Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2019 08:34 PM · On: Friendships Formed & Evil Deeds
I hope Craig is found along with Cassius they are just plain evil. I do hope Brion and Agron know that their parents would never betray them and are faithful. Please say they are not broken up.
Excellent work x
Author's Response: Jealousy is a dangerous thing, especially in times like this, but only time will tell how much damage it can do. As for Craig and Cassius, the Fates have plans for them too. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2013 07:27 PM · On: Friendships Formed & Evil Deeds
More, please! I need more! TAG
Author's Response: Great timing, Tag. I just got my next finished chapter back from Judy this morning. As soon as I make the corrections, the new chapter will be up, and I can promise you plenty of action and a bit of suspence. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sheela (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2013 08:47 PM · On: Friendships Formed & Evil Deeds
I think it's so cute that Justinus and Nasir became friends and I hope Brion and Agrons jealousy and suspicions fade away since it's baseless.
And I hope for a long suffering for Craigh and Cassius.
Looking forward for more. :-)
Hugs, Meggi
Author's Response: Justinus and Nasir are so similar in personality, that it is inevitable for them to form a close bond. Even their taste in partners is very much alike, witness the similarities in Brion and Agron. Brion and Agron have anger issues... they just handle them differently. Brion, as slave for so many years, has learned to keep his anger under control. Agron wasn't a slave long enough to learn that skill, and his brother's death only made his anger more intense.
Jealousy will play a part in their lives, but real love is always stronger than baseless emotions in the end. As for Craigh and Cassius., well let's just say that they will learn to feel like the rats they are before they meet their justice.
The next chapter is completed and in the hands of my beta. It should be posted in a day or two at most. The 7th Anniversary of my first ever story posted online is coming up and I'm also working on a special story for that, so I've been a bit delayed. You won't have to wait long, however. Thank you so much for commenting, Meggi. It is always a thrill to hear from you. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 08:00 PM · On: Friendships Formed & Evil Deeds
So you decided to diverge from the whole Agron being jealous of Nasir and Castus situation and used Justin even though it is clearly friendship to stir up some trouble and now adding Brion into the mix. Like Justin and Nasir thinks because they are so closed off/ and possibly agnry at life it tends to cloud their own judgment of things (Brion/Agron). They aren't talkers they don't show their emotions except when it comes to their mates and that inability to reason/talk things out can lead to trouble.
Here's hoping this problem will be resovled before they lose Sinuesa.
Excellent chapter
Author's Response: You are right, Vision, and I did warn my readers that I would be going off script right about now. You are, however, wrong about Castus. That poor fellow will serve a purpose, but more on that later. The one thing Brion and Agron have in common, besides falling in love with very similar young men, is that they don't trust easily. Also, Brion is reluctant to open up to Justinus because he still hasn't revealed what he knows about Justinus's father. Agron has always had a temper when people he cares about are endangered,...witness his behavior with Duro at the ludus. Their way of handling their emotions has worked for them in the past, but now it will affect their relationship with the one most important person in their lives. Only time will tell how and when life will change again for the couples. More coming up shortly. Thank you so much for your terrific comments. Huge hugs, Grammy
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