Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2014 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
So sad about Sidney. But at least Gus gets to stay with them. What's going on with Lindsay and Mel? Not to mention housekeepers? Great chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Sidney's passing was a sad event, but Brian, Justin, and Gus are all happy that Gus is living there with them now.
Lindsay and Mel seem to have fallen out of love, and the housekeepers . . . well, they're freaked out by the gory painting that Brian wasn't thrilled about hanging over their bed ending up in the butler's pantry.
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such a sweet comment. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm happy to catch up with this fic, but sad I don't have any more chapters to read. I love the little touches like Brian being able to accept a thank you. I'm so pleased he was able to step in and help Meg and I like his reason. It's great that you have added pieces like throwing Gus out; that is such a teenage thing to do. Very nicely done, please hurry back in RL allows.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving this sweet feedback. I'm happy that you're liking this fic.
I'm working on the next chapter, but I do write very slowly. It seems to take forever before I can get the chapters just how I want them.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hi, Linda! Still enjoying this story immensely. I am very impressed by how you can continue to write in second person as I mentioned before. I think that is very hard to do. And I love Meg's character; kind of reminds me of Debbie in some ways. I am also captivated by the snippets of a younger Justin interwoven into your story.
Will as always be looking forward eagerly to the rest of this unique story. Thank you for sharing it with us. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Kim. So happy you're still reading and enjoying this story. Writing in 2nd person is turning out to be pretty fun. It's surprisingly easier than I thought it would be.
I agree, Meg is similar to Debbie in a lot of ways. My intention from the beginning was to make her a likeable character, flaws and all. LOL
Your feedback is valuable and much appreciated.
Hugs,
Linda
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 7
"I was looking forward to getting reacquainted."
I always wondered what happened to Simon, LOL.
That was some observation Gus had about his mother and Brian. It seems almost that is Brian's wife and Justin is his lover. if Lindsay was a man or Brian was straight, they would probably had been together.
I'm still loving the way this story is written.
Author's Response: Oh, yeah, Simon's still on the prowl and wants Justin in the worst way. LOL
Brian and Lindsay have a strong bond, but Brian and Justin have so much more. Gus just needed to have it confirmed by Justin for his world to sense again.
I'm so happy you're still loving the way this story is written. It means the world to me to read your comment. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2014 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
I was so excited to see an update on this! There is so much going on here and so many questions to be answered, hopefully you'll have the opportunity to update again soon so that we can gain a little more insight :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Glad you were excited to see an update.
Yes, we have a lot of plot details cropping up - Don 't worry, they've all been placed in this chap for a reason and will be developed in the coming chaps. Believe it or not, this story only has 3 more chapters. It's all planned out in my head.
Sorry so much time elapses between updates. It's not that I abandon the story for months at a time and then write it. No, it's just a matter of me being a pathetically SLOW writer. LOL I work on it almost every night. It just takes me forever to get each chapter the way I want it.
Thanks again for the encouraging words. They mean the world to me.
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