Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Penname: balrogtweety [Contact]
Real name: Jane
Status: Member
Member Since: October 01, 2009
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I love reading and writing QaF.  I'm a divorced woman with 2 grown children.  I just became a mother-in-law this summer (2009) and a grandmother this spring (2012).  I have been writing and reading slash for 7 years. All the banners you see on my stories are done by me.
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Reviews by balrogtweety
 
Summary:

PLOT BUNNY - JUDY UHRICH


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37762
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: March 12, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This story was the absolute greatest.  It made me laugh with the kids and their fathers.  Great work.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review

 
Summary:

written for a friend who was in crisis at the time


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Hetero Sex Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3250
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: March 12, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Stand Alone

This was great.  What a way to forget and remember love.



Author's Response:

Thank you - this was written many years ago to make a friend who had a love problem feel better.

 
Summary: Feature

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A Featured Story for October-Halloween 2012

A young girl is new to town and at the instance of her parents is trying to make friends but in this town there is an initiation of sorts before you can be one of the cool kids. You have to spend the night in ‘The Haunted Manor’. When Sara walks up to the big beautiful old house with the sign that reads Britin what will she find?

Warnings: Brian and Justin, Other Canon Characters, Original Male and Female Characters, References to Suicide, Child Abuse, References to Child Abuse, Violence, NC-17, AU, Read at the risk of being upset 

Disclaimer: I do not own the boys or any other characters from the show, I'm playing with them, but I'll give them back when I'm done. I swear. 


Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Major Character Death, Violence, Halloween Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 9963
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: October 03, 2012


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Initiation

Loved this story.  Glad one of the men remembered Sara and that Aiden was with them.  Would have never guessed Ted being the murderer.

 
Can I keep you? by Bine Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Feature

FEATURED STORY for October 2013 - Ghostly Justin!

Having to move into a new home, Brian gets more then he wanted. Or maybe it's just what he wished for...


Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Halloween Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 7717
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: October 18, 2013


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was heart retching but I loved it. Great work.

 
Charades by snow Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

What if Justin never really broke up with Brian? What if Ethan was just a pawn and everything about the Brian and Justin dynamic was so much more?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, What If Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 25224
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Holiday

This was TOTALLY AWESOME!!!   I loved Justin in this.  He definitely was a brat.  Loved the fight scene Justin was in at the end.  Almost like being there.  Wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I like bratty Justin best of all too LOL Thanks again for your comments!!!!!!!!!!

 
Summary:

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part two of the Send me an Angel series. Takes place a few days after Justin leaves Ethan's apartment.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Could be Canon Characters: Ethan Gold
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 51767
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23/afterglow (pt 2) the beach

WOW!!!  This was really intense.  Loved the emotions and how they realized that they belonged together.  Wonderful!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! This was an emotional story to write, and i am so glad that was able to be conveyed in the story. Thank you again!

 
Summary:

part two of Charades. Just a few snippets into the life of Brian and Justin as a 'power couple.'


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 3204
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A day in the life of Brian and Justin.  This was great.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! :)

 
True Colors by Heather hah424 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

Brian and Justin are forced to stay with Melanie and Lindsey for a few days.  Melanie begins to see the true Brian Kinney.


Categories: Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3626
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was great.  Loved how Mel changed her opinion on Brian.

 
Summary:

Brian is tired of his long distance relationship with Justin and has decided to do something about it.  He heads for New York City and the chance to remedy the situation.  Much gratitude to Eka for the beautiful  banner and Pat for being my beta.

 

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Romance Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3836
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Much Better Late than Never

Now this is the way that Cowlip should have ended it.  This was wonderful.



Author's Response:

Hi again Balrogtweety.  I'm afraid I really got sappy with this one, but more than anything I love to see them end up getting the wedding they so richly deserved after going through all the things they did to get there.  I'm very happy to know you liked getting to this end too.  Big hugs, Grammy

 
Feverish Confessions by nazdre Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Brian has a fever and unknowingly shares some well kept secrets with his family


Categories: Alternate Universe, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Anti-Michael Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1359
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: February 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story so much that I must have read it a thousand times.  Great fic.

 
Summary:

B/J


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 15373
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This made me cry but I'm glad they are together at last.  Nice story.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - it made me cry writing it.

 
Summary:

b/j


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Cross Over Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 38845
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This was fantastic.  I loved the way you made Justin all grown up and this time Brian took him seriously.  Nicely done.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review - so glad you enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

Brian leaves Pittsburgh the day after his son is born. Justin meets the gang through Emmett – this shows how their lives develop and how even in this AU Brian and Justin are destined to be together


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 56372
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was a wonderful story.  I followed the songs and it's amazing how their love followed them across country.  Well done!!

