Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2019 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 46

Justin is so mature in this...he gives brian a run for his money..lol..and others too.



Author's Response:

Justin doesn't take crap from anyone.  Lindsay is learning that lesson.  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2014 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 46

this story just gets better and better. Good for Claire. I almost wish I hadn't started reading until it was done. I get so impatient for the next chapter. I love when you write about Gus.

Author's Response:

Glad you are still reading and enjoying.  Thanks for the nice comments.  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2014 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 46

       Lindsay has become more and more of a problem.  I like


the way John stood up to her.  He has turned out to be a


special young man.  I see that anger, jealousy, and resentment


are a big part of every conversation with her.  I understand


that she wants everything the Justin has, but she is not going


to have it.  I don’t see anything wrong with a little jealousy and


resentment, but she has taken that to its extreme.   Also, I


don’t see any appreciation for what Brian and Justin have


done for her and Melanie.  I can see a real blow up coming. 


 Sadly, that will affect everyone badly. 


     Thanks for the last few chapters.


DavidR



Author's Response:

Lindsay does have lots of issues that she seems anxious to share with those around her.  Appreciation doesn't seem to be a big item for her.  Thanks for the comments and reading my story.  I hope you continue to enjoy it.  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2014 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 46

I was reading this at 3am this morning and enjoyed it, but could not get my comment thru security. You guys should make the numbers a little clearer, you might get more comments.

Author's Response:

Thanks for being tenacious.  I have passed your comments to the site admin, in the past, but I'm not sure we can control that.  I am guessing you enjoyed the latest chapter, at least I hope so.  Bill

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 46

i love this story update soon  kim



Author's Response:

Happy you still loving the story.  I am working on chapter 47.  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 46

Lindsay is just looking for trouble and if she is not careful she will find it. If Claire steals that pad like I think she will I hope she I caught quick so Peter and Johns life can be resolved



Author's Response:

My mother would have said that "Lindsay was cruising for a bruising".  I don't see any good news for Claire in the immediate future.  I think the PI report on her activities will be a good thing for B&J getting custody oh their nephews.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 46

I'm always sad at the end of the chapter because I want to read further...

Justin is very wise with education. I'm always so curious what will happen the next day. Especially how Lindsay will handle the meeting with Kevin. I can imagine great trouble ahead.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  You may be a little psychic about Lindsay.  Whatever trouble she tries to make I'm sure B&J can handle it.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 46

Such a wonderful chapter.  Gus had a great day and Peter gets to go away with his new friend.  Lindsay on the other hand seems to forget that Justin has every right to correct Gus and her demands were a little over the top.  John certainly put her in her place and if Alice were there, she would have done the same.  I actually feel sorry for Melanie!  I don't know if I believe that Claire has seen the last of Tino, he doesn't seem like the type to give up.



Author's Response:

Always happy to see your review and know you are still reading and enjoying the story.  Lindsay not really being totally rational right now, she is lucky Alice went home early!  I think you may be right about Tino.  Thanks for the comments!!  Bill

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 46

MAN that woman needs a lesson in family.  Lindsey is going to be trouble if she doesn't get off her high horse.  I love how Justin handled his father and Lindsey.  He definitely has done a lot of growing up.  Great update.



Author's Response:

Lindsay seems determined to get herself into trouble.  Justin knows that he has the full support of Brian and together they make an unbeatable team.  Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for the review I appreciate it.  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 46

Again score one for Sunshine lol...he absolutely did the right thing in regards to Gus and Lindsay had no right to try and undermine him.

Author's Response:

WOW!!  Fast read and review.  Lindsay keeps trying to come out on top and insteads keeps digging herself into a deeper hole.  Thanks for letting me know you are still reading and enjoying.  Bill

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