Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviews For Before There Was You, There Was You

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 10:30 AM · On: Coming Home

For someone who bottles up his feelings, Brian has more emotional events in his life than I do, both here in BTWYTWY and QAF. That's what happens when heat is kept simmering underneath for long, like lava in volcanoes. Look at Emmett, he has as much need to look for his own personal love but his life is not as explosive. And Brian calls Honeycut the Queen.

Love this chapter by the way. It could be written as a script and read out loud. Such emotions and passion that can ring out from the actors.

Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was fun writing.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2013 06:11 AM · On: Coming Home

Wow this chapter was so touching and moving. I think at some point I had tears in my eyes (I will deny it, if someone asks of course).

Brian was "so cute" with his plan to have Justin move with him. Well done, there was such an intimacy between them that I felt like an intruder!!!! Just Beautiful. It's my favourite chapter so far (ok I may say that a lot during this story).

Author's Response:
Awww Thank you! This chapter was touching, but not my favorite. There is one chapter (down the road a bit) that's really touching.

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! I'm posting two more chapters tonight because I won't be home tomorrow.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2013 01:40 AM · On: Coming Home

Oh my......my cheeks are still red after reading this chapter. It was good that for once they actually discussed their issues with words before they let their bodies do the talking.

I can't wait to see how Rena reacts to her new family.

Please update soon~JP

Author's Response:
Just posted another chapter! Thank for commenting!

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