Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2014 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 8
"I just wanna know how the hell you guys can keep any domestic help in this mansion with that emotional, bloodstained painting hanging in the butler's pantry?" Haha I like a statement at the end of a chapter that explains a curiosity that has been mentioned earlier, but moved on from.
I enjoyed this update. Thank you.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave this sweet comment. It means the world to me.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
Bloodstained painting???? Now I'm way too curious to wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Just to clear things up, the emotional, bloodstained painting is the one that Justin was painting when the fic started out - the one that Brian wasn't thrilled about hanging over their bed when it was finished. They took it down and out of their bedroom, but it wasn't said where it ended up until this chapter.
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. It means the world to me.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hi, Linda! Great to see a new chapter of this. I loved the baner between Gus, Brian, and Justin about keeping the hired help, and letting Gus cook.:) I think you're doing a great job of bringing out all their emotions. And I still don't know how you write in 2nd person so fluidly; I would find that difficult to do, but you do it well.:) Looking forward to the next part. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi, Kim - Just wanted to formally respond to this comment now that I can log into my MW account again. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. I really appreciate that.
I finally posted the next chap yesterday, and I think this story will be wrapping up in the next chapter or two. Thanks again for following along and all the comments you've left. (Hope you had a nice Xmas!)
Hugs,
Linda
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