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Real name: Charle Status: Member Member Since: May 07, 2011 Website: Beta-reader: No
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Reviews by 4depthoflove Summary:
Brian and Justin meet at the diner. There is something special about the blond. Would that stop Brian? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Alternate Universe Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 49825 [Report This] Published: March 15, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
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Date: September 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Enjoying Every Minute Another excellent story! I just love the soft side you give to our Brian, without taking away his quirks and insecurities, that make him not always act the way the rest of the world would expect. There were a couple of drama points that I wish had been explored a little more - like Justin finding out that Brian has parental right for Eric - finding out during a medical crisis where Justin couldn't be reached because he couldn't hear the phone when the hospital called, for instance. Also, he moment he first heard his sons voice. But, all in all, the story was such a terrific read that these missing opportunities couldn't mar how much fun it was to read. I love how you write for our boys. Thanks - I will continue to read through some of your other stories. loving life, Charle Author's Response: I hope that you enjoy everything that you read from me. Let me know. Thanks for dropping a line. Summary:
This is a sequel to Before There Was You, There Was You. We left our boys in the last story together, happy with seven, yes SEVEN, children! (Peter and Johnny, his late sisters’ Claire’s children whom he and Justin adopted. Jagger and Lizzy, Brian’s orphaned cousins who they also adopted. Gus of course, and the twins, Maria and Andy that he and Justin fathered through a surrogate.) This story picks up five years from the end of BTWYTWY. Our boys are about to have an unexpected adventure. When life throws them a curveball will they be able to bounce back? Or will it take Divine intervention to bring our boys back together. There are many supporting characters from BTWYTWY that will be making appearances in this story. And some new one’s I’ll be introducing. I hope you all enjoy! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Could be Canon Characters: Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 169555 [Report This] Published: April 01, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008
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Date: February 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue ...and this is exactly what I mean - here in this beginning - you weave a story of such depth of love that one can't help but be drawn into it - even with characters that we do not already have such a glowing history with - it makes one feel like that type of love might be possible here in the real world as well - and now, of course, I wait for more of the same with our boys, comfortably at home with what we know and love - and yet sure to be surprised as you tell your story - onward..... loving life, Charle Author's Response: :-) Sooooo glad you're loving life, and my story! I really liked writing this sequel, I hope you enojoy the story!
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Date: February 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue Well, Gina Marie, where do I begin? This story brought every imaginable emotion - I don't know if I have ever read a story with more to offer. - we had humor...Fran Fine - what a hoot! - we had redemption - who didn't want to see Joan admit she loved Brian? and watching her learn to love Justin as well - what a bonus! - we had the probably my favorite secondary story ever! - and more - not only Andy's story - but Alexander's story - and of course - the curse! - we had not only new characters who quickly became beloved - but also the best break-out of a tragically under-used character with the full bodied story line for Emmett - a place in the family and a partner we love - who loves him heart and soul - we had amazing storyline dictated use of each and every character introduced (except for the guy a Babylon in the BTWY-TWU series - what as his name - jordan maybe?) - love how you do that - we have good vs evil - Heaven vs - Hell - faith in God's will - leaving us with even Brian believing - what a joy - and we have probably the longest review I've ever written - if I don't stop I'll rival the length of the story - lol
so - I'll close with a thank you from the bottom of my heart - (although my family will not thank you - they haven't seen me in days - and I got nothing done on this vacation that I wanted to except read this story - lol) hope your daughter is thriving and healthy - and that you continue to write long into the future - while I try to find time to move on to A Stitch in Time without being disowned and unemployed as always - loving life, Charle
Author's Response: I never had a review leave me feeling so....good! I can't tell you how much it means to me that you loved my story! I loved writing, and I fell in love with each of my characters. I'm so glad you did too. Thank you for your lovely review! Summary:
fEATURED STORY FOR AUGUST 2013 Fic starts at end of Queer as Folk 307, and continuous with a different way 308 could have happened.
Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Could be Canon, One-Off Fic, Romance, Spoilers, What If Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5961 [Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: August 07, 2013
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Date: May 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 oh my goodness -I don't even know what words to use to describe how hot this is - and I can totally imagine the conversation just as you wrote it - I think I will choose to picture it happening like this loved it! Charle
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Date: August 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 this is just so utterly and completely satisfying...and every time I read it it only gets better - love it - thanks Charle Summary:
Brian struggles to come to terms with his real feelings for Justin-again! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic Characters: Brian, Justin, Michael Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3135 [Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2008
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Date: July 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Shake the Disease beautiful - and very very satisfying! wow Charle Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and glad you were satisfied! later x Summary:
Sequel to A Precious Secret. Six months into the lives of Brian, Justin, and Arionna another secret shakes their world.
Categories: Could be Canon, MPreg, Out of Character, Violence Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 15307 [Report This] Published: September 08, 2008 Updated: March 23, 2009
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Date: July 26, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Problems Persist dont know if you are still around - but I sure hope that this story gets finished...I am left wanting so much more! love this story-arc - thanks for sharing your talent... Summary:
Post- 513. In the year following Justin’s departure for New York, Brian develops a dangerous obsession to fill the gaping hole that has opened up in his life. Banner by Kari77. THIS STORY IS COMPLETE Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 55528 [Report This] Published: October 26, 2008 Updated: September 03, 2012
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Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Strength well - I just read this story from start to finish - and it is exquisite the hope - the trust - the need - and of course the 'depth of love' that drives this story is what sets our boys apart - and you wrote it beautifully thanks Charle Author's Response: Thanks Charle! I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed this story :-) Eating disorders, particularly in men, tend to be misunderstood and/or underestimated in our society. In reality, they are often more about control than body image and they can be absolutely devastating. The recovery is long and often painful, but it's made much easier with the dedicated support of loved ones. Brian, being a perfectionist with hyper body image awareness, seemed to me a good candidate for an eating disorder, and that it would have to be Justin who helped him out of it... Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful comment. It means a lot and I appreciate it so much :-) Summary:
Two detectives must question their two only coherent witnesses in order to find out what transpired that night at the Baths to cause the riot. Season 2. Written for the dare challenge on lj a while back. ***Featured Story April 2013***
Categories: FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Humor Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4679 [Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2013
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Date: April 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Standalone my dear - you have no idea how much I needed that laugh - too fucking funny! made my day! Charle Summary:
Brian has planned on getting married to his boyfriend but then again things don't always go as planned. Would he be able to get his wishes, or will life throw him in a new direction? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Humor, MPreg, Out of Character, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 189998 [Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: August 25, 2022
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Date: September 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: He's A Great Guy love this story - it would be so much fun to see these two continue to find their way to each other - so sorry it was never finished, but it's never too late! loving life Charle Author's Response: That is right. Better late than never. Sorry, I got internet and then moved and lost it for a while. Not to mention all the crazy things that go on in my life. Take care. Summary:
Beta: Taytay4936, I couldn't do any of it without you
Banner: Masterglory, grazie mille Cara Brian is called to the hospital when Gus and Justin are brought in. Pre 308 Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8491 [Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2012
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Date: July 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Jealousy This is a really nice story - sure hope I'm not sorry I started it - the updates seem to be very spread out - and I hate having to read an entire story to remember it before moving on to the next chapter. I love the pacing here - not rushing in to fix things with Justin and Brian - but giving them...and us...the little glimpses of hope that things will work out just the way we know is the only acceptable. Brian making that last admission so easily - even though he couched it with a concern for the nurses' professionalism and not the fact that he can't stand anyone coming on to HIS Justin...let's us know that he might be more willing to open up his heart to Justin in a way he never could on the show at this stae of the game - we can only hope. great writing - hoping to hear more very soon loving life, Charle
Edom is having issues with our text editors. I'm trying to help her with it. ~admin Summary:
***Featured Story for June 2018***
Brian and Justin try to cope with life apart - with the marriage that did not happen and the love that would not die Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other-Relationship, Romance, Violence Characters: Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 784049 [Report This] Published: August 28, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2018
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Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 well, I'm glad that you are acknowledging how evil you are - leaving us like this! This story was the first I read here on MW, and it's still going strong, leaving me on the edge of my seat (it's not nice to leave a fluffy old grandmother on the edge of her seat for this long - lol - not nice at all) there is still so much to tell in this story - and I just love every minute of it of course - being ridiculously romantic as I am - the best part will be when our boys are reunited - and the danger has passed - but I sure am enjoying the trip to get there please update soon!
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Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 ok - so I spent the day reading this - and crying - and smiling - and crying again - and ... all I have to say is that I am really hoping for a lot more smiling in the next chapter - especially if its the last! this story has been amazing from the get go - and I can't wait to read what I am sure will be an equally amazing ending thanks loving life, Charle
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Date: July 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 well - you certainly more than made up for the understandable delay with the enormous amount of plot detail here - so much was brought together here - and I am once again intrigued where I have to admit I struggled to hold interest over the months so very glad you are starting to mend - and anxiously await the next chapter loving life, Charle
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Date: November 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 "Him that I love, I wish to be free - even from me."
Charle
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Date: August 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 this is without a doubt my favorite chapter of this entire story - it has everything - edge of my seat anxiety and fear/despair enducing action - and love so deep and all encompassing that it can be acknowledged by all of the senses individually on so many levels depending on the pairing involved - really really well done - thanks Charle Summary:
Post-513. Brian makes the move to NYC to be with Justin. Categories: Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5584 [Report This] Published: December 10, 2009 Updated: May 17, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Shades of Autumn I really like where you are taking the boys with this one - the idea of them 'settling' down in the way that only they can - in Europe and both at the top of their game - really appeals to me. Keep writing - it's really an enjoyable read! Author's Response: I always see their relationship continuing to be non-conventional but they make it work as only they could. There will be more, although not quickly. Summary:
Brian owns a private detective agency. Justin's an ex-cop from NYC looking for a change. Both have pasts that are about to catch up with them. What happens when their paths cross and their destinies entwine. This is an AU story with our favorite characters. I hope you enjoy, this is a new venture for me and I've no idea where it's going! Thanks to foreverbm for the lovely banner! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: Chris Hobbs, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Kiki, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 299229 [Report This] Published: January 07, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2012
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Date: January 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue a very satisfying ending to a great story - I have enjoyed this every step of the way - thanks for writing this! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Summary:
Justin went to New York in search of recognition for his talent. What he found was 4 and a half years of unhappiness, culminating in three gunshots on a sidewalk late at night. After being made a victim once more, Justin decides it's time to move back to Pittsburgh. Categories: Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1212 [Report This] Published: January 07, 2010 Updated: January 13, 2010
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Date: July 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 what a shame this one was never finished - I would have liked to read the rest - oh well...maybe some day Charle Summary:
Brian receives his cancer diagnosis and undergoes treatment. How will this affect him and Justin? Chapter 30: Brian completes his homework assignments with Justin. *finally posted...* *hangs head in shame* : Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Gap-Filler, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, What If Characters: Debbie, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 76020 [Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: February 27, 2012
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Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: A Promise So glad you are continuing with this story. I had almost given up hope - lol. I am a sucker for Brian vulnerable and needy - and this about face with Justin being able to offer what Brian gave him after the bashing is heart wrenching and enticing! I have no doubt that as Brian continues to make progress, the passion will build to a mindblowing completion! Please don't make us wait too long! Author's Response: LOL! I wouldn't blame anyone for giving up on this fic. It's been such slow going; I know the key moments in the story, but because of all the rigid timelines of treatment days, and symptom development and homework, it's hard to get to the moments that are most clear in my mind. :D
You're quite right about the buildup of the story --- the longer it is, the more heartwrenching, the more meaningful it will be... that's why I don't want to skip steps... Though I will keep them coming as quickly as I can.
