Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2015 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 3
Love the fact the family chip in to support the children. It's showcase true family values.
Enjoying the story.
Author's Response: I'm thrilled to know how much you like this story! Thank you so very much for commenting!!
Yes, this is a very special family, and with Gus' and JR's dads, especially, they are all about being supportive of their children. They all have very special, and very devoted, connections to one another.
Thanks for reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses!! :)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
This should be interesting, I'm not sure if I'm rooting for Mel and Lindsay to succeed, or fail... I think the kids need to live with their fathers, and let the girls work on themselves and their relationship... It's always been rocky, and kids only added to all the stress...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I wholeheartedly agree with you, my dear! There are certin situations upcoming in the plotline, though, that develop from Gus and J.R. returning home to live with their moms. It was the reason why, at least for now, they are still living there. It was someting I debated, but, hopefully everything will all gel together later on :)
You're right about Mel and Linds, their relationsip always did appear rocky, and they yelled and argued in front of Gus quite a bit. They have quite a bit to work on in their relationsip now, too. We'll keep our fingers crossed that the kids will be able to one day soon, live with their respective dads.
Thank you so very much for reading and for your feedback!! It's greatly encouraging!!
Aislin
Reviewer: Ami (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2015 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 3
So intrigued to see how things develop with Mel, just hope it turns out well for the kids whatever the outcome! Love your writing style, thank you for sharing this
Author's Response: I really appreciate your comment and encouragement! Thank you!! I'm happy to hear you like the story!!
There are intriguing developments to the story, which will be posted soon :)
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2015 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter, very well written.
This is how I imagine Brian and Justin would really act as fathers to Gus.
I don't trust Mel. This all seems like an act she would put on just to get everyone off her back.
Author's Response: Thanks so very much for your encouraging words! I'm delighted you're enjoying the story!!
Mel is certainly an interesting character, and I'm sure we've not heard the last from her ;)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2015 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, lots happening in this chapter. Can't help wondering what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Brian and Justin, and the rest of their family, certainly are busy :) There is more in store for all of them, too, coming up!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I greatly appreciate it!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 3
I kind of feel bad for saying that I'm a bit disappointed that Brian wouldn’t allow Gus to live with them at the present...waiting until after graduation seems so far away. I know it's for the best though.
Author's Response: I totally understand what you're saying! I, too, struggled with that aspect of the story. But, (without giving out any spoilers), there are situations and events that will arise later on that will coincide and 'play-off-of' the fact of Gus, and J.R., too, returning to their moms in Toronto. There is much more angst on the horrizon. :)
Thank you for reading, and I greatly appreciate your feedback!!
More will be posted soon ;)
Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 3
So JR is afraid of Mel because Mel hit her, but it's all Brian's fault. Right. Hopefully therapy will open her eyes that not everything in life if Brian's (the family scapegoat's) fault and she needs to take responsibility for her own actions. For a lawyer, she sure doen't deal well with facts, at least when it comes to her own life.
Author's Response: Beautifully said!! Unfortunately, Mel always did seem to have a hair-trigger response whenever it came to Brian. Even in the show, she hated the fact that Brian was Gus' father. Sad. Let's hope the therapy works and she can at least find balance and some semblence of self-control when dealing with Brian and Gus, but especially with J.R.
I greatly appreciate your comment!! Thank you so much for reading :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
So much happening. Christmas shopping was funny with Brian and Justin going out of their way to do what the thought Gus wanted. Will Melanie be able to change? Only time will tell. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Action is happening everywhere :) I'm glad you liked the humorous Christmas shopping trip with the three Kinney men! Next, we'll have to find out how Mel is progressing.
Thanks for your feedback!! I'm delighted you enjoyed the chapter!!
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