Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Penname: Cheburashka2 [Contact]
Real name: Vin
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Member Since: September 07, 2011
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Summary: Feature

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A Featured Story for October-Halloween 2012

A young girl is new to town and at the instance of her parents is trying to make friends but in this town there is an initiation of sorts before you can be one of the cool kids. You have to spend the night in ‘The Haunted Manor’. When Sara walks up to the big beautiful old house with the sign that reads Britin what will she find?

Warnings: Brian and Justin, Other Canon Characters, Original Male and Female Characters, References to Suicide, Child Abuse, References to Child Abuse, Violence, NC-17, AU, Read at the risk of being upset 

Disclaimer: I do not own the boys or any other characters from the show, I'm playing with them, but I'll give them back when I'm done. I swear. 


Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Major Character Death, Violence, Halloween Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 9963
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: October 03, 2012


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Hi, Sara

Wonderful story! Just perfect for Halloween.

Cheers,

Vin

 
Femininity by elyxer Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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Brian tries to design an ad campaign for women's products.

Warnings: AU, OOC, Humor


Categories: One-Off Fic, Alternate Universe, Humor, Out of Character Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6394
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: March 12, 2008


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG! This was the funniest thing I've read in a while! Thanks for making me laugh.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it.  Hugs! Rena

 
The Revelation by elyxer Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Joan discovers she has a grandson after some life altering events happen in her own life. Even though she hasn't spoken to Brian in years, will she get to know her teenage grandson?

Warnings: Au, OOC


Categories: One-Off Fic, Alternate Universe, Christmas, Out of Character Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5147
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: March 12, 2008


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Surprise Meeting

This story was such a surprise - I loved it! As much as I hated Joan's character in the show, you've done an amazing job of redeeming her.

Great job!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks Vin,

I enjoyed writing something that is a little shocking. Hugs, Rena

 
Summary:

'Chickens Don't Lay Eggnog Banner' by kari77

How many Brian and Justin words can you think of that start with 'f'?

(Part of the 'Board Games Gone Wild Series') Banner by Kari77.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Humor, Christmas, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: Board Games Gone Wild, Tipsy!B/J
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1584
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chickens don't lay eggnog.

I adore this story - it was an absolute riot from beginning to end.

I wish you could write "Games Gone Wild" for every holiday in the calendar year, including Orthodox Christmas on January 7th (which is when I celebrate it, incidentally). How about it?   :)

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks Vin! I'm really glad you liked this story - it was the one that started off the Borad Game series ;-) If I had more time and played enough board games, I would tiotally write one for every holiday of the year. Unfirmatuanly, I tne to only manage to write one at Christmas. This was actaully last year's (which didn't make it onto this site as an oversight *faceplam*), but I'll probably write another one this year. Maybe in time for Orthodox Christmas... Thanks so much for reading and for your review. Happy Holidays once again!

 
Summary:

Justin is a vampire that lives his life killing his kind. He's angry that he was turned when he didn't want to. He killed his sire a long time ago but is still thirsty for revenge. Justin thinks that his real family are a bunch of monsters that he has to kill. His kind just thinks there is something oh so wrong with the blond.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Abuse, Anti-Ethan, Anti-Michael, Brian/Other, Humor, Incest, Justin/Other-Relationship, Minor Character Death, Rape, Romance, Unsafe Sex, VAMPIRES!, Violence Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: No Word count: 116834
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2021


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: The Decisions We Make

I just discovered this fic and pretty much spent the entire day reading it - my Sunday was gone in a blink of an eye. Amazing fic! I am normally not a fan of Brian/Justin vampire stories, but this one just grabbed me from the start and I couldn't stop reading it. Maybe I'll give other B&J vampire fics a chance after this one.

There are too many things that I liked to name, so I'm no going to enumerate them. I will say that your portrayal of a completely unhinged Vampire!Brian is nothing short of perfection. I feel terrible for Justin and his suffering and hope that you muse will be inclined to make things a bit better for him in the future. I don't particularly care for the idea of little Justin being a bit of an evil kid, BUT I am going to trust you because you haven't disappointed me so far.

Oh, one quick question - I thought that Mysterious Marylin/Jacob died in a previous chapter? Am I wrong? Or did he in fact die and was brought back to life for some reason?

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you'll post again soon.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Yeah, thanks for telling me this.  Most people don't like this story because it's so dark and they don't like watching the boys being like that.  What can you do? *Shrugs*  You're right about Jacob soooo sorry about that.  I messed up, wow.I went back and fixed that.  So sorry. Thanks for letting me know. Hope you like what's to come.  Stay around apparently you're going to be keeping me on my toes...which is good.  Thanks again.  Take care of yourself, T

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: January 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: The Right One

Great update. You packed a lot of very interesting details into 1800 words. Can't wait for the update.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response: There is so much more out there still. A few secrets left. I just hope you enjoy what is to come.


Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2013 04:08 AM · On: The Right One

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response: Yes I am writing more of it already. Just making everyrhing fit together. More soon.

 

 

 
Mine by elyxer Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Justin is turning 30, but he's not the one upset about it.


Categories: Brian/Justin, Canon, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1905
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2008 Updated: June 29, 2008


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Mine

Awwww! Sniff, sniff! That was just lovely.

You have a very nice way of writing canon. Thanks for sharing this.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting. *grins*  Hugs, Rena

 
For the Record by Britin Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Interviews with the QAF gang. Warning: Pretty much anti-everybody.


Categories: Humor Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6249
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2008


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Most Fabulous Fag

OMG, that was hilarious! Loved it!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Captain Whiner

You owe me a beer, a KBC Blueberry Wheat Ale to be precise. Why? Because this chapter made me laugh so hard, I knocked my beer bottle over and spilled a good third of the contents all over the table. Not only that, when I read the whole ".. Ben snores like a fucking dragon beast..." rant I spewed a generous sized mouthful of that Blueberry Ale all over my laptop. Thankfully, the laptop is no worse for wear, but my sides are definitely aching from laughing for five minutes straight.

So, again, you owe me a fucking beer!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Public Service Announcement

This was great, very funny. Maybe not quite as funny as the previous chapter (proven by the fact that I haven't drowned my laptop with another mouthful of beer), but pretty damn funny.

The Care Bear shrine... I have no words...

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Daddy Says

LOL. Gus spilled the beans - too adorable for words.

Loved this story. Totally brilliant!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Sacrificed by elyxer Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 146]
Summary:

When his business starts to fail, Craig Taylor makes a bargain to save his company.  What happens when the time comes to repay the debt?

Warnings: AU, BDSM, OOC, OTHER CHARACTERS, RELIGIOUS CONNOTATIONS, UNDERAGED SEXUAL SITUATIONS IN DREAMS, UNSAFE SEX


Categories: Brian/Justin, Alternate Universe, Bdsm, Unsafe Sex Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 22638
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: September 06, 2009


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: What is Given Can Be Taken Away

Noooooooooooooo! 

OK, on to the next chapter, you evil, evil, evil writer-you!

I'm not even going to say cheers...

Vin



Author's Response:

Hey Vin,

Yes I am evil...bwahahahahaha.  Hugs Rena

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Test Begins

Oh, you are evil, you are....

No cheers for you,

Vin



Author's Response:

Bwahahahaha. Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Love is All That Matters

Cheers! Cheers! Cheers!

Yay for happy endings! This was a very creative story that kept me entertained from chapter to chapter.

You deserve another cheers, so here it is

Cheers!

Vin  :)



Author's Response:

*blushes*  Awww shucks Vin.  *scrapes toe of shoe and ducks head*  Hugs, Rena

 
Timeless by cynical21 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 859]
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for June 2018***

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Brian and Justin try to cope with life apart - with the marriage that did not happen and the love that would not die


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other-Relationship, Romance, Violence Characters: Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 784049
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2018


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Just discovered this story about a week ago and totally and completely fell in love with it. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter and a resolution to this epic, epic fic! I so hope it'll have a happy ending for our favorite boys. This story has made me laugh and cry (a lot... at one point I was weeping loudly enough for my husband to get concearned, which was hilarious to him after he found out why I was crying and embarrasing for me). At one point I got so caught up reading, I didn't realize it was 4 am and I had to get up two ours later for work. That's how much I love this addictive-as-crack story and it physically pains me to wait for the next chapter. I hope you'll post the next one soon.

Thanks for sharing your amazing writing with us!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Sorry to be slow to respond to your beautiful comment.  It's reactions like this that make writing in the fanfiction genre so rewarding, since one obviously doesn't make money doing it.  But this means so much more than material profits.

Thank you for taking the time to comment, and for your amazing response.  I sincerely hope your interest will continue, and that I will not disappoint you.

CYN

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

OMG, amazing chapter! The last line was just heartbreaking, but I loved it all.

Now, I have to wait for the next installment. Oh, please post soon!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comment and your enthusiasm.  And I will try to write more quickly.  In truth, I usually do complete the first draft of a chapter in a relatively short period of time.  But the key words here are "rough draft", because every chapter I post has been edited, re-edited, and re-re-edited - by me, since I don't use a beta.  Much too anal retentive/compulsive to let anyone else touch my work, even though there are plenty of multi-talented betas around who could probably make it better.

Just my quirk, I'm afraid. But thanks again for reading and commenting.

CYN

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: June 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Thank you for this wonderful update! I was so excited to see another installment of this amazing story. As much as I want to see the resolution to the intrigue that's been weaved into this narrative (can't wait to see how you pull it all together), I am at the same time sad that it's coming to an end.

Can't wait for another update; I hope it'll come soon.

Cheers,

Vin

P.S. Glad you are feeling better and hope you'll be at 100% soon.

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: July 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I'm sorry, but I have to do this...fucking Ted! Blankety-blank-blank-blank!

Sorry for the cursing, but it had to be done. This cliffhanger was a killer (no pun intended)! I can't wait for the next chapter, which I hope will come sooner since you are feeling better. I'm very glad you are doing better and not just for selfish reasons. :)  I wish you lot of continued health so that you can enjoy life more, aside from bringing us, your fans, more fan fiction.