Thanks for your thoughts! Summary:
Post-513. Brian & Justin are adjusting to a long distance relationship, but what happens when Hollywood comes calling again? Categories: Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5744 [Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: May 17, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Feelin' Way Too Damn Good eager to see where this one is going - stjll loveing your style Author's Response: Thank you. This one is actually oulined up until about Chapter 5 and will probably be about a dozen chapters altogether. I do a lot of sex and a little bit of angst, but most of my stuff is very canon based and day in the life things. No action adventure plots for me! I am working on Chapter 3 right now as time permits. Summary:
*FEATURED STORY FOR SEPTEMBER 2013* Brian goes to a dude ranch in Colorado where he meets Justin.
Categories: Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 9424 [Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: September 21, 2013
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Date: September 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 very sweet story! I love that Brian was so open and willing to give up his life in the Pitts to keep Justin in his life! Very OOC but very satisfying! loving life, Charle
Author's Response: Thank you Charle. I was very surprised to see that my story was chosen as Fic of the month. Completely unexpected. Author's Response: Thank you Charle. I was very surprised to see that my story was chosen as Fic of the month. Completely unexpected. Author's Response: Thank you Charle. I was very surprised to see that my story was chosen as Fic of the month. Completely unexpected. Summary:
Brian and Justin decided not to get married at the end of Season 3, rather than at the end of season 5, Babylon has not blown up-Mel and Lindz are sort of nice to Brian. Brian is only 30, rather than 33 and owns Kinnetik already. COMMENTS ARE LOVE!!!!!! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, MPreg Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 108849 [Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2014
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Date: June 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ok - so I am re-reading the whole thing to get back on track I'm old...I forgeet...don't judge - lol) - and I gotta' tell you I am loving it just as much the 2nd time around so...away I go... ;) Charle Author's Response: Thanks. Now that's have the summer off I hope to wrap this one up. I sadly have no post Holy S*** bunnies happening but who knows. Maybe I will do a song fic or something;) Summary:
Thanks to Liberty Sun for the fantastic banner!" A novel length re-telling of the Little Mermaid,w/QAF characters inserted. WARNING! This is not the Disney version rather an homage to the superior work of Hans Christian Anderson. There is both a sad and happy ending. To keep the sad ending do not read Dawn of a New Day. Although to date, I don't think anyone has done that. If you are still with me, ENJOY!!! Reviews, good and bad are always welcome
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Out of Character Characters: None Challenges: None Series: The Little Merman Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 104415 [Report This] Published: August 26, 2010 Updated: May 07, 2011
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Date: May 07, 2011 Title: The little Merman- A QAF faerie tale Not sure what just happened here - I was hoping it was maybe one last test and then some sanity would prevail. I certainly hope the next chapter clears things up - and we are not left with a tragically horrendous ending to a beautful love story. Author's Response: i know... that was brutal wasn't it? Fear not tho , an ending is slowly forming. This stry is so weird, even for me....It just keeps going and going...but an end is in sight! Summary:
Featured story for November 2012
The Rage launch party at Babylon was two days earlier. Justin is now missing… Hints regarding events in this fic: 1) There are no funeral scenes in this fic. 2) Brian is sexy when he suffers 3) You will be happy at the end. Many thanks to LibertySun for the beautiful banner! LibertySun is also a fantastic writer, please check out her fics. Big hugs and much gratitude to my sensational beta, britinmanor . Her patience and eagle eye are invaluable! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 45997 [Report This] Published: February 20, 2011 Updated: November 09, 2012
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Date: August 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I have really enjoyed reading ths story - and these last chapters are amazing! Don't tell Brian - he would hate it if he knew - but it made me feel all warm and fuzzy! Our boys happy - away from the family who make them crazy and cause so many of their angst - I can just picture them contented for years to come! Thanks loving life Charle Author's Response: Hi Charle, I can't thank you enough for reading and reviewing. I agree with you, I think our boys were/are in it for the long run. I think that the family did a lot of harm to them both, though some meant well. At least in this AU, I gave them a little more control of their lives, I hope it played well. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment, sincerely. All the best, Laura Summary:
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 15292 [Report This] Published: March 02, 2011 Updated: March 24, 2011
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Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Part Four ~ Finding Our Way… ok - so - I read this story again, and I do love the vows - and I really love this story - it may be one of my all time favorites - and I've been waiting for so long for the rest of it... Maddie has a past with Brian...and Brian and Justin are planning to put the condoms aside...and that has to be written...and read...please don't leave us hanging any more with this one - give us the rest...and don't skimp on the wedding night scene - please! BTW - the video at the end of chapter one may be my all time favorite, or at least the top 5 - thanks for that as well loving life, Charle Author's Response: First I have to say that it is also one of my favorite videos as well, and I'm not just saying it because she made it to go with my story... Blushes... Reading your comment makes me realize how much I miss writing this story, I only stopped because of the challenge I joined for "Metamorphosis" I never thought it would get so long... he,he, he... I do love this story and maybe I'll spend today reading it again and continuing it, I have great plans for the boys and this won't be a short story either... Now don't skip on the wedding night scene... Have I ever skimped on the porn??? ha, ha, ha... So glad you're enjoying all my stories and thanks for all your support... Later Darling ~ Kathleen Summary:
Sequel to "The Wedding Present." Brian continues to explore his evolving relationship with his biological father and grandparents as Fin O'Connor prepares his run for governor with his own partner by his side. *THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE*
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Real Life Issues, Romance, Violence Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Hunter, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted Challenges: None Series: Fin and Tony Universe Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes Word count: 537383 [Report This] Published: March 19, 2011 Updated: August 11, 2016
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Date: June 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Will He or Won't He? Well, I like a little angst as much as you do, but Brian and Justin so in love, committed to each other, leaning on each other and trusting each other - well - there's just nothing better! Although, who knows what that little sketchbook of Justin's might bring to the picture. I have a guess as to what he might have up his sleeve. Can't wait to see what that little secret, as well as the continuing saga between Fin and Brian will unfold. This story has so much yet in the telling, and I for one could not be more thrilled. Now, I notice that you have yet another new story started, so...I am on my way. living life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle - I always look forward to your thoughtful reviews - thanks for taking the time to do that! The other story is just a brief one-shot that was previously posted on fanfic.net - I know the readers would probably shoot me if I started yet another WIP - LOL! I promise to go right to the next one in order now, which is Parent Trap. Of course, that one is just beginning - I will be moving them forward eight years, though, while filling in some of the gaps in the past. Thanks as always, my friend, for all the reviews and your insightful feedback!:)
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Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Brian's Decision You know, given the fact that this is a sequel. and to a rather lengthy original story, it is amazing to me that there is still so much story to be told here. In addition to the known plot, we also have the promise of these little hints we have been getting - surely a baby is on the way (hmmmm - another sequel?). The characters as written here have become new 'old friends' - so familiar from all this time spent with them, and yet enveloped within a storyline so different from Canon that we are getting to know them anew with each chapter, so different are they from the couple we last saw in 513. still anxiously awaiting each new chapter - thanks for that loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle! Thanks for the very insightful comments.:) Yes, as I just mentioned in another review, I also see a lot to be written here (hope everyone doesn't get bored to death before I get done - LOL!) There's a lot of hopes and dreams being bandied about in this story (hence the title) - Fin's campaign, Tony's wish to one day be married to him, Brian's business and his new position as campaign manager, his relationship with his father (will this draw them closer or push them farther apart?), Justin's wish to have another child with his husband, Stockwell, and Justin's father's possible involvement....whew! I think that might be enough for a while.:) Everything may not turn out the way everyone hopes, though...if it did, what good would THAT do? LOL! Thanks, my friend, for the comments and for reading!:)
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Date: June 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Looking Into a Mirror wow - thanks for all the hard work - I love long chapters! Especially when they are as awesome as this one. I am having a blast with Brian and Fin - I find this pairing especially interesting and hope we get to see more of the inner workings as they develop their relationship. Hate to think of introducing any more hardship to my beloved brunette, but I think it would be captivating to see Brian reach a point where he reached out and admitted that he needed his 'dad'. And...I absolutely love the homeless boy angle - another brilliant way to get inside Brian's mind at the same time telling yet another fascinating story we haven't heard before. You never cease to amaze me! Now we just have to hope that Brian won't be stretched too thin when Justin needs him to pick up the pieces once he learns of Craig's ultimate betrayal. This story never gets old - I said so long ago that there is so much more to tell, and here we are many chapters later and that has not changed - there are so many facets to it - and I can't wait to see it all play out. so glad you are back - you were missed! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Aww....thanks, Charle, for the welcome back! With so many authors posting such wonderful stories lately, mine got pushed down to the end of the page soond after I posted it - ack! So I'm glad you found it and read the latest chapter.:) Yes, there is a lot going on here; sometimes I feel like I'm writing a soap opera to replace all the ones being cancelled on the tube! Hm....I just thought of another plot bunny - how about a QAF version of "Dallas" with Brian as JR and Justin as Bobby? - ha! Okay, I digress....where was I? Oh, yeah - the story.:) Craig's duplcity will be discovered and it will hurt Justin all over again. But I think that's part of this story - how Justin has learned to rely on his REAL family - Brian, Gus, his mother, and all his friends, and not just somewhere who he heppens to share his genes with. And I do love not only comparing Justin and Tony and seeing them as friends, but I am enjoying writing about the burgeoning relationship between Fin and Brian. So much to tell here!! I am so glad that you are still following along with it, my friend. And I thank you for the ongoing support. I'm sending a big hug back your way. ~Kim
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Date: July 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: What is a Real Family? knew it was coming and yet still wasn't truly prepared - poor Justin - how awful for him - so glad Brian is there to help him through this - ...and BTW - lol - I agree with Jen - keeping things from Brian doesn't end well! good chapter Charle Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Charle. I'm sure that Brian would just love to 'rip Craig a new one' after this, but something tells me that Justin would like that honor instead. I definitely see a showdown coming up very soon.:) And yes, I do think it would be best for Justin to just come clean, but I can also see why he might hesitate right now with everything else going on. Thanks again for all the support, Charle, I appreciate that very much. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: August 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Dead to Me brilliant - this take down of Craig is long overdue - and the hurt for Justin, not to mention Brian - well it breaks my heart - yet the love between them is still so poignant and breathtaking - the little moment between Jsutin and Gus was especially endearing - and I bet will set the tone when the 'let's be dads' talk begins - Brian is learning so much about fatherhood from those on either side of his generation - and watching Justin love his son warms his heart more and more as he forges his relationship with his son...and his dad great story telling - thanks Kim Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle! Thank you for your kind words and for reading, Sweetheart.:) You said that very well about how Brian is not only learning what it means to be a son but a father as well. Poor Justin's father is worse, I think, than Jack Kinney was, and that's saying a lot! Obviously there is still a lot more of this story to tell - so many angles; what was I thinking??? Ha! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'm just sorry it took me so long to update it! Thank you for all you support, Charle; that means the word to me! *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: February 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Alex well - didn't see that curve-ball coming at all - what a hoot! - glad to hear from these boys again I so wish I could even think about coming to the reunion - I would so love that - but there is no way I can break away for it - I really would have loved to be able to meet face to face and chat for a bit - but I will be counting on you to tell me all about it looking forward to the next chapter here - I wonder if Fin will realize and react to Brian having called him his father - that could be a rather tender moment... and...of course, both couples are in desperate need of a little...coupling...wink wink. loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle! I wish you could be at the con, too! Elke's arranging a fan meet and greet for that Thursday, and I would have loved to have seen you there. I hope one day we can meet. In the meantime, rest assured I will be loaded with two or three cameras and my netbook just like Lois Lane when I get there - ha! Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the kind words, Charle; even after all these stories I've written, my rather fragile soul still needs the reassurance that my stories are still enjoyable. I agree with you about the story; I think that's why I dispatched Stewart rather handily in this chapter. I want to concentrate more on the human aspect of this story, and the two couples' deepening feelings toward each other and their bond to each other. And, of course, there's the situation regarding Alex, as well as Justin's hope for a child, Tony's wish to be married to Fin, and the election itself. So going forward I will probably be devoting more time to that and not so much to all the political drama, although that will obviously have to be a part of it. Thank you again for all the support, Charle! And I'm still holding out hope that we can meet face-to-face one day. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: September 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Fin and Tony's Love Story so glad to be able to visits with all the great characters in this story - and of course with our boys while the election campaign gave great story - and of course got everyone where they need to be for the plot to move forward - we know its all about the love - and there are so many relationships to drive the next chapters that I truly can't wait until the results are in and we can look at each of them more closely... Brian and Justin...of course...family planning...still learning more about each other as they grow...what's not to love? And if they do decide to have a baby...who will be the momma - and what part will she play in their lives? Brian and Fin...their story is not done...they still have things to work through and feelings to share and memories to make... Justin and Tony...other than Daphne - all of 'their' friends have been Brian's friends...I love that Justin's actions brought this man into their family...and it has been great to watch their friendship develop Alex and...everyone! There are so many layers to this story - Justin seeing through her anger is just the beginning. And her relationship with Debbie will allow us to look at her through totally new eyes as well. ok...I'll stop...lol...for now! rotfl - This story could go on for a long long time...and so I must stop myself from doing the same. ha ha So looking forward to more...and congrats on the apparent win in the challenge - you deserve it! Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle - I am always so flattered by how much time and care you take with your comments; thank you sincerely for that, my friend.;) And yes, there ARE a lot of layers to this story. Just when I think I can wind it down with the election coming up, I realize how much more I want to cover here. There IS a lot more to it after the election. In a way, the election was never really the point of the story, athough it did serve a purpose. I always thought the human aspect of the story - how each of the characters continue to evolve and grow, especially the four men - was really where the emphasis lay. Even Fin and Tony will have a lot to discuss after this election is over, even though they have been together for so long. In a way, his son is a lot more comfortable in his shell this his father is. I will get the election coverage up soon before moving onto "Parent Trap." Thank you so much for all the support, Charle, and for the well wishes. I am very honored by that. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: January 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Yearning wow Kim= you really have me all kerflummoxed with this chapter - my emotions are all over the place let me clarify - this is probably the most heartwarming scene I have read here on MW - I am just a puddle - Brian opening up to her, her opening up to him, ending with him holding her...and then his line...'everything will be okay, it's all right now, no one's going to hurt you again' - so unexpected and poignant - I can see the look between Brian and Justin at the end in my mind's eye - and its overwhelming and sweet then it occurs to me that this means that Justin does not get the chance to hold his own flesh and blood and the indescribable joy that brings - and my heart hurts for him then I go back to what a difference they will make for this little girl - and all they have to offer her - and how she and Justin will bond with the art - and how perfect this is - and how pieces of Brian that no one could touch can be healed because she knows - and he can offer the same to her oh my friend - when you write you make us feel right along with the characters - what a gift - I can't wait to read what you have in store for us next Happy New Year - hope the coming months offer you all you could hope for loving life, Charle Author's Response: Aww...Charle, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comments. It feels kind of lonely on here at times, and then someone such as yourself takes the time to comment in depth, and it makes me feel so much better. (Not to minimize Marny's comments, of course, nor anyone else's). I totally understand your dilemma, too, regarding Alex and a baby. I think I have a solution that will work coming up, but I know some people won't like them fostering Alex. Ultimately I felt, though, that this was the way to go. If THEY can't provide the compassion and understanding to her, then who can? I think as Debbie stated it's important that someone step up to the plate and help this girl, and I do think that Brian can understand how she might feel. After all, he had a similiar experience growing up, and so did Justin to a lesser degree when he was older. They should be able to understand that she is not as tough as she appears. The next chapter is actually going to move them forward in time, and I think will wrap up some loose ends. Not sure if it will be the last chapter - knowing my wordiness, probably not! - but it's heading toward a conclusion now. Thank you again for your very heartfelt comments and for all the support you give me; it means more to me than you probably know. I wish nothing but the best for you in the coming year, too, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: July 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 41: The Mundane Things are the Most Revealing hey Kim, I don't know if I am more excited to see more of this story after all this time, or just to hear from you - you ahve been missed my friend love where this chapter is goin - the relationships are always my soft spot - you know that - and the changes in Alex that we have already seen - along with the ones I know we will see once the boys make the decision we know that they will - ae delightful to watch plus - what better place for me to get all my 'family aura' than at the Thanksgiving table - can't wait until dinner starts! I can almost taste the turkey...lol seriously - glad you are back - and hope that means all is well with you - if you ever need an 'ear' - I'm always willing to 'listen' loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle! You're so sweet; thank you for your kind words, my friend.;) Yes, with my father's passing, helping three authors to beta, and some other RL issues, it has been hard to keep writing. I feel awful about how long I have to go in between updates. But at least I just have the two WIPs going, so that helps. I actually have quite a bit of "Stallion" already written, so that will help, too, and the next part to this is almost finished. I'm glad someone hasn't forgotten me.;) It's exciting to see so many new stories on here, though! I still have quite a bit to tell about this story, so I hope readers will bear with me while I continue to work on it. My two WIPs WILL be finished, just like all the others before them.;) Thanks for all the support, Charle! I appreciate that so much, dear.;) *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
Justin is a talented artist haunted by terrifying visions. Brian Kinney is a cynical police detective who doesn't believe in psychics. What happens, though, when his police work strikes too horrifying close to home? AU Story. **THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!!**
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, Violence Characters: Daphne, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 212447 [Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: March 04, 2012
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Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Crime Becomes Personal Now Wow! - Talk about a cliff hanger! I am kind of glad that I read through some of the other reviews right after reading this chapter. Knowing that Gus will not be harmed at all let's me know that Brian is about to become more open minded about Justin's abilities. Of course, with his own son as the one in danger, we all know that he will move heaven and earth - and do whatever it takes to keep him safe. Brian in his protective mode, open and vulnerable, is probably when he is his sexiest - even though the passion and heat will obviously need to wait until after the crisis is over, much like in TLC. Please don't keep us waiting - things are about to get really edge-of-our-seats riveting - my heart is pounding! Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for leaving your thought-provoking comments!:) I may go ahead and update this one before the others - I normally keep them all in the same order, but I may make an exception here due to the circumstances.:) I agree with you about Brian - for someone who appeared to be so one-sided on the outside, he was anything but when you got to see how complex he actually was, especially when those he cared about the most were involved. Thanks for reading - I promise to get this updated ASAP.
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Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Combining Forces Before It's Too Late ...so worth the wait - this chapter is simply amazing! The interactions between the two are so believable, and Brian's anguish alternating with extreme need to do his job as he has never done before - spot on! - - -I almost forgot my anticipation about how these two will come together and sizzle in the end - I was so caught up in the moment. Great writing! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Aw....thanks, Charle! Glad you liked the chapter - I will be updating this as soon as I can; today's my last day of teaching so look out! The fingers will be getting a workout in the next few weeks (in between going to see Randy in Tommy in July - but not to fear, I'm taking my netbook with me!). As always, thanks for reading and for the review.:)
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Date: June 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Resolve and Rescue Oh, my goodness! I am sitting here reading this, literally on the edge of my seat, and my family is hysterical. They are used to me yelling at the TV and getting emotionally involved when something is this exciting, but rarely do I have this reaction when reading on the compy. I was jumping, clapping my hands on the desk, and nervously calling out to Brian and Justin as they approached the farmhouse, and then Brian as he entered in. Outstanding writing! (we expected nothing less) So, now that my heart is pounding, my pulse is racing, and my blood pressure is up - how long do we have to wait until there is something much more 'life affirming' to read to elicit these strange symptoms I am having! lol I know the other stories come first, and truth be told I am almost as anxiously awaiting the next installment of those as well. Hurray for summer breaks for teachers. It couldn't have come at a better time. Updates on all soon, right? loving life, Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle! You're very kind - thank you for the lengthy feedback - it's great! I had to laugh when you mentioned your family's reaction to the story.:) I'm glad I had that effect on you - it's very flattering but I imagine you were getting some strange looks from your family all the same.:) Not to fear - as I mentioned in a couple of review comments previously, as soon as Brian knows his son is going to be okay, he can start expressing his 'appreciation' the Brian Kinney way (yum....)! And I will definitely be updating all the stories regularly as usual; it should actually be a little faster, too! I'm even taking a netbook with me in July when I see Randy in Tommy so I can keep writing at night during the week (I know, I'm crazy, but I'm also hoping for a photo or two to download...). Thanks so much for your continuing readership and support of my story! And now I believe it's onto some "Tender Loving Care." Thanks again, my friend.:)
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Date: July 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Aftermath excellent as usual, very well written, once again making us feel like we are there with them - but...of coure...you know what we are all waiting for..... lovinglife, Charle Author's Response: LOL! Yes, I know, I know....I have to get there first, though, but trust me, I'm as impatient as the next person - ha! I promise in the next chapter their relationship will start to build now that Gus is on the mend.:) Thanks as always, my friend, for reading and commenting.:) And now I am onto some "TLC." At least we can be sure that what you want will definitely be showing up over there!:)
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Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: A New Light "but he found himself thinking that at least he had something to look forward to now"...and...so do we... it's getting closer... it could happen any day... please...lol loving life, Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle - thanks for plowing through that humongous chapter - LOL! It just grew and grew to be a monster....:) Yes, I see all sorts of interesting things happening in the next chapter - some cuteness with Gus at the ballgame while they 'bond' (can anyone say "play ball?" - ha!), some comforting on Brian's part over Justin's anxiety about having to testify, as well as some suspicion regarding the police's diligence - or lack thereof - in investigating the killer more thoroughly until a cop's son was involved, and quite possibly a kiss or two thrown in during the next chapter - hmmm.....All sorts of thoughts swirling around in my head here...And there's the matter of what to do with Carothers - the killer you feel sorry for but can't condone. Not sure yet what I'll do with him, but I'm leaning toward one option right now that I won't divulge yet.....Thanks so much for leaving me your thoughts, my friend. And now I'm off to a little "TLC!":)
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Date: September 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Play Ball! well - that left me feeling like a schoolgirl out on my first real date - thoroughly kissed - heart pounding - but not really sure what might hapen next - I am loving this story! thanks loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you, Charle! I thought it was time to throw Brian a bone - ha! I mean, we know HIM - he can only take so much before he might explode form repressed sexual desire - LOL! Thanks as always for taking the time to read and comment.:)
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Date: October 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer ummm - I think I may need a cold shower before making dinner - that was sooo worth the wait - and I have a feeling there is more to come...do we get to experience rimming for the very first time with Justin - that will be incredible - and hot!!! I usually have a hard time separating our boys from AU characters - 'cause I know and love them so well, and they will always be my boys. But here I am seeing them as totally new friends, the cop and the psychic, a whole new Brian and a whole new Justin, which makes it even more amazing to experience their first time like this. thanks for this update - loved it and as always, I am anxiously waiting for more...greedy...aren't I? lovinglife, Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle! You can be greedy any time, as long as I get such a thought-provoking, positive review as yours! Thanks as always for reading and for the encouraging words.:) To be honest, speaking of 'greedy,' I was kind of hoping for a few more reviews after Bob's post, but (sigh)....not to be I suppose. But I DO appreciate everyone who has read and especially reviewed up until now and as always I will work on this steadfastedly until I get this one - and all my other stories - completed. It's weird - sometimes it seems like the authors who take months to post the next part of their story get more reviews than the ones who work so diligently at posting regularly (?)....So maybe I'm going about this wrong - ha! BTW, I'm toying with a short story right now. I've written about 1,700 words of it but I'm not ready to post it just yet. I may wait until it's finished before I do, since I see it as a rather short one (yes, I CAN do that on rare occasions - LOL!). Thanks again, my friend, for taking the time to leave me your thoughts - that is very motivating for me.:) Oh and one more thing...I think I can maybe squeeze in a rimming scene in the next chapter, along with a few 'other' moments (wink, wink)....! ~Kimberly Summary:
Sequel to "It's Only Polite to Share." This time it's Justin's turn to be jealous when Brian hires a replacement for him in the Art Department.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Cynthia, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 33408 [Report This] Published: March 28, 2011 Updated: May 14, 2011
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Date: May 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Head On Collison! What a great chapter! I could not be more thrilled that Justin jusst happened to arrive in time to overhear all that Brian revealed. The passion as a result was so hot - not that these two don't always sizzle - but Brian in love just sends it over the top! Its always a joy to read your stories - and this one definitely does not disappoint. Author's Response: Thank you so much! So delighted that you liked it! Sorry about the delay - been sick for the past two days with strep - yuck! Finally felt well enough to write, so hopefully the 11,000+ word chapter will help make up for it. I'm actually working on the conclusion right now, because I'd like to get this one wrapped up. Hopefully I'll have it posted either later today or tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing!:)
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Date: May 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: My Favorite Hot Wheel love it - thanks for the playful little ending this chapter gave us - it made me smile! Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm so honored that you liked it.:) And thank you for taking the time to leave me your thoughts as well - I appreciate that.:) Summary:
When his boyfriend vanishes, Justin Taylor hires Private detective, Brian Kinney. When the P.I. starts to fall for the kid, will he be able to stay focused on the case? Is this blond as innocent as he seems? *Note* For best effect, Picture Liberty Ave. draped in the shadows of 1940's Film noir. Set your imagination to black & white and embrace the smooth jazz tangled within the fog. Grab yourself a vodka martini with a twist and read in your best hard boiled detective voice. Savvy? :) Each chapter will be titled after a popular song of the 1940's. A Lingo glossary will be provided at the end of each. :) Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 34968 [Report This] Published: April 03, 2011 Updated: October 26, 2014
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Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Some Enchanted Evening The ice cubes shook like a boytoy's back side on stage
My tongue was tellin' Justin's everything I didn't want it to say.
