Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Iz1230 (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2014 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Please continue! Don't leave us hanging!

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2014 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

don't leave us in surspence please update soon kim

Reviewer: Moose (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2014 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Love it! Please write more

Reviewer: Rikke (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2014 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Love your story, and hope for another chapter soon :)

I really don't think it's too close to the story "the letter".... please keep writing

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

I enjoyed catching up with your fic. I must admit when I first started reading this, and as I was catching up, it reminded me of Edom's famous fic called "The Letter". Is that what inspired your story? I know Edom made sure Brian received the letter personally which allowed Brian to be in the baby's life before it was born. Yet, the wording "Hey, Sunshine, you look beautiful." when the door is opened suggests she was your inspiration. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, although once Brian explains I'm sure Justin can't hold it against him because he isn't a clairvoyant.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:
It wasn't inspired by anything other then the series :S i've read alot of fanfiction though so it's possible that's something stuck. I'm gonna have to read that before continuing cos i don't want to potentially knick someones ideas. Thanks for letting me know! x

Reviewer: rude (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2014 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

a quand la suite meme si c'est un petit chapitre en attendant le reste , nous voulons savoir. si vous plait.

Author's Response:
i'm sorry i don't speak french - all i can work out from that is small chapter? not even google translate is much help! x

Reviewer: rhonda (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2014 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

love it all so far ,i had been waiting for more chaapters , now hurry up and lets get more done !!!!

Reviewer: karlita411 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Omgoodness! More more please and longer

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2014 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

very nice! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2014 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Omg I almost missed this chapter it was posted quickly omg omg omg Brian i has gone after Justin and Cayla I cannot wait to hear from Justin d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2014 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

More please! I hope Justin listens but also makes Brian work to get him back and be part of Caylas life.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2014 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Yes!!!...but I know there is still the storm before the calm to come. Good job my friend ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2014 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Yay. He's found his Sunshine. Love, love, love the new banner. How will Brian explain why it took him so long? Will he have to bring Michael over to sort it out? Another chapter asap would be sooooo nice.

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2014 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

And now Justin slaps him across the face...lol. What will his reaction be? He was saving all that stuff for Brian, but what hoops to ill Brian have to jump through to get in Justin's good graces? Looking forwardto more. Update soon please.

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2014 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

OMFG YAY REUNION Hopefully justin doesn`t close the door in his face and lets Brian Explain what happen

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Finally they reunite!!! Lets hope Justin wont give too much grief to Brian, I mean Brian was an asshole when he didnt listen to Justin's explanation but he was also a victim of fxxking michael.

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2014 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

I like the story but have to comment on an obvious error you don't need a passport to go from Pennsylvania to New York they are in the same country and less than hour away by air. One more comment if someone had done that to me they would have left bleeding Brian puts up with to much from that idiot.

Author's Response:
He didn't need his passport for the flight, he needed it for the hotel. When I went to New York they asked to take my passport for a copy? I suppose this was incase I ran off without paying? I don't know if this is usual or if I just look trustworthy lol

n don't worry Michael has got some pain in his future! X

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2014 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 - You look beautiful Sunshine

Donna, I just resized your banner to about 500 pixels high. Rectangular-sized banners are preferred and work better, since they take up less room, but I will keep the shape it is. Just an FYI. As for the number of reviews, that will always go up and down, depending upon reader interest and just RL. But 75 reviews for 10 chapters is quite good.;) ~Kim

Author's Response:
Hi Kim, yer i realised as soon as i went to check it and i've reshaped it. I wasnt referring to the number of reviews: under the view your stats it says more people have read chapter nine then eight which i don't get lol! maybe it's some people rereading - still odd! x

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