Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 24, 2015 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 67

First I think it would be great for Ted and Blake to raise a child. Nina would be a perfect fit. Just make sure it's all legal before the grandmother dies.
Now John. He probably never thought there would 35 people who'd want to help him celebrate his birthday let alone be allowed to. Celebrate away. He deserves it.
Tim. Such a bad match for Kinnetik. A mister know-it-all who seems to want to take over the company and run it his way. Yeah like that would ever happen.
Hope Greg will do better.
Ha! Justin shopping at the Gap boys who take after Brian. What could be funnier?

Author's Response:

I wasn't sure what readers would think about a new addition for Ted & Blake but several people like the idea.  I think the custody stuff could be Melanie's first back in the USA lawyering.  Tim thought he was a perfect fit but he was the only one who thought that.  I think the birthday party will be a fun event.  Thanks for all the nice comments!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2015 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 67

I can't believe Tim, that jerk wouldn't be hired by McDonalds with his attitude.. I'm surprise he was hired at an agency dealing with advertising, he had not idea about Justin or Cynthia's place at Kinnetik and was a real piece of work. I'm sure Lindsey is up to no good (isn't she always) I miss Gus, he's such a sweetie.

Author's Response:

Tim made the big mistake of not listening, just talking.  He was way too sure he was just what Kinnetik wanted and needed.  Anyone who tells Justin its is a waste of time talking to him will never get hiredby Brian.  Gus will be back for the big birthday party.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2015 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 67

One down, one to go. It became obvious early on that Tim wasn't the one for the job.  Now back to the top.  Love the look at Ted's personal life. Now he's gonna get a chance to be a dad!  Can't wait to read about John's party, sounds like it's going to be something that John's never experienced.  John and Peter have certainly changed from when they first arrived. 

Author's Response:

There is only room for one giant egp at Kinnetik and that spot is taken.  Glad you like idea of Ted and Blake as family men.  I think John;s part is something none of them have experienced.  Brian and Justin never had a birthday party with 35 people.  John and Peter are feeling more sure of themselves.  Thnaks for the review, you know I always look forward to getting one from you.  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2015 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 67

Game, set, and match...Tim should have known better than to go up against the master lol. Can't wait to see how Lindsay handles Brian taking Gus to his first day of school.

Author's Response:

Tim was out of his league and didn't understand who he was going up against.  I am pretty sure Linds may have an issue with that.  Thanks for the review, I love them!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2015 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 67

Ted And Blake with a little girl wow I guess Gus and JR. are going to have new playmate at school. I lime that John and Peter are starting to feel confidant enough to express their own opinions even over something as simple as clothing it's a good start. Wow Tim did absolulty no research on the company he was interviewing with not realizing Cynthia's position I might have understood but completely discounting Justin makes no sense unless all you knew is that the day to day operations of Kinnetic were run by Brian  that whole interview was weird.  I liked how Justin kept his word to Brian that they would still have dinner just the 2 of them although I see that maybe only a few night of every week I think they are going to enjoy some of the dinners where it all 4 of them especially as Peter and John become more willing to share what is happening in the world from the articles they are reading and what will be happening at school. I look forward to Gregs interview.  The begging portion of this review starts now 2 weeks is way to long to wait for the next chaper any chance we could see the next chapter let's say tomorrow (Sunday). I liked how this chapter brought in some Ted and Blake it was a nice glimpse into their lives.  now I go back to the daily/hourly check for the next chapter of my this my favorite story......

Author's Response:

So I guess I can still surprise you.  John and Peter are feeling more secure so they are able to give their uncles a little shit and not worry about getting put out of their new home.  Nina and JR are about the same age in my QAF world so you are back in my mind.  I think Tim thought Brian would be thrilled to hire someone who working for a big NYC ad agency.  He was just too cokcy for his own good.  Only room for one alpha dog at Kinnetik.

It ws not a full teo weeks between updates but it was a long time.  I guess a decline in number of reviews didn't inspire me to write faster.  I know you are loyal and always review but  the few good always suffer for the sins of the many.  I will try and do better but tomorrow is not going to happen so no need to check until at least Tuesday.  Thanks for all your nice comments I always look forward to your reviews and you challenges.  Bill

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2015 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 67

Blake and Ted could be great parents.

John and Peter are finally comfortable in their new family.

The part with Tim was great. He was such an ass. Maybe after he 'fixed' the art department he could just take over Brian's job. He sure was full of himself.Who in their right mind puts down someone that is interviewing them for a job?

Another wonderful chapter.

Author's Response:

I have a feeling we may get to see how B&T do as parents.  John and Peter are feeling mroe secure with their new home.  Tim thought his experience would make him a shoo in for the job.  He thought KInnetik would be thrilled to hire someone who had worked for a big NYC ad agency.  He was wrong.  Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for still reviewing, the number of reviews is shrinking which makes me sad.  Poor me LOL.  Bill