Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2014 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 47

As always I come along with the lastof comments in the row...;)

I´m a little bit surprised, because I thought, the storyline might follow like that, but you brought up other things, like the Kinnetik - Hal problem. Well that´s what good writers for: Your readers should not get too comfortable!! (hahaha)

Claire is digging her own grave, she even doesn`t need her drug-boyfriend. I´m loosing all hope here....

I like the Gus-Kevin friendship so much. But you gave me some hard time with the zoo trip. You know the 100$- thing...I think parents will learn, love is a relationship-thing not connected with money. And spending 100$ in front of little Kevin and his family, who can´t? I can´t see the fun. It might be humiliating. But don´t take this toooooo serious, I´m just a teacher, who always looks out for underprivileged children! Spoiling can be contraproductive. Sorry, I had to say this.

I will always be your dedicated reader - promise. You can´t go wrong with that great story! Thanks again.

Author's Response:
I always look forward to your comments. I thought it was time to re-visit Hal and the Kinnetik situation, I don't like to leave loose ends. Claire will continue to have some probalmes for at least awhile. The $100, to me, goes more to Brian's hangups from his rotten childghood. Brian wants to indulge Gus to make sure he has happy cildhood memories that he never had. I don't think Kevin is underprovledged - his brother does go to an expensive private school. If Brian or Justin thougth Kevin would feel left out they woild have sent $100 for him too.

I really, truly enjoy when reviews question thing in the story. Makes me look at things a different way or let's me explain why I wrote something. Never worry about hurting my feeling it is good to know how readers feel. Not quite as many reviews as usual for this chapters so I think there are readers that agree with you there were things they didn't like. Thanks, my friend, for always giving such great comment in your reviews. Bill

Reviewer: BkJt (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2014 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 47

Loving the story. Everything going too smoothly for Brian and Justin. how about spice it up with a little drama? maybe one of them gets hurt and the other shows care etc.. just a suggestion. i m really liking the story and the way you write it. any idea how long this story will be? keep up the good work.

Author's Response:
Maybe a little drama but mine is an angst free story, I'll think about it. I don't have any clear idea of an ending. In fact I have ideas for lots more chapters. I guess when reviews drop off or people start saying the story is dull I will know when to stop. Thanks for the nice comments, they are what keeps me adding new chapters. Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 47

Another great update, Bill! I liked that last part about Molly asking her brother about Mark's 'assets' - LOL! As always, I enjoy all the little details you put into this story. Thank you for posting it, Bill. I'll be looking forward to more. *Hugs* ~Kim

Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review my friend. Glad you are still enjoying the story. Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 47

Hmmm...Craig is up to something, I can't put my finger on it but I have a very overwhelming sense of foreshadowing here...let's see if I'm right.

Author's Response:
Craig doesn't have much to cause trouble with but we'll see what happens. Bill

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2014 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 47

loved the varity i love this story good job kim

ps, hi bill hows the garden im doing home repairs with my son we r getting spring kim

Author's Response:
Glad you are still enjoying the story. My roses are blooming like crazy, some of the other plants are slowing down now with fall approaching. Thanks for asking. Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 47

This was well worth the wait. It was chock full of interesting happenings. John and Peter are both having good times. Claire, on the other hand, is relying too heavily on Oxy and that could prove a problem. Gus is being adorable and not acting at all spoilt. Craig is in for trouble with his company and if Brian ever finds out he's not paying alimony, he could take the company away! What is going on with Hal? Is he trying to get fired? Is he taking Oxy along with Claire? I was surprised by how well Brian reacted, not firing Hal off the bat and giving him a chance to get his act straight. Frankly I'm surprised that with all the naked bodies Justin has seen over the years that he was embarressed to be in the shower with a naked Mark. Haha. The scene was tastefully done. I would love to have Alice come live with me. She thinks ahead and has everything ready before you can ask her. A really enjoyable chapter.

Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter my friend. Always happy to know you are still reading and enjoying the story. I think Alice is happy running Brian and Justin's life, she knows she is the queen of her domain. I think cavorting in the back room at Babylon and washing your sister's boy friend are two very different things. Thanks for all the nice comments. Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2014 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 47

Loved it! Alice is definitely the boss! Funny ending to this chapter. I anxiously await your updates.

Author's Response:
Alice is firm on what she thinks should happen but it all comes from love. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!

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