Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2019 08:33 AM · On: Consequences
Wow this left me breathless it was so amazing. The pain that ran through this jumped from the page and into my veins it was so strong and powerful. The depth of feeling you put into this amazing chapter was unreal. Nasir was so broken that I feared his soul had left his body. Brion and Justinus were so good in trying to help as best they could. Argon I felt so sad for him as well he must have been so confused and in just as much pain. My heart jumped with glee when they were reunited I hope this is the start of something beautiful for them all.
amazing work x
Author's Response: Again, much of this chapter is based on what happened during the Spartacus series, which is why I could write it the way I did. I simply wrote the way I was feeling while watching these scenes. I remember being so upset when I thought Agron would die on that cross, and the joy I felt (which included a ton of happy tears) when I saw that Agron was among those who were sent back to Spartacus in the exchange. I'm very happy that you were able to feel the same way I did while reading this chapter, Vicki. Thank you so much for these comments. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Consequences
Just as moving as it was in the actual episode but mixed in with some Brion/Justinus expose. I need for them to all talk about things though when things settle down cause they have seen what secrets can do and they can't afford for them to hurt others they care about.
Great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Vision. This next chapter involves a great deal of talking. In order to go forward for lovers AND friends, all four men will need to deal with what has happened, and they will. I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter and felt you were reliving those dramatic moments from the series. I will never forget that scene when Agron returned to Nasir's arms and hoped I'd do it justice. Huge hugs, Grammy
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