Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2014 02:51 PM · On: Broken Things
As much as there was in this chapter the way you ended it brought back some recent memories. I was only on a swing about three weeks ago. Yes, I occasionally do silly things, however, I'm sure the two year old, well almost three year old, I was with was swinging higher and faster than me. Although, it is like riding a bike, you don't forget how to do it. LOL
Seriously, I did enjoy being able to finally catch up once again with this fic. The way you portrayed a lost Brian and a guarded Justin was superb.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: I'm glad the chapter reminded you of a happy memory :-)
Awww...thanks for the compliment. You're giving me the warm and fuzzies!
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2014 05:47 PM · On: Broken Things
Wow, this chapter is just perfect for such an angst-lover like me! I *loved* it, it was amazing and touching – and sad. Made me sweat a little, but I’m always up for that :) I’m glad that you didn’t make Justin forgive Brian easily, how he said it’s okay, but still felt subdued and hesitant. I was relieved he told Brian what was bothering him, though – and completely amazed that Brian agreed to stop tricking. Now I can’t wait to see if he’ll be able to really withstand the temptation!
Thank you, I re-read this chapter a few times. Fantastic!
Author's Response: This Brian is a little older than canon!Brian was when B/J met...Brian was jealous of Joe from pretty much the beginning...he'd gotten protective of Justin (people at Babylon and Mikey were cruel to Justin)...he feels something not good about how their whatever ended before (he wouldn't call it guilt or regret...)...and he's just spent 2 months without Justin...so he was primed for this leap. He would do a lot to get what they had back. Plus, he'd pretty much stopped tricking on his own before Dylan...
I'm so glad you liked it enough to read more than once :-) I tried to make it angsty and beautiful.
Justin may love Brian, and he does, but Brian REALLY hurt him. That doesn't just go away.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:21 PM · On: Broken Things
I'm glad they got that settled. Poor Brian, he really didn't know what to do.
Author's Response: Yeah...he was a bit lost.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 12:57 PM · On: Broken Things
Girl you're going to give me a heart attack! Lol but the silver lining is that our boys are giving themselves a chance.
Author's Response: Indeed. Justin came close to walking away, and Brian seriously pondered giving up. But they both decided to try. Oddly enough, they've switched positions...Brian's a little more about trying than Justin right now.
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