Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2019 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 40

Poor claire



Author's Response:

Her life is really screwed up.  Her need for drugs is forcing her into more bad decisions.  Glad you are still reading & enjoying!!  Thanks for the reviews!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2014 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 40

I have been away for a bit from MW, how nice to come back to another chapter.

I like Brian's attitude toward the school administrator and Mark's parents. He has grown.

I feel sorry for Claire, who has started to really reap the results of her wrong decisions. It doesn't change how bad she was to her kids, but I get no joy in seeing her hurt.

Stay cool, looks like your area is getting a heat wave.

Author's Response:

I have enjoyed the hot weather here, there was a nice breeze most days and always cools down at night.  Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Claire really has made her life a mess, not sure she realizes that her bad decisions are the cause of her problems.  I believe that Brian feeling secure and loved has made a difference in how he looks at life.  Thanks for the review, you are a really faithful reviewer and I appreciate it.  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2014 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 40

Boy, is Claire in a horrid place! Even if she wanted to turn her life around and do the right thing, it is going to be extremely difficult.  Let's hope she decides to confide in someone before she starts down that same path again, although I would much prefer the boys remain with B & J.  And Molly's inlaws are a real piece of work, too.

Love Charlie and Alice! So great when they would told to come and have dinner with the 'rest of the family.'And I loved it, also, when Brian stood up for his nephew.  They are all becoming a great family together.;)

Still enjoying your story a great deal, Bill. I will be looking forward to the rest.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, good to hear from you. Claire is certainly not having a good life. Luckily she is not dragging her sons down with her. Happy you are enjoying the story. Thanks for all the nice comments. Bill

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2014 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 40

Well I'll be damned the impossible has happened...i almost feel sorry for Claire. Tino is a fucking abusive bastard who will surely kill her before she has a chance to better herself. In the meantime, Brian put that pompous ass dean in his place once and for all. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Claire seems to be doing her best to make her life as miserable as possible.  The Dean was certainly no match for the Kinney!  Luckily Justin gave Brian a heads up so he was ready for action when the opportunity arose.  Thanks for the nice comments.  Happy you are still enjoying the story after 40 chapters.  Bill

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2014 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 40

I just got caught up in all the situations.  MAN! the excitment never ends from one chapter to the next.  Great job.

Looks like things are not going well for anyone.  I see Claire went from one bad situation to another.  I hope the nephews get into that school.  Above all another great chapter.

Jane



Author's Response:

Happy you are enjoying the story, thanks for the nice comments.  Claire is very good at making bad decisions.  I appreciate you taking time to review.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2014 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 40

That Craig is clueless.  Love how Brian talked to Eddy.  I'm sure the man is going to be surprised by John and Peter's scores.  You actually have me feeling sorry for Claire.  Great chapter all around.



Author's Response:

Craig is pretty determined to see only his own distorted view of life.  I don't think Eddy will be anxious to see Brian again too soon.  Might be a little angst over some scores.  Claire is a victim of her own poor judgment but still a victim.  Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer, I always look forward to your comments.  Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2014 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 40

Nice chapter - steps forward: Two assholish people get what they deserve, Craig and Eddi, well done Jen and Brian! Congrats!

It always annoys me to no end when people judge kids and look only on their social status. Thank god there is Brian!

Poor Claire - I know, she is not the lovely person at all, but terrible to think one day her sons will find out what kind of "problems" Claire has to face. It´s hell. Is there any hope?

After a terrible busy time I enjoyed my first day off with reading the latest chapter- just superb! Thanks a lot!

 

 



Author's Response:

Glad I was able to add to the pleasure of your day off.  Jennifer and Brian really kicked some butt and hopefully gave the kickees something to think about.  Claire is not having a good life but also not doing anything to try and make it better.  The good news is she is not dragging her sons down with her.   Thanks for your always great comments.  Bill  

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2014 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 40

loving jennifer more and more. standing up ti craig, well done. same for brian and eddie. i hope john gets in, mostly to spite him. life at britin is anything but boring.
if claire isn't careful, she's going to wind up dead before she finds the drugs.
great update.

Author's Response:

I think Jennifer probably was glad to have the opportunity to let Craig know how she felt about him.  Brian and Dean Dennison were a confrontation waiting to happen.  I think there is a little drama coming with John and the Washington Academy.  C;aire really needs to start addressing her issues and acknowledging her addiction.  Happy that you are enjoying the story.  Thanks for taking time to review.

Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2014 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 40

Craig's an asshole big shock.  I love Gus reading to Justin in his studio too cute. Claire is a disaster waiting too happen. I look forward to every chapter and only wish they came faster....



Author's Response:

Sorry to make you wait so long between chapters but glad you are still enjoying the story.  Claire not having a good life but also not addressing her problems.  Thanks for the review!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2014 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 40

Great chapter I love me a take charge Brian lol, oh dear Claire is in deep shit

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  We knew that Brian and Eddy would clash when they met.  Claire is not having a good life for sure.  Happy you are still reading and enjoying.

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