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First of all, please let me apologize for the long delay in getting this story started. I encountered computer problems over a week ago and then was hit by health problems that have kept me from working on my writing for over a week. I'm doing better each day and hope to be back in the swing of things asap. Now on to this story. This is the sequel to Double Trouble and it will help you to understand the characters and their motivations if you've read DT first. Hopefully this one will stand up well on its own, however. This story picks up four years after DT ends. This time it is Gus and boyfriend Jason who are graduating from college and their sisters who are graduating from high school. The story will look back on the previous four years and then move on to their new lives together. Brian and Justin, still happily married, look with pride on the kids they helped move into adulthood together. I hope you will enjoy this continuation of their saga and remember that I welcome all comments. Many thanks to the genius work of Eka for the banner and my friend Pat for the beta work. Enjoy! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Hetero Sex, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, Romance, Unsafe Sex Characters: Brian, Gus, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 58082 [Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2009
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Date: May 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Graduation Day, the Boys Didn't you start a 3rd story in this series? I was going to re-read it one day, but wanted to wait until you completed it, but now I don't see it anywhere. Maybe I'm confusing this with something else, but I thought it might have been a BJ grandparent story... Author's Response: You are not confused, Kellydeer. I did indeed start a third story in this series which followed up on B/J as grandparents. Unfortunately, I had a number of serious issues to deal with in my real life for quite a long time, including health and family problems. As a result, after far too many months of not being able to work on two of my chapter stories...this being one of them...I pulled the story so that no one else would get into it and find it incomplete. I still have the finished chapters in my file and truly hope to get back to them someday. I've only recently started writing again, but am concentrating on a different couple (Agron and Nasir from Spartacus) for now. When I dp get back to the 'Double Trouble' story, I will only post it when it is completed so that there will be no danger of it getting stalled again. I do appreciate you asking and apologize for the long, long delay. Thank you so much. Grammy Summary:
Brian and Justin meet under different (but not too different) circumstances. The day they meet, Justin becomes pregnant.
Thanks so much to pannkakan for the banner! Categories: Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, MPreg, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 54597 [Report This] Published: September 06, 2008 Updated: January 22, 2010
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Date: September 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 (Pregnancy): Weeks 1-4 Now that you are finally back and working on completing your wonderful stories, I do hope you will complete this one. This was one of the first fanfics I ever read (years ago) and, needless to say, I was extremely upset to get to the last part and find it was a WIP. After this, I began paying close attention to the status of a fic before I started reading. I only read completed stories now, regardless of how good they sound, so I'm begging you...PLEASE finish this! :-) Summary:
Emmett saw Justin with Ethan, not Mikey. They have a chat.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Justin/Other-Relationship, Romance, What If Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 53 Completed: Yes Word count: 85431 [Report This] Published: March 09, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2014
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Date: October 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue: Camera Confessions Finally! One of the best authors...back in the saddle! So glad you decided to return. If I'd been forced to read one more fic about the "older, taller, hazel eyed, brunette ad exec" and the "younger, shorter, blue eyed, blond artist", I believe I would have hurled. Thank you for ix-naying the epithets that some other 'writers' use as often as "the, and, or but" and just getting on with an awesome and extremely engaging story. I am looking forward to reading each of your stories just as soon as you mark them complete. My only complaint is that I read much faster than you write! (LOL) So c'mon, c'mon, c'mon! Author's Response: You are too sweet! The warm and fuzzies are literally taking me over.
I have to be careful to change things up myself. There are things I have Justin and Brian do too often (quirking eyebrows, smiling million-watt smiles, rolling lips into mouths...). It's easy to fall into repetition, but I do try. I'm happy you noticed :-)
I'm going to be finishing my stories four at a time. I think Fawn.Armani, Buttercup and Enigma, How Sweet It Is, and Taylor will be finished sometime in December.
I'm glad you're on board for a sequel. I really do want to write one.
I have a lot of fun with chapter titles...that's one of my favorites. Summary:
Brian and Justin meet as children and become best friends and, later, roommates. Mikey is their closest other friend, and they (Brian and Justin) are both secretly in love with the other. (This will be as much a story about friendship as it is about romance, so Brian, Justin, Mikey, Ben, Brandon, Em, Ted, and Daphne will all be friends and all the same age (21). Lindsay and Mel are friends, too, but older, about 30.)
