Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: jaf (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2015 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Please don't leave us hanging. Your story is much to good for that. There's so much more you can do with it.

Reviewer: Nadine (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2014 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

That must be the cousin... I remember he's a hottie, too. I hope you'll have your muse kicking up again because you actually have a good story here.

good luck & god bless.

Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Come on come on !! The wait is killing me. ... Where's the next chapter?? *bites her nails off*

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2014 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Just love the new banner! Kudos! TAG

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2014 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

hi r u going to update soon please it's a great story need help ask kim

Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

next next next next ....NEXXXXT

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2014 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

OMG such a sad chapter next chapter please lol

Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2014 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

So .... If I say I love it ... In a non-conventional way ... Would u upload faster and feed me ANGST -_- ?

Author's Response:
Normally YES but it was my birthday yesterday so I'm still recovering. I've got a 5 day weekend next weekend so I'm hoping to get 3-4 chapters out then :)

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2014 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Nice start

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2014 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Hello Donna :)

Welcome to MW. I hope you enjoy it here as much as I do. I would love to know where you are from as you write "arse" as we would normally do here in the Land of Oz (Australia). I liked the first chapter and I love the fact you didn't just write the condom broke; you made the observation of the stain instead. Nice touch.

"you better be thinking about me sunshine" OMG that is the last thing I would have expected Brian Kinney to say. lol

I'm really happy Justin has somewhere to go and I love that you aren't using the same names, for additional characters, that seem to have become a bit repetitive lately.

Hurry back as I can't wait to see how you make this different.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:
I'm British, I just prefer arse. I think it adds a certain level of vulgarity that you just don't get with ass :)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2014 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

off to a good start.

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2014 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

I definitely like the first chapter. I liked the summary and am looking forward to how things will progress. I am guessing chapter one was telling us *when* he got pregnant. Looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2014 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Wow a refreshingly new premise! I absoloutely love mpreg so am definitely waiting impatiently for the next chapter!! :D

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2014 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Hmmm, I wonder what that stain on the couch is. Get cracking on the next chapter so I can find out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2014 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

I love the way Brian does romance as long as you don't point it out. The only thing I could spot if some of your I's were lowercase and Sunshine was the same, but depending on what you wrote this with that could be normal.

Author's Response:
Cheers, I wrote it on my iPad notes so it doesn't really correct anything that's why I want people to point out errors. I"m gonna correct it at the weekend - Thanks for reviewing!

Ps I do think Brian is a secret romantic, he just doesn't know it hehe

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2014 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Oh boy...imagine their surprise when they find out the condom more than likely broke. This has all the makings of a great angsty ride, hopefully they can weather the storm that's about to come.

Btw: welcome to Whispers my friend👏👏👏👏

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2014 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Welcome to MW. We love bringing new authors into our ranks. Thanks for being brave enough to try your hand at writing! TAG

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2014 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Passion that can't be controlled

Welcome to Midnight Whispers, Donna! Thank you for becoming a member, and for posting on the site.;) If you need help with anything, please let Bob or me know. Interesting beginning! I'll be looking forward to more of this. *Hugs* ~Kim

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