Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 04:42 PM · On: Mr. Goodbars

If I were the partner of your Brian, I'd have a heart attack everytime he goes out!

James is getting to be so cool. He's like an older Jason Bourne with his fast hands. 



Author's Response:

lol Brian is not easy, that's for sure!  I loved writing James. One of my favorite characters.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:06 AM · On: Mr. Goodbars

oh Brian!!!! If I was Justin, I would kill him, bring him back to life and kill, and do that again and again and again.....



Author's Response:

Justin is going to deal with Brian in his own way, and I don't think Brian is going to like it!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 09:48 AM · On: Mr. Goodbars

That fucking cunt Mel always finds a way to fuck Brian every chance she gets. In this case Lindsay isn't any better. She needs to get a backbone for fucks sake and think for herself. Brian is a good father and should not be punished for wanting to be more involved in his sons life.

Now that I've vented, I'm off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I agree with you about the girls!  Hope you like how this pans out!

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