Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2018 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 34
not sure if I like that oversweet Brian, is not hinself. I love Brian but to domisticated
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2014 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 34
What an enjoyable chapter. So much fun and it's nice to see how Kinnetik supported John's soccer team. It was also nice to meet Kevin and see how well he got along with Gus and Grandmom Jen. Brian buying Gus' painting and remote control cars for all the boys was a nice touch. Looks like Brian will be looking into schools for John and Peter. Wonder how the meeting with Claire goes the next day. And don't think I missed the reference to the Wicked Witches...LOL
Author's Response: Always happy to see your review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Maybe lunch with Claire will go so well that the byw will be reunited with their mother. Doubtful. Thanks for taking time to comment. Bill
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2014 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 34
I just loved the chapter!!! The "wicked witches of the north" comment just cracked me up!!! That was great! I could just picture both of them with green faces and everything.... XD I also loved the quiet fun time everyone is getting without the WWN getting involved.... XD Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :) Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Really happy you enjoyed the latest chapter. Thanks for all the nice comments, glad you enjoyed the WWN comment. Thanks for taking time to review, you are really good about doing that and I appreciate it. Bill
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2014 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 34
I enjoyed the chapter.
I'm not too sure they should have left Gus at the pool. Yes the nephews are good young men, but one is tired, and the other is distracted.
Author's Response: I did think of that but don't worry nothing bad happens. Glad you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for taking time to review.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2014 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 34
great chapter- I really don't look forward to the meeting with Joan and JOhn and Peter, but I think it is great that they decided to have it at the diner. I wonder how Claire will act when surrounded by the folks on Liberty avenue.
sfscarlet
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments. I think lunch at the diner will be interesting. Happy you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2014 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 34
Great chapter as always...although I'm not looking forward to Claire ' s upcoming visit. I have a feeling that she has something sneaky up her sleeve.
Author's Response: The charming Claire sneaky? You have a suspicious mind. Happy you are still enjoying the story. Thanks for the review, you are so loyal about reviewing and I appreciate it a lot.
Reviewer: ceci (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2014 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 34
I'm really enjoying this story. Thank you!
Author's Response: I so glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate all the reviews. It's good to know that someone is reading my story.
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2014 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 34
That was a really good chapter but I am looking forward to the fireworks of lunch with Claire
Author's Response: So you want another 4th of July with more fireworks. It might be that Claire and her sons have a really nice lunch and come to a deeper & greater understanding. However I doubt that will happen! Thanks for taking time to comment on my story.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2014 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 34
Brian shook his head. “You made me love you and I accepted that but you never told me it would be contagious.”
This is the sweetest line ever! TAG
Author's Response: Glad you liked that! Thanks for reviewing. Bill
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