Now, for the actual review. This chapter was jam-packed with goodies. The action packed ending with the bomb threat and Katy's kidnapping were edge-of-the-seat exciting. The cliffhanger was...well, you already know. I especially loved McFed's handling of Mel and Mrs. LaSalle, Cynthia discovering the discrepancy with the land deal and Emmett discovering Brian's secret. Just awesome.

Speaking of Emmett, I sincerely hope he'll have the balls to tell Justin the truth about Brian's sight, because he deserves to know. I'm sorry, but it rather bothers me that Brian is keeping this from Justin. IMHO, by keeping this to himself Brian isn't treating Justin as an individual capable of making his own decision in regards to what he considers a sacrifice; he isn't treating him as a grown up MAN or an EQUAL in their relationship. As romantic as it sounds for Brian to shower Justin with gifts like land and a dream house, it seems (at least to me) as rather indulgent, as if he's placating a child. While in the original show Brian has done a number of things "for Justin's own good" - like pushing him off the Kinney cliff during the cancer arc - he has never infantilized him. It's just my opinion and you may very well disagree, but no matter what Brian's been through he doesn't have the right to keep something this big from his PARTNER.

Don't get me wrong, I like your Brian very, very, very much - he's a much more mature, grown-up, more open and often selfless character than in the OS. Which is why it bothers me that your Brian is doing such a disservice to Justin, someone he's supposed to love above all others. In effect, he's treating him as unworthy of making a decision about the direction of his own life. Basically, it seems like he's treating McLaren more like and equal than the love of his life. I just realized that I am basically jealous of McLaren on Justin's behalf, which is ridiculous, I know. LOL!

Anyway, the whole point of my rant was that I hope that Brian realizes that while Brian might consider Justin to be trapped with someone blind, Justin might consider it a priviledge to care for Brian and to be trusted so completely. I very much doubt that Justin would consider it a burden; he might love Brian even more. I hope that Brian "wakes up" and fesses up to Justin, which would be HONEST and RIGHT, and not selfish in the slightest.

But, in case Brian remains his stubborn self, then all my hope is on Emmett, who I hope will spill the beans.

On the other hand, my ENTIRE opinion of Brian's motivations and his treatment of Justin could be completely wrong. As a reader, I won't see the entire picture until the very end and you may very well have something up your sleeve that I just don't know about. Which is yet another reason why I am awaiting your next chapter like an eager puppy.

I hope you won't be offended by my thoughts. The bottom line is that I love this story as a whole - your writing, characters, descriptions and the incredibly multi-faceted plot are amazing. I've followed this story for months and will continue to follow it until the bitter end, ALL sequels included. So, I hope you won't take my opinions on this one small detail as a criticism of the whole story, because it's far from that. Again, you may have much more information to reveal and all my worries may be allayed in the next couple of chapters.

With hugs, wishes of a 100% recovery health-wise and eager anticipation of the next chapter,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A Chris McLaren spin-off? I am so THERE! He's one of my favorite original characters of yours and I'd ABSOLUTELY love to read a story about him, as long as our dear McFed doesn't interfere/get in between of Brian and Justin.

Fabulous idea! Now, onto chapter 58. YAY!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Freaking amazing chapter! I really have no words other than that. Can't wait for the next one.

Cheers,

Vin

P.S. Again, I am definitely interested in reading a spin-off fic about McLaren.

 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

As great as this chapter has been (e.g. the way Brian dealt with Ted, the scene of the family in Deb's kitchen, etc.), the overwhelming feeling I have after finishing reading it is, unfortunately, profound disappointment.

I'm sorry. I truly am, but I just COULD NOT suspend my disbelief enough to buy Brian's reason's for not telling Justin the truth about his vision. IMO, it goes beyond selfishness, beyond just a lack of trust in his partner, beyond a lack of respect FOR his partner... To me it's a betrayal of major proportions.

After almost 800 thousand words and 60 chapters I was hoping that Brian would grow up enough (especially after everything he's been through in this story) to TRUST Justin, to TRUST Justin's LOVE for him and to TRUST their relationship, what I am left with instead is Brian selfishly leaving his partner, and supposed love of his life, in the dark about a serious health issue; and not only that, he's letting Justin's COMPETITION to do the "honors" of telling him the truth. Brian treated McLaren much more fairly and with much more respect and trust than his own partner. I truly don't know how anybody, how any person with any self-worth or self-respect would not feel insulted, belittled and betrayed.

With only the epilogue being left, I assume Justin will hear the truth from McFed and will swallow the whole explanation hook, line and sinker, like a doormat, and sweep this betrayal under the rug because the "perfect" Brian Kinney will somehow throw him a bone and allow him to finally love him. I'm sorry, but it's bullshit. I've followed this story from the beginning and I've loved it up until this chapter. I've HOPED so MUCH that Brian would finally treat Justin like an EQUAL, like a PARTNER, like a MAN.... but in the end that didn't happen...

I shouldn't be taking this so to heart - it is fanfiction after all. But I've spent HOURS reading this story. I got involved with these characters, canon and original ones. I got so invested in the plot. And I feel like I've been lead to believe that there would be a happy ending for Brian and Justin, but it looks like I've been totally wrong.

Basically, the point of my rather long rant is that there SHOULD have been a WARNING in the front page of the story letting people know that after EVERYTHING Brian's character experienced no change or growth of any kind; that he has learned nothing about love or trust, or relationships and that he'll continue to treat Justin like a child, like something less, like someone undeserving of HONESTY and RESPECT, and LOVE. While Justin's character has grown and changed; while he has realized his mistakes, made actual effort to apologize and correct his actions, and has PROMISED to never leave Brian, he is STILL being denied equal treatment as one half of that relationship. And he is still being denied TRUST, which, in my opinion, is the underpinning of any successful relationship.

Basically, I should have been warned that whatever form they end up in at the end of an epilogue, it will not be a happy Brian/Justin pairing with the kind of LOVE, TRUST and EQUALITY most B/J fans like me hope for.

I apologize if this was in any way harsh, but it's from the heart. I greatly admire you as a writer and taken purely objectively (setting emotion aside) and as a whole this was an incredible work of fan fiction. But I just couldn't not voice my disappointment, when I had SUCH high hopes for a happy resolution for these characters.

Cheers,
Vin

 
For the love of Kai by snow Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 495]
Summary: Feature

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NEWEST CHAPTER REVISED 

Season 4. Brian discovers he has cancer and decides to end his relationship with Justin before his partner finds out the truth.

Angry and hurt, Justin is quickly distracted by the discovery of having a very young brother (Craig's other son) with autism. This is the story of Justin growing up, taking charge, taking legal guardianship of his brother, Kai... and what happens when he finds out the truth about Brian.

 

Thank you, Fran, for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Real Life Issues, What If Characters: Craig Taylor, Debbie, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Completed: Yes Word count: 89209
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Fresh air

That was concise, straight to the point...and surprisingly heartbreaking... I'm, shall we say, intrigued...



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: clock it in (episode 408)

I love Daphne. I've always thought she was underused in the original show. Great to see her being a much bigger part of the boys' lives in various fanfics, including this one.

Loving it so far. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to comment :)

best wishes,

Snow

 
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for December 2015***

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Season 2. While Christmas shopping with Daphne, Justin has a panic attack in a crowded shopping mall. Brian helps him to deal with the aftermath.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Gap-Filler, Hurt/Comfort, Christmas Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7748
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: December 11, 2015


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Simplest Gift

Loved it!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful reveiw!

 
Broken Open by Gina Marie Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Feature

Brian owns a private detective agency. Justin's an ex-cop from NYC looking for a change. Both have pasts that are about to catch up with them. What happens when their paths cross and their destinies entwine. This is an AU story with our favorite characters. I hope you enjoy, this is a new venture for me and I've no idea where it's going!

Thanks to foreverbm for the lovely banner!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: Chris Hobbs, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Kiki, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 299229
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2012


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

OMG - an epilogue! I so loved this story, I didn't want it to end. It was a lovely surprise to read the epilogue, which was wonderful, btw. Thank you for this lovely present.

This was such a good story - from beginning to end. If you have a sequel in mind, I'd be truly ecstatic.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thank you Vin!  I'm so glad you liked it.   I am thinking about a sequel!   :-)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Marie,

A comment on one of my stories reminded me of this amazing fic and I just had to give it a 3rd go 'round. It's captivating every single time and even through I've read it twice already and pretty much know what will happen next, I still can't wait to read the next chapter.

“What demented queen is responsible for this?” Emmett asked as he walked into the office.

That line makes me laugh out loud every single time, just so you know.

As ever in love with this story,

Vin



Author's Response:

You have no idea how much reading this comment ment to me. It's so nice to hear that people come back to visit my stories.  It's the greatest compliment.

Thank you!

 

 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Justin's hustler character is totally and completely awesome!

Oh, and that kiss...OMG, that kiss! Reading it for the third time is just as powerful and vivid, and romantic as the first time I read it.

Amazing!



Author's Response:

Nothing better than a B/J kiss..   *sigh*   :-)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I swear to God, Justin being shot was just as shocking & emotional for the 3rd time as the first. You have a true gift! I was EXPECTING it; I knew the when, the who and the how, yet it still affected me!

I loved this chapter. Brian being a shit to Justin when he was "dying" was frustrating again, even though I understood the reasonin; same with his not visiting the hospital.

The "honey, I'm home" & "your mother's a bitch", made me laugh yet again!

I cannot tell you how much I just LOVE this story to pieces! So, here's my question - I remember "rumors" that you have thought of a sequel. I checked a couple of last reviews and some of your responses confirmed that you've at least thought of writing one. I am wondering if that's still in the works or not. Oh, just so you know, I'm mentally twisting my entire body into a pretzel (because crossing fingers is just not enough) to make it come TRUE! Please let me know.