oh how I have missed this - can this story NEVER end!!!! love this chapter! - Brian...you are soooo in trouble...just try to resist him!
loving life, Charle Author's Response: It's always a pleasure to hear from you Charle. I'm sorry I've made you have to miss it, I'm not sure why these updates take me so long. I'll try to get the next one out soon. There are seventeen chapters to this fic, so still eight more to go! I do hope you'll like them. *hugs*
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Date: July 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy welcome back - sure missed this one - glad things are better and we can get more of what we love - fondled memories - love it sure hope we get some action between our guys soon - and that Justin turns out to really be only the victim that Brian can sooth and comfort in the way only he can... loving life Charle Author's Response: Happy to return this story to you! I thank you for waiting so nicely for my update, the next ones won't be so long. I too love the way Brian can comfort Justin like no one else. Stay tuned. *hugs*
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Date: July 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Is You Is Or Is You Ain't? so...can I have the next chapter right now - :) - because I have a feeling that something it about to happen that I can't wait to read - ;D - and I can't believe you would leave us hanging at just this particular place - kind of cruel...don't ya think? lol
seriously - you know I've been loving this one - and I think I am about to love it even more - can't wait! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Next chapter soon. :) Sorry I'm slow on the updates, even though these chapters are short you wouldn't believe the time it takes me to write one. I take forever to carefully place every word. I am so grateful for your reading and reviewing, it always makes me smile. *hugs*
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Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: 'Round Midnight First of all...welcome back. Couldn't be more thrilled that you are well enough to write...and from the look of it...just as well as always. I am over the top about this story continuing...although I have to admit that I sure as shootin' didn't see this twist comin'! Can't wait to see what's just around the corner... loving life, Charle Author's Response:
It is deeply appreciated that you never let me down with your wonderful feedback. *HUGS* I'm thrilled that you're thrilled. Now let's hope I can get out the last 8 chapters in a more timly manner. :p Yes, I like a twist as delicious in my stories as a staple 40's martini. I'm glad youre continuing this story,I hope to escort you just around the corner soon! :) Summary:
Justin never went to Liberty when he was 17. When he came out to his family, his father threw him out. Now he has a job looking after a little boy named Gus and is desperately trying not to fall in love with Brian, Gus' father. AU and slash Currently Being Edited Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Out of Character, Romance Characters: Blake, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Molly Taylor Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 11990 [Report This] Published: April 05, 2011 Updated: October 18, 2011
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Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 oh, bold move Justin, I love it! - and this scene was so sweet, and hot, all at the same time - do, now wait to see where the boys go from here - please don't keep us waiting too long loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you like it Summary:
**Not a new story - chapters had to be reloaded due to a system problem.**~Admin
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Unsafe Sex Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 67756 [Report This] Published: April 16, 2011 Updated: March 16, 2015
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Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 ~ Blue Hawaii… awww - this is such a great chapter - I love the way you brought everything together - and I can't wait for the wedding! Married, in Hawaii, at night - how riducloulsy romantic - and awesome! Author's Response: Thanks so much I'm so glad you're enjoying it, I couldn't resist having them marry in the moonlight... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
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Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ I Love The Way You Make Me Beg And Plead … this chapter is sweet, and passionate, and I love the way they are together - so much in love - its addicting - so keep it coming - you write it so well I have to tell you I was more than a little sad that we didn't get the vows or the feelings for both of them as Brian walked down the aisle/ It is so much different hearing about it aafter the fact than it is being part of it as we read and are made to feel we are right there with them I have a feeling that some of the dynamics might be changing with the baby coming soon - and I sure hope these nightmares are discomforts of Justin's don't do anything to affect the closeness these two have worked so hard and long for looking forward as this story continues - thanks for writing loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thanks so much for all you kind words, I'm all about the love I often say that my stories write them selves... They still have vows to come in front of the family at home... or you could read chapter four of "Believe in Life" another fic of mine where they get married (I hope to finish that one soon...) Later Darling ~ Kathleen
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Date: January 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 ~ Happy Family fantastic - I've missed this story - and what a way to rekindle it! great writing - loved the roasat and the VIP room scene - and this last secene - well, it was hot! - thanks - looking forward to the wedding loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you like it... ~ Kathleen Summary:
The cancer returned the fourth winter after Justin had left Pittsburgh to become a big, fat fucking success as an artist in New York City. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 [Report This] Published: May 17, 2011 Updated: May 17, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 loved it! this a one shot at it's best! - sure we'd like more - we can never get enough, especially when the boys are connected in this way - but at the same time, the last line gives me all I always need - the depth of their love Author's Response: Most people want me to add to this fic, but I really told the story I wanted to where I ended it. I tried to leave the reader with a sense of hope. Summary:
It was a dark and porny night at Kinnetik. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1683 [Report This] Published: May 17, 2011 Updated: May 17, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 this one was a hoot - although I have to admit that I would more than love to get a glimpse at the next scene as well - Brian tied up and.... - too hot! Author's Response: Many readers have wanted that next scene although I didn't even realize how it sounded when I wrote this piece. I'm not sure if I'll add to this, but it does sound intriguing! Summary:
Hunter pays a visit to Babylon...and the back room. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1890 [Report This] Published: May 17, 2011 Updated: May 17, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 another great one shot - unique and well written Author's Response: Thank you. Alternate POV's can be fun. Summary:
Short gap-filler porn set after the credits roll in episode 410 Categories: Brian/Justin, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 646 [Report This] Published: May 17, 2011 Updated: May 17, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 very satisfying - and once again with a hint of yearning for what could yet be Author's Response: Such a complex relationship. Thanks for reading. Summary:
Post-513 committment fic...Brian & Justin style. Short Drabble series. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 808 [Report This] Published: May 17, 2011 Updated: May 17, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 cute - always love the promise of post 513 committment Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Summary:
Loose adaption of the movie - Justin and Brian are living separate lives in different cities, raising one twin alone; what happens when their two daughters meet unexpectedly as pre-teens? **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!**
Categories: Minor Character Death, QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Drama, Humor, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 388729 [Report This] Published: May 24, 2011 Updated: February 20, 2014
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Date: May 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Divergent Lives Hmmm. I am not usually a fan of stories based on existing movies, they can go so wrong. And I am so anxiously waiting for some of your other writings to reach the next level - each so different - yet each intriguing.and each leaving me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I know you always have a few going at a time, but I sure hope that adding another story again does not mean more time between each new chapter for the stories I've already gotten hooked on. That said, I can look down the road and see where this story might go - and knowing the movie storyline, anticipate some really fun moments along the way - along with the possibility of the kind of passion only our boys can bring, I am so excited. This story has so much potential - and now you've got me hooked again you rascal. I have to admit though, that I am most intrigued here by the fact that, in your flashback, both men seem to be reluctant to part. While that increases the promise of what may be to come, it makes it harder t explain why they would break up a family rather than persevere. Can't wait to see how you explain that. Always enjoy your work - thanks for all your work. It is appreciated. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the thought-provoking and insightful comments. If it's any consolation, I think I am seeing the eventual end of "Tender Loving Care," so that should free up more writing time. AND I am about to have 2 1/2 months off since I teach during the year, so that should help considerably.:) I will explain later how they came to a parting of the ways here, but you are correct; my stories always end up with the two together so you can figure out pretty readily where it will wind up eventually. However, that being said, they will need to do some maneuvering to get to that point. And if you know the movie, you also know there's that sticky little problem of a fiance hanging around. I could make one up for Brian, but I so adore making the lad jealous, so in all likelihood it will be a beau for Justin. And you know the girls will be doing everything in their power to get their two dads together, including causing some mischief for the poor fiance. I think I will be having fun with this one - ha! Hope you'll stay tuned. And I promise to keep updating regularly - don't worry; I'm very conscientious about that. Thanks for having faith in me - and for reading my stories. I am very honored as well as grateful.:P)
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Date: June 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Camping Conspiracy Ok, I am really excited to get to camp! This is just too much fun. And I love that I was right from the beginning, and Jen is the catalyst that will bring them back together. As for the break-up...Brian Kinney in his usual vain quest for reaffirmation makes me almost as angry as Justin once more walking away rather than sticking around to fight for his man. Sure Brian bringing up Ethan wasn't nice, but just the fact that Justin had betrayed Brian with the fiddler in the first place should have made him more willing to forgive Brian's indescretion. I will be anxiously waiting for more...if I remember correctly, the original story has an evil fiance - don't know who is going to have moved on - but you know I'm going to hate him...right? great writing as always Kimberly - thanks for keeping the updates coming so regularly - it is always a joy to read loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle! Thanks for the feedback! Yes, there will be an evil fiance - I'm leaning toward Justin but haven't quite made up my mind yet.:) And just a hint - they will NOT meet at the camp - the girls have to have too much fun conniving to get them together and I can't pass that up.:)
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Date: June 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Camp Orientation love the chapter - don't like Alex one bit (but then I'm not supposed to, am I?) the interaction between each daughter and the father who raised her is so sweet - and I couldn't be more thrilled that they are still so in love after all these years - it will just make for the most amazing reunion...these two couldn't keep their hands off each other for more than a few hours, so after all these years - it will just explode (in more ways than one!) I'm guessing that in the next chapter, that charcoal drawing will reveal the truth to very shocked and uncertain girls - as they try to fill in the pieces of the puzzle - this is going to be so much fun!!!!! I am loving this story! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Now, Charle, we don't even know poor Alex yet - LOL! But not to worry, he's not going down without a fight but he'll be no match for the entire Kinney-Taylor clan, especially the twins! You're right - the drawing will definitely play a part in the girls meeting each other at camp, which should be in the next chapter. Thanks so much as always for the review, my friend!:)