 
Summary: Feature

Judy was with me all the way in this one - it was her bunny and encouragement and suggestions that kept the story going ----- that being said - this is a story where Justin was sent away not long after he met Brian --- yet the connection was there and they remained friends and more -- this is how the next few years developed


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 85563
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Elsa Rose:  This was a wonderful story.  I saw it on a LJ site and read it.  Loved the storyline very much.  Such a different take on the show.

 

Wonderfully done.



Author's Response:

thank you so much

 
Summary:

sometimes it pays to listen to your heart


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1242
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Stand Alone

There love will always be there.  Great fic.

 
Summary:

This is a series of stories set in a universe that split from QAF canon after season 4.  It deals with Brian, Justin, and their children over a long period of time.  While the chapters are in chronological order that is not how they were written.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: Gus, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 66274
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emerson, Peabody, & Rameses

This was a wonderful story.  I loved the last line in Chapter 9.  Fantastic!!!

 
Summary:

Justin Taylor is about to celebrate his 21st birthday.  His friends from PIFA decide to take him to a new place to party...Babylon.  The young man who is out and proud is about to meet his equal...the stud of Liberty Avenue.  This is one birthday the young man will never forget.  This is the first of the 'Enough' series of stories.  Thank you very much to Eka for the beautiful banner.

 

 

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Birthday Fic Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2821
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Old Enough to Know

Now that is love at first sight if I ever saw one.  Thanks



Author's Response:

The chemistry between our boys cannot be denied, no matter what circumstances bring them together.  I actually wrote this intending it to be a single chapter but ended up writing a couple of sequels.  I'm very happy you enjoyed it.  Hopefully I'll get back to the series again and write another sequel.  Hope you'll join me then too.  Big hugs, Grammy

 
Summary:

 

This is the second in a series of 'Enough' stories.  It is the next day after PIFA student, Justin Taylor's 21st Birthday celebration at Babylon where the young man has met and gone home with Liberty Avenue stud, Brian Kinney.  Where do they go from here?  Again I must thank Eka for the beautiful banner and Pat for her beta work.

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Romance Characters: Brian, Emmett, Justin, Michael, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3400
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Young Enough Not to Care

I'm glad Justin stuck up for himself.  You go Sunshine!!



Author's Response:

You are so right Balrogtweety.  This is a Justin who knows what he wants, what he deserves, and what he is willing to accept and is not afraid to say so.  I love a strong Justin.  I'm so glad you do too.  Thank you very much for all the wonderful comments you have given me.  They are deeply appreciated.  Big huge hugs, Grammy

 
Deadly Killers by Draccone Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

This story is about Brian and Justin and how they deal with having a relationship while there are close friends and family being harm or killed all around them. Would they find out who it is on time?


Categories: Anti-Ethan, Alternate Universe, Abuse, Humor, Minor Character Death, Out of Character, Romance, Violence, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Other, Justin/Other-Relationship Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 76064
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed

This was the best detective story I have ever read.  Never would have figured out that it was Brian and Justin killing all those people.  Nice going.



Author's Response:

He, he, he.  I know everyone was trying to figure it out.  They don't know who it was and they kept changing their minds.  I'm happy that you enjoyed it.  Thanks.  Later, Tay

 
Moonlight Magic by mandagrammy Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Feature

 **Featured Story for September 2015**

The year is 2107.  Planet Earth has run out of space for its inhabitants so colonization of other planets and the Moon has been set up.  Brian Kinney, an executive of Lunar Industries on the Moon is about to receive a new intern in his graphics department, a young man named Justin Taylor.  Will this new intern change Brian's life forever, and what happens when the past comes back to haunt young Taylor?  I want to thank Eka for the beautiful banner and Heather for being my beta throughout this story.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Sci-Fi , Unsafe Sex, Violence Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 32762
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2008 Updated: September 29, 2015


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: A Full Moon, A Full Life

I loved this.  Glad that Ian got his in the end and Brian and Justin got to stay.



Author's Response:

Oh my, what a fantastic treat to see a review on one of my earliest stories again.  This was my first attempt at a totally AU story so I am very pleased that you liked it.  Thank you so much Balrogtweety.  You have made my day.  Big huge hugs, Grammy

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: A Full Moon, A Full Life

Girl, this was a wonderful story.  Don't know if I commented before but I was in the mood for romance and I knew where to find it: right here in your stories.  Thanks for this.

