Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2014 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 35
Hi, Bill! Finally got caught up on your story. Still really enjoying it, my friend. I like the slower pace here, and how you have developed the growing relationship between the two boys and Brian & Justin. Claire is a real piece of work. Ugh. I never thought I would dislike someone more than Joan, but I do now after this chapter! I hope the boys' arrangement winds up being permanent. They have built up a nurturning family life where they are, and I would hate to see that change. Thanks for the entertainig story, Bill! I'll be looking foward to the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hope all is good with you. Happy that you are enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2014 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 35
All caught up now and patiently waiting for more... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Really happy to know that you are up to date. I am working on Chapter 36, glad you are enjoying the story. Bill
Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2014 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 35
Oh dear Claire is getting almost down to the bottom! She still does not take responsibility so she is still far from turning her life around. The boys are really getting it together and they are now seeing love in action and know they are loved and safe
Author's Response: Claire's life is a mess. Thanks for commenting on the story. Glad you are still enjoying it.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2014 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 35
Part of the reason for lack of reviews may be your security system.
I tried to enter a review right after I found MW, but even though I had clearly entered the correct number, the system rejected it.
I didn't try again for months. If I had not had the burning need to say something about a story, I might never have tried again.
Even now, about 1 to 3 times out of 10, my review gets rejected by the security system.
And I am only willing to try so many times.
If the admin wants to contact me I am at cfchumley@hotmail.com. Please use Midnight Whispers in the subject line to avoid being deleted as spam.
Author's Response: I did tell admin abiut your issue, he was going to see if anything could be done. If you join Midnight Whispers you won't have to enter any codes as long as you are signed in. Doesn't cost anything and no spam email from the site. Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 35
You almost have to feel sorry for Claire. NOT. Thank goodness Brian and Justin are there for John and Peter. Yep, I think a call to Kathy Sacks is in order. That was cruel of you to tempt Brian with a hash brown. Now I have to go to McDonald's. Something tells me that John and Peter will be going to Washington Academy. < Happy dance.>
Author's Response: Hello my friend. I don't consider my chapters complete until I get your review. I was a little nervous about how low Claire had to go but thought it fit in with her story line. I do see WA in the boys' future but there may be a bump in the road before that happens. I am way more tempted by the eggs mcmuffins rather then hash browns. Thanks, as always, for you comments. Bill
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2014 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 35
Wow Claire could not even meet her kids sober why do I get the feeling she is going to OD soon and Brian and Justin are going to end up with John and Peter permantly either that or Claire is going to kill Joan either way great chapter
Author's Response: So you are feeling psychic today. Poor Claire she is not having a good life. Glad you liked the latest chapter, thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 35
Whoa, I didn't think that I could be anymore disgusted in Claire than I already was. The fucking nerve of her showing up high to see her sons. I'm just glad that these young men had the courage to call her on her shit. As much as Claire would like to believe that Brian and Justin are the reason for the boys attitude toward her, she has to somehow realize that their time spent with their uncles has been instrumental in changing them for the better.
Remind me to tell about my personal experience with this one day ;)
Author's Response: You have validated my story lines in the past from personal experience and I really appreciated that. Claire really is not a not having a good life, I guess actually she never has had a really good life. Really happy you are still enjoying the story. I appreciate you are so loyal about offering your comments. Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 35
I was waiting to see who was going to be the next person to upset the ambiance of this perfect life. Do Michael, Lindsay and Hal still have parts to play in this fic? I'm really pleased that John and Peter could tell Claire was still using, and they were the ones to suggest Justin call Kathy. 200 reviews congratulations.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks for the congrats on my 200th review - that is even after losing a bunch when the web site crashed. How quickly you forget! Michael was just causing trouble in Chapter 32 about the girls & kids having to lived cramped in the loft. Lindsay caused so much trouble on her 4th of July visit that Alice dubbed her a Wicked Witch of the North. Soon Lindsay and Melanie will be moving back to Pittsburgh and maybe working at the Bloom Gallery. Thanks, as always for taking time to comment. I always look forward to your reviews. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2014 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 35
A very interesting chapter, if disturbing. How far will Clair fall?
It's good that the nephews feel safe at Britin.
I was so happy to see an update I completely forgot why I came into the room and finished right then!
Author's Response: I actually worried about the Claire car ride stuff but thought it was important to show how messed up her life has become. It made me smile that you called Justin & Brian's house "Britin" beacuse I have avaoided calling it that. Never liked that name. As long as you review you can call the house whatever you want. I look forward to reading review after post a chapter. Wish more readers would review and I thank you for being so loyal about reviewing. Thanks, Bill
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