Cheers,

Vin

 



Author's Response:

You truly make my day!  And you are inspiring me to start writing again. I will write a sequel, though I'm not sure if it will be to this story, or to BTWYTWY, or maybe a whole new story!  :-).  But it won't be until Winter when things calm down at work.

Until then, I'm all ears for any idea's for a new story.   :-)

 

thank you so much for your wonderful comments!

 

Gina Marie

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Sigh...it's over, again...until I read it the next time, that is. LOL!

Seriously, though - SEQUEL! Pretty please with sugar on top!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

I will write again. Not sure if it will be a sequel, but I hope you like it the same.  :-) thank you so much for your comments, and encouragement!

 
Summary: Feature

While in New York on business, Brian encounters a gorgeous mysterious man with an unique dilemma. They come to learn that Brian is the man's only hope for survival, & may end up saving himself & changing his outlook on love in the process.

A/U Paranormal


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 23729
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2010


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Vanish

Oooo, intriguing! Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I am happy you're intrigued. ;)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Escape

I'm loving this...in a way that has nothing to do with the horror that is McDonald's.  Kidding. Amazing so far - on to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

ha! I love that you're loving it. Thank you for reading and reviewing. *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Illusion

"With his last fleeting thought, he wondered if said jacket was available in 'Armani'."  - this is quintessential Brian, imho. Fantastic!

And Justin, a ghost? Mmmmm, intriguing doesn't even begin to cover it.



Author's Response:

LOL, quintessential indeed. Thank you for continuing to read.

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Sunshine

Help him, Brian, help him!  God, I love this!



Author's Response:

He will, eventually. ;)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Wonderful! Loved this fic.



Author's Response:

Thank you again for reading, and especially for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it so much. ~Mandi

 
Almost Ever After by LibertySun Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

This is what I like to pretend is the lost epilogue episode of season five. Picks up six months after all canon events of the finale. The *Super Sappy Happy* ending, my 'inner Brian & Justin loving fairy princess' imagines really happened. Includes a wrap up of sorts for everyone. No character hate (unless you count Joan Kinney, I do not)...only love inside :)


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Humor, Romance, Toppy! Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13694
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2010 Updated: September 06, 2010


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Almost Ever After

Sqeee! God, I love this piece. If only the show ended somewhat like that...sigh!



Author's Response:

I am excited you love it. It makes me happy. *Hugs*

 
Bear Hugs by LibertySun Rated: R [Reviews - 82]
Summary: Feature

Sequel to CHOCOLATE KISSES /3wks later Insecurities, Immodesty & Inquisitive friends, induce chaos of elephant sized proportions on Sunnybrooke Academy's Overnight trip to the Pittsburgh Zoo & Aquarium.

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance Characters: Gus, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 35260
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2010 Updated: October 28, 2010


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Early Birdies

A-mazing! God, I loved both Chocolate Kisses and the sequel. Brilliant!

 
Miracle in My Pocket by LibertySun Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Feature

Two years after beating cancer, Brian's health gets another devastating diagnosis.Everyone is preparing themselves for the worst. Everyone that is except Gus. Armed with hope & love, Sonny Boy goes in search of a miracle…


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 8957
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2010 Updated: September 28, 2010


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Waking Nightmare

Oh, God, I'm sitting here, reading and crying...I'm pathertic and you, deal LibertySun, is just that damn good.

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Eternal Night

Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!! I'm a complete mess...

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Dreamlike Reality

I'm still a mess, but that was beautiful. Amazing writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I am very grateful for your kind reviews. *Big Hugs* -Mandi

 
Summary:

BannerFans.com

Christian Mann - Oliver Sabel. A love that started with blatant lies could it end in 'Happily Ever After', after all the time that has past them.

 

All Consenting adults only

To watch their beautiful story plz visit . https://www.youtube.com/user/ichglotzutube


Categories: VERBOTENE LIEBE, Abuse, Alternate Universe, Romance, Violence Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 7160
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2010 Updated: December 09, 2010


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: September 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Could This Get Any Worse!?

Good old Judith - she was one of my favorite characters on VL, besides Chirolli, of course!

Other than that...what to say, what to say... I am not too fond of your making Olli such a complete ass, BUT, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. Hopefully, his six years at sea will cure him of being such a total dick. Christian deserves a nice guy, like the Olli we know and love.

I'd love to see where your story goes from here. Update soon!

:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Could This Get Any Worse!?

Good old Juditth, I miss her. Sigh....

Now, what in the heck is wrong with Olli?

 
Summary: Feature

**FEATURED STORY of December 2012**

Brian has his own unique slant on how to celebrate Christmas, Kinney style.  Will he and Justin actually talk things out this time?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Humor, Romance, Christmas Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 42564
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2010 Updated: December 13, 2012


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Unique Christmas Tree

Congrats on the featured story!

Talk to you soon.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks, my dear friend; I really appreciate it and I consider it an honor.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Egg Snogging by LibertySun Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 75]
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story December 2014***

Upset about possibly spending the holidays without his sunshine or his sonny boy, a saddened Brian finds companionship with a bottle...or several. What happens when an inebriated Brian can't recall the events of his drunken evening on the town? Holiday Hi-jinks, hilarity and intoxicated investigation of course!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Humor, Christmas Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 12652
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2010 Updated: December 25, 2014


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sloshed, Stitches & Stolen suits.

OMG! Hilarious. The poems are great, btw!

I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Holiday House Guest

I can't remember the last time I laughed this hard reading a fic - it's completely adorable and the funniest thing I've read in ages. Love it!



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for your kind words. I am very glad I could make you laugh. *Big Hugs* -Mandi

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Blue Christmas

Awwww, a Sunshine tatoo! Just too much. There are no words to describe how much I love this!



Author's Response:

:D I thought Brian could be a little schoompy while intoxicated. Thank you for another lovely review. *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Home Sweet Hi-jack

Loved this chapter - super entertainig and funny!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am happy you loved it. :)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Rude Awakenings

Amazing. Best B&J Christmas story ever!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the amazing review! :) *Hugs*

 
Summary:

Paternity is relative depending upon how much trouble one gets into at the time.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Humor, Romance, What If Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 59330
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: So You're Into Feather?

OMG, that was hilarious from beginning to end. I laughed until tears ran down my face. It was perfection form Louie the iguana to Petey sqwaking "Harder! Faster! I love you Brian!"

This was comedy gold - love it!

Cheers,

Vin

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  I'm delighted you're reading about the exploits of "Issy!"  I happened to recall Brian's question to Justin that first night about "So You're Into Leather" and the title of this chapter was born - ha!  So glad you liked it, my friend!  Thanks for the wonderful feedback.:)  *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Slumber Party

Another great chapter. I love little Issy, though she's being thouroughly spoiled.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thank you, Vin!  And I think you're right; but I could so seek Brian thoroughly spoiling his little girl, couldn't you?  Thanks for the comment, my friend.:) 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: First Dance

Awww! That was such a cute chapter.

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks again, my friend.:)  So glad you're enjoying the story.:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Who's More Nervous?

Oh, to be a fly on the wall on the car ride back from Issy's first date - Brian's questions and attitude would probably be priceless.

Fantastic chapter. You wrote the scene so well, I could picture it clearly and easily. It was as if I was watching it unfold on a TV screen.

Love it!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks, Vin!  I tried to include parts of Brian's daughter (and Justin's) growing up and how Brian might have handled it.  Hopefully he's not too awfully out of character here!  *Hugs*  Kimberly

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: A Little Visitor Comes A Calling

OMG, poor Brian having to deliver THAT particular talk! He handled it well, though.

Another fantastic chapter. I wonder how they'll react to Issy having a SERIOUS boyfriend? That would be interesting.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Ha!  Can you imagine?  But could you imagine how Debbie might have handled it, too?  LOL!  I think I'd take Brian in that case!  Thanks again for reading, Sweetie.:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Driving Dad Crazy

Oh,man, that brings back memories of my own driving lessons...

Love this story!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Ha!  I think Justin might have actually handled it better than Brian - LOL!  Thanks again for reading, Vin.:)  *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: High School Graduation

That was a lovely graduation speech. Issy is a wonderful daughter to our favorite boys.

Awesome chapter!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thank you again, my friend; I think tolerance would have definitely been uppermost on Issy's mind during that speech.:)  *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: A Heart Firmly Held In Their Hands

Lovely. Enough said...

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading this one, Vin, and for all the wonderful feedback!:)  Looking forward to our meeting in two weeks!  *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Coming Full Circle - Conclusion

"What is it?" he asked eagerly.

 "Human, I guess,"

That was so funny, I nearly spewed coffee on my laptop!

This story was so sweet and filled with so many wonderful moments - some incredibly funny, some achingly sweet, some lovely, some sexy...and all very realistic. Makes me wish the original show had a Six Feet Under type ending montage (without the death, of course) that showed the boys' life together years into the future. This story and all these wonderful moments could easily be incorporated into such an episode. Now THAT'S the kind of ending to the OS I would've been completely behind, not what we got... Oh, well...at least the less than stellar ending of the OS gave all of us fans room to imagine better conclusions, such as this amazing fic.

Thank you, Kim - I loved it!



Author's Response:

Hi, Hon!  I totally agree!  (Sigh...) If only the writers had just given us a small glimpse of hope into the future for our boys, we wouldn't have had to spend all these hours writing the correct (happy) scenarios for them!  But it has given me pleasure both writing as well as reading others' stories in an attempt to write the show's wrong.:)  Thanks again for all of your wonderful feedback, Vin!:)  I appreciate that so much, my friend.:)  *Big Hug*

 
Going, Going, Gone! by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Justin's artwork garners attention from a secret admirer; guess who isn't pleased?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Out of Character, Romance Characters: Debbie, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 35017
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2011 Updated: January 04, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The New Client

Oh, Brian... up to your old tricks, are you? Sigh....