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Date: September 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Some Plans Started, Some Hopes Dashed sure am glad I checked in here tonight - it has been so slow - especially for the stories that I am anxiously waiting for like this one - I love the way you have combined the essence of QAF as well as the essence of Parent Trap - and made a whole new story - every bit as 'edge of your seat' glad this one has not died - can't wait to see what is coming - both with Brian and Justin - as well as Alex...and this little twerp at camp - lol hmmm. perhaps...more Paper Hearts Killer for me next...? loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle...thank you for reading and reviewing. Rest assured I would never abandon any story - never have, never will; I'm trying to update as quickly as possible, but I just started teaching again about a week ago and have triple the students, so that will slow me down somewhat. I HAVE reduced the number of WIPs I have going right now to four, so that will help speed it up a little. I may try to reduce the number of words somewhat in each chapter, too (from 10,000+ to maybe half that) in hopes of possibly updating each one faster. I'm glad you like this story - it's getting, shall we say, mixed reviews at the moment (sigh), so I am very grateful for your support. And yes, Paper Hearts is up next - I will be starting on that one either tonight or tomorrow; I see a doubleheader coming up for the boys as promised.:) Thank you so much for your kindness, Charle, I am very appreciative.:)
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Date: September 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Some Plans Started, Some Hopes Dashed hey Predec2 - just wanted to make sure that you didn't think I was being critical with my comments - I know how much work you must put in to each chapter - and what it takes to get a new chapter completed and posted - so please know that I more than understand how RL priorities cause unavoidable wait time for your anxious fans...like me your stories are wonderful - and worth the wait - and talent like yours should always be encouraged love your writing - love your heart loving life, Charle Author's Response: No, Charle, I didn't think that at all - I really appreciate all the support you've given me! Thank you for your kind words of encouragement - this site has been very kind to me and I really am grateful to everyone who's welcomed me over here. Guess I'll just have to learn how to grow a thicker skin, won't I? I see these stories as my 'babies,' though, and it hurts sometimes is all. Thank you for caring, my friend - you're very kind. :)
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Date: October 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Expulsion Can be a GOOD Thing! how fun, this chapter really is a clever way to get the girls sent to the 'wrong' dad, and my only disappointment is that we don't get to see that little brat get what's coming to her - I am of course looking forward most of all to the dad's reunion, although I know it is a while off - and it will be very interesting to 'watch' each of the girls get to know her other parent sure have missed your story updates, it was great to see this one posted loving life, Charle Author's Response: Aw...thanks, Charle, you're always so sweet.:) (Sigh...) I know - my teaching job is really slowing me down my regular writing a little more - have three times as many students this year, and it seems like all I do is grade papers! It's an adult full-time class, but you would think the women were two-year-olds with their constant dramas every day - ack!! Anyway, rest assured I'm still writing - it's about the only thing that keeps me sane right now! I may actually go ahead and write the next chapter of this to at least get the girls switched with the fathers, since I know that's part of what everyone is waiting for. Thanks again for all the kind words. *Hug* to you.:)
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Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Battle Plans and Whispers of Doubt ok - this is getting really fun! glad we have some comic relief while we are waiting for the reunion - which I have no doubt is gonna' be amazing! hope this little girl doesn't overplay her hand - Alex might have grudingly coexisted in order to get his prize (which we all know will not happen) - but now she's made herself an enemy - seems like a pattern within the Taylor genes, huh? thanks- loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle, my friend! Thanks for reading and commenting. Someone else pointed out, too, that it will be interesting to see whether Debbie can keep her emotions under control when she sees Kaylee again for the first time in so long; can she keep herself in check enough not to give the game away to Brian? Hmmm.... And just which father will figure it out first? I know but I'm not saying - Pffftt!! LOL! I'm going to enjoy stretching this out just a bit as the boys continue to grow suspicious as to what exactly is going on. I hope you'll continue to follow along. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, Charle - I really appreciate that!:)
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Date: December 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Yes, You Are My Father Well, I am not surprised, but I love absolutely everything about this chapter. The descriptions are like snapshots of everything that is happening, and the emotions for all four of them show clearly. I have been anxiously waiting for a new chapter here for days now, and this one certainly did not disappoint! I think by the time these two find their way back to each other I will be just a blubbering pool of tears, so strong is the anticipation! I don't know how I will bear the wait, but I have a feeling that wait is exactly what I will have to do - as it seems more there may be alot more to tell before we reach that point. Excellent writing - thank you so much for this story. loving life, Charle Author's Response: Aww...thanks, Charle! I always love to hear your thoughts.:) I'm glad you liked this extremely long chapter! It was long even by MY typical standards.:) I don't think the girls realized just how difficult it might be to impersonate each other. Despite being twins, they still have some differences that will eventually be their undoing. As you mentioned, though, as much as I would LOVE to just move straight to the boys' reunion with each other, it's going to take me a little more time before I get there. I want to show Kaylee's reactions, for example, to Emmett and Debbie among the 'gang,' as well as Katie's battle against Alex. She is going to continue to make it very hard for the man to make any headway regarding his plan to get Justin to marry him. Rest assured, though, that I will do my best to make the boys' reunion an explosive one eventually (in more ways than one!). Thanks again for the comments, Charle.:) ~Kimberly
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Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: I Know Who You Are Perfect! Watching the two girls get (re)-acquainted with their dads and learn more about them and each other - what a hoot - yet so very sweet at the same time! This chapter gave us everything we could want...and then some! I couldn't be more thrilled that Alex is gone - out of the picture more quickly than I expected, but then I always love when you send us little surprises, especially lovely ones like this! Now, there is nothing but time and distance - and of course the pesky issue of a broken promise and potentially stubborn men short on trust - to keep these soul mates from a reunification to beat all! Please don't make us wait too long - you are the master at cliffhangers! I am drooling over what will come next, with Brian and Kaylee now able to truly reunite - I feel a need for tissues coming in the next chapter.
I also want to thank you for your encouragement and support. I have recently returned to work on my last unfinished story, after renewed but unexpected interest and reviews - imagine that! It is because I know first hand how vital responses from others can be in keeping me motivated and inspired that I do my best to respond to any chapter/story that moves or touches me in any way! For me, it's what feeds the muse - and I can only guess that this is true for others who put so much of themselves into their work and need to know that it is not in vain.
...any chance we can get more of this story...out of rotation? I really can't wait! (you know I am so bad at that delayed gratification stuff - some things never change - lol) - although there is unfinished business that I am anxious to read about elsewhere as well...such anticipation! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle - How can I express what YOUR support means to me, too? You are absolutely correct; I LIVE for positive reinforcement and yes, I am crushed when I get just the opposite. Perhaps those with tender, easily bruised hearts shouldn't be writers, then. But I like to think that maybe it translates into a little more emotion in my stories. Some may not like my style of writing, but it is what it is.... I try hard and I think I do a good job of responding to every review I get, and not just with a 'cookie cutter' response, although I don't begrudge any that DO; I know only too well how time-consuming writing as well as responding to reviews can be. I have noticed you are so exceptional about always taking the time to provide a thoughtful review not only to me but to others; I can't speak for them, but as for me that means more than you will ever realize, my friend. As for changing up the story rotation, it's hard to do (sigh) because there are (hopefully at least!) other readers who are anxious for updates on the other stories. Recently the only exception I've been making is to the two shorter stories I have going right now ("Hunka" and "Framed"), since finishing up those two will free me to catch up quicker on the longer ones such as this one. But it wouldn't be the FIRST time I went against the norm.:) If I got enough readers to twist my arm, I might just be convinced to at least write the next chapter where the boys finally see each other again after so long. It might make up for the less-than-glowing response I received for this chapter as well... Thank you, Charle, for being such a devoted supporter of my stories and for going the extra mile to write such thoughtful reviews. You are very kind.:)~Kimberly
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Date: July 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: What Super Power Do I Use Now? ok - so as much as I really really want to 'Debbie slap' Justin right up side his head and say 'just get over it...will you? - Brian being Brian is his own worst enemy as usual...and in true BJ style is keeping himelf from getting the one thing he wants...no needs...more than anything else in the world - all because he is not willing to step back and give Justin the one thing he needs at this moment to move on...validation now that Brian is finally open and willing to ponder and address the real issue at hand, and get past his signature "I'll do anything for love...but I won't do that' walls, excuses and avoidance tactics - I'm guessing it won't be long before he is able to regain Justin's trust...and his hot little bubble butt won't be far behind... in fact, knowing our boys as we do...would we be surprised if the boys give in to their passion long before all the emotional baggage is resolved completely? chin up girls...you're hot daddy twosome is about to turn your little frowns upside down...in a most life affirming way! so happy for this update Kim - great writing as usual Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle - thank you as always for reading and taking the time to review, dear friend; I really appreciate that.:) I think a lot of people are getting impatient over Justin's stubbornness; if it's any consolation, I see that changing pretty soon, especially once some other elements come into play in the story. It IS amazing how pride and hurt can factor into decisions we make and how it can fester for so long. I think we all know eventually that their passion will not be able to be contained (wink, wink), but I may just surprise you and let them sort through their issues first before we get to that point. Thanks again for all your support, Charle - I'll be updating this one again very soon.:) *Hugs* ~Kim P.S. Your comment about the 'Debbie slap' reminded me of a moment at the con on Sunday (the closing day) when the actors were up on the stage for photo shoots with fans. At one point Sharon Gless and Hal Sparks were up there and she gave him this fake slap just like in the show - it was HILARIOUS!