Thanks so much to pannkakan for the banner! Categories: Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 59 Completed: Yes Word count: 96382 [Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2014
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Date: September 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Our Morning Routine, Third Edition (Part 2) What a wonderful story, and not a single typo, misspelling, incorrect homophone, subordinating conjunction, subjective/objective pronoun to be found. How refreshing! Looking forward to reading all your others as you complete them. Hint: I've always wanted to read (a completed version of) Little Ray of Sunshine ;) Welcome back and please continue...quickly, as I can hardly wait!!! Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment!
Little Ray... hmmm. I'm doing Fawn.Armani, How Sweet It Is, Taylor, and Buttercup and Enigma until December ...then in January I'm doing Fools in Love, Reset, QAF Babies, and Just Another of Our Beginnings. But I can plan on working on Little Ray for the third set (starting in May or June). Summary:
Brian and Justin decided not to get married at the end of Season 3, rather than at the end of season 5, Babylon has not blown up-Mel and Lindz are sort of nice to Brian. Brian is only 30, rather than 33 and owns Kinnetik already. COMMENTS ARE LOVE!!!!!! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, MPreg Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 108849 [Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2014
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Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Thank God you're back! Author's Response: I posted this jusst for you.....I know it was short. Consider it a teaser.
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Date: January 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 Hi! Me again!!! Just wanted to tell you I love this & offer you encouragement to PLEASE keep writing this story *whispers* 'quickly'. I'm a very fast reader!!! LOL! Author's Response: I promise I am trying to finish but I have really lost my muse. Im going to go back and re read some of the chapters and see if that inspires me. It's hard to seek inspiration from other stories because there are not very many Brian mpregs that seem realistic to me. But I really am trying to get back to this. Typo's and all;)
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Date: March 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yesssss...You ROCK!!! Bring it on girlfriend. So glad to see you back :)
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Date: May 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 Oooooh! I always get such a warm & fuzzy feeling when I see you have updated this story...thankyouthankyouthankyou!!! Author's Response: :) not much more I can say really. I may be slow at updating but I never give up ;)
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Date: July 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I am sooooo ready for an update...you're killin me girl! Summary:
Justin moves back in with his parents after his trip to New York beginning a series of events lead him to some life altering decisions. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 60970 [Report This] Published: July 18, 2010 Updated: October 28, 2011
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Date: April 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I am currently reading 'Life Altering' and enjoying it enough to look for your other QAF stories. I came across this one & was wondering if you plan on completing it (I never begin reading a WIP). Hope you continue, as I like your style of writing! Summary:
 A new client hires Justin to be his wedding planner. Only Justin didn't plan on something else happening…Brian/OC, Justin/OC; eventual Brian/Justin.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 121736 [Report This] Published: January 01, 2011 Updated: March 18, 2011
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Date: May 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: It's Not Going to Happen! Um...Atlas held up the world, not Midas :) Author's Response: I'll get that fixed. Not an expert on mythology obviously. Hope it didn't detract too much from the story. ~Kim
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Date: May 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: It's Not Going to Happen! Wow, Kim...That was a quick response and no, it didn't detract from the story at all, but I know I would want to know in order to correct it so I figured you would as well. Great story! Author's Response:
I do. (Pardon the pun). 😉 I'm not anywhere that I can correct it, but will when I get home. Thank you for letting me know.
