Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2014 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 50
Oh, new trouble?
And what about Lindsey and Melanie? I think there will be soon some new problems, too:)
I 'm still enjoying every chapter. It's always a highlight of my day, when there is a new one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review. I am really happy that you are still enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 50
Hi, Bill - finally had a chance to catch up with your wonderful story. So many things going on! I love all the subplots, and how you have created such interesting other characters to interact with the boys. I'm glad they now know about Claire, but what a dilemma to be in! I like how they are being cautious with John and Peter.
The love this family feels for each other is so clear. Now what is going on with the cliffhanger at the end? I'll be looking foward to finding out more. Thank you for posting this - and good luck with your goal! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I kind of appropraited the "cliffhanger" idea from my favorite QAF author who has been keeping us hanging at the end of each chapter of her latest story. Someone you have an intimate knowledge of. Claire is a problem and will continue to be one for a few more chapters at least! Thanks so much for all the nice comments. Anxiously waiting for the next update on your story. Bill
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 50
Every time I go to the site and see the banner you made for my story I mentally thank you! Bill
* smiles * your welcome. Sometimes I think the banner needs one more person "Gus"
Author's Response: I think it is perfect as it is.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 50
Aaggrr you can't stop writing now . please hurry with the update.
* hugs *
Author's Response: no one said anything about stopping. I am still enjoying this story. This is probably bad to admit but I sometimes check and see which chapters get the most views and go back and read them (my docx not adding to the views) and actually enjoy them all over again. Every time I go to the site and see the banner you made for my story I mentally thank you! Bill
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2014 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 50
OMG, that teacher Mr. Kramsie (what a name!) really scares me - is there homophobia involved? You don´t let him hurt someone?
And if this isn´t enough, Claire´s disaster is going to hurt Peter and John when revealed at court. I don´t know what to hope in this hopeless case. She already choose the drugs over her sons, that´s the truth she can´t see.
You are really great in writing suspence. The story is getting better and better. We are all so hooked. Can´t thank you enough - reading time with your story is one of my favourite moments!
Author's Response: Don't worry too much about Mr Kramsie Justin will straighten out that situation. Claire is pretty selfish and just sees her point of view. As Brian has pointed out she doesn't have much of a motherly role model in Joan. I have some surprises to come in the Claire story line. Your comments are always so very nice about the story and certainly encourage me to continue writing it. Thank you so much for all your support!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 50
The best thing about this story is there are more good times then bad. I'm wondering how Brian's talk will go with Claire and what Justin will learn about Ron. It's a shame that Hal will be messing up Greg's work place. Looking forward to all the chapters you'll be writing.
Author's Response: I admit I am not a bog fan of too much angst. My favorite stories to read were always the ones by Predec2 so I like to think mine follows her example. Thanks for all your support, you are such a loyal reviewer I'm sure all the authors you comment on appreciate you (I see your reviews on most of the stories I read). Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 50
I knew that damned tutor was going to be trouble. I hope Brian and Justin catch him in the act. As for Claire she'll never learn.
Author's Response: Justin will sort out the tutor issues in the next chapter. Claire certainly does NOT learn from her past mistakes. She was not lucky enough to have a "Justin-type" in her life to help her overcome childhood trauma. Thanks for taking time to review and let me know you are enjoying the story. Bill
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