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Date: July 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Forging the Bond of Forgiveness I am really anxious for the next part - you know I can't wait to see how Brian will explain his faux pas - I have no doubt that is the only obstacle to Justin putting it all on the line one more time - the lve between them is not in doubt I can't wait to 'hear' the conversation between Michael and Brian - with all they've been through - together and apart - those two will definitely have a unique perspective - one that will hopefully cause Brian to stop and really look at things then...the reunion - hot! and the girls finding out and reacting - fun! and the gang - oh my, what a hoot! I am so very glad that this chapter ran long - it means I will get another glimpse before we head over to the farm where thing no doubt are heating up there as well ;) Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle! Thanks for the wonderful comments, my dear! Yes, there will be a lot of soul-searching in the next chapter by both men, and their friends will all be conspiring to get them headed back in the right direction. And I think Gus will be a big help in driving that goal. I have over 10,000 words written for the next chapter and I'm not done yet - ack! But I DO need to wander back over to the Bluegrass State very soon. I should have this next part up in the next day or so, however. Thanks again for all your support, Charle! You're very special.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: August 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Kaylee's Accident definitely still with you - I have been waiting anxiously for this next installment and it did not disappoint - I can just feel all the emotions Brian is feeling, not the least of which is trepidation, wondering what Justin's reaction will be...as are we! awaiting the next chapter...and then that little farm life story that you have me hooked on - ;) loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hey, Charle! LOL - Now I have no idea which story you're referring to (wink, wink). Actually, I believe that is up right after I finish the next part of this one. I have a good idea where I'm heading with it, so hopefully it won't be too long before I update it. I'm glad you enjoyed this part - I will be updating it again very soon, since I have a lot of it already written. Thank you for all your support of my stories, Charle; that is so appreciated.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: December 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: The Talk absolutely everything about this chapter made me smile...it was SO worth the wait! Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle! I was just thinking about you.:) I hope that you are doing well, my dear. Thank you for reading and for the comments; I'm so glad that you liked it. I admit I was a little nervous about this one for some reason, I guess because Brian is OOC here. But I'm relieved that you liked it. Thank you again; I will get this one updated again just as soon as I can. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: November 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: First Date congratulations on topping 500 reviews! - and with such a sweet chapter, too! the date was perfect - and I love Brian's reaction to the girls efforts! really great story - fulfills every need of this unapologetic 'depth of love' addict loving life, Charle Author's Response: Hi, Charle! Thanks for your well wishes and for reading this latest chapter. It makes me happy to finally reach this milestone in one of my stories. I have truly grown to love Kaylee and Katie as part of this family now.;) I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I'll get this updated again just as soon as I can. Thanks again for the support, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
Why did Justin really go to New York, and who was responsible? And what did they hope to gain? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC Characters: Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 62 Completed: Yes Word count: 141920 [Report This] Published: June 01, 2011 Updated: October 15, 2011
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Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 this story just keeps getting better and better - so many facets - I am loving it!
loving life, Charle
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Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 I am loving this story - that is to say...I hate when our boys are apart, and I really hate when Lindsey manipulates Brian - it really makes me bristle - but your writing is enthralling, and always leaves me wanting more. I also love that it is updated so regularly - I read so very many stories at one time that it is difficult to keep the storyline in mind for stories that are updated infrequently. Can't wait for the next chapter... loving life, Charle
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Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 I really like Boot. It's often hard to accept a new character in such an established circle of friends - but once in a while a new friend really clicks with me, and this is one of those times. Plus, I have a feeling that this guy is going to help to bring Justin's unfortunate coke behavior to am much needed close! And I love the tie-in to Daphne. Well done!
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Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 uh-oh - that's not good - except maybe it will serve as the catalyst for Brian to come to the rescue - sure hope Justin is not hurt too badly - but just enough maybe to stop his free fall! very interesting story - anxious for more
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Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Even though Justin is hurt in this story, like Brian, I am just so relieved that nothing is life threatening. I am also thrilled that my boys are together, an Brian is realizing what he's done. Now, to see how Justin will react. With his history of cliff pushing with Brian, he probably won't have any trouble believing that's what happened, but forgiving might be a bit harder this time...we'll see. I really loved this chapter, I could actually feel Brian's emotions - excellent! loving life, Charle
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Date: June 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 very well written chapter - I really enjoyed every moment of it - and the dialog and resolutions make ssense in keeping with the characters - not, I can't wait for Justin to be feeling better, because these two are gonna' be hot! loving life, Charle
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Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 very good! This chapter answers questions, brings renewal for our boys - and it's hot to boot! - and now with Brian's new found open heart, brings us toward some really interesting possibilities - I love that Brian is hearing Justin - can't wait to see what comes next loving life, Charle
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Date: June 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 love it - everything I've always wanted someone to say to Lindsey - all here in one read! while some of it is driven only by this particular story - there is so much that hits the mark with her actions on the show - I could not be more thrilled that Brian finally sees her for who she is! can't wait to see what comes next - it's great seeing Brian and Mel working together for Gus' best interest! loving life, Charle When They Were Fags and Burning Bras (The Presidential Candidate and the Movie Star) by BrianaWriter Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 47]
Summary:
(In this story of a different era the (1970’s), Brian and Justin are in the closet. Brian’s the ambitious and hotshot Governor of Pennsylvania, with intentions of running for President; while Justin’s a renowned Movie Star struggling to make the transition from Child-Star into adult roles. And, Brian’s (teenage) son, Gus Kinney, has some serious relationship problems of his own. This story is about people in-love and the difficult time they have coping in a world that has little tolerance for their type of love. Note: In this story a straight couple is used as a sub-plot to help better define Brian and Justin’s relationship. To spell it out: Brian and his straight-son, Gus, are so much alike; only major difference is that Gus flows freely with his emotions, whereas Brian consistently attempts to suppress his. So, Gus’s relationship is used as a catalyst that would eventually persuade Brian to embrace his love for Justin. Warning: Lots of Condom Free Sex (however, was appropriate for the times) Disclaimer: All recognizable characters in this story do not belong to me. They belong to the QAF TV series. I just post here for entertainment purposes only. No monies are made by me and no copyright infringement is intended. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 55 Completed: No Word count: 126043 [Report This] Published: June 05, 2011 Updated: February 21, 2012
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Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: You Have Better Get Back Here On The Double! uh-oh - this is not going to go well - but yey I can't wait to read it - kind of like not being able to keep from looking at an accident can't wait to see what comes next loving life, Charle Author's Response: 4depthoflove, thanks so much 4 commenting. I'm so GLAD you're having fun right along with me. I put a lot in this story, and I think I've even surprised myself with all the fun I'm having writing it. Summary:
What Answer Will Brian Give to the Best Dressed Bird in Town?
Categories: Humor, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Romance, Thanksgiving Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4150 [Report This] Published: June 05, 2011 Updated: June 05, 2011
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Date: June 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Mr. Butterball Adorable! This one is so cute! I have to admit, though, that at times like this, Justin has so much more patience than I have ever had, or ever will, for that matter. I think Brian may have found himself with cranberry relish dripping over his head, much like the water he poured the first time he brought Justin home. lol - He really does just accept Brian as he is, doesn't he? Author's Response: Ha! Good thing you weren't around to instill some discipline in the boy instead of Justin - good idea about the relish, although I suspect Brian would have found some kinky way to use it later - LOL! He DID come in handy with the turkey, though, at least temporarily! Thanks so much for reading and especially reviewing - I really appreciate that my friend!:P Summary:
Five and a half times Brian didn't talk about his feelings and one time he did Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 3378 [Report This] Published: June 07, 2011 Updated: June 28, 2011
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Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 no let down here, my love - there is nothing hotter than Brian vulnerable to Justin as his dreams come true, Brian who finally has flung open his heart to Justin, accepting the love that was his all along - and offering it back - thanks for the great scene! Summary:
Justin watches the last vestiges of support crumble beneath his feet, sending him into freefall. He can only close his eyes and pray he’ll land somewhere soft. Categories: FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Drama, What If Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 107817 [Report This] Published: June 08, 2011 Updated: August 20, 2011
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Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: push Nicely done. Very well written, and quite a unigue perspective. I can't wait to find out more. - - - and...I never thought anything could make me think less of Craig! How can be so calloused towards his son at a time like this...but even more - how can you not have feelings for a child - any child - but especially your grandson. Yes, I think Craig has hit a new all time low. looking forward to the next chapter loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you! It's definitely a unique perspective for me, because I usually despise writing in first person. With vehemence. But this story just kind of demanded it. Craig... does not like things that don't fit in his vision of ideal household. He's been pissed about the Luke situation from the start (as we learn in this chapter), and while he doesn't hate the child, he hates what he stands for. He's also, in his own way, putting the wellbeing of Luke first, because in his mind children should of course be raised by two loving parents who are of proper age. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review. I'll be posting chapters every Wednesday, so keep an eye out for a new one around that time!
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Date: June 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: balance I am really enjoying this story, and am anxious to see what happens when the gang finds out about Luke. Justin has to know that it's not good for the baby to keep him cooped up in one room - and that will hopefully be what brings them out. I am so glad that he got some time with Brian, especially after the school scene. I can't for the life of me understand why a thoroughly horny guy would give a hand job to the man of his dreams, knowing there was no chance for payback. That could only leave him hornier than ever. Hope he gets away from the parents soon - neither of them has been loving, supportive or compassionate. I would expect that from craig, but Jen's detached coolness is a surprise. Can't wait to see what next week's installment brings loving life, Charle Author's Response: Justin does know it's not good for Luke to be cooped up all the time. If I could group the first couple of chapters of this story and give them a name, it would definitely be "Something's Gotta Give", because it's evident from chapter one that this is not a stable situation. What happens when something "gives", though, remains to be seen. As for Jennifer--I promise we'll get a bit of rationalizing from Justin later on about why she's so detached. Also, I think that Justin gave Brian that handjob because (a) he knew that it would keep Brian interested in him and (b) he wanted to express some kind of relief/happiness that Brian had come looking for him, but knew that Brian wouldn't like to hear it in words. Not that Justin consciously thought all that, mind you, but... Those would be his motives. Next week's installment brings... a tightening of the noose. You'll see. *g* Thanks for reviewing! It was a lovely, thoughtful review--my favorite kind! Summary:
A year has passed - yet their love remains Categories: Brian/Justin, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 953 [Report This] Published: June 10, 2011 Updated: June 10, 2011
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Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 sweet - this was a very nice read - thanks loving life, Charle Author's Response: It was one of those days - couldn't help myself - thanks for reading. Summary:
What if love was never a problem with Brian and Justin's relationship. An AU look at Brian and Justin. Chapters 1 through 6 have been replaced with new edited versions. Story content was not changed. Grammar, spelling and punctuation were changed to make the story easier t read. I hope you enjoy it. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 9307 [Report This] Published: June 11, 2011 Updated: April 22, 2016
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Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Didn't See That Coming well - that's certainly different - I'm intrigued - and you know that I'm a fan of Brian getting a taste of Kinney behavior aimed at him - will keep checking in to see where this goes!
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Date: June 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chris Hobbs this is a truly unique perspective - I haven't seen anyting even close to this AU before - I am really enjoying it - and of touces I can't wait until the next chapter!!! loving life, Charle
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Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Rules ncie - I really like that Brian Justin cuts his night with Chris short as soon as he hears of Brians needs, and also that Brian accepts his help - and the 'love scene' gives us plenty to start our imaginations running wild! - just hope that Justin's statements don't just reinforce Brian's opinion that he is not worth loving. - can't wait for these two to fullt realize that they are each what the other is looking for. loving life, Charle Summary:
Justin comes up with a creative way to get Brian to cuddle.....