Summary:
Sequel to "The Wedding Present." Brian continues to explore his evolving relationship with his biological father and grandparents as Fin O'Connor prepares his run for governor with his own partner by his side. *THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE*
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Real Life Issues, Romance, Violence Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Hunter, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted Challenges: None Series: Fin and Tony Universe Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes Word count: 537383 [Report This] Published: March 19, 2011 Updated: August 11, 2016
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Date: August 14, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings I think you bean the "G" hotel, unless I'm mistaken. Author's Response: No, it was intentional, since I wasn't sure it would be wise to use the real hotel's name. But I hope that doesn't detract from your enjoyment of the story, and I appreciate you favoriting this story and some of my others. Thank you. ~Kim Summary:
**Not a new story - chapters had to be reloaded due to a system problem.**~Admin
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Unsafe Sex Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 67756 [Report This] Published: April 16, 2011 Updated: March 16, 2015
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Date: May 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words... Damn! Please, please, please finish this story :) Author's Response: It's continued in my story Metamorphosis… Hope you enjoy... ~ Kathleen
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Date: May 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Three Little Words... You rock! Thank you!!! *off to read* :) Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it... ~ Kathleen Summary:
Justin watches the last vestiges of support crumble beneath his feet, sending him into freefall. He can only close his eyes and pray he’ll land somewhere soft. Categories: FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Drama, What If Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 107817 [Report This] Published: June 08, 2011 Updated: August 20, 2011
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Date: September 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: twist I usually don't review unless a story is exceptional & I have to say...yours is!!! I love the way you keep the characters 'in character' and the fact that you can spell, punctuate, and demonstrate the correct usage of words & tenses (unlike too many authors). I just want to encourage you to keep writing for this fandom (as it is the only thing I read these days)! Thanks for this story!!! Summary:
***Featured Story for October 2017***
For 300 years, Brian Kinney has lived a life of loneliness and unhappiness. That is, until he meets a certain blond angel by the name of Justin Taylor. But not all is as it seems with this ray of Sunshine. Now, Brian is bound and determined to find out just what makes this boy so special. Even if it means consorting with his fellow immortals across the states. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, TRUE BLOOD, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Sookie/Eric, Brian/Justin, Supernatural, Cross Over, Jealousy, VAMPIRES! Characters: Brian, Eric, Justin, Sookie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 45440 [Report This] Published: July 27, 2011 Updated: October 01, 2017
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Date: October 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: The Immortal One Hi! I just started reading this story & I have to say, I can already tell you are a MAAAHHHVELOUS writer and I love this plot line. God! I really wish I could write. I've had so many great ideas, but unfortunately I just can't seem to flesh out a story. This is why I am so thankful there are such talented people as yourself!!! Hope to see much more from you in this fandom!!! Author's Response: Hello Kellydeer, dahling! :) Thank you so very much for the compliment and for reviewing!! I'm thrilled that you like it so far :) *hugs* -Louchelle Summary:
Brian thinks he has lost Justin in the bombing, not realizing that he has unexpectedly moved to New York. For the next four years they live their lives apart. They meet again and realize that its far from over between them...But can they fix the mistakes of the past and find their way to a future together? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Drama, Romance, What If Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 97837 [Report This] Published: September 25, 2011 Updated: October 14, 2013
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Date: September 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A New Place Oooh! This plot sounds intriguing! As soon as it is completed & posted (so I am sure it won't be abandoned), I will begin reading it, so...hurry up! :P Author's Response: Thank you for your response! The story is almost complete. I am actually working on the last chapter at the moment, so it's safe for you to start reading - it's a long one! :)
Cheers,
Vin
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Date: May 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Yet Another "Later"... For the love of God...please continue this story. I've been hanging by a thread forever. I'd also love to read your sequel to 'Persistence of Memory'. Such a great story!!! Hugs, Kelly
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Date: October 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A New Place Good Lord in heaven! So glad you're back!!!! Summary:
Justin is off to New York, post series. Will Brian see him again? How can they be happy living in two different cities? This is another possible continuation of their lives post-series. Categories: Toppy! Justin, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: Gus, Justin, Lindsay Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 16849 [Report This] Published: October 08, 2011 Updated: October 08, 2011
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Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 Beginnings Wonderful story & I agree with you about Brian bottoming for Justin. I've always loved that because that just expresses how much he loves him. I personally would like to see a story where they share those roles more equally and that Brian expresses his desire to bottom MORE because he realizes he loves it when it's Justin, so please keep writing your great stories & keep this in mind...hint hint! Author's Response: Summary:
Justin Taylor has dreamt about the same man all his life. The man that even after death came back for him.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Romance, VAMPIRES! Characters: Ethan Gold, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 30243 [Report This] Published: November 02, 2011 Updated: April 24, 2012
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Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Violin Sounds intriguing...waiting for more! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the review! I'm so glad you gave it a try! I should be able to update this with another chapter tomorrow. Thanks again for your encouragement!:) Summary:
