Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For How Sweet It Is
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2014 04:36 PM · On: Growing Pains

You know, you story has changed my views a little. For some reason I’ve never thought about the body ideals being different in the past. And besides, what is ideal? Everyone has their own tastes. It is indeed a little discouraging to see anorexic-looking models all the time – they got boring. It’d be interesting and refreshing to see something new, something more realistic. So I actually love Daphne’s idea. But this subject must be approached carefully. Brian can’t just start creating such campaigns whenever he feels like it – or he would lose the job.

When I read Brian’s words, I realized it’s indeed not the best idea… hmm. I’m confused now :) I don’t know with whom I agree more.

Oh, that scene from the past was hurtful. I felt so sad reading it… poor little boy Brian, he had no one to turn to then. Claire is a cunt, Jack is a bastard, Joanie is… worthless. I’m so happy Bran has Justin now, but of course it’s not easy for him to trust and love. And Daphne should have been more perceptive – it was obvious Brian was affected, she should have stopped.

The chapter started out funny, but it ended so sadly, it nearly broke me :( But great ending. I loved it, thank you!    



Author's Response:

Body image is a hard topic. I actually like Brian's idea (but then, I came up with it). There are women today (like Lena Dunham) who showcase bodies on TV that aren't the 'ideal'--who refuse to meet the ideal and refuse to have ONLY those who do meet the ideal on her show...I think Brian could do something similar. Making people in campaigns 'healthier' doesn't have to mean those people are way overweight. It would be a small step, but one that regular people would be grateful for. As a comparison, think about race and orientation. There it's easier to see how not having a variety of people in the media is harmful. It's been a struggle to get TV/advertising to show women, people of color, and gay/bi/trans people, even though they make up a significant part of the population. For me, that's what it's about when it comes to body image. If you see only people who look very different from you in the media, you start to hate who you are and try to be someone else. That's no good. Here as in canon, Justin is inspiring Brian to think critically about what he puts out into the world.

 

This story has allowed me to explore Brian's childhood more deeply, which I like. Too often only Justin is shown suffering and struggling, but in this one, they both are. They are both struggling and both helping each other.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2014 02:58 PM · On: Growing Pains

Wow, that was so sad.  Daphne really annoyed me in this chapter even though she couldn't possibly know about Brian's past.   Brian really should have accepted new slices of pizza.  Why would he put himself through that when he didn't have to. 

"Brian, would you like to say Grace?" Oh, this is so funny.  You couldn't image how many guest we have and half of them say a prayer before they eat.  We just wait now and see if anyone is going to say anything before we lift our cutlery.  LOL  One time we also held hands.  LOL 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I'm SO glad you noticed that detail about Brian eating the pizza. It wasn't even conscious. He internalized a lot of what Jack said to him ... hence the near crippling insecurity and lack of trust.

 

That freaks me out, too (prayer especially with hand holding). I don't know why, but I feel like prayer should take place in private or in a church/temple/mosque. I'm happy you found it funny...Brian was beyond shocked :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2014 05:38 PM · On: Growing Pains

This chapter made me very sad, and just a bit angry at Daphne...even though she didn't mean any harm.

Author's Response:

Writing it made me sad, too :-(

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2014 04:10 PM · On: Growing Pains

This chapter goes to show how cruel some people can be and actually think that it's funny.  I like that Daphne attacked steriotyping, but her deliberate tampering with Brian's food wasn't as funny in light of his memories.  I'm surprised he didn't up and leave.  The pain of remembering that time must have been unbearable.



Author's Response:

She didn't know. She was being a little rude, but there was more pizza. She would never hurt Brian like that intentionally.

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2014 03:42 PM · On: Growing Pains

Great chapter. I really like the whole story.Exept the part where Justin tried to loose weight. Then I was a little bit dissappointed and thought, that the story was going the same way as all the other stories. But I'm really impressed now.

I especially like your contemplations about advertising.

I'm  looking forward to the next chapters.



Author's Response:

I knew from the beginning that I didn't want Justin to lose weight. That portion of the story was designed to show two things 1) how much Brian hurt Justin and 2) how unsuitable Joe was for Justin. I'm sorry to have put both you and Justin through that :-( 

 

I'm so glad you enjoyed my thoughts on advertising :-)

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