Jane



Author's Response:

Any comments you make are welcome news for me, Jane.  It is easy for me to feel romantic when writing about our beloved Brian and Justin and I'm thrilled when others feel the romance too when reading my stories.  Thank you so much for letting me know that you enjoyed this story.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

 
Summary: Feature

 

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Post-513 (one year after). Despite his partner’s enormous success in the art world, Brian becomes increasingly concerned about Justin’s strange and secretive behaviour. When he finally discovers the reasons behind it, both men are faced with a struggle so intense it stretches the boundaries of their love beyond where either thought possible.

 

Note: Deals with the subject of eating disorders.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 49300
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Way To His Heart

This was a wonderful story.  Thanks



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for redaing and for your winderful review :-) I really appreciate it!

 
From the inside by rromantic Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Feature

fEATURED STORY FOR AUGUST 2013

Fic starts at end of Queer as Folk 307, and continuous with a different way 308 could have happened.

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Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Could be Canon, One-Off Fic, Romance, Spoilers, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5961
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: August 07, 2013


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Congrats on the Feature Story for August. Great story. Funny how Brian says romantic things to Justin when Justin is sleeping. Keep up the great work.

 
Summary: Feature

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This story is the result of my entry in the July fanfic contest on TQL.  Brian wants to give his son a special gift for his fifth birthday so he chooses an up-and-coming artist named Justin Taylor to paint a portrait of Gus.  He gets more than he bargained for when he meets the budding young artist.  Many thanks to Pat for her beta skills and the fabulous Eka for the perfect banner.  I love you girls so much. 

 


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Romance, Birthday Fic Characters: Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2965
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2008 Updated: April 03, 2021


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Portrait of Gus

This was cute.  I loved it.  Thank God you got rid of Ethan pretty quick.



Author's Response:

Well now Balrogtweety, we know there is no room in Justin's life for Ethan once Brian steps into his life.  LOL!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this story.  Thank you very much for commenting.  I appreciate it a lot.  Big hugs, Grammy

 
Summary: Feature

This story is the result of the request by a wonderful reader of mine named Lorie.  It begins in 2005.  Justin is a young man in NYC who makes his living as the writer of gay porn and adult fiction.  He has bigger goals for himself.  He dreams of publishing the great American gay romance novel, but he has little to base it on.  Justin does not do relationships and has little trust of others due to a painful childhood.  Brian Kinney is the owner of his own ad agency which has taken on Justin's publishing house as a new client.  What will happen when Brian and Justin meet eventually...two lost souls afraid of committment.  I owe a huge debt of gratitude to my Granddaughter, Amy, for the banner and my friend Pat for beta help.  I also want to thank Lorie for trusting me with her idea.  So enjoy and remember that comments are always welcome.  


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Hurt/Comfort, Out of Character, Real Life Issues, Romance Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 65965
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2008 Updated: July 31, 2009


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Taking Care of Both Taylors

I just read this whole story and loved it.  It was well written and loved how you took their love for each other when they needed it.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

How wonderful to get a new comment to this story.  Thank you so much Balrogtweety.  This is one of my favorite stories and I loved writing it.  I certainly appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback.  Big huge hugs, Grammy

 
Family Ties by Julia Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

Brian tries to deal with his feelings after he was cleared of molesting his nephew. Note: I’ve read on a few sites that people are wondering why Brian doesn’t wear his bracelet any more. At the end of 304 when we see Brian going back into the loft after Justin has given him back the bracelet he took from Brian’s nephew, Brian appears as if he may be taking it back off again and discarding it. This is my take on what was going through his mind at the time.

I hope you enjoy it - feedback welcome.  Julia


Categories: Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 310
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2008 Updated: August 09, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love these thoughts.  Great work.

 
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for January 2015***

Brian and Justin never had a relationship.  Justin is still trying to get over his ex-boyfriend Ethan.  A mysterious stranger accidentally dials his phone number.  Will Justin find out who the stranger is, and where will it all lead?


Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 18463
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2015


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Farewell to the Fiddler

Hey Terry, I went through the reviews and found I didn't comment on this one.  I think that when it came out the first time, I was scared to submit a review because at that time I was a lurker.

Anywho, I think that this was fantabulas.  I thought Brian was going to be the selfish bastard he always was but Justin made him think twice.  But I think it was the words of Daphne that got to him.  Go Daphne!!!  Great story and congrats on the Feature Story.

Jane

 
Summary:

Justin writes gay romance stories and posts them online. Brian is his number one fan.