Featured story for March 2013
After 513 Brian and Justin keep things going long distance for almost a year. Then one fateful night, at a family gathering at Deb's, a comment made by someone in the family throws everyone and everything into a tailspin. After a horrible argument the boys split up for good, severing all ties, and the family is forever fractured. Twelve years later, a 17 year old Gus finds photographs of Brian and Justin together and goes on a quest to find out what happened between the two in the hope of mending the ties that bind them all together. Enter various beloved characters from the original show that tell him their sides of the story. ~*~*~*~ Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Drama, Romance, What If Characters: Debbie, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 32167 [Report This] Published: November 11, 2011 Updated: March 22, 2013
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Date: November 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Photographs & Other Things “Gus...I want you to kiss me... I want you to kiss me like they kissed in ‘Casablanca’... I want you to kiss me in black and white...” What an absolutely amazing line! I love it!!! And I also agree that modern Hollywood has lost the art of a truly amazing, fully clothed kiss! You go girl! You are such an amazing storyteller & I hope to see many more wonderful B/J tales from you in the future!!! Author's Response: Thank you kellydeer. I am so glad you liked that scene. It's a favorite of mine. Cheers, Vin
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Date: November 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue OK...I understand your reasoning for ending the story the way you did, but seriously...a sequel has to be forthcoming or I just can not go on any longer. Absolutely wonderful...you must now give us the journey of B/J's epic reunion! Author's Response: Thank you so very much Kellydeer, Althought I didn't originally intend to write a sequel, now I am seriously thinking about it. I hope I'll be able to come up with an interesting enough plot and we'll see. Thank you again for reading, reviewing and supporting my story! Cheers, Vin Summary:
NOW COMPLETED! Brian's pain management tactics spiral out of control and Michael and Justin put their heads together to try and figure out what went wrong. In uncovering the truth, all of Brian's secrets are revealed and Justin comes to realize just how in the dark he is about Brian's life. While helping Brian through his current struggles he must delve into his past and their shared history in order to cement their future. Takes place three years after the end of the series. *Disclaimer: These characters are the property of Cowlip. I have no intention of ever profiting from these stories.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Rape Characters: Blake, Debbie, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 33150 [Report This] Published: February 03, 2012 Updated: February 14, 2012
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Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Part One I truly enjoyed this story & plan on reading the others in this 'verse. You managed to portray everyone in character, but also allowed believable growth that would have taken place over the years. I feel for you and what you must have gone through with your cancer, but at the same time, applaud you for continuing to fight! I can only hope that you are truly cancer free & wish you the best of health in the future. I do hope to see more full length stories from you & will certainly be checking back often! Thanks for this story...more please??? Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm doing okay, its a struggle but I live life somewhat normally :) I have some epilogue/continuation stuff that I'm working on--mostly fun stuff, nothing heavy. Thank you for reading and for writing xo Summary:
AU past the pilot. Brian and Justin go their separate ways after their first night together, both thinking that that was it for them. Fate, however, has other plans and keeps throwing the boys together around the same time once a year. Will they listen to Fate and to their hearts, or will they go their separate ways in the end? ~*~*~*~*~ Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance, What If Characters: Daphne, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 63783 [Report This] Published: March 03, 2012 Updated: July 02, 2012
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Date: May 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue C'mon, where did you go??? You are too gifted a writer to stop now! Summary:
What if it was Brian's first time when Justin topped? One shot. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 977 [Report This] Published: August 18, 2012 Updated: August 18, 2012
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Date: August 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey...just wanted to be the first to comment. That was really cool & you kept them very much in character. I'd love to see a really long story by you...whatdaya think?
Author's Response: Yes, I like it when you keep them pretty strickly in characters even though it can be hard especially with Brian! But that's why I prefer to write short fics so they won't go side ways ^_^ Summary:
After achieving success in New York, Justin is called back to Pittburgh to take his place as Prince among the hybrids (part werewolf, part vampire) , however must rule beside his estranged father. What happens when Craig's peace offering is something personal?
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Craig Taylor, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 151173 [Report This] Published: September 12, 2012 Updated: March 08, 2013
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Date: February 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: More Toppy!Justin is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: I've always enjoyed toppy! Justin too!! Summary:
Here's a ghost story for those of you who enjoy a little shiver up your spine at this time of year. This fic is set about two years post series. Justin is back from New York and the first thing he does is to find a new studio. It seems perfect for him ... so why do all his friends feel so uncomfortable there? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 24519 [Report This] Published: October 22, 2012 Updated: November 01, 2012
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Date: November 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just finished reading this story & I loved it! I love all your stories & your characterization is always dead on perfect...thank you so much. Hope to see another VERY long story from you soon (maybe same length as Running?) Pleeeeze???? Author's Response: I'm working on the sequal to Running right now! I have several ideas about which way to take it, I just need to decide which one ... Thank you for all the lovely comments, they're very much appreciated.
