Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2014 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 39
My review got lost in www - so I try to write a new one.
I´m always happy to see a new chapter, and 7 or 10 days can really be long with a story of this quality ;)-hehe!
With the school soon to beginn and the test, a new stress factor comes around. It is so good BRian made the priorities clear, it´s the best base for challenges to come. And very well written John´s struggle. At first I thougt he was annoyed by his homophobic team-mate....
The homophobia-theme even came up at the hospital, which is very sad, plus have Craig as a father and homophobic "in-laws"- no thank you. Will there be more tressful moments and how will our little family of boys handle it?
But you give us always little nice moments in each chapter, which is great. Thanks!
Author's Response: So sorry your original review got lost out there in the vast internet. Happy that you posted a new one. I look forward to your reviews! Glad you are still enjoying the story with its good times and bad. Great to hear from you and thanks for being so loyal with your always kind comments. Bill
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2014 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 39
I am really enjoying this story! Please tell me you are still writing chapters. It is wonderful!
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story. I should have a new chapter posted in the next couple days. Thanks for the nice review.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2014 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 39
I loved the chapter!! ^_^ I loved the way Brian and Justin put Lindsay in her place, and also the way everyone handled Craig... :D I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!! :D Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Happy you loved the latest chapter. I don't think Lindsay will stay in "her place". I think she will have to be out there a few nore times. More Craig in the next chapter. Thanks for all the nice comments and for taking time to review. You are always faithful about letting me know you are still reading and enjoying!! Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 39
Wow, what a great update!
It was super intense and yet there was Molly's accident and all the drama with the big idiot Craig. When he will realize that their children have the right to pursue what makes them happy and has no obligation to please you. Well, I believe that this will never happen.
A big hug!
Fatima.
Author's Response: So Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter. I thought it was about time for Craig to make an appearance. Thanks for the nice comments which I really appreciate. Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 39
What an enjoyable suspenseful chapter. Glad to see that John wants to please Brian and Justin and was worried about the admission test. Claire doesn't look like she'll be able to keep her job. Then there was Molly and Marks accident. It appears that Mark's parents think like Craig, who was a perfect asshole. Love how Molly told Craig off. lol.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter. Claire really doesn't seem to have the potential to be a long time employee. John may struggle with the placement test. Mark's parents do not seem to be very accepting people. If Molly and Mark get married they should be seated at a table with Craig at the reception. Thanks for your comments I always enjoy them. Bill
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2014 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 39
i love your story i lol about graig love it update soon kim
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Craig did not disappoint, he is still a butthead. Thanks for the review. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2014 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 39
Craig Taylor, he doesn't change. Sounds like Mark's parents will be a problem.
Although I am sorry John was worried, I am glad he cares enough about the boys to try for them.
Hope Lindsey will learn her lesson fast, or she, like Claire, won't have a job long.
Author's Response: We can say that Craig is consistent if nothing else. I am still thinking that Lindsay will be a very interesting gallery manager. Not sure John will do as well on the placement test as he would like. I do see Claire having more free time soon. Thanks for taking time to comment and happy you are still reading and enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 39
I have to agree with Justin that I dont feel great either with Lindsay playing such a big role in his life. How come I sense that Lindsay is stalling and hoping to stay in Britin longer and never wants to go live in the loft. I think she should be really grateful for whats been offered to her instead of being a selfish, naive bitch.
Looking forward for more =)
Author's Response: I think Alice may be the "anti-Lindsay" she won't have any trouble telling her when she os out of line. That may make staying with Brian and Justin a little less attractive to the "girls". So glad yu are still enjoying the story. Thanks for taking time to comment, that is what keeps me going on the story. Bill
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2014 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 39
John has nothing to worry about as far as the test for the academy goes. He'll do fine, and if not, fine too. Wouldn't trust Lindsay as far as I could throw her. She's a devious bitch and needs to be watched. Is Justin absolutely out of his mind inviting the girls to stay at Britin? With everyone keeping Claire busy correcting her mistakes, how will she find the time to steal the drugs? Good for Molly for putting Craig in his place. That may be the end of Mark too if he agrees with his parents homophobia. We'll have to wait and see. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to review! I think Claire may be able to find a way to cause trouble at the dental office. Justin will be able to handle Lindsay but it will be interesting ride. I'm not sure that Mark will continue to be a romantic interest for Molly, she ceratinly has no trouble letting people konw how she feels. Glad you are still enjoying the story. Thanks again for reviewing. Bill
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 39
Well played Molly! Craig really did seem to care more about the possibility that he had been slighted than if his daughter were truly alright. While her physical injuries are not severe, I have a feeling the emotional injuries that Mark's parents are about to inflict will be far worse.
Claire and Lindsay are both train wrecks just waiting to happen. Claire continues to get high, and Lindsay continues to be a pretentious, ungrateful, manipulative bitch. I think that Justin is truly going to regret inviting them to stay at the house until the loft is done...Lindsay causing a bit of trouble is eminent.
Author's Response: Thanks, as always, for the nice review. I areally appreciate all my loyal reviewers. We knew that Craig is a butthead. I think Claire and Lindsay will provide lots of material for future chapters. Bill
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