Thanks so much to pannkakan for the banner!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Justin/Ethan, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 81 Completed: Yes Word count: 110517
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: February 14, 2015


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Enter Kayla

Glad to see more of the story.  YOU LEFT A CLIFFIE!!!  Bad girl.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Justin and Daphne, Part 1

WOW!! That was explosive.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Justin and Daphne, Part 2

MAN!!! Daphne is evil in this one.  Nice...

 
Summary: This is your typical body swap plot line.  A witch decides to show the boys what it would be like to walk in the others shoes.  Chaos and hilarity ensue.  Written in response to a plot bunny on lj about 3 summers ago.

Categories: Humor, Brian/Justin, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 16781
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2008 Updated: October 26, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I loved this.  It was halarious.  Thanks for the laugh.

 
Summary:

stories/57/images/banner.pngThe lives of Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy from the start of their sixth year until the start of the first year of their sons.(and possibly later) See what happens when a few situations are changed from the events in the books.(vbg)

 


Categories: HARRY POTTER, MISCELLANEOUS FICTION, Harry/Draco, MPreg Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Completed: Yes Word count: 111756
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: April 17, 2011


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Who Knew?

It's amazing what you can learn when you talk to other people about your family tree.  Great update.



Author's Response:

You can also take it to absurd lengths.  My aunt got into genealogy big time and it was amazing the relatives she found.  Of course the grandson of the sister of a great grandfather really isn't related to me.(vbg)  But the story reason was that in canon the Pure Bloods despise the Weasleys while acknowledging them as Pure Bloods but Blood Traitors because of political differences so I wanted to show that they were related.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Unexpected Results

I wonder what those two twins are up to.  This is intriguing.



Author's Response:

The sons of Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy up to something. :-)

 

There are probably 5-10 chapters left in this story.  then I'll probably do a sequel of sorts that will deal with what the twins are up to.(assuming they are up to something.)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Unbeleivable

Now this is interesting.  They are definitely years before their time.  Great update.



Author's Response:

What one has to remember is that Ronald and Blaise were born because of magic and as we all know Magic is Awesome.(vbg)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: March 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Execution

Well, it seems the young ones are more wizards.  I wonder if that potion that Harry and Drako took when they both became pregnant had anything to do with it>  I wonder...  Great update.



Author's Response:

The fact that Ronald and Blaise were created due to the effects of magic has a very big part of why they are so powerful.  thanks again for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 55: The Sorting that Shocked Wizarding Britain

Well, this definitely was a fantastic story.  I hope Malfoy will be all right.  somehow I knew that the Sorting Hat was going to do that.  Well done!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Draco will get over Blaise being sorted into Hufflepuff, probably about the same time Ron gets over Seamus being sorted into Slytherin.(vbg) There is the possiblity of more chapters being added if I think of anything but they'll probably be done as related stories.  I am working on a sequel of sorts that starts after the boys have graduated from Hogwarts.  I haven't decided on whether one long fic or several small chapters is the way to go. :- )

 
Summary: Feature

Two detectives must question their two only coherent witnesses in order to find out what transpired that night at the Baths to cause the riot.  Season 2.  Written for the dare challenge on lj a while back.

***Featured Story April 2013***

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Categories: FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Humor Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4679
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2013


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: April 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Standalone

Now that I wouldloved to have heard when Justin spoke Parseltongue. Funny. Great fic.

 
Summary:

Love can change you - even through the folds of time.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 30210
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2008 Updated: December 20, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This was wonderful.  Love the fairy tale part enfold with real life.  Well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely words.

 
Summary:

A Epilogue to 'A Moment on the Lips'. Christmas Eve, one year later.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Hurt/Comfort, Christmas, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5781
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: December 24, 2008


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What A Wonderful Life

This was sweet.  Now it's finished!  Thanks.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you feel this was a bit of closure... and at the right time of year :-) Thanks again for reading, and for your wonderful review!

 
A Familiar Touch by elyxer Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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Warnings: AU, BDSM, OOC, OTHER CHARACTERS, POST SEASON 5.
Notes: All praise to my betas, Helen [info]eleni81 and Anita [info]totallyfrelled. Many thanks to my guinea pigs, and much appreciation for all my loyal readers.
Disclaimer: They're NOT mine! If they were, they'd be chained to a wall in my basement waiting to satisfy... You get the picture.

Summary: Brian is part of an ancient race that has taken on the task of looking after humanity, but one blond in particular holds his interest. This is a new twist on the legacy of Familiars.


