Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2015 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 6

Agreed with Brian that it's times to change. Knowing his child on medication bcos the mess at home & safe guard Brian from it. No child should be put in this situation.

Jenny and Gus ever truly showing their bond ship as Gus always be there for Jenny when she needed him.

Oh goodness till stage all Lindsay think about her needs instead of Gus. Thank goodness that Gus had dads to rely on.

Gus is great, knowing that he could stay with his dad's if they get the custody. But for Jenny sake, he opted to wait for a while.

Hilarious the interaction between Gus & Jenny on wanting to know more on the gay sexual subject.

Amazing. Love long chapter.

 

Author's Response:

These chapters are indeed long, and I sometimes have a difficult time deciding where exactly to cut them off :)

Gus and his sister do have an amazing and protective bond with one another.  Gus is like his father in so many ways, and one of those attributes being that he takes care of, and looks out for, those he loves.  In my opinion, such a trait is very admirable!  I'm delighted you liked the humor and good-natured interaction between Jenny and Gus.  I think, that because they are teenagers, it only made the situation more amusing :)

Mel and Linds have a great deal of drama going on in their life, but as the story progresses, that aspect will finally come to fruition, and they will discover how their negative behavior has left an impact on both of their children's lives.

More to come soon!  Thank you for your continued support through your encouraging and insightful comments!!  So deeply appreciated!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2015 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 6

Absolutely love this amazing story! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Your supportive feedback is greatly appreciated!  So glad to hear you are enjoying the story!  Next chapter will post soon :)

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2015 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter.  Just a question- why does Justin encourage Brian to smoke with his heart, and blood pressure issues?  Wouldn't the doctor tell him to stop smoking?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I'm so very happy that you are enjoying this story, and liked the capter!! :)

Yes, I think that Justin, and the doctor, would like for Brian to stop smoking, but we all know how independent Brian Kinney is!  (I'm recalling the scene in QAF, following Brian's radiation treatments for cancer, when he's in the doctor's office having a check-up, and he asks the doctor when he can resume taking his recreational drugs again.)  Brian generally takes care of his health, eats right and excercises regularly, but I think that alcohol and cigarettes are 2 things he's not yet ready to quit.

I greatly appreciate your feedback!!  Story update will be soon!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

What a wonderful long chapter. I really feel for those two kids. Gus is a great big brother. I understand why Mel's is so pissed off with Lindsay - being cheated on for a year would definitely make me go for blood. Pity that in her anger and Lindsay's selfish behaviour that they both have forgotten their kids. I could go off on a rant - it's all going on in my head - about both of them - but instead I'll wait and read what you have in store for us next.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!  I'll update soon, and try not to make you wait too long :)

Mel and Lindsay definately have some serious things to work through, and those roads are never easy.

Yes, I believe Gus is wonderful with his little sister, much like how his father is; Brian, too, wants to take care of those he loves.

Thank you so very much for your encouraging comment!!  I'm so happy to hear you're enjoying the story!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love this nice long chapter.  It's great that Brian and Justin are there for the kids.  Shame the other three parents aren't.  Ben is great and Mikey is just as much a drama queen as Mel and Linds.  I fear for JR if Gus ever moves away.  Hope we get another chapter soon.

Author's Response:

I'm delighted you liked this capter!  Thanks for commenting!!  The story will be updated soon :) 

I think Brian and Justin have a unique insight as parents that Ben, Michael, Lindsay, or Mel, don't have...they want to be the type of supportive fathers they never had, and want Gus to know they will always be there for him.

Yep, poor Mikey will probably always have a bit of drama queen inside him :)

Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback!!