This series promises to be interesting, Kim. There's no better way to unwind from a crazy week, than to laze the Saturday away on a comfy couch with a great pot of coffee and your lovely writing.

I am going to so enjoy digging into this story!

*Hugs*

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  My goodness - you've been busy - ha!  You mean you haven't read this series?  Hope you have a lot of coffee handy!  It would have been the perfect time to read some stories today here; dreary and gray and highs in the 30's.  I should warn you - there IS one part in here where Brian is totally OOC - he sings! But if you can overlook that I think you will enjoy it.:)  Thanks for giving it a shot!  If you read all three in the trilogy (Secret Admirer and Double Jeopardy after it), you may be here a while, but I love it!  Hope you enjoy the ride!  *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Favor

Good old Ben, I've always liked him. His character was one of the reasons I didn't completely hate Michael in the show.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

I always liked Ben, too; I wish they would have had more interaction between him and Justin, and Justin and Emmett!  *Hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Ad Pitch and the Invitation

The plot thickens....dum, dum, duuuuuum! Cue dramatic music.

Kidding!

:),

Vin



Author's Response:

Ha!  It's just beginning.:) 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Surprise Guest

Silly boys, don't you know you belong together? *sighes exasperatedly* I guess not yet. Not to worry, boys, Kim here will get you back together where you belong!

Ok, I'm done being totally silly.

Great chapter - the simmering tension between B & J is rather exciting.

Love it!

Vin



Author's Response:

Ooh....look out!  Jealous Brian soon to emerge - my favorite kind - ha!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Auction's Shocking Twist

OMG! What an awesome chapter! $50,000 conditional bid - brilliant! Justin being Justin wouldn't refuse such an offer when it would benefit a charity. Oh, I can just imaging Brian's face - lol.

Loving this!

Vin

P.S. Read your comments and yes, I have a HUGE pot of coffee brewed and I am planning to pretty much veg all night reading. I am gearing up for the superbowl party hubby and I are hosting tomorrow. Neither one of us likes football. Neither one of us watches football (except for this one game). Neither one of us knows a heck of a lot about football, except for the very basics. Yet, all of our friends insist on having the SuperBowl party at our house every year for the past three years. We always end up having a great time, but truth be told, I find the football game running in the background a distraction... But what can you do, right - when your friends want a party, they get a party, the wild-football-loving-animals!

Anyway, on to the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Ha!  You sound like me!  I just like to watch the new commercials!  I got a kick out of last year's Super Bowl commercial for VW where the kid was dressed like Darth Vader and went around the house trying to 'use the force.'  Hilarious!  And I noticed they're back this year with dogs barking the "Imperial March."  So funny!  I'll be spending tomorrow doing lesson plans - I'm still dogsitting until then!  Thanks again for reading, Vin.  *hugs*

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: What to Do?

You go, Sunshine, tell Brian what's what! LOL. Brian's jealousy is funny, sweet and somehow sexy all at the same time (how do you do it?).

Cheers,

Vin

P.S. BTW, I don't mind Brian beeing OOC once in a blue moon. While I do prefer B & J closer to canon, I still find it fun to read stories where they have different character traits, especially when they are well written. Besides, Brian singing - I would literally pay, PAY, to see that! I can't WAIT to read that part, because knowing your style of writing it'll be so vividly described it'll be like watching it on screen.



Author's Response:

Thanks for overlook him being out of character - wouldn't you like Brian (or Gale) to sing to YOU?  That would be more than all right with me!  LOL!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Preparations and Complicatons

Brian and Justin's banter at the diner is fantastic. The way they make fun of each other is great.

The yellow roses were cheesy is the best way possible and Justin blushing was totally cute.

Gotta love Emmett, the style guru! :)



Author's Response:

Ha!  I can remember looking up all the colors of roses to see what they meant - nothing like doing homework for your story - LOL!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Revelations

Oh, noes... Justin's kissing some usurper!

On the other hand, Brian needs a wake up call.

Great chapter,

Vin



Author's Response:

Yeah, watch out, Brian!  You've got some competition......!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Realizations

I love Jealous!Brian. Want more Jealous!Brian. Bring on the angst!

:)

Vin



Author's Response:

Yeah....I think jealous Brian (or maybe protective Brian) is my favorite way to read him.:)  Now why would you think my story would have angst in it?  You know me TOO well!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Gauntlet is Thrown Down

OMG, Brian admitted that he loves Justin! Way to go! Now, all he needs to do is tell Justin those three little words face-to-face and Lane will be history.

:),

Vin



Author's Response:

Ahhh....if it were only that easy!  And you will find out that Lane will not go gently into the night - he's going to be around for a LONG time....!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: A Secret Ally

Closing his eyes briefly and taking a deep breath, he said distastefully as if he had a sour taste in his mouth, "I've got to romance him to death..." THAT. WAS. PRICELESS! Poor Brian, so out of his comfort zone. LOL! Serves him right, though. Now he has to WORK to get Justin back, not the other way around.

Love it!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: The Second Date

NYC and MoMa... Lane certainly isn't playing around, is he?

I'm glad Justin was honest with him from the start, but that's what you would expect from our favorite blond.

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Operation Romance

That was too cute for words - the candygram and Gus-the-teddybear-gram - SO unlike Brian, but SO adorable!

Corny, yet satisfying!

:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Course of Love.....

Ok, this kind of Jealous!Brian is NOT my favorite. Why, oh, why did you have to be such a jealous idiot, Brian! I could just slap him upside the head, Debbie-style! UGH!

It's just SO like Brian to totally ruin a perfect moment. Ugh, ugh, ugh!

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Operation Romance, Part Two

OMG, ridiculously romantic doesn't even begin to cover it! So sweet, so cheesy, so NOT Brian Kinney, but somehow perfectly-perfect for this story! Again, I wouldn've paid to see Gale do something like this on the show, it was so GOUDA! (I made a cheese pun, get it? lol)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Resolution and Disappointment

Brian's back to his normal, agressive, territorial, wonderful self, though he needs to have a little more faith in Justin.

Loved the chapter, except I do have one tiny, minuscule, infinitessimal criticism - the word "baby". I can enjoy a severely OOC Brian if it fits the story and if he's well-written (just like in this fic), except for when such a Brian uses that particular term of endearment in relation to Justin. For some odd, bizarre reason, it NEVER feels authentic, regardless how OOC Brian's character is. I really can't explain why I feel that way, but I do. Please don't be mad at me... *cowers under blanket*

Other than that - yet another brilliant chapter.

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: The World Turns Right Again

Yay! They boys are together and starting afresh. I don't think there is a better way to end such a wonderful story.

Loved it!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the feedback, Vin; I really appreciate you taking the time to do that.:)

 
Teasing by Sling Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

It's a little Xmas fic (I originally wrote it for Lego_4ever over at LJ at qaf_giftxchnge) where Justin comes home to Brian and Hunter gets an ear full 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Humor, Christmas Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 746
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2011 Updated: January 06, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot

Poor Hunger! LOL! Great story - I love me some happy Brian and Justin.

Cheers,

Vin

 
Secret Admirer by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 113]
Summary:

Sequel to "Going, Going, Gone."  Justin is the recipient of surprise gifts, but just how welcome are they?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Violence Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 132028
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2011 Updated: January 08, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Mystery Begins

It seems Lane is on the proul again.

Can't wait to see how Justin kicks him to the curb!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  Oh, you're going to be busy - this is one of my longest stories!  Hope you like it.:)  Before you get too much into it, I'd better warn you - I think there's one "baby" in there and one in the sequel to the sequel (Double Jeopardy).  But it's later in the story and I think I only use it one time in both if that's any consolation.  Just thought I'd give you a heads up since it's one of your pet peeves.  Normally I don't use it, either, but there have been rare occasions when it just felt right for Brian to say it for some reason, normally when he's either feeling especially sentimental or protective.  But I think there's just one instance of each in the two stories if that helps.:)  Thanks for the feedback and for giving this one a read.:)

 
Kinney & Cupid by LibertySun Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 39]
Summary: Feature

*Featured Story for February 2014*

This Valentine's day, Michael wants Cupid's infamous arrow aimed at Brian's heart. However, the God of love is already quite familiar with the mortal whose beauty he deems greater than any Gods. Will Cupid grant Michael's wish or stake claim on Kinney's heart himself? What happens when Cupid falls in love?


Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance, Valentine's Day Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 10515
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2011 Updated: February 22, 2014


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Be Mine

Just discovered this and I am in love...I think Cupid's responsible!  LOL!

Amazing! Thank you



Author's Response:

LOL, he is. He defintely is. Thank you for reading and reviewing. *Big Hugs* -Mandi

 
Summary: Feature

Sequel to "The Wedding Present."  Brian continues to explore his evolving relationship with his biological father and grandparents as Fin O'Connor prepares his run for governor with his own partner by his side.  *THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE*

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Real Life Issues, Romance, Violence Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Hunter, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: Fin and Tony Universe
Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes Word count: 537383
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2011 Updated: August 11, 2016


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: June 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Looking Into a Mirror

Yay, a new chapter! And packed with LOTS of information. I'm glad Alex, the street urchin, made an appearance again. Can't wait to read your resolution there (no, I haven't forgotten what you and I discussed. I'm just anxious to READ it).

