Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2015 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow! I really like the way you've incorporated flashbacks to different periods of Justin's life throughout this story. I want MORE! Please continue this story.

Is Tamara's husband Hobbs? It seems likely with painting of the prom/bashing now in a back room of the gallery. Fantastic the way that painting became the housekeeper repellant at Britin.

I also want to know more about why Brian didn't want Justin to return to the Pitts...or how Justin may have misinterpreted the conversation.

Getting close to flashbacks of B&J's meeting, too. And the start of the bullying at St. James.



Author's Response:

Again, I apologize for taking so long to respond. This comment makes me so happy. I love your interest in this story and promise you it is still being written. RL has been unbelievably hectic and crazy this past year, but chap 10 is almost completed.

 

Thanks for taking the time to leave this comment. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2014 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 9

Can I admit to being totally confused as to what's happening here? Why wouldn't Brian want Justin to come home? And what does Justin’s coming back mean for our boys? I can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

I'm so sorry - didn't mean to confuse you at all. I have a habit of setting up a plot development in one chapter and not resoving it until the next chapter. But all will be reavealed by the end of the story, which will probably be in the next chapter (10). 

 

Thank you so very much for still reading this fic and taking the time to leave this sweet commet.  It means the world to me.

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2014 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

So happy to see an update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!  I really appreciate you taking the time to leave this sweet comment.

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