Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 01:49 PM · On: New Beginnings
This is such a nice chapter. Again it gives us a glimpse of how truly cherished the 'family' of Brian is to him. Shane is so lucky to have been included in that family of Brian, however ferocious is new older brother is to her. I also like the way you had Brian call out Justin's sarcasm. He's a give-it-to-me-straight-and-lessen-the-bullshit type of guy. Scary actually but it cuts wasted time.
I agree with Justin, tricking Lindsay with a mock wedding is disrespcful. And bravo to him too for having the guts to mention about wanting to have a child. Wow! He really is an old soul, 19 and planning (not even dreaming) of having his own child. I was just enjoying my college then and freedom from highschool. Definitely no plans to have a family/kids yet.
Author's Response: I always saw Justin as an old soul. There was a line in QAF, I think Deb said it, that Brian and Justin were on the same maturity level. I disagree. I think Justin was more mature! lol
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 12:48 AM · On: New Beginnings
Have I told you lately what a bad influence you are lol. I should be writing but I am so damn addicted to this story that I can't stop reading it ;)
Brian and Justin are having a baby together, if that isn't enough to burst Lindsay's bubble I don't know what is. I'm so glad Shane decided to keep the baby and give herself a chance at being a mother.
Can't wait for the next installment~JP
Author's Response: I know I"m a bad influence! lol I know how you feel though, I never get time to read anymore because I"m always so behind on my writing. Work takes up all my time. I'm home today and hoping to get started on another installment of Always You.
Thanks for reading, and commenting!
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