Great chapter all in all!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend!  So great to hear from you.:)  I think I'm finally getting back on a regular update schedule now that the con has wound down.  But what a wonderful experience!  And LOVE all the photos and vids that have cropped up as a result.  Something tells me that I will show up a lot on the official DVD, too, because I was one of the ones in the front row and that cameraman kept sticking that camera in my face - ugh!  HATE having my picture taken!  (Except with Randy - I make an exception in that case.:))

Thank you as always for reading the latest chapter and for the comments; seems there are so many great stories and new authors popping up on here lately (maybe because fanfic.net's issuing their threat to take so many of them down again?) that it's hard to get noticed somewhat.  (You'll have to excuse me; I'm in one of my 'pity-party' moods again, I guess - LOL!).  So I thank you for taking the time to leave me your thoughts.:)

I am working on the next chapter to your favorite story, BTW, and I think the brisket is definitely about ready to make an appearance - ha!  Oh, and there's rumors swirling around of another Randy play in New Jersey...We'll have to make plans to go together if that happens, okay?  Would LOVE to see you again!  Take care.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Dead to Me

I must leave a comment here, as well as on LJ. I will simply reiterate that this chapter was fantastic and I can't wait for more.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Aww..you're so sweet, Vin, to do that! Thank you.:)  You know how much that means to me.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim 

 

BTW, you're favorite is up soon - I really need to write a little "Tricky" first, but then it's back to the twins.:) 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Combating Hatred With a Four-Letter Word

Hi, Kim! My apologies for not reviewing this right away. I read this earlier in the week and I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter.

First things first - Justin's defense of his FIL was just fantastic! It was probably my favorite part of this chapter, which was already full of awesome. Secondly, Brian dealing with the kid ("Dennis the menace" - LOL!) was a fun little bit. Can't wait to see how that resolves itselt. You've told me your ideas for this situation before, but I really can't wait to read how you actually resolve it all in the end. Thirdly, all the debate, election and the intrigue around the dastardly Stewart keeps me on the edge of my seat. I love all the plot twists and am anxious to see how you resolve it.

Of course, all the bits between BJ are like icing on the cake. Yum!

Eagerly awaiting more!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  I was just thinking about you, and wondering how you are.:)  Hope all is well with you.  I'm so glad  that you enjoyed this latest chapter (and you made my review count into a nice, round number now, too - ha!).  I think Craig's intentions to disrupt Fin's last debate will definitely backfire on him, and even out the odds even more now, which would be a big, fat, F-U to Craig and the other bigots, don't you think? 

I think going forward I will be devoting more time to the more personal aspects of this story back home; I still want to develop Brian and Fin's bond even more, and devote more time to all the subplots running through this story.  Thank you again for your support - and your friendship - Vin; how I wish the two of us could meet up to go see Randy next month for his last OHP!  Sigh...But being in the middle of the week, there's just no way.  I'm sure the others will provide us with a lot of details and video, though.

 

BTW, I have a lot of "TPT's" next chapter written; it's coming up shortly.  And yes, I think the resolution of their talk is going to manifest itself in some pleasurable ways (wink, wink).  Take care and talk to you soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: September 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Fin and Tony's Love Story

Hi, Kim!

Sorry, I've been MIA for so long, but RL is still being a bit of a bitch and is not letting me enjoy myself to the fullest quite yet. 

Anyway, I am happy that I finally have a decent chunk of time to spend on reading today and I'm so glad I started with this chapter - it was a good one! I loved reading about Fin and Tony's romance and the scene between Alex and Debbie. I am curious what you'll end up doing with Alex's character, but my marshmalloyee heart desperately wants her to end up with Brian and Justin. I keep imagining the court system thinking that Carl and Deb are too old to take on a teenage runaway and threatening to send her to a foster home, or worse a group home, and BJ charging in on their white horse and adopting her at the last minute...or something totally cool, yet unrealistic like that. :) But however it turns out, I'm sure you'll make it wonderful, so I can't wait to find out.

That's it for this chapter. Now, I am happily going to read the next one. Lucky me!

Hugs,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear Friend!  It is so great to see you reading again. Sory to hear that RL is still giving you grief. I do hope that things turn around for you soon.  Thank you for reading this last two chapters and for your comments.  I'm glad that you enjoyed them.  Yes, Alex is going to be the real conundrum here - does she stay with Carl and Debbie, who should really be thinking about their 'golden years' of retirement rather than raising a child, Brian and Justin - who has his heart set on a baby of his own, or perhaps place her into the foster care system with total strangers?  Or is there some other option still?  And how will Tony & Fin react to living in the governor's mansion? And what about Tony's wish to be married like Justin and Brian are?  Obviously I still have more to tell here.  I hope you'll be able to come back and read along as you get time.

Drop me a liine sometime if you can and let me know how you are doing so we can catch up.  I think of you often and hope that in the future we can meet up again. Tell your mother I said hello, and I hope one day you will honor us with some more of your own, wonderful writing. Take care, Vin.  Sending a big hug your way.  *Hugs* ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: September 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 37: And the Next Governor Is...

Yay, Fin won! 

Great chapter, Kim. Great scene at Babylon. I hope that seeing so many friends and loved ones of our boys, will make Alex want to stay with them. Debbie's demand that Michael vote at the last minute, was hilarious. And the little scenes between Brian and Justin, and Fin and Tony were great.

Wonderful update, as always. Hope to read more from you soon!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: January 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Yearning

Fantastic chapter as always, Kim! I felt really bad for Alex. My heart just went out to her when she was crying in JR's room. And I felt sad for Justin because his dreams are being put on hold, but at the same time I was proud that he was putting Alex's welfare before presonal desires. Very admirable and very Sunshine-like.

Can't wait for the next installment.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  How was your Christmas?  I do hope you have a wonderful new year.  Thank you for reading this latest part and for your feedback; that means so much to me.  I think I can hopefully come up with an eventual solution here that might make everyone happy. That's what I'm shooting for. I think I have one or two more chapters to go before it's all wrapped up. BTW, I'm working right now on your favorite.;) That one is close, too; maybe two more chapters?  Thanks again.  Please keep in touch. Sending a big hug out your way.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Summary: Feature

Justin is a talented artist haunted by terrifying visions.  Brian Kinney is a cynical police detective who doesn't believe in psychics.  What happens, though, when his police work strikes too horrifying close to home?  AU Story.  **THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!!**


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, Violence Characters: Daphne, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 212447
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: March 04, 2012


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Different Shades of Love

Noooooooooo! A cliffhanger! Sigh, grumble, grumble...

Great update, though. Can't wait to see how it all gets resolved. I hope Brian will get there in time to save Justin and do something entirely permanent to Carruthers.

On another note, I can't wait to meet you in NJ next Saturday and see Randy in Red, of course. It's going to be so much fun!

*hugs*

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  Can't wait, either!  I'll give you a call once I get there and hopefully we can meet at the hotel lobby and walk over to the theater in between shows to hunt down golden boy - ha!  I have two Rothko books I want to (hopefully) hand to him - I'm not above bribery to get a photo - LOL!

Thanks for reading this nervewracking story!  I think Brian will be furious as well as worried sick...Not only will he need to worry about Justin but also Gus, too, as the only living victim.  Don't worry, though - I'm just borrowing Justin to scare him half to death, not to do him in - LOL!

I see probably two more chapters to this one - I'll probably break from rotation after I update "Parent Trap" so I can write another chapter a little quicker due to the awful cliffhanger.:)  Thanks again for the comments, my friend - looking forward to seeing you next Saturday!  Hope the week goes by super fast!!  *Hugs*  Kim

 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Safe in Your Love

OMG! The last two chapters were simply amazing! AMAZING! So much drama, heart-palpitating action and emotion. The 'I love you' scene was squee inducing and just perfect, as was the last line about making new memories. Wonderful!

I loved, loved both chapters and I CAN'T wait for the epilogue! I predict that I'll be refreshing the page every half an hour to see if it's posted.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  I'm so glad you liked them, Vin.:P)  I should have the epilogue up today - it's actually rather short compared to my normal epic-length chapters - ha!  But I do hope you like it. Thanks for all the support.:)  *Hugs*  Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue: The Best Vision of Them All

Aww! Sniff, sniff...the story's over! Wonderfully sweet end, though. I enjoyed it tremendously (the entire story, that is, not just the epilogue).

Fantastic job, as always!

Can't wait to get on the road again with Brian, Justin, Finn and Tony. That should be an adventure. I was hoping you'd update the Parent Trap before continuing the new story. Any way you can make that happen? Pretty please with sugar on top?

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'll see what I can do, my friend; but I really DO need to update "My Heart's Desire" first.  Perhaps since you gave me such a great inspiration for "Parent Trap," though, I might just have to indulge you before I tackle another chapter of the newer story.:)  Thanks again for all the support, Vin.  *Hugs*  Kim

 
Kiss Me Deadly by LibertySun Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Feature

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When his boyfriend vanishes, Justin Taylor hires Private detective, Brian Kinney. When the P.I. starts to fall for the kid, will he be able to stay focused on the case? Is this blond as innocent as he seems?

*Note* For best effect, Picture Liberty Ave. draped in the shadows of 1940's Film noir. Set your imagination to black & white and embrace the smooth jazz tangled within the fog. Grab yourself a vodka martini with a twist and read in your best hard boiled detective voice. Savvy? :)

Each chapter will be titled after a popular song of the 1940's. A Lingo glossary will be provided at the end of each. :)


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 34968
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2011 Updated: October 26, 2014


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In the Blue of the Evening

You had me at "The names Brian Kinney. 'Detective' to some, 'Asshole' to most."  Great start!



Author's Response:

Happy to see you're hooked from the beginning. :)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: 'Round Midnight

OMG, you are back! I'm so glad you are feeling better and are able to write again. Brilliant update - I can not wait for the next chapter. I absolutely adore this story.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thank you Vin for the well wishes :) It really makes my time spent writing feel more worth it when wonderful people like you, are enjoying my stories. Always a pleasure to hear your thoughts. Hope I can update again sooner as opposed to later.  *Smiles* Mandi

 
Memories by The Black Rose Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

It's christmas time and Brian reflects on his life. post 5.13


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Romance, Spoilers, What If, Christmas Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2544
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2011 Updated: April 06, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Memories

Ahhh...Lovely!

 
Buses & Trains by Lupin111 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

 

Buses & Trains

Life is not always what it seems and people are never what they appear to be.

An AU hybrid S1/S3-ish romance. Brian & Justin. Of course.

 

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 76989
[Report This] Published: April 24, 2011 Updated: July 30, 2013


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yay! An update - how excited am I! Fantastic chapter, it just seemed way too short. That's probably because I've missed this story so much.

