Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2014 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

i like this story did mikey leave the loft open and blamed justin to get rid of him thanku kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

Hi Donna

I am absolutely enjoying your fic. I hope Justin doesn't go the letter route. I look forward to seeing the unique way you have for Justin and Brian to reconnect; I know that's racing ahead so for now I need a little patience. LOL I'm loving Ray (although I may have mentioned that before, lol). Daphne selling sex toys; priceless.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

I am glad to see things falling into place for Justin and the baby. But can I just say, no surprise with Brian, of course he is being an a$$. I am also glad to see that Daphne might have a romance coming up, she deserves love in her life. So has Justin decided to tell Brian about the baby or will it remain a secret? Looking forward to more of this story. :)

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

Yay! Have Justin move in with Ray so Brian will be jealous =) And Im seriously wondering whether Michael has anything to do with the burglary.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

Hmmm...I have my suspicions but....

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

I'm loving Ray. He takes it all in and takes Justin and Daphne in. What a guy. Looking forward to seeing how New York works out. The problem will be telling Brian he's gonna be a father. What will he do? Hopefully he'll want to know his kid.

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2014 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

Yes to ray and daph.... Hopefully brian listens to justin

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The plans of mice and men

Hi, Donna! Just an FYI - I went in and spaced out your paragraphs to make them easier to read for your readers. Also, you had mentioned at one point about possibly wishing to have a beta. I have composed a list of betas in a recent announcement if you would like to contact one of them to see if they would be available. Here is the link with the information:

http://midnightwhispers.ca/viewstory.php?sid=3048&chapter=2

I'm enjoying your story. I'll be interested in seeing what happens regarding Justin and Daphne's new move, and when Brian finds out about the baby.;)

Thank you for posting on MW! And a Happy Belated Birthday, too.;) ~Kim

Author's Response:

Cheers i appreciate it, can you give it 10 mintues or so next time though? cos i always write it on my ipad when i'm on the go and for some reason when i upload it off my ipad even though i load it with spaces it scrunches it all up so i always go straight back in and space it out and spell check it on my computer.

Glad your enjoying the story! :) I won't give any spoilers but lets just say i'm pretty sure people are gonna be anger with what happens in the next chapter :P hehe Donna x

Sorry - just thought I was being helpful as an admin, since some writers are not aware of it. Did not realize that you go in and edit it afterward; I will not touch it next time. ~Kim

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