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Romance, Halloween Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1294 [Report This] Published: June 11, 2011 Updated: June 11, 2011
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Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: These Movies Are Classics? very cute glimpse into 'a day in the life' for our boys! - clever loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Charle! I really appreciate that. Glad you liked it.:) Summary:
fuffy/porny drabble. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 97 [Report This] Published: June 14, 2011 Updated: June 14, 2011
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Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Hard. just goes to show that a little can say so much! well done Summary:
What if Brian had said something the night before the Rage party? Would it have made a difference? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1867 [Report This] Published: June 14, 2011 Updated: June 14, 2011
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Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 this was really good -well written - I like it alot! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Charle! Summary:
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance, Spoilers Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 521 [Report This] Published: June 18, 2011 Updated: June 18, 2011
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Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Wouldn't You Rather Cuddle? And that - for all who are playing along - is exactly how that shoulda'/coulda'/woulda' played out (at least for me)- I love it ... thanks - how did you know I needed a happy ending today? loving life, Charle Author's Response: I completely agree with you. thanks for the good review and I'm glad to give you a happy ending.
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This story starts a few months after Justin’s bashing. And, Justin is always reluctant to go to his regular therapy sessions, but something immediately changes that. disclaimer: Original characters and story belongs to the QAF series. No monies or made by me by posting here and no infringements are intended. HI ALL, LAST TWO CHAPTERS WERE ADDED TODAY CHAPTERS 56 & 57. THIS STORY IS FINALLY FINISHED AND THANKS ALL THAT STAYED WITH IT FROM BEGINNING TO END! And, a special thanks to all that commented frequently throughtout the story. Thanks again all readers. I hope you enjoy the ending. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 57 Completed: Yes Word count: 123316 [Report This] Published: June 20, 2011 Updated: May 20, 2012
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Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Therapy Was Never Like This Before... ok - ummm - I am a little confused - I am loving the doctor/pt possibilities for the boys - but am a little concerned that we are leaning towards a multiple personality arc - and I'm not sure about that at all... sure hope he is just speaking figuratively about the different aspects of Brian as a whole - we'll see where this goes loving life, Charle Author's Response: Huh-huh, we're see. Thanks so much 4 commenting 4depthoflove. Hav fun! Summary:
Gapfiller for episode 114. What does Justin ask for his birthday? We all want to know... well, here's the answer, according to me. PWP. Justin/Brian alternating POV. We all knew Justin was a top, well here's the start of that... and a threesome is involved. Erotic fun is had by all, of course! Join our favorite men in this steamy tail of gay sex. Stand-alone-ish. Meaning it is a stand alone story... but if you want a sequal, read Be Careful What You Wish For (coming soon). Reviews are always welcome. A/N: Thank you to my wonderful banner creater Jackie Mag... I accidently had this on Be Careful What You Wish For... it kind of fits, but it was meant for this one. Thanks D for your brilliance! :) Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Canon, Gap-Filler, Unsafe Sex, Birthday Fic Characters: Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 10187 [Report This] Published: June 21, 2011 Updated: June 21, 2011
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Date: June 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 wow - this is one to set aside ... anf read over and over and over again! thanks loving life, Charle Author's Response: Welcome... so glad you enjoyed it... it was hellafun to write! :) Summary:
Post-series, but AU after 121. Brian got the job in New York in season 1. Brian and Justin never expected to run into each other again... and they meet in the most unusual of places. Can they get back what they had? Do they want to? Thank you D... Jackie Mag... my awesome banner creator! Updated July 24, 2012... finally! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Song Fic, What If Characters: Cynthia, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 54723 [Report This] Published: June 21, 2011 Updated: July 25, 2012
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Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: I Create, Therefore I am this story is just absolutely delicious - and I anxiouisly await the next installment! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you again Charle for the review, I'm getting there.
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Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Well I’ll Be Damned more - more - please! loving life, Charle
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Date: July 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Justin gets an unexpected request wow - I want more, I need more -a vulnerable Brian is hot - and this is so beyond that. He really is totally and completely helpless where Justin is concerned, and no one writes it quite like you do! I have a feeling that this is going to get so hot it will sizzle, and may become one of my alltime must read again and again favs. looking forward... loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thanks for the review Charle... it totally makes my day when people are so happy with my stories. And I can tell you're really enjoying this, probably almost as much as I love writing it. And it so totally gonna get hotter! I love writing the story, but I love writing the smut as well, sometimes more, but not always! So glad you're enjoying it, though! Later, Laura :) xoxo
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Date: July 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Anywhere you go, I will follow oh - I so hope you have time to write - 'cause what I know will be next is the only fireworks that I want to see !!! - nothing else can quite compare! loving life, Charle Author's Response: You might be right about them fireworks! ... I'm am probably as anxious to write it as you are to read it, so it will be coming fast... no pun intended... or is it? :) Thanks Charle... Laura :) xoxo
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Date: July 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Just like the first time Thoroughly enjoyed this - didn't think anything could outshine the fireworks show I saw tonight - but this clearly outshines it by far! And, I have the delicous anticipation of getting to 'hear' Brian say the words Justin has waited for - telling him all the things we have longed for him to say - I can't wait! loving life, Charle
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Date: September 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Author's Note: My apologies, but this isn't a chapter... absolutely love this story - and although I certainly understand how RL get in the ay, I hope it's nor really months until we see them again - especially at this point they have reached - I am a sucker for head over heels in love and ridiculously romantic Brian - nothing is hotter - and his new 'let Justin take charge' attitude is just delicious! There is so much that can be explored here - how about once they have established that they want only each other - forever - Justin sweeps him off for a wedding of his dreams - Ibitha or The White Party or something else totally hot - but still they only want each other - awesome vows f rom the heart - lots of heat when they are alone later...and that's just while they are away - then there are tons of possibilities after they get home --- anxiously waiting... loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful and lengthy review (as reviews are concerned)... it always makes me deliriously happy! I love reviews. I love a ridiculously romantic Brian and take charge Justin, too. Although I think possessive, jealous Brian is pretty friggin' hot as well, but I knew Brian had it in him where his blond is concerned. I've written weddings before and I usually don't write any vows (cause it takes a while and my muse wants to skip the ceremony and head to the wedding night - :) )... however with this one, maybe I will... and I have to say, I like your thinking with a wedding in Ibiza or White Party... a few other things come to mind... oh the possibilities! ;) Thanks again for the support and the ideas. Cheers, Laura :) xoxo Summary:
Brian has found his weakness: Justin Taylor. Reference to episode 215. Brian's POV. Interal Monologue. R&R. Thank you to foreverbm on LJ for the banner!
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Canon, Spoilers Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1098 [Report This] Published: June 23, 2011 Updated: June 24, 2011
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Date: June 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: My Kryptonite ah - nothing better for me than Brian when he is realizing, and admitting - that Justin is the one who changes everything - who makes him break all is rules - that their love is the one thing that he wants enough to make the difference thanks for the sweet story - very nice first effort - keep writing! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you :) Summary:
Four and a half years post-series. Justin is in New York and has lost touch. He and Brian keep running into each other.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 69289 [Report This] Published: June 28, 2011 Updated: July 16, 2011
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Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: PART TEN + EPILOGUE This is a perfect ending to what for me was a great story, well written, well paced, and very satisfying. I really enjoyedit vvery much. Thanks! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PART ONE well - this is interesting - I am intrigued to see where this goes loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you. Still a long way to go. Summary:
This story started off as a ‘what if’ ... what if Brian hadn’t met Justin until sometime in Season Three? Which things would be different and which would be the same ... or brought about in a different way? How would Brian be different? Would he be better, or would he be worse? Would he still react to Justin in the same way if they were both a couple of years older?
Anyway, that was how it started; but then I had to supply a background for Justin that was canon to begin with, but ended up being quite different ... and then the whole thing turned into a kind of thriller. Well, I hope it did.
So I guess this is part what-if, part AU, part thriller ... but most of all, of course, a love story.
NOW COMPLETE! YAY! I hope you enjoy it. Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 157418 [Report This] Published: July 09, 2011 Updated: December 06, 2011
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Date: July 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I loved this chapter! There was just enough of the sarcastic wit to make Brian Kinney and the walls around his heart recognizable and familiar, with glimpses of warmth and affection that just have to make 'ya smile! Sitting on the sofa with Justin, watching a movie and laughing heartily - now that's hot! There is very little quite as sexy as Brian allowing life to bring him joy - whatever form it comes in. (wink wink) loving life, Charle
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Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 I have really been enjoying this story - and this chapter was positively delicious! I'm loving the combination of canon mixed with freshness, and I always love those moments of a tender Brian - nothing is hotter! loving life, Charle
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Date: September 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Can't tell you how much I am loving this story. The bits and pieces of canon that you hint at, all the while telling a new and completely unique story, full of intrigue and anticipation make this a must read! This story would be comletely enthalling for those who might not be familiar with all the details of the show (ig there are any of those around - lol - what an aswful thought) - but for all who know and love the boys and their story...well...I can't wait for the next installment! Looks like we might be finding out more of the clues soon, as well as fun with Brian and Hunter (that little hustler was always looking to find a way into the jeep - lol) - and possibly a reunion with Mikey as a result. Can't wait until Brian and Justin come face to face once again - there is bound to be sparks flying in more ways than one! Thanks so much for this story! loving life, Charle Author's Response:
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Date: September 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I am still loving this story. It has so many facets to it, both canon - and original - and I am just as anxious to see what happens next as I was at the beginning, a feat that only the best written long stories can claim for me. Well done - thanks for this story. loving life, Charle
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Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Absolutely loved this chapter! First of all, Brian going soft in the backroom is priceless, especially when it is because of it he comes to realize and acknowledge how much he misses Justin. I love that while he stays in character, with all his insecurities, fears and emotional walls, he goes to Justin, and lays his feelings out, leaving himself open and vulnerable. For me, Brian learning how to love, and let himself be loved is what makes this show irrestible. In this chapter, there is passion and fun amongst the sadness and grief, and it was all nicely written and thoroughly enjoyable to read. - thanks - This story has left me anxious for the next chapter since the beginning, and after more than 40 chapters, I find that has not diminished at all. Keep it coming! loving life, Charle Summary:
15 years later in the lives of Brian and Justin. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 2398 [Report This] Published: July 16, 2011 Updated: August 04, 2011
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Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 How fascinating! I love that we are getting a look down the road 15 years, like old friends we never lost contact with. I love that BJ is gay, the dads have so much to offer him and yet so much to be surprised by when these two react differently than they would have (or did). And I love that his initials are our two boys together. - Looking forward to more of this story! loving life, Charle Summary:
It's someone's birthday, but not any birthday so he is going to have a very special surprise. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5103 [Report This] Published: July 29, 2011 Updated: July 29, 2011
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Date: July 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Forever Young what a lovely thought - Brian and Justin together for eternity! Author's Response: That's what they deserve, isn't it? Thank you very much. Hugs.
