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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 153: What is Your Plans For That Stuff?

What with the toilet déjà vu scene? Did Justin plant something in Chris and Ethan’s place or maybe Michael’s room? LOL I’m just kidding but it did take me back since there is a phone involved. What’s with these people and their phones; can they get a wrist strap or maybe a handbag to carry them in. At least with a handbag you always know where your phone is; they are always at the bottom under everything else. Or is that just mine?

Cheers

Author's Response:
My gosh, Flossee, U don't forget any of the old chapters, huh? Boy! You make me smile and laugh every time. Boy that would be funny if Justini gave Ethan a bit of his own medicine. Howeer, Justin wouldnt' be lying recall how willing Chris went to the hotel with Justin that day, lol! Oh, and more PHONE action to come. LOL! Where I'm moving on the answer the rest of the reviews and then I'm uploading chapter 160. Later.

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 153: What is Your Plans For That Stuff?

You know, and I can't believe I'm saying this...I don't even think I believe Brian and Justin being together is the best option anymore. Before, when the divorce was fresh, them getting back together seemed like the only solution. Now, however, they both have different lives. Would they even recognize each other?

Brian went through a very hard time in his paralysis. And even though Justin wanted to be there, he wasn't. Brian went through all those things alone and is different because of them. As for Justin, he's had this whole other life, boyfriends and doctors and JC, that Brian has no part of. I'm starting to think that too much time has passed for them to find a reason to be together again...

They may love each other, but they don't know how much the other person has changed. How can they reconcile their old feelings with their new selves?

I only write this much because I care SO much. Right now this is my favorite story and I really want things to work out between everyone...But the more time that passes the less I see that happening. At least not without one of them being unhappy with it and leading to another divorce.

Ok so this is basically a repeat of everything I left in my last review...Well, not a repeat, but just more concerns. I still love the story and can't wait for the next update. :)

Author's Response:
Wow! thank you for writing this; and guess what? I thought of every obstacle you have written here, and I've already worked it all out... you'll be surprise what develops along the way that do eventually get them back together, and I hope (by story end) that I've done a good enough job to make it believable. We'll see.

Also, IcedCupcake, let me say here. You probably have no idea how much I value a review such as this one. It's such an honest critique of the story, and I appreciate it so much, because taking everything into consideration you writing here, can only make a better writer out of me. So, always feel free to express yourself just like you're doing here, and never shy away from doing so. Thanks again. And, here's chapter 153 for you, I hope you still continue to enjvy.

Also, and I hope to post all the way to chapter 157 tonight. later.

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