Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2019 07:37 AM · On: Intrique & Deception
Oh dear will Craigh try and kill his son. Things are really heating up and getting so tense in the city. I can feel a lot more blood shed coming.
Thrilling chapter x
Author's Response: Bloodshed is inevitable in war, but not so common for a father to kill his son. But then again, Craig is a man with no scruples. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2013 07:15 AM · On: Intrique & Deception
Let's hope Justinus has learned enough fighting skills in the past few weeks to fight off Craigh! Great cliffhanger there! TAG
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great comments, Tag. I love a good cliff-hanger (I'm old enough to remember the old radio serials that always ended with them LOL), so I enjoy throwing one in sometimes. I also needed to take a break in the story before getting down and dirty, because the next chapter gets really scary. A lot of pain is in store for many folks, including loved ones, but I promise it won't take long to get there. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Intrique & Deception
Oh damn I didn't want Nasir to learn about Justin's identity this way, if they are captured by by Craigh and Cassius. Things are reaching a fevered pitch now it's not long before all things are out in the air and we will see how they learn to re-trust Justin and Brion.
Excellent chapter
Author's Response: Yes, Vision, all secrets are about to be exposed, and all deceptions will come to light. Justinus and Brion are about to learn what being at war really means, just as Agron and Nasir had already learned long before. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. I appreciate them a great deal. Warmest hugs, Grammy
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