Summary:
Brian unexpectedly becomes a father at the age of 16. What happens 16 years later when a certain 18-year-old blond unknowingly attracts the attention of both father and son? Will Brian sacrifice his son's love for another's? **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE** *BANNER AND STORY IDEA BY STAR-SHINE GREEN*
Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Minor's Sexuality, Romance Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 127715 [Report This] Published: November 29, 2012 Updated: January 17, 2014
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Date: March 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Movie I thought the first place Justin saw Brian was at Woody's the night before his first day of school at St. James... Author's Response: Hi, Kelly - it was. This was their first 'official' date, however. Not quite sure what you are asking (?). Would be glad to respond if you want to clarify it for me. I hope in either case you're enjoying the story. (?) Mika, my co-writer and I, appreciate the feedback. ~Kim
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Date: March 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Movie In the flashback sequence, Justin is thinking of the first time he saw Brian and it was at Babylon. The flashback also alludes to it being the night before he was to begin school, so I thought it might be a discrepancy in the story...no biggie, and yes I'm enjoying this story muchly! I think it's a good collaboration. Keeps things from being too sweet. :) Author's Response: Hi, Kelly - thanks for the followup note. I see what you mean now. I think that was supposed to be before the two actually met face-to-face at Woodys; perhaps Justin was at Babylon initially and noticed Brian then. But I could see why they might look like a discrepancy. One of the hazards of co-writing a story, I guess.;) I'm glad it's not affecting your enjoyment of it, however. It was a challenge to co-write with someone in a different country/time zone, so not sure if I would do it again. But it was an interessting endeavor! Thank you for letting Mika and I know that you are enjoying the story. We appreciate the feedback. ~Kim and Mika Summary:
***Featured Story for August 2018***
Thank you, Kim, again, for providing me with a fantastic banner! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Sci-Fi Characters: Brian Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 27000 [Report This] Published: March 30, 2013 Updated: August 06, 2018
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Date: April 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was so awesome! I had a grin on my face & laughed throughout the whole story :) I would so looooove a sequel, pretty please! Author's Response: I am so glad you liked this and that it made you laugh!! I'm considering a sequel...still in the works in my head lol we'll see!!! :) Summary:
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Anti-Lindsay, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hetero Sex, Humor Characters: Brian, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: Body Swap Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 5517 [Report This] Published: April 14, 2013 Updated: April 17, 2013
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Date: April 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 PROSTATE...not prostrate. Two entirely different meanings. Author's Response: Thanks. My bad. Summary:
Post 513 - Justin lives in New York with his son Bryson. Brian still lives in Pittsburgh and is extremely close to Gus. Brian and Justin haven't spoken to one another since Justin left with Ethan 18 years ago. Although time changes many things in life, there are some things that time can never change. When fate conspires to bring them together again, will history be rewritten? Or will history simply repeat itself? Ready or not, whatever may happen, the time has come. Categories: Family, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Abuse, Angst, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Justin/Other-Relationship, Minor Character Death, Romance, What If, Alternate Universe Characters: Brian, Ethan, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 40969 [Report This] Published: May 02, 2013 Updated: June 18, 2013
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Date: May 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Time Changes Everything Hi! I just skimmed over the beginning of your story and it looks very promising! Can't wait until it's complete. I'll begin reading it then :) Author's Response: Hello! (: Well, thank you very much for the sweet compliment! I definitely understand you not wanting to read until its complete. If I get hooked on a story its extremely difficult to wait for the author to update with a new chapter! Unfortunately I think this might take me quite awhile to write. I have many ideas and don't see mysef writing quickly and updating as often as some authors do. Thank you for leaving me a comment! (: M. Summary:
***Featured Story for September 2018***
Begins 2 years after 513. Justin has moved back to the Pittsburgh area, and he and Brian are established partners. Life is full of changes. There will be multiple chapters and additional characters. Banner by Marny Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama Characters: Brian, Jennifer Taylor, Joan Kinney, Justin, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters Challenges: None Series: Together Forever Chapters: 100 Completed: Yes Word count: 457475 [Report This] Published: November 15, 2013 Updated: September 02, 2018
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Date: July 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 OK...I was going to wait until this story was tagged as completed until I started reading it, but it just kept going and going and going... Anyway, I figured, as long as it was, to be sure by the time I got to the end it would be completed...not so. Well, now I don't ever want it to end! Damn! I love me some Mikey & Lindsay bashing and I have to say...nobody can drag it out quite like you!!! Love it! Love it! Love it! My only complaint is that I can read faster than you can write LOL! Please quit your day job & write ALL DAY LONG! We'll send donations! :) Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Always happy to hear from a new reader. Happy you are enjoying the story and want it to continue. I still have lots of ideas for storylines. Wasn't really certain the "drag it out" was a good thing but since it was followed bu "Love it..." I am going to take it as a compliment. Thanks for taking time to leave a reviews since I LOVE getting reviews!!! Bill