Yoli Summary:
Cynthia Morris has just taken in her seventeen year old brother, who doesn't speak. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Hurt/Comfort, Romance Characters: Cynthia, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 20879 [Report This] Published: August 08, 2011 Updated: September 22, 2011
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Date: September 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 very nice chapter - makes me feel kind of naughty 'cause I feel like I am right there with them - love the tenderness of Brian and the excitement and awe of Justin - now...what will happen next... can't wait to find out loving life Charle Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Next chapter should be up tomorrow. Now that I have this chapter out of the way, I should be updating more quickly. <3 Summary:
Inspired by the song Lucy by Skillet. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Major Character Death Characters: Brian, Molly Taylor Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4483 [Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: August 15, 2011
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Date: August 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Hey Justin, I Remember Your Name very nicely written - it made me cry - and it made me smile - and it is just how I would hope it would have been had this happened! loving life Charle Author's Response: Oh thank you. Yeah, me too. It actually wasn't suppose to end the way I wrote it. I was going for it being like post 5.13 but somehow it ended up being the prom instead. But, I still love how it ended up turning out. Summary:
Brian finds Justin in the loft; battered, bruised and pregnant. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, MPreg, Rape, Unsafe Sex Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 13789 [Report This] Published: August 24, 2011 Updated: November 02, 2011
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Date: October 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 kind of partial to Finley, and of course Gale - but the one I like best was not chosen - Gavyn - it's my son's name - and sounds great with Taylor Kinney I think.
by the way - loving the story - thanks loving life, Charle Author's Response: I like the name Gavyn, but I wanted names that are not that common I guess? Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3 Summary:
This AU story supposes that Brian comes to his senses about his feelings about Justin before he does in the actual series. It takes up where Justin is ending his trip to L.A. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 5718 [Report This] Published: August 26, 2011 Updated: August 26, 2011
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Date: July 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Golden Ceremony this is absolutely beautiful - I had no new chapters to read - so I started looking back and stumbled upon this one...this chapter is a treasure - and I a enjoying this story...a lot! Charle Author's Response: Dear Charle, It's great to hear that you're enjoying it so much. I know Brian is OOC from the start in that he declares his love, but it's just a story that I had to work out... my muse needed me to write it. Thanks so much for the beautiful words. - Jackie Summary:
Many stories have been written about how Brian and Justin might start a family. My story takes place after they get married and are living in Britin. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3202 [Report This] Published: August 27, 2011 Updated: August 27, 2011
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Date: July 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 very heartwarming - it brought tears to my eyes... love it Charle Author's Response: Dear Charle, It's difficult trying to imagine how B & J could/would have a child. (I refuse to write or even read m-preg.) This seemed to be a natural way for our boys to have that happiness in their lives. I probably teared up writing it. :) Thanks so much, - Jackie Summary:
This story starts like the show but after Justin and Brian meet, their first night together changes everything. I created a love for Emmett. I loved him so much in the show. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Ethan, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death, MPreg, Out of Character, Romance, Unsafe Sex Characters: Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Ethan Gold, Gus, Justin, Rodney, Vic Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 57809 [Report This] Published: August 27, 2011 Updated: September 12, 2011
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Date: September 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I love this story so much that I just read chapters 1 through 9 in one sitting. What a lovely way to spend a day off! Sure love Brian in love - you portray this couple so sweetly that it satifies my craving for deep heartlfelt love between these two. The surprise twist of a twin is a wonderful surprise - and of course how could Daphne not fall in love with him... Also, I love when Emmett - the most underrated character on the show - gets love and happiness, he deserves it - he is always a loyal and trustworthy friend. Then - Mikey and Ethan - nice to see them both get what they deserve - not a fan of either character. Also love that they are all together under one roof - and I'm ure Daphne won't be far behind... this story has every element to pull these characters together and keep them contentedly living life far into the future thanks so much fo writing - will go back and find some of your older works when I have a chance loving life Charle Author's Response: Charle: Thanks for the wonderful comment. I loved writing this story because I wanted Brian and Justin with a special kind of love. I aggree with you that Emmett was unrrated in the show. I lvoed his episodes with George and their special love. That's what I wanted here. How can you not have a family under one roof. I also couldn't leave a cliffhanger. So that is why I posted the two chapters. It won't be long before this ends. Thanks again. Jane
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Date: September 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 very nice - I enjoyed this whole story - and this last scene was so tender that I loved it right up to the end. Thanks! loving life Charle
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting Charle. I had a wonderful time writing it. I might have a sequel in the future. Summary:
Brian has just become the single father of a daughter he didn't know about. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Hurt/Comfort, MPreg Characters: Brian, Cynthia, Jennifer Taylor, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 8630 [Report This] Published: September 05, 2011 Updated: September 20, 2011
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Date: September 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is certainly a fresh perspective, totally different from anything I have read on any site. Your plot bunnies truly lead to unique and exciting storylines. Looking forward to more...my mind is contemplating so many possibilities, and I can't wait to see which (if any) of them are close to what you have planned for our boys. Enjoy your writing - thanks for sharing it. loving life, Charle
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you like my stories. I have so many other ideas that I can't wait to post but I don't wanna overload myself with having to update so many stories at once so I'm trying to pace myself with them. Yup, you'll have to wait and see if any of your possibilities pan out to what I have planned. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
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Date: September 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ok, I'm totally hooked - where is Justin - why would he ever leave his daughter? - what is September up to - and more importantly - who is behind it - and why? Very intriguing story - can't wait to see wherre you go from here! Nice pace, good storytelling. Thanks. loving life, Charle Author's Response: Why thank you. Some questions should be answered soon. <3 Summary:
Brian. Justin. And a baby. And not a bit of fluff in sight.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 65172 [Report This] Published: September 05, 2011 Updated: September 23, 2011
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Date: September 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: PART ONE wow - this sure caught me by surprise - and I am still wiping the tears away as I contemplate the possibilities - did Justin really deceive Brian and has known he is the father all along...maybe he just let her list him as the baby-daddy...what will this all mean for our boys...? Can't really say I am 'looking forward to more' - since I have no doubt that there will be more heartache and tears to come...but I am thoroughly intrigued to see where this story leads us! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Yeah, I really meant it when I said no fluff. On the other hand, if you like angst you're in the right place. Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
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Date: September 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: PART FIVE Well, the last line kind of made me chuckle, and took the edge off of my anger at Brian - at least a little. Good for you, Justin, to throw it back at him - what now - huh? Brian can afford Britin, and their lifestyle, and everything he has given the girls, and Justin and Mikey and Deb - he could afford a nanny - full time/round the clock - the baby would hardly be such a big adjustment for him or his precious freedom. So, now let him think of an alternative that isn't going to make him lose Justin anyway - because it is so hard on him. I really loved this chapter - the characters stayed so true to themselves, and I am absolutely thrilled that Justin chose Brian in this way - so that Brian can trust that he comes first in Justin's life. can't wait to see where you go next with this - thanks loving life, Charle Author's Response: Being first in Justin's life is very improtant to Brian. He was really doubting it for a while there. Also, Justin showing some spirit can never be a bad thing. Thank you.
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Date: September 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: PART EIGHT well - this chapter is delightfully clever - not only the way Justin kept Brian from being able to leave, but now we have Brian backed up against a wall, emotions (that he has never truly been in tune with) completely out of control, and the result is the one situation for Brian where he could hurt Justin and not care (or at least not be able to stop himself) - I have a feeling we may be about to see some old fashioned Brian 'fucking' Kinney - hmmmm - what comes next, and how do our boys find their way back to each other? - good job! - thanks loving life, Charle Author's Response: Delightfully clever? Thank you. That made me glow with pride. Let's see what Brian does next. He did try to warn Justin that it's not going to work. Summary:
This story imagines what could have happened after the end of QAF. I always imagined that Brian and Justin would somehow end up together though, and this is the best way I can see that happening. Re-posting of this story. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Cynthia, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 17191 [Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: January 08, 2012
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Date: September 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 Epilogue This story was just as delicious reading through it the second time, as it was the first - thanks so much for writing and posting - I love ridiculously romantic - and these boys love for each other can't be beat! loving life, Charle Author's Response: Dear Charle, I'm so happy that the story was as good the second time. I made a few minor changes, but mostly grammatical. Yeah, gotta love the romantic. Thanks! Jackie
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Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 Epilogue loved it! great job - this is an ending I find satisfying and exciting! I love to think of the bys together and living 'happily ever after' (ewww - don't tell Brian I said that - lol) loving life Charle Author's Response: Charle, Thanks. This is a story from a while back, but I wanted to get it 'out there' again. I think that the happy ending is the way to go with the boys. (I won't tell Brian.) - Jackie If I could just have one last dance with you... by AbigailKinney4life Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 24]
Summary:
"Brian wasn't about to let Justin's heart be stolen away from him, but he couldn't control the higher powers. No matter how much he tried." Ongoing story, reviews much appreciated x Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26005 [Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: October 29, 2011
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Date: September 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Don't drift away from me love love love this! thank you for giving me (us) the story that should have happened - Jennifer and Brian together waiting instead of Michael - Jen realizing how much they love each other and belong together - Brian leaving the walls down and accepting how much he loves Justin - did I mention I love it?!?!?!? lol can't wait to see if you stay true to my dream - or if your muse takes us somewhere else - if I get my wish, Justin will be blown away with love when he wakes up loving life, Charle
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it. And as for Justin getting showered with love..you'll just have to wait and see! Should hopefully be uploading the new chapter either tonight or tomorrow x
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Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: It belongs well - you should be proud of this chapter - it is amazing! I could feel the emotions running through each of them as I read, and the ending is just precious! - loved it! - thanks loving life, Charle Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot to me x Summary:
You can’t teach old dogs new tricks, but what do you do when an old trick starts barking up the wrong tree? Sometimes the past should stay where it belongs…or should it? Post-series. It’s been over a year since Justin went to New York. Could be read alone, but characters make more sense if you read What do you want for your Birthday? first. FINALLY UPDATED! I can't believe I haven't done anything with this in like a year... good grief. Finally got an inspiration and direction. FYI/Warning: There is Justin/Other here, but it's all m/m. Brian will make an appearance eventually, but will he get his way, or will he have a little competition on his hands? Another HUGE Thank you to my wonderful banner maker Jackie Mag. Thanks D... you're awesome! :) Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Drama, Jealousy, Justin/Other-Relationship, Romance Characters: Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 20095 [Report This] Published: September 07, 2011 Updated: November 05, 2012
Reviewer: 4depthoflove Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 so...I started off really wanting to hate this story - there can be no one for Justin but Brian - but then I read...and the concept is titillating how about Justin mentions to Brian that they met (Justin and Nicholas), and that nothing has happened but he can't promise that it won't Brian stews over it - pretending of course that he dooesn't care - and then books a flight for NY to see for himself if he still has a chance with Justin they all end up in bed together - Brian is totally jealous, but of course can't show it after that - who knows - they end up all three together for awhile, until Brian can't take it any more...and Justin has to choose more angst - more angst - Brian is hurt - Nicholas seems to have won - but the boys can never be kept apart forever loving life Charle
Author's Response: Hey Charle... first of all thanks for the detailed review, and second, thanks for the suggestions for the story line. I love it when readers have an idea where a story should go (I've thought that a few times about other stories and would have loved to be able to voice my opinion on plot). My muse was kind of going in the direction of something between Justin and Nicholas... and of course jealous Brian... cause who doesn't love a jealous/possessive Brian? :) Not sure how long that will last or how much angst there will be, but I like your ideas and, especially (of course, no surprise here) a revisit to the hot threesome they make. :) As with all my stories, Brian and Justin will always be together, and I believe in happy endings! When life gives me the time to write I will definitely keep your suggestions in mind. In fact I was inspired by a song for a new story... but now that I think about it, it would work perfectly in this story... it would totally fit possible angst and jealous Brian... and also be hot and steamy at the same time. Anyway, thanks again for the review and suggestions, and I will be finishing this story as soon as I get enough time. Cheers, Laura :) |
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A rewrite of the cuddle scene in the last episode of season five.
