Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2016 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

So sorry this one had to get reposted. So happy to see you with us, too.

:)

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2016 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 4

What a marvelous chapter!

I like how Brian firmly dealt with Joan in regard to Claire. Carole was right to distinguish between Joan and Jen. Jen's the real mother than Joan doesn't care to be.

Squeeing with happiness over the twins for Justin and Brian. :)

I love the way Justin insisted on hearing what happened to Peter at school directly from Peter. He knows he can trust Peter to tell him the truth (vs. the administrators who might slant the story to suit their own interests).

Justin and Brian stay strong in their anti-bullying stance, not accepting any excuses from school administrators, Joe, or Joe's parents. Sad that Frank has molded his son into a bully in his own image, one who's 'forceful' to get his own way. Without intervention, Joe's not going to change; it may already be too late.

Wow! Those mighty women: Cynthia, Jennifer, and Alice! Cynthia makes the best suggestion about approaching Harkins' Tires chief competitor to advertise for them. She delights in telling Frank that he's no longer a Kinnetik client.

The extended family and Kinnetik employees, as well as many parents of Peter's classmates all rally behind the Peter, Justin, and Brian, just as they should.

I'm behind in reading my favorite QaF stories, of which yours is definitely one. The upside is that I have four more chapters of reading enjoyment before I'm caught up. Yum!

Author's Response:
Brian usually doesn't have any trouble lettng his mother know how he feels. Joan mostly lives in her own reality that doesn't really translate well to real life. Justin has had some unpleasant experience with bullying and school adminstrators so he was smart to go to the source for his information. The ladies are always looking out for B&J. I think it will be interesting to see B&J dealing with twins. Hope you enjoy all the chapters as you catch up on the story. Thanks for the review!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 4

Just reviewing this chapter again : ) Joanie lives in her own little world when it comes to Clare and the boys are going to have their hands full with twins, it should be interesting once they are born. Great chapter, Bill, I liked it just as much the second time as I did the first. I see you also have a new chapter up so I’m off to read and review it : ) *Hugs* Janet

Author's Response:
Thanks for the repeat. I hate to lose my review because I love them so much!!! Hugs back to you, Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 4

Still loving this story. I don't remember what was in my lost review, but I'm thrilled that it's twins. Great chapter.

Lorie

Author's Response:
Thanks for reposting your review. Not sure what happened, kind a a drag when we lose info but life goes on. Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

Joanie's a trip and a half, thinking that because she says John and Peter need to see their mother that that's going to happen. Good thing that Brian told her off.

Justin was excited especially when they found out there were two babies!!! Wonder what names they'll come up with.

Then there was Peter's confrontation with Joe. I couldn't get over them trying to suspend Peter when he was not in any way at fault. Then the never of Joe's parents trying to intimadate Brian and Justin. Not going to happen. Frank's going to find out he need Kinnetik more than Kinnetik need him.

Love Alice with the frying pan. Shame she didn't get to use it.

Author's Response:
My friend, you know how I LOVE to get reviews. Thanks for reposting your review. As a reward I just posted chapter 5!!! You're the best. Thanks, Bill

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