a lots of love to give. The thoughts of a naked Joan may give me nightmares. I used to deliver meals on wheels and once I used the key to walk into a house and there was the older woman getting a sponge bath from a nurse right on the bed in the living room. The nurse started yelling for me to get out and I had my eyes closed holding out the food to her. I couldn't get out of there fast enough!!! Talk about SHUDDER!! Luckily the recipient either did not recognize me on subsequent deliveries or chose not to recognize me.
Thanks, my friend for all your support. I hope anyone who reads this and hasn't read your story, reads and reviews it today!!! It is a great story with such a fascinating & unique story line. Bill
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2016 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 7
I would complain about Michael but I doubt it'll do any good with the way you write him except to raise my blood pressure. Ben is going to stay with him. Brian talks but he doesn't do anything. I don't blame Mikey for continuing to be nasty and smug. He knows he can get away with it with no consequences because they show him he can. It a few of the other characters I've lost respect for when it comes to Michael.
Author's Response: Wel I'm glad you didn't complain??? I think when someone has been your friend for a long time you let them get away with a lot of BS. Brian has a lot of good memories of the past when Mikey was a really good friend to him. Cutting off Mikey means cutting off Debbie and neither Brian or Justin want to lose Debbie. His "friends" are frustrated and so are you, I do get that. I just don't think there is an easy solution. And Mikey serves a purpose in the story, he annoys us all. Hope you enjoyed the non-Mikey parts of the story. I do appreaciate your comments and I'll think about where the Mikey storyline goes, I promise!!! Bill
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2016 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 7
Thank you for the update. Was chomping at the bit, anxiously awaiting M & L's reaction to the twins.
Micheal was as expected. He really is insufferable. Will there come a point where Ben just throws up his hands in dispair and frustration and walks away...permanantly? It really must rub him the way Micheal is forever going on and on about B&J. Constantly making such nasty and ignorant comments. Ted, Blake and Mel certainly had their say, Didn't do much mind you. :) Brian may have more of an impact, but who knows. Micheal seems to think that any threat from Brian is just hooey anyway. that Brian will always forgive him...will always need him. He just can't seem to figure it out.
I'm wondering about Lindsey. What do you have up your sleeve for us...Has being away really done her any good or is she such a good manipulator that she's fooled everyone? Curiouser and curiouser. :) Brian certainly doesn't seem to trust her, but justin's willing enough. Hopefully he doesn't go in with blinders on. Gotta be on your toes with Lindsey!
I'd love to say "poor Joan", but the words just can't seem to come out without a very sarcastic and mean tone to it. :)
Oh....just thought of something. She's going to need help....Brian will just hire someone right?? I mean....she's not going to stay at Britin is she?? (My eyes are HUGE and nervous right now!!) :)
So thrilled to see this update. I was checking my email and got the notification. So I hurredly went to read it Screw work for a bit....it can wait.
Cheers!
Elaine
Author's Response: Hi Elaine, Wow you read and reviewed quickly. Always happy to know you enjoyed the latest update. I like to think of Mkkey as consistent, we always know what we are going to get with him. I think Mikey doesn't like that Ted no longer has a crush on him. Must be a little ego brusing to have two men have blonds in their lives and no romantic interest in Mikey. I think the Justin/Lindsay interaction will be interesting. Brian will hire someone but Joan is difficult to deal with. May not be easy to get someone to stay with her..... wonder what will happen then???????? Stay tuned. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
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