Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2018 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 45

good one, Craig deserved it. That Lindsey need some beating

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 45

Nice to see the nasty ones get what they deserve.

Author's Response:

Glad you approve.  Hard for anyone to beat the team of Brian and Justin.

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2014 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 45

I'm loving your story. Lindsey has alway been a piece of work spoiled and blind when it concerns Brian, just like Michael, but I find I like Melanie more and more. Gus is so cute with his cousins and papa.I would like to know a litttle bit more about Hal, he's insecure and seems to have secrets. As far as Claire I wouldn't mind if she od'd or got beat to make her brain dead she has no redeeming features and has no intention of trying to help herself or her sons, as far as Joan goes nothing matters when dealing with her she is a bitter old woman who appreciates nothing her son does, she needs a wake up call  that she needs her son to take care of her sometimes. Please more chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying my story.  I am working on chapter 46.  Poor Claire she doesn't have very many (or any) redeeming qualities.  Hall will return to the story but not sure when; I seem to have a lot of stuff going on already.  Bill

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 45

This is a very fun chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Happy you liked this latest chapter.  Working on Chapter 46.  Hope you continue to read and enjoy the story.  Thanks for reviewing.  Bill

Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2014 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 45

I really enjoyed this chapter.  Thank you for the update :)



Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks you for your review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 45

You are so evil , it was great. I kind of feel bad for Claire .

Author's Response:

I'm not sure I like to think of myself as evil but as long as it's great I'll go with it.  Don't waste too much sympathy, there is more Claire to come - you might need the sympathy.  Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 45

Checkmate on all counts Lol...I love it! This just keeps getting better my friend.

Author's Response:

Thanks my friend for letting me know you are enjoying the story.  I can hardly believe I am starting chapter 46.  All the nice reviews are what keeps the story going.  Bill

Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2014 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 45

Lindsay will never learn love how Brian knew all about her parents finances. But the best was Craig finding out Brian and Justin own him it was worth waiting a few extra days for a chapter.



Author's Response:

Brian has his ways of finding out info when he wants to.  It was not a good day for Craig that's for sure.  Thanks for taking time to review.  Bill

Reviewer: KIM136 (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2014 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 45

I ALWAY LOOK FOREWOULD TO UR UPDATES THE STORY IS GREAT THANKU  KIM



Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice comment and for lettting me know you are enjoying my story.  I look forward to reviews and think they are great.  Bill

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2014 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 45

I like this story so much.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I really appreciate you letting me know you are still enjoying my story.  Hope you continue to read and enjoy.  Bill

Reviewer: CfFC (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2014 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 45

Wow, lots of plot development in this chapter.

They sure gave Craig a well deserved smack in the face!

I like Alice more and more with each chapter.

Author's Response:

Alice and Mother Taylor are united in making sure no one takes advantage of their "boys".  I suspect this is just the beginning of Craig's wake-up call.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 45

Yay yay updates again!! I love to see Lindsay's face when she realizes not everything in her life goes as she wishes. Btw, are we having some updates about Michael soon? Wanna see some michael bashing xDD 



Author's Response:

Poor Michael, you are very mean.  I think he and Lindsay may try and form some sort of alliance but I don't see them having much success.  Thanks for letting me know you are still reading and enjoying after all this time.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2014 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 45

Boy, what an enjoyable chapter.  You gave Lindsey a talking to that she deserved.  Gus two enjoyable days.  Even put Claire in with a walk on by Tino.  Can't wait to find out how that works out.  Then you topped it off with a lovely interview with the evil sperm donor.  Plus you through in a wonderful meal!  Making me hungry. : (  The only thing missing is another chapter as soon as you can.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the nice comments my friend.  Happy to know you are still reading and enjoying the story.  I'm working on the new chapter.  Bill

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