Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2015 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh I feel for Justin on his limitations and grateful Brian is always there for him.
Poor Gus & JR on their own when sick but lucky grandma is there for them unlike their mums not putting their children as priority.
Just wonder how long more Brian had to clean up the Mel & Lindsay mess.
Author's Response: I can totally imagine Deb being utterly devoted to her grandkids :) And, she doesn't pull any punches, either, which is a good thing in this situation!
Brian and Justin are truly a devoted couple. They are precisely where, and with whom, they want to be, and both will do anyting for each other.
Regarding Mel and Lindsay, well, let's just say that as you continue through the story, Brian and Justin will be cleaning up a few more messes for the two women ;)
Thank you so very much for your feedback! I appreciate it tremendously, and I'm happy you are enjoying reading this story!! :)
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
i want more of this
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reading and commenting! The next chapter will be posted soon :)
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2015 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
Such an exciting story. Nice long chapters, the boys in love. I never want to stop reading..
Mel's not a happy camper. Maybe she should go live with whomever was on the phone. Seems like she's trying to play the woe is me pity card.
Loved how Brian handled Gardner. Yes, Ted definitely deserves a raise.
Glad Justin was willing to delegate. But yeah, Brian never told him what to do before. Gus is so wise at times.
There's more I want to say and I did comment on the last chapter, but it's too early in the morning for more.
Just update soon. Can't wait for whatever Mel's up to to come out. Looks like Gus may be living in NY before college.
Author's Response: I'm delighted to know you're enjoying the story!! The next chapter will be posted soon.
There are some issues with Lindsay and Mel, to be sure. We'll discover more about what they are shortly.
Althoug Brian has never tried to dictate to Justin in the past, I think his frustration, combined with his worry for Justin, compelled him to say what he did. Yes, Gus is an insightful young man, and both his dads have very distinctive personalities, so he was able to read them well in that situation.
Thank you so much for reading and for your supportive comments, they are both immensely appreciated!
Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2015 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 4
What is Mel's problem? I wonder if she IS having an affair. Both she and Lindsay sure terrible parents! Neither of them even acted nurturing with the two sick kids!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback! I greatly appreciate it!!
A lot is going on with Mel and Lindsay and we'll learn more about what it is in the next cahpter :)
I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story. More will be posted soon.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2015 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow so much going on in this chapter. Thank goodness Deb and Carl could get to Toronto for the kids. Lindsay and Mel obviously do have something weird going on and I look forward to finding out what it is
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2015 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow so much going on in this chapter. Thank goodness Deb and Carl could get to Toronto for the kids. Lindsay and Mel obviously do have something weird going on and I look forward to finding out what it is
Author's Response: It was a busy chapter, to be sure :) Deb and Carl are indeed devoted grandparents. We'll have to wait, though, to discover what's been going on with Mel and Lindsay.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Both are so greatly appreciated!! :)
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2015 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 4
Interesting story.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you're enjoying the story! The next chapter will be posted soon. Thank you so much for your supportive feedback! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2015 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
Enjoy this story very much! Love these long detailed chapters! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm delighted to hear you're enjoying the story! More will be posted soon :)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2015 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another addiction? An affair? Ooh imagine Mel actually having an affair with a man, now that would be very interesting...
Where will you take us next? I can't wait for more...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thanks greatly for commenting, my dear! There are definately some things brewing in this chapter ;) Indeed, Mel having an affair with a man would be VERY interesting!
I can't give away too much ahead of time, but there are going to be some interesting curves in the road for several of the characters.
Thank you for reading!! I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story!!
Later, Hon. Aislin
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2015 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is now becoming my favorite story after PA Boi's. You may make us wait, but you give us action. Poor Gus being sick and having to deal with it alone, then JR comes down with it and he has to help with her. Good that Deb and Carl are there. Why is Lindsay delibrately trying to push the blame on Brian? Is it so that Melanie won't blame her? It is mean of her to do so. As much as Gus wants to move back to Pitts permanently I don't think he'll leave JR to the mercy of the moms. What is Melanie's problem now, if it's not drinking?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouraging feedback!! I'm delighted you are enjoying the story!!
There were a lot of different angles going on at once in this capter. Yes, it's defintely a good thing Deb and Carl were there for the kids, and we know that Deb will stand up to the two moms, which is a good thing in this situation.
You've mentioned some excellent and very on-point observations! Those very things are all going to be brought to light, but we'll have to wait until the next chapter :)
Thanks greatly for reading and commenting!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2015 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
There is so much going on here I don't know where to start. First off, what kind of mother doesn't take care of their kid when they're sick? Thank goodness for Carl and Debbie. I have the same thoughts as Justin does about Mel having an affair. If she isn't having an affair, then she is doing something underhanded to keep everyone away from the kids.
Please update soon ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!!
I think Deb and Carl are caring and concerned Grandparents. Grandma's and Grandpa's usually turn into big softies whenever it comes to their grandkids!
In Justin's litlle drama-queen moment, he MIGHT be on to something...
I greatly appreciate your feedback!! Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2015 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
Poor Justin - still having to deal with physical stuff - I have enough trouble with RSI in my right thumb from working on the computer - RA would be devastating for an artist.
What is it with those two women - leaving such sick kids at home, even if they are teenagers - okay once they're over the vomiting and fever I could leave them for a few hours if I had to work but I would be checking on them constantly. No way would I leave kids in that condition - Deb has every right to be so angry. The boys need to get there and find out what's going on. I'm going to be greedy and ask for the next chapter please.
Author's Response: I feel for Justin, too. Brian is remaining his stalwalt, though his frustration and strong desire to help can come across brusque at times :) But we know they'll always learn how to manage, and they'll always have each other to to rely on! (I can sympathize with the RSI and the RA. Unfortunately, both can strike at any time and at any age.)
I think Lindsay and Mel are in a pickle...and we'll find out soon precisely what that is :) Currently, they're both so wrapped up in their issues, they've developed a 'blind-eye' to things around them. It's a good thing that Debbie is a devoted, and boisterous, grandma! She's not afraid to confront whatever it is she feels needs to be, and does it head-on.
I appreciate your feedback immensely! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I will update soon :)
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2015 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh Boy! it's the calm before the storm!!!
Author's Response: You stated that perfectly! The calm before the storm. Although there will be an interesting twist to the storm. Uh-oh, I have to be careful...can't give out any spoilers ;)
Thanks for much for reading and commenting! Both are greatly appreciated!!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2015 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Mel should know better than to go up against Debbie. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Absolutely! Mel should know better :)
I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you so much for reading and for commenting!!
The next chapter will add an interesting twist...
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