This was a wonderful New Years present, so thank you!

I can not wait for another update and I sincerely hope you'll update again soon.

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: May 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Noooooooooooo!!!!!

Great chapter with a terrifying end. I am so, so glad - ecstatic even - that you are continuing with this amazing story.

Can't wait for the rest.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi Vin,

Yes, it isn't a very nice way to end the chapter, is it? (Or a very nice thing to happen!)

Thanks so much for reviewing; it is very, very much appreciated. And such wonderful compliments :)

I hope to update again over the weekend, or early next week.

 
Summary: Feature

Loose adaption of the movie - Justin and Brian are living separate lives in different cities, raising one twin alone; what happens when their two daughters meet unexpectedly as pre-teens?  **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!**


Categories: Minor Character Death, QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Drama, Humor, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 388729
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2011 Updated: February 20, 2014


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Other Father and Sizing up the Enemy

Gotta comment here also, so here's my 2 cents - MORE, MORE, MORE!

'Nuff said.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

LOL!  You DO get around, don't you?  But I love it, my friend!  Thanks for the support!  I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can.:)  I am now moving onto the dirty world of politics in "Heart's Desire."  I think after the town meeting coming up that a couple of men will need some good old-fashioned TLC from their men afterward (wink, wink...).  Thanks for the review, Vin!  You're great!:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt

I already posted the review on FF, but had to say something here as well. In brief, great update on many levels, which makes me love this story more and more. Cannot wait for the next chapter and hope you'll update soon!

Vin



Author's Response:

You're very sweet, Vin.  I appreciate your support so much - thank you, my friend!:) Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Yes, You Are My Father

Happy Tuesday to me! Another chapter of "The Parent Trap"! Yes, yes, yes!

OK, now that I am done celebrating, onto my review... I loved this chapter - the interaction between the girls and their dads was awesome, the conversations between them were great. There were a number of places that either made me laugh or brought a lump of emotion to my throat. It was just great!

The only thing that I don't like is that I'll have to be super-duper patient until the next chapter, because my impatient patootie wants the next chapter right the f**k now! LOL! I'm sorry, but I really, really, really want to see how it all progresses, which of the boys figures out their daughters' secret first and I CANNOT wait for their reunion. I don't know how I am going to survive the wait time....swoons...

OK, I'm back... lol! Maybe you would consider writing a couple more chapters of this story before going back to your regular rotation? Pretty please, with sugar on top? Possibly?  :)

Again, loved it!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear!  (Sigh...) You're killing me here!  And to think I'm considering posting a Christmas fic, too - I must be out of my mind!  LOL!  You're so sweet to want some more of this; that makes me very happy to hear.:)  I'll think about it.  I'm always torn between wanting so badly to continue while I'm on a roll and not wanting to disappoint the other readers who may be waiting for another update in one of the other stories.  It's like being in a candy store and not knowing which treat to eat first!  If only one of these stories showed an ending soon - the only one even near that place is the Elvis story, at least I hope.  Of course, you know how I can get.  My 'two-part' Thanksgiving went on for five rounds - yikes! Thanks so much for your kind words, Vin.  Wherever I wind up you can rest assured I will be diligently working on an update to one of these!:)  Take care, my friend.:)


 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: I Know Who You Are

OMG, you leave it here? HERE? You are so cruel! Oh, nooooooooo!

*runs around the kitchen screaming like a petulant 5 year old*

OK, meltdown over.

Great update and a lovely Thursday surprise - thank you! I loved Kalee meeting Debbie and Emmett. I loved her interaction with Brian. I just knew, KNEW he'd be the one to discover the truth - our Brian is no dumb cookie. Not that Justin is dumb, not at all - he's just more trusting, the poor thing.

I loved Katie's silent war with Alex. Her pretending to be sick was genius! When I tried to pull something like that on my mother once I got caught and was punished, so I never tried anything like that ever again. So on the one hand - kudos, Katie! On the other hand - bad, Katie; lying is a very, very bad thing.

I just can't wait for the grand reunion! I suspect it will be epic.

Please, pretty please update soon.

Cheers,

Vin

 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thank you for the encouragement; I really needed that.:)  Yes, I hated to leave it there, but after 14,000 words I had to end it somewhere.  I'll do my best to get it updated quicker this time.  Katie always WAS the most conniving and creative of the two sisters, I think, so it was only fitting that she be the one to divest them of that pest Alex!  I fully expect for the boys to finally see each other again in the next chapter.  I hope you and some of the other readers will continue to enjoy it and will let me know that you do.  It means a lot to me.  Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave feedback for me.

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: I Know Who You Are

I read your response to Charle's comment re: twisting your arm to get this story out of rotation just this once (*wink, wink*) for a faster update. So, I just COULDN'T resist adding a little note...

...CONSIDER YOUR ARM TWISTED! (at least by little ole me... LOL!)

Anyone want to join me in this noble effort, huh, loyal Predec2 readers?  :)

Seriously speaking, though, whenever you update this absolutely wonderful story, I'll be oh so happy to read it, as would 99.9% of your fans, Kim. Consider the other 0.01% a statistical anomaly.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I will definitely take that under advisement.:)  I actually would like to at least get these two guys in the same city; then at least the healing can hopefully begin.  Although I fully intend on taking them back to Britin, where all the memories are.  After all, what better place to help bring them back together than where it all began?  And I would enjoy writing more about their past memories together as a family before the breakup.  PLUS - I have some ideas for the girls to do some more scheming to bring them closer together....MUCH closer (hint, hint...).

Thanks again, Vin, for all the kind words; they mean a lot to me and do wonders for my bruised soul.:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: July 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: What Super Power Do I Use Now?

It's kind of sad that the girls' plan backfired so quickly... On the other hand, maybe this will get the boys back together quicker also.

I think that Brian needs to stop letting pride rule his head and give his heart the rains. As for Justin, I hope that whatever reason Brian gives him for what happened years ago will be enough for him to forgive and forget.

Can't wait to read more of this awesome story.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - thank you for reading, my friend, and for the review.  I appreciate it.  They are slowly moving in the right direction now, I think.  And I believe once he talks to Michael, he will have a clearer idea of his motivations.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me feedback.  Looking forward to our trips! *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Kaylee's Accident

How can you tease me like this, Kim? OMG, I can't wait for the rest of the chapter! I hope you'll post part 2 soon.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - if it's any consolation, the next part that I'm working on is already longer than this part, so at least I can assure you that it will be even lengthier than this one.  I thought rather than waiting until I had around my typical 15,000 word chapter, I would post part now and the rest in a few days.  Didn't want everyone to think I had disappeared off the face of the earth. So many new and talented writers on there right now - great for the fandom, but hard to draw people in at times with so much talent in abundance (including yourself!).  So I thank you for reading and for the feedback.  I'll get the rest of this posted probably within the next couple of days.  Oh, and congrats on all the reviews for your one-shot - 19 for one chapter - that's amazing but so well deserved!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: August 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: For Our Daughter

Lovely chapter, Kim! I'm happy that Kaylee is OK and that Brian finally, FINALLY spilled the beans about visiting Justin in the hospital after the bashing. Justin's conversation with Gus was pretty great; made me happy that they seemed to get things straitened out.

Can't wait for another update, as always!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - well, at least this chapter was much longer.:)  I think both men will be a little better equipped to talk once they get Kaylee home and things quiet down a bit.  Thanks so much for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Mark of a Real Man

Yay! What a lovely Sunday present. Thank you, Kim, for this wonderful chapter!

I am so glad that Justin is coming around and that Brian is opening up a little about his feelings and about what happened the night that broke them up. I enjoyed the kids' scheeming ways very, very much and I'm glad that Justin and Kaylee will be returning to Britin.

I can't WAIT for the next chapter where I hope that Brian will crush Alex into DUST! :)

Hugs,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  Hope you and the hubby are doing well, and he is enjoying his new job!  Well, I think you may get your wish; Brian is definitely NOT going to like the former boyfriend showing up in the next chapter (actually, Justin won't like it much, either, but Brian obviously will be the more vociferous of the two!).  And, naturally, both girls won't be happy about it, either, but I suspect they will be happy about the eventual outcome (hint, hint).

 

So glad that you're still enjoying this story; I'm sorry it's taken me so long to update it.  I'll have one more chapter updated for this soon.  Thanks for everything, Vin; can't wait until we can go on another adventure soon, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: The Talk

Yay! A wonderful update, Kim. I'm glad that Brian finally explained himself and that Justin forgave him. The cabin scene was lovely, of course (what cabin scene with those two wouldn't be, right?). I am very glad that they boys decided to start over and not rush into anything - a very smart decision.

The girls' reaction at the end was adorable.

I just loved the chapter and can't wait for more.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin - I'm glad that I could finally get this story updated, and that you enjoyed it.  (I was feeling a little lonely over here - ha!).  I see probably a couple more chapters of this before it's all said and done as the boys adjust to their new life together and try and set things right again.

Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  I do appreciate it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: May 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Beginning Anew

Hi Kim, 

Sorry for the awfully late review, especially for a story that's been a favorite of mine for so long. I'm a bad friend, please forgive me.

Speaking of favorites, this story still has a special place in my heart and this chapter especially made me love it even more. Justin's homecoming was great. The image of cats being walked on leashes made me laugh for some reason. Somehow I doubt two cats that were cooped up in a car for hours enjoyed that. I sort of imagined a couple of "grumpy cats" (I'm sure you've seen that meme all over the net recently) being walked on leashes. Adorable! 

Anyway, I digress, I thought that Brian's desire to make things comfortable for Justin at the carriage house showed maturity. For a split second I thought that it would be great if he sabotaged things a bit, but then I thought it would be something Michael's character from season 1 would do and not Brian's a decade post show. So, I totally loved the way you handled it. The expensive bottle of wine in a crock pot meal, though, again made me laugh.

