Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 23
Oh Crap!!!
Reviewer: Kathy (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 23
Arrgghhh!!!! This is why I hate reading incomplete stories. Am awaiting your next installment anxiously.
It's a fabulous story. Great writing style. Very easy to read. It flows ...
Keep up the grat work.
K
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, honey. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 23
Interesting – I really thought that after the last chapter, things couldn’t
get any worse. Well I was wrong, they just got worse. Assuming that
there still is a Justin, and I read that last sentence very carefully – so
not all is lost – maybe?
I have to wonder just what does Justin need to start his climb back to
normalcy. Now that Justin has told Brian everything, maybe it is time
for Brian to do the same. Some real honesty about his feelings for
Justin could be the switch that turns things around.
Great story. You wrote action and suspense beautifully.
Thanks for the story
DavidR
Author's Response: Hi David, In life we know that things often get worse before they get better. Let's hope that Justin will have the opportunity to work through his guilt. Thank you for your compliments and for being such a faithful reader, *hugs*
Reviewer: Sissi Parker (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2011 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 23
You are true evil to stop there.
Such a great story. But so heartbreaking. So raw. So emotional. So lovely.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for all of the lovely comments. I love that this story is bringing out such strong emotions in you!
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 23
brian didn't know the depth of justin's guilt. how horrible to live with that. i know you didn't let justin fall. you wouldn't do that.
Author's Response: Justin truly believes he was the cause of Ethan's death. He asked him to switch seats and he figures that he would have died that day. Justin, fall? Mmmm...let's see what kind of a mood I'm in. LOL
Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2011 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 23
Eeek! Justin should have told Brian all of this when he first got back.
I hope Justin will be okay!
Author's Response: It was too hard for him to tell anyone. He wasn't ready and still wasn't ready until Brian pressed him for an answer. Next chapter will be posted soon. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 23
Noooo! I mean no....Lol...not the cliff-hanger...talk about suspense...what an ending....please make Justin okay...and update like today....whew, this is such a good story!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, Jasmine. This cliffhanger is definitely one of my more exciting ones. You'll find out Justin's fate soon. :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 23
I cannot believe you stopped it there. Great cliffhanger.
Author's Response: Thanks, I had to think about where I wanted to go from there. Thrilled you are still enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 23
omg what a cliff hanger! I hope Justin it ok! I'm glad he got it all out though. But I wonder, now that Brian knows the truth, what will he do?
Very emotional chapter! Great job.
Author's Response: Have you ever known Brian to abandon Justin in his time of need? Although, he may have reached his breaking point. Stay tuned. Next chapter is coming soon. Thank you for the compliment, GM. :)
Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 23
did you really have to end it there :( get chapter though
Author's Response: Thanks! Had to think about where I wanted this to go. I've finished the next part. Just waiting for my beta.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 23
OMG Justin so much pain, nect chapter soon this is too much of a cliff hanger xo Chris
Author's Response: Justin is hurting. Brian had no idea the depth of his hurt. Next chapter coming real soon! :)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 23
OMG this is really a cliffhanger .. update ASAP ... uuhhhh no ... immediately!! ... please
* hugs *
Author's Response: Finished the next chapter. It is with my beta. Thanks for the feedback, hon. :)
Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 23
Now I know that you are trying to give me a heart attack! Please update soon.
Author's Response: LOL Will try to update asap. Thank you for the review!
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