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Real name: Fran Status: Member Member Since: October 12, 2009 Website: Beta-reader: Stories by delvalmom
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***Featured Story for June 2018*** Brian and Justin try to cope with life apart - with the marriage that did not happen and the love that would not die Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other-Relationship, Romance, Violence Characters: Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 784049 [Report This] Published: August 28, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2018
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Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 whew! just caught up after falling behind by quite a few chapters and I'm sorry I caught up because I want more-lol! absolutely superb!!
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Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Excellent chapter...wonderful way to end it. Praise from La Kinney is always earned indeed! So, Turnage is thinking that Brian will be his masterpiece...that may end up being true...but it's doubtful the mona lisa gave DaVinci as much shit as Brian is going to give Turnage. I was bothered by Justin's absence until you mentioned where he was, and I was immediately suspicious because it was such a poor excuse...looking forward to that. I'm sure he also needs to make sure his family is safe as well. I like the addition of Lindsay's father into the mix, and since you are being much more sympathetic to Lindsay than I usually feel, it's good to give her an additional ally. Believable dynamice between them too. The gang in Brian's room...sigh...you ripped a scene right out of the serie's book. Behaving badly with little regard to who overhears things was always a pet peeve of mine. Not only because they were told Brian was no longer in a coma which means he could be listening to what was being said around him, but just the petty meaness in general. You made a good point in an earlier response that even to the serie's end, so many "friends" had to gloat a little at Brian's expense. Cynthia is the perfect POA and it makes total sense that he would trust her so implicitly. She was the most constant presence in his life when you think about it, and she has no hidden agenda in making these decisions for him. Thought-provoking as always...thanks for writing this lovely fic.
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Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Ouch! Painful but not surprising...Brian had to go find the effing Cliffs of Dover this time, didn't he? But, I doubt Justin will be fooled for long, and he just may take matters into his own hands to call Brian's bluff. As if I believed for a minute that you'd give us Sunshine & flowers already!! Cynthia continues to be a delight. Lindsay was a little annoying falling apart and needing Brian to comfort her...again. All in all, moving things along nicely! Thanks for the Britin flashback though!! And thanks for another enjoyable (but sad) chapter. Fran
Author's Response: Thank you, Fran. And you are SOOO right. I don't think I've ever written sunshines and flowers in my life, because I just don't find it interesting. If this was Cinderella, I'd have been bored after the first act. Life is hard and filled with pain and betryal and hardship. The kind of love that deserves to go on and grow is the kind that comes through all that and triumphs in the end. Hope you continue to follow along. CYN |
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