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Date: July 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 Oh, "drag it out" is definitely a good thing. It hate when other writers let Mikey and Lindsay off the hook too easily. This makes for a much juicier story, especially when you like the "Mikey/Lindsay bashing" as much as I do! Author's Response: good to know. I hope I live up to your expectations. Bill
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: August 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Ha ha! That "Dorothy's friend" comment was just too damn funny! Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed that little witticism. Thanks for letting me know!!! Bill Summary:
When Justin is rendered hopelessly comatose after yet another life-altering accident, doctors are forced to employ the sole useful treatment option they have. Only thing is: Brian doesn’t exactly think that vampirism counts as a “life saving measure.” With his lover’s damaged memory, strange new social circle, and downright bizarre biological changes to contend with, will Brian be able to bring Justin back to what they once had? Will Justin even want it? A story about love, loss, knowing what you want and exactly how far you'll go to get it. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY Characters: Brian, Emmett, Justin, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 128821 [Report This] Published: January 07, 2014 Updated: May 14, 2014
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: May 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Again Just finished reading this story and I have to say...I was pleasantly surprised! I thought this would probably be some of the "same old, same old"; however, your approach was unique and engaging. I especially liked much of your dialogue and laughed out loud at quite a few witty phrases!
If I may, as an editor, offer just a bit of constructive criticism? The use of epithets can be very distracting to the reader. I always tell authors it is okay to describe the character as blond (male) blonde (female), blue-eyed, tall, etc. with the introduction of the character, but after that, let it go. It is quite alright and preferable to most readers to just see the characters referred to by name or a pronoun (he, she, him, her) rather than an overabundance of 'the dark-haired man', 'the shorter man', and so on.
Overall, I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed your story and look forward to reading your new one when it is complete. I predict you will be a very popular author on this site. Good luck in your future writing endeavors! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I admit that I do use "the ______ man" type epithets a lot. I'll have to watch as I write and see if that needs to be tempered a bit (like my use of commas does, lol). Thanks for pointing that out, I'd never thought of that. Summary:
An unexpected and transformative trip arises when Brian discovers a forgotten tie to the old country. His surprising lineage, and the small town that falls into his hands because of it, will be the catalyst for an adventure that he never expected, and will certainly never forget. It will be: the Kilkenny Inheritance. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Off the Beaten Track Challenge 2014 Characters: Brian, Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 70409 [Report This] Published: May 20, 2014 Updated: August 23, 2014
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: July 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 "'Brian fucking Kinney'; it's your biggest account." See, this is why I like your stories! That is a very original line. Perfectly phrased and perfectly executed! By the way...much more enjoyable without the overabundance of epithets! Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Hey I love getting reviews that point out which specific lines people liked. Thanks for that compliment. I had never considered my use of epithets before until you left that review a while ago. I soon realized that omg!!: you were right! I was glad but a little horrified I'd been doing this for so long, and even though it took some work at first to temper the urge, I'm now in the habit of not doing that. Thanks because I truly consider your comment as having made me a better writer :) Summary:
Brian and Justin have to say good bye when an opportunity takes Justin to Europe. Even if their love is the love of a lifetime, they have to move on. This story is Brian's journey, with his friends, his family and more...Post Season 5. Sequel of "Choices," which should be read first. Warning: Brian emotionally involved with another man
A special thanks to Marny for the new, amazing/beautiful/incredible banner she created for me. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Justin/Other-Relationship, Real Life Issues Characters: Ben, Brian, Cynthia, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted Challenges: None Series: Choices and Consequences Series Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 160452 [Report This] Published: June 30, 2014 Updated: January 29, 2015
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: September 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue I am always so wary about reading non B/J stories, but in this instance I am so glad I did! Absolutely beautiful! Kim did an amazing job as beta and I enjoyed it so much more after she took over (only because I am a grammar freak!) I can only imagine how difficult it is, though, to write in a language that is not native to you. I would never even attempt it, so kudos to you! You are an extremely talented storyteller & I do wish you would complete Entwined, as I am now dying to read another of your amazing stories.
