Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2017 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 2

The plot thickens.....how will this turn out?

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2014 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hello Bill.  I can only apologize once again for my tardiness in reading your fic.  I know I welcomed you some time ago, but I have been unable to keep up due to illness and the system problems earlier this year.  I'm trying really hard to read and review all the new authors and the authors who support me before any others.  So now I have started this I am looking forward to reading all the chapters I have waiting for me.  So on with the review.

Where was Justin when I needed him?  LOL  He is so attentive.  Brian must have been feeling really bad to pee sitting down.  I liked that titbit. :D  I love the way you are writing Jennifer in this fic, however I was a little surprised at how Justin spoke to Claire when she came to the loft, still it looks like she is up to no good.

When you write "this is my first QAF story on here" does that mean you write somewhere else? 

Lucky me; so many chapters so I will read on.

Cheers



Author's Response:

this story is also posted on FanFiction Archive site.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story

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