Like many in the fandom I swoon over Protective!Brian, so his reaction to Justin's confrontation with Alex was fantastic. On the other hand, Justin's way of calming him down and the self-confident way he dispatched his ex was equally swoon-worthy. 

I also absolutely LOVED the idea of Gus indulging his little sister with artbooks. I could imagine it quite clearly because of something I experienced just a couple of weeks ago myself with my half-sister. Like Gus, though she's the younger one in this case (by 9 years), she spent a good hour with me at a book store in St. Petersburg helping me pick out several books about Russian art. As an art lover and as someone who's Russian, it was truly ebarrasing when I realized HOW MUCH I've forgotten about Russian art. My sister, to my surprise and delight, knew quite a lot and spent hours telling me what she knew and what I used to remember, but sadly forgotten, while we toured the Russian Museum in St. Petersburg. Basically, this already great chapter was made fantastic just for that little snippet of a scene alone, just because it had personal meaning for me.

There are many other details that I enjoyed, but I'll be here until tomorrow if I continue, so I'll end it right here. :) Suffice it to say that it was another marvelous update and I can't wait for another one. Is there any way you'll step out of rotation and update this again? :)

Hugs & cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  I'm so thrilled to hear from you, my friend!  You sound like you're have a great time on your adventure.  I'm so happy for you.  I think this was just what you needed.  I've missed you, though!  I'm glad that you've found a way to keep following this story, and that you are still enjoying it.:)  I thought there would only be one more chapter, but you know me.  By the time I'm done, it will probably take at least two.  I still have a few bumps to throw in the road for these two before I finally get them back on the right track, but nothing too difficult now.  I think their major hurdles are over with.  Do not fear, though; their girls will be featured prominently in what happens.:)

How I wish I could say I will go ahead and write the rest of this!  I would love to, but it's been so long since I've updated "Stallion" that I really do need to do that first, and then I probably will stick to my normal rotation and update "My Heart's Desire" next.  Sorry about that! I will be on vacation soon, though, so hopefully after the con I can accelerate my posting schedule faster.  I do hope that we can get together again some time after you're home.  I will have time in July and August, if that would work out for your schedule.  Would LOVE to come back to NYC and see "Wicked" with you!

I hope you continue to have a wonderful time with your family!  Stay safe and keep in touch as you can.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: July 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Mother, May I?

OMG, mouse poop, super glue & power tools! Katie is one awesome little girl, I'm sure she'll grow up to be one bad-ass engineer and will give all the men in that profession a run for their money. But, Kaylee is no slouch either. She may not be mechanically inclined, but bravery and determination are definitely great qualities to have in one's arsenal, especially if you are a girl. I love those girls! 

This was an amazing chapter, Kim, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Oh, *rubs her hands together in glee* I can't wait to read B/J's reaction to girls' shenanigans!

Hugs & cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin! I was just thinking how much I missed hearing your thoughts on this story. I'm so happy that you are still enjoying this story, my dear friend.  I like the idea of Katie winding up in some male-dominated industry; I could definitely see that out of such a take-charge kind of girl.;)  And I think Kaylee is underrated sometimes; she just might wind up being more assertive than her sister one day.  I like to think they play off each other well in their mutual goal to bring their fathers together.  All is not quite smooth sailing just yet, though; we have a few growing pains to get through first.

Thank you for reading and for the comments.  I'm so happy to see you reading again. *Hugs*  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: March 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Forever and a Day

What a lovely chapter, Kim! It had everything you'd want in a B&J story. I've loved this little tale of yours from the very start, as you know, and as much as I hate to see it end, I can't wait to read the conclusion.

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: March 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 39: The Sound of Happiness: Story Conclusion

Oh, Kim, I can't believe this amazing story is over! This final chapter was THE perfect end - funny, romantic, sexy, sweet, emotional and all together lovely. Happy endings make me beyond happy and this one just wrapped an already wondeful story with a perfect bow.

You know I love all of your stories, Kim, but this one is definitely my #1 favortie of yours.

Hugs & cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin! So great to hear from you, dear friend. Sorry for the delay - I was actually in Spain for the "Queens of the Road" con with Gale, Peter, Scott, and Randy.  I have HUNDREDS of photos and my retelling of the events yet to post, but what an amazing experience. Anyway, thank you for reading these last few parts and for the comments.  I am so thrilled that you enjoyed this story.  I just found out it's being translated into Russian on another site, which is a great honor to me.;) Thanks again for reading!  Hope to see you again one day soon.  Stay in touch!  *Hug*  ~Kim

 
Summary:

What Answer Will Brian Give to the Best Dressed Bird in Town? 


Categories: Humor, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Romance, Thanksgiving Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4150
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2011 Updated: June 05, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Mr. Butterball

Sqeee! Happy dance! Sqeee! That's all...



Author's Response:

LOL! You're so funny, Elvina!  I'm so delighted you liked this one.:)  I laughed myself when I had Brian playing with the legs of the turkey - I could definitely see him doing that in my mind!  They have these contests each year in the local paper where people decorate a plain drawing of a turkey, and that's mainly where the idea came from. Thanks so much fo reading and for the feedback, my friend, that means so much to me!:)

 
Summary:

This is a story in the "Brothers & Sisters" fandom.  It is the story of what happens to Kevin and Scotty before and after the infidelity incident, all arising from the tragic conclusion of Series 4.  

It is a Work in Progress, and it will not be short.  As anyone who knows my work can tell you - I don't do pithy!  :)


Categories: MISCELLANEOUS FICTION Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 114639
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2011 Updated: September 02, 2015


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: March 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love this story. I just recently watched the Scotty/Kevin clips on youtube and just loved them. I now wish I'd actually watched the show. This story is wonderfully written and I'm enjoying the heck out of it. I know it'll probably take forever for you to get the boys together again (if at all), but at the same time I hope it won't be too long.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Cheers,

Vin

 
Kiss My Kilt by Sapphire Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Feature

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Justin-flavored chocolate-covered Taylor... in a kilt. Scotch-infused baking adventures involving celtic romps and unicorns.



Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Brian/Justin, Humor Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: Sweet and Sticky, Tipsy!B/J
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3913
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2011 Updated: June 26, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Kiss My Kilt

I can't even begin to explain how much I loved this story! Absolutely brilliant writing. It was perfection in every way, from characterization, to the plot, to the humor. It made me laugh out loud from beginning to end.

This is going in my favorites file, so that I can read it again and again and again.

Amazing work!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thanks Vin! I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed this, and that it gave you a laugh :-) It's always fun to play with tipsy!Justin, and who wouldn't want to see this man in a kilt? I'm glad you thought the characterization was right, too. Thanks again for reading, and for your very wonderful comment. It means a lot and I appreciate it so much. Happy New Year!!

 
Summary:

It's summer 1957 in Hazlehurst, MS. Teenage Brian & Justin can't stand each other. When forced to work together they'll discover more about life & themselves. A coming of age tale of youthful innocence, finding friendship, exploring sexuality & first loves.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 41009
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2011 Updated: March 23, 2015


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Wishes. Make-Believe. Bullshit.

Love this story. Hope to read more soon.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

A gigantic THANK YOU for always taking the time to read and review my work. It truly is appreciated and makes want to give you hugs. :) I hope to write this story in an acceptable amount of time, though it still has a ways to go. Our boys are excited to share thier southern journey with you. :)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: A Race & An Ideal Place

"...trembling lips constructed a kiss." I can't even describe how much I love that description. It's so vivid and so perfect for the situation you described. It's probably my favorite line in this chapter, except perhaps for the last sentence. I loved that one too.

So glad there are two more chapters to enjoy!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi Vin! Thank you for continuing to read this one, and thank you for telling me your favorite line, it's always enlightening as a writer to know what lines stand out to readers. :)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Spoonful of Secrets

I love how you weave elements of OS into the story, the Jambalaya, the Culpeppers (though Calvin only appeared for like 5 seconds in OS) and, last but not least, Mysterious Marylin.

Love it!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Happy your are enjoying it. :) I always like to throw in some OS elements, it's fun when reader's take notice. *Big Hugs* -Mandi

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Predictions & Revelations

This story just keeps getting better and better.

Gus the bear has made his appearance...awwww!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you are continuing to like this story, I'm trying my best to get it complete. Theres still many more chapters to go, I'm pretty positive it's going to be 32 chapters in total. It's nice that you notice and appreciate the little original story things I try to incorporate. I try to put some in every fiction just to keep a grounded tie to the show we love so much. I send a massive Thank you for always taking the time to read and review, I'm truly So so SO grateful. *hugs to you*  ~Mandi :)

 
Summary:

With open arms, reviews are welcomed, greatly appreciated and promptly answered!! (even if in the form of constructive criticism)

Chris reflecting on his thoughts in 1.4 during the infamous athletic room jerk-off scene with Justin.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Could be Canon, Drama, Gap-Filler, Justin/Other-Relationship, Minor's Sexuality Characters: Chris Hobbs, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1670
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2011 Updated: October 12, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm....well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 
Summary:

Sequel to "A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action."  Justin agrees to help a teenage Gus with his retro rock band, but what happens when someone develops a crush on him?  What will he do?  And how will father and son react?  **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!**

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Humor, Jealousy, Minor's Sexuality, Romance Characters: Gus, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 54129
[Report This] Published: October 13, 2011 Updated: January 26, 2012


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: You're The Devil In Disguise

I don't know how you do it, Kim, but your stories just suck me in. What an awesome chapter. I am not, I repeat, NOT and Elvis fan. Yet, you made me  sing the f-ing lyrics out loud and I actually enjoyed the heck out of myself, as well as this chapter.

Question, though, why isn't Justin wearing his wedding ring? If he were, I'm thinking Rob would know that Justin was taken. Unless of course, he took it off because of the Elvis costume. Or, it could be that I am being a silly NITPICKER, which I will stop forthwith.

Can't wait to read more!

