Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2014 09:49 AM · On: The Big Reveal
Wonderful chapter, so emotional, it had me on the edge of my seat! I loved how Justin immediately blurted out what he needed to, not to let himself change his mind and lose his courage. Loved Brian’s reaction – I literally couldn’t breathe for a few moments, it’s hard to imagine what it must feel like! Brian broke my heart, I wanted to cry. Shocking news. I love this turn of events crazily – I’m so excited now, can’t wait to see their meeting with Ray! Please, do update soon!
Thank you for another amazing update!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you found this one suspenseful. That's definitely what I was going for.
If this chapter was ouchy...beware, the newest is pretty ouchy too...
You are very welcome! You will learn more, but not for another couple chapters, I'm sorry to say.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2014 05:13 PM · On: The Big Reveal
Well Brian took it much better then I or Justin expected. On pain of death. So they go see Ray? What happens next?
Author's Response: Brian doesn't have access to his usual coping mechanisms...he did promise to be faithful. And after the last two months, he's not about to take off on Justin again. Certainly not while the pain is so fresh in his mind.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2014 06:47 PM · On: The Big Reveal
I have to agree with Flossee in saying Justin ripping off the scab and letting the wound bleed was the very best thing he could have done...well done my friend.
Author's Response: I agree. No way to cushion a blow that big. Best just to get it over with and then deal with the fallout.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2014 11:04 AM · On: The Big Reveal
That's the way Justin, rip it off like a Band-Aid (adhesive bandage) and let the pieces fall where they may. I am so happy you didn't have him chicken out.
I do hope Justin is correct with his assumptions as some of them don't seem to be substantiated.
"Maybe. But after Jack died ...?" Please hurry back because curiosity is killing me here. Well not literally, but you know what I mean. LOL
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Justin was careful to preface everything by saying "my best guess." But you're right. He's making some leaps. I hate to make you wait for more answers, but they won't come for another couple of chapters...
Reviewer: driada (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2014 10:35 AM · On: The Big Reveal
Great chapter, can't wait for more. What will they find in North Carolina?.. Intriguing.
Great writing and interesting plot - rare combination :)
Author's Response: What a great compliment!!
(grinning like a fool)
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