Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
The pain they are both in! Heartbreaking!
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2016 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
I like how you wove the first part into the story. Is this the guy that gets killed or does the killing I wonder. Whomever he is his father is a combination of Jack and Craig.
Please get Brian some help before he loses it too.
Author's Response: You'll find out soon who he is - The clues I add in later are very obvious so you should know pretty soon. And yeah, Brian will have to struggle a little bit more before he realizes how bad things really are. Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm late this time, but always as eager to know what's coming, if not more. I repeat it, I love your writing style. I'm so glad you're back!!!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you my friend! It's always good to hear from you! I hope you conitnue to enjoy it. :)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm enjoying it. I'm very intrigued as to who the subplot person is. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Oh good! I'm glad. :) The subplot person will be easy to figure out pretty soon. Thanks for letting me know! I appreciate it.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2016 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
Yeah...this is going to be a tough read.
Author's Response: I hope tough in a good way? If not, let me know what I can do better. :) Thanks!
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2016 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 2
Just found this and I'm hooked!
I like that the chapters start with a small flashback... I like the contrast it gives with the current story.
Poor Justin, there's so much more going on there than I suspect Brian is even aware of... and how will Brian deal with the stress of the enormous responsibility. Already looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh yay! I'm so glad to hear that! And yes, Brian had no idea how badly Justin is really doing and that will definitely play a big part in what is to come. I hope I don't disappoint! Thanks!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2016 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
You show the problems that were never shown in the show. It would not have been easy. My question is - who is the beginning paragraph about?
Author's Response: That was one of the few qualms I had with the beginning of the second season. It seemed like they kept saying Justin was still recovering, but besides his hand we didn't see much. So I wanted to delve into that a lot more. :) As for the other part, you'll find out soon. I don't exactly hide his identity very much in the coming chapters. Thank you!
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2016 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
Am I enjoying it? Heck yes. This is GREAT! I love how sweet and caring Brian is. And how he defended what he was doing for Justin to Mikey. And this part, “That’s it…That’s my boy.” < that broke my heart but made me smile at the same time.
I cannot wait for more. x
Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad!! Yeah, I love a protective Brian myself, so there'll definitely be a lot of that in this story. :) I hope you continue to enjoy it as we go on. Thanks!
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