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  (Sigh)...I know, I forgot about our little blond's wedding ring!   I'm sure knowing how Justin likes these sort of romantic tokens (not that it's just a 'token') he would normally proudly wear his ring as a "look who I captured" sort of symbol - ha!  I will try and devise a suitable explanation for that oversight in the next chapter.  Suffice it to say that normally he would be wearing it, but for plot purposes I had to leave it out or the jig would be up much too soon - LOL!  Thanks to you and 'sophie's mom' for pointing that out (Yeah....thanks a LOT! Just kidding...LOL!).

As far as the Elvis songs, I take it a a great compliment that you now have those songs reverberating in your head even though you don't like them - I had to laugh at that comment!:)  You may have noticed I'm using his song titles as the titles to the chapters, too - clever, huh?  (Patting myself on the back....).  I'm glad Elvis had a lot of songs to choose from, because picking them out will be a lot easier that way, although I don't think "Kentucky Rain" will wind up being used here (no offense to the Blue Grass State - I was actually born there....).

I'm so delighted you're following along on this one, Vin. Thanks so much for your kind comments.  Now you can carry on with the words to "I Just Want to Be Your Teddy Bear" sloshing around in your head until the next chapter - LOL!  Thanks again.:) ~Kimberly

 

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Suspicious Minds

I LOVE this story! It's getting better and better with each chapter. Poor Rob, poor Justin, poor Gus! Brian jealous - hilarious!

Love it!



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  Thanks for your kind words, my friend.:)  This is kind of like a soap opera, isn't it?  Maybe I should pitch it to the networks - ha!  I'm very glad you're enjoying it, dear.:)  I'm also enjoying your Thanksgiving story, BTW - looking forward to reading how Brian the chef winds up doing with his culinary skills.:)  Thanks again for your friendship and your comments.:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Don't Be Cruel

What a lovely, lovely chapter this was! I am so glad Justin and Brian figured out a way to handle it with sensitivity and grace. I loved the fact that they cooperated in order to make it as painless as possible for all involved. On a side note, I would pay some SERIOUS money to watch Brian/Gale play the guitar while wearing spray-painted on pair of pants... Sigh...alas, it'll be only in my dreams...

Anyway... I loved the interaction between Brian and Justin. I thought the conversation between Justin and Rob was very well done, very realistic. I LOVED the fact that Rob took Justin's advice and gave Gus a chance. I hope there'll be a bit more about their relationship in the next chapter/epilogue.

Can't wait for the next update!

Happy New Year, my dear Kim! I wish that 2012 will bring you happiness, success, health and a ton of inspiration for your WIPs and for the many wonderful stories you have yet to write. I am looking forward to being amazed, amused, challenged and inspired by Predec2 in the new year.  :)

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

What lovely comments, Vin!  Thank you so much, my friend; they - and your friendship - mean the world to me!  Wouldn't it be awesome if Gale would pick up a guitar at the 'Club Babylon" event for the convention so he and Randy could perform together?  I know it's just a pipe dream, but wouldn't that just be utterly fantastic??  I would DIE! I would also more than accept it if he and Randy would get out on the dance floor and give us an encore.  Again, probably not going to happen, but you never know...!

As far as the next chapter, I will definitely be writing much more about Rob and Gus's budding relationship (in between our two gorgeous men as well - that goes without saying).  And I, too, wish you the very best for next year, my friend, and I hope you continue to entertain us with your own stories for a long time to come.:)  Take care and Happy New Year!~Kim

 
Trick And Treat by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Halloween One Shot.  Brian grudgingly agrees to hand out candy to trick and treaters, but just who IS this clown?  Silliness with a little hotness mixed in


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance, Halloween Characters: Justin, Lindsay
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6344
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2011 Updated: October 21, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Beggar's Night Sublime

Oh, silly Justin...oh, silly Brian...what am I to do with all this silliness? Well, enjoy it of course!

My friend, you never fail to thoroughly entertain me.  :)

Vin

P.S. Still awaiting (as patiently as I possibly can, but not mentioning it at all is truly beyond my limits) the next installment of The Parent Trap.  ;) Hope to see it published on MW or FF soon.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!   I confess - I had to laugh myself at the thought of Brian reaching out and smacking Justin with his fake nose - ha!  As far as the other stories (sigh..)  I know, I need to get those girls back with their dads.  But unfortunately it's a ways off yet.  I'm almost done with the next chapter of "My Heart's Desire."  Then I think "Paper Hearts Killer" is up next, and THEN the Elvis story.  So it's probably a ways yet until I can get back to it.  But rest assured I'm writing as fast as I can!  Thanks as always for reading, my friend.:)  That makes me very happy.:)

 
Summary:

I have a new short story for my wonderful readers.  My inspiration comes from the fact that we never got to see Justin joining Brian on that famous charity bike ride.  There were so many possibilities for such an adventure for the two of them.  This story is set Post Season 5, a few years later.  I hope you will enjoy the vacation as much as our boys have.  My deepest gratitude to my wonderful beta, Judy and my darling banner maker, Marika for their help with the story. 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5237
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2011 Updated: October 21, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: You Bring the Tent, I'll Bring the Bikes

Lovely!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Cheburashka.  I'm very glad you joined Brian and Justin on their holiday.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 
Summary: Feature

Gus gives his father a very special present... Christmas one-shot


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Romance, Christmas Characters: Gus, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5233
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2011 Updated: October 26, 2011


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: October 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: His Two Special Boys

Lovely, as always.

"Paper Hearts" - yay!  :)  Can't wait.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

LOL!  Hi, Vin!  Thanks for reading!  Yes, this is about as different from Paper Hearts Killer as night and day, isn't it?  I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me feedback.  I've got maybe a third or so of the next chapter of "PHK" written; with the weekend coming up and grades FINALLY done for my students, hopefully I can kick some serious butt now on the chapter! Speaking of 'butt,' I now have to go back to the boys over there - they are currently basking in their post-coital state - is that enough of a tease for you?  LOL!  Thanks again, my friend.:)

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: His Two Special Boys

Dear Kim,

Congrats on the feature of the month! :)

I think I've read this on FF before, but I absolutely loved re-reading it! Such a sweet story in every way. It definitely put me in a holiday mood, which is exciting on one end (decorating the tree! yay!) and scary in others (my christmas shopping hasn't even been started yet! *facepalm*).

Now, of course, I want to write a B&J Christmas story myself, but...alas, I am completely out of ideas. :( Oh, well... I'll just read other people's wonderful Christmas fics, including yours.

Anyway, can't wait for the the next installments of "The Paper Hearts Killer" and, of course, one of my favorites "The Parent Trap" (and not to forget the other dozen or so awesome stories you are currently working on. How DO you do it?)

Have a fantastic weekend, my friend!

Vin

P.S. Sorry for writing a novel here, couldn't help myself. LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thanks for the kind words.:)  I was shocked but delighted to see Bob's note about this being highlighted for the month - what a thrill!  Thank you for all your kind words, my friend.:)  This fic holds a special place in my heart because it was the very first story I ever wrote.  I did have it on FF.net originally but changed it slightly before posting it over here.  I'm so glad you like it.:)

As far as my updates, you will be glad to know that I am working hard on the next chapter of "Parent Trap."  I am keeping my fingers crossed that I can have it posted this weekend; I'm almost done with it but not quite.  I also have a Christmas story started - one chapter - but I may wait a while until I can get more of it written before I start posting it.  I hope you will like it - can anyone say "jealous Brian?"  I LOVE doing that to him - ha!

Thanks again for leaving me your thoughts, Vin - and BTW - adored your Thanksgiving story!  Hope you have a good weekend, too.:)

 
Life Altering! by Ispazz Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 133]
Summary: Feature

Summary! What if Justin had walked passed Ethan in 220 choosing to leave both men behind. Will Brian be able to accept the changes in Justin life as Justin struggles when his world is tilted on it's axis, altering his entire future!

Warnings! Minor Character Death, AU, What if, Parenthood!

AN: This story is now been rewritten and completely beta'ed! I hope you take a chance and enjoy!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY Characters: Justin, Molly Taylor
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 29202
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2011 Updated: February 19, 2013


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aw! I loved the very ending of this chapter. Nicely done.

Can't wait for more.

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great update! Now Justin will be parenting two kids...Can't wait to read about Sunday dinner at Deb's...It'll be interesting to see everyone's reaction to little Gracin.

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wonderful update! I just love this story and can't wait to read more.

I hope you've had a wonderful Christmas and I wish you to have a fantastic New Year!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awwww, Brian's growing up! Good for him. I hope Justin gets Molly out of Craig's house.

Great update!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Taking Over by Sling Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Justin inherits a bar on Liberty Avenue from his uncle. He is rather young for taking over that business and there is this problem-regular, who seems to not like him very much but is quite sexy and who he can't get out of his mind. His name is Brian fucking Kinney and he is a real plague


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance Characters: Craig Taylor, Debbie, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 16092
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2011 Updated: November 09, 2014


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: December 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great couple of chapters. I like how the story is developing. Have a wonderful Christmas!

Cheers,

Vin

 
Gus' Story by megawords19 Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 341]
Summary:

THANKS to Mandi for the GREAT new banner

FROM GUS' P.O.V

Post 5-13. The story chronicles Gus's long-distance relationship with Brian, his struggles with a learning disability, and his coping with a stressful home environment. This story is rated PG-13 because of language and the possible mentioning of drug use and domestic violence in future chapters. First attempt at QAF fanfiction so reviews are very much appreciated.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Abuse, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues Characters: Debbie, Gus, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 142308
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2011 Updated: March 02, 2013


Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rainbow Reading Time

Oh, poor Gus! I just wanted to hug the little guy. You gave him a very convincing, very compelling voice.

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Daddy's Call

Oh, sniff...Poor kid. I hope Brian will make it all better for little Gus. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 Signed
Date: November 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Magic Man

I thought that the library was magic just like Gus when I was little. Great job!