Thank you for this amazing & heartwarming adventure! Author's Response: I'm really happy that you liked it. And of course, this story wouldn't have been so good without Kim. She had been a wonderful help and support all along. Writing in English was a real challenge, and I perfectly understand why you enjoyed it better after the first chapters. I have troubles to read them myself LOL. It is the first story I have ever written, and writing it in English was completely insane. But I'm so glad I did. Thank you for the compliment and your feedback, it means a lot :) Summary:
Marilyn has five guilty pleasures: 1. A good romance novel
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Justin/Other-Relationship Characters: Brian, Emmett, Justin, Mysterious Marilyn, Ted Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 53680 [Report This] Published: February 08, 2015 Updated: July 09, 2015
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: July 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 I honestly laughed until I thought I'd pee myself! “Now, here. Take my hand. Let’s skip. It feels incredible, Ted. Trust me." Summary:
All true love is absurd. Those who judge any kind of love are those who have never ben able to live the absurdity of love. *The story is now complete!*
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Humor, Justin/Other-Relationship, MPreg, Out of Character, PLOT BUNNIES Characters: Ben, Brian, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Hunter, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 17952 [Report This] Published: May 02, 2015 Updated: May 30, 2015
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: June 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue: My true love is you. Oh my lord! Well...this was just 50 shades of WTF? But can't say you didn't warn us. I read the synopsis and normally wouldn't EVEN, but it was like a multi-car pileup I just couldn't ignore. Needless to say, so glad it was only a nightmare!!! Now I'll be able to sleep tonight! :) Author's Response: Wow! I loved the "50 shades of WTF" LOL !!! I believe you can say that. I liked to know you could not help but read my story. Could not avoid it. As an author, it is very important to me. Thank you for letting me know about your impressions of the story. Summary:
A continuation of the Brian and Justin story, post 513. A viewpoint on how their characters and relationship would have progressed and evolved over time. Characters are as Canon as possible, although there are bits of 'quirk', here-and-there.
THIS IS NOT A WIP! ADDITIONAL CHAPTERS WILL BE POSTED REGULARLY. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Carl, Cynthia, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Ted Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 64115 [Report This] Published: June 19, 2015 Updated: July 21, 2015
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: July 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I read this because it was tagged as completed, but when I got to the end I realized it was a cliffhanger...not completed at all... :( Author's Response: Thank you for reading and your feedback! The story is complete, however, I am posting the individual chapters one at a time. The next chapter will be posted very soon!
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: July 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh ok, but on this site when an author tags their story as complete, it means they have completed posting it, not completed writing it. You can post that fact in your notes... Summary:
Gapfiller for Brian and Lindsay's conversation in 4-11 Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Bdsm, Bottom Brian, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Toppy! Justin Characters: Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1581 [Report This] Published: December 20, 2015 Updated: December 20, 2015
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: December 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Um, that was hot! Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. ~Lorie~ Summary:
Lindsay gets what she deserves. Michael reappears. Brian and Justin just try to hold it all together. Categories: Alternate Universe, Angst, Anti-Lindsay, Humor, Violence Characters: None Challenges: None Series: Spirit Guides Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 18816 [Report This] Published: April 26, 2016 Updated: April 26, 2016
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: April 28, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I totally spewed Mt. Dew thru my nose while reading this (that shit really has a sting when exiting thru the nasal passages, but damn!) So freaking funny!!! "The spell bound clerk promptly fainted when the fashionable thing grabbed a sample swag bag and left a fresh turd on the glass counter display case as a thank you tip for services rendered. Lindsay was pleased that at least someone in this mall could spot quality clientele." Author's Response: I tried so hari am so glad you liked it. Humor is my greatest motivator to write these stories. |
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