Categories: Brian/Justin, Alternate Universe, Bdsm, Out of Character Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 19492
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2009 Updated: March 07, 2009


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Ultimatum

I spotted this and this was wonderful.  Love the historical storyline behind it.  Great work!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Hugs! Rena

 
Embraced by Bob Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 716]
Summary: Feature

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 A freezing cold night - A beautiful blond - His life forever changed

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, TWILIGHT, Alternate Universe, Anti-Ethan, Anti-Michael, Bdsm, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Humor, Minor Character Death, Minor's Sexuality, Out of Character, Real Life Issues, Romance, Sci-Fi , Unsafe Sex, VAMPIRES!, Violence Characters: Brian, Craig Taylor, Debbie, Ethan Gold, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Michael, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Rodney, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 107 Completed: Yes Word count: 366959
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2016


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut

I have been reading this and it is TOTALLY awesome.  I hope Chris is ok>  No one should die that way even if he's a lonely vampire.



Author's Response:

I loved writing this novel. A vampire Brian and blood/sex slave Justin is such a turn on! Thanks for commenting very much!  :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia

This is just a wonderful story.  YOU GO GIRL!!!



Author's Response:

Well thank you; for your information I'm a gay man but being called a girl is cool too.! I have so much in common with women such as what turns me on.  :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86: Sunshine's Boot Camp

I'm definitely loving this story.  I love how you put real issues in this.  You can go to my Live Journal website here:

http://balrogtweety.livejournal.com/

I have written a few B/J fanfics I'm proud of.



Author's Response:

I'm pretty busy writing another story but I'll check it out later. Thanks

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning

I would love to say that this is the most amazing story on vampires I have ever read.  You had every situation involved.  I have bookmarked it to read again.  I will be checking out your other stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I rarely check on my finished stories and was delighted to find your comment.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 27, 2011 Title: Embraced

This is great.  Their lives will definitely get interesting.  Great Chapter.

 

I got Firefox to work now.  Thanks Bob.



Author's Response:

The hamster is very excited about this new direction in the story. Many have emailed with problems writing comments. We have issues with Internet Explorer I just can't seem to overcome. Just when it seems I repair the problems they create a new version with a new set of problems for our website. (bangs head on desk in defeat)

Thanks for commenting love very much.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 28, 2011 Title: Embraced

With all those powers, Brian and Justin will be unbeatable.  I have a funny feeling some vapmires are not going to like this.  Well see.  Great update.



Author's Response:

I don't want to spoil the plot. Vampires are a funny power hungry bunch, and frightened humans are a matter to deal with as well perhaps. Thank you bunches for commenting balrogtweety!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 29, 2011 Title: Embraced

Well it looks like Earth is going to shit.  At least there's New Vegas to go to.  Hope Jordan and friends get there.  Great update.



Author's Response:

The conditions on earth are getting far worse as time moves forward  and New Vegas is the destination of choice for many people. More later; next chapter nearly done. Thanks for your comments very much balrogtweety.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 01, 2011 Title: Embraced

Well now this should be interesting.  This might keep Brian on his toes.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Matt brings a new element to the story. He's a friend with benefits for Justin. Glad you're enjoying the story balrogtweety and thank you very much for commenting.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 01, 2011 Title: Embraced

That was a great Christmas present.  I wonder if it will last?  Great update.



Author's Response:

I can't think of any reason it won't balrogtweety. Secretly Matt wants Brian too. Tune in to see how that turns out :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 06, 2011 Title: Embraced

This was a great update.  I hope Matt finds what he's looking for.  Great that Brian and Justin are helping him.



Author's Response:

It's such an honor to get a sweet comment from such a well established and respected member of the QAF fanfiction community. I see you everywhere on line. Love you!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 10, 2011 Title: Embraced

Joey is a dream.  These two sound so much like Brian and Justin.  Matt is sure to get a pounding with Joey.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! We have all the characters now mostly so the plot can grow from here.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 15, 2011 Title: Embraced

I ahven't responded until now when I saw a new chapter up.  I've been busy with my own stories also.

 

This is getting good.  Matt and Joey remind me of Brian and Justin at the beginning.  Nice.



Author's Response:

Please excuse my late response; I was in sleep mode for over a day as I often do lately. Very happy to see your comments. I need to read your work too once I get more caught up in my three projects going on at this time. Please comment again as you are moved to do hopefully. They brighten my day.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: November 23, 2011 Title: Embraced

This is getting interesting.  Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm trying to keep it going and still deal with RL and things.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: December 21, 2011 Title: Embraced

Now this is interesting.  Hope they don't have trouble on earth with them after Brian tells them what's going on.  Great update.



Author's Response:

One may wonder if the warring fractions on earth will come together and deal with a common alien enemy instead. We'll see soon enough and thank you very much Balrogtweety for commenting.

 
Summary:

Brian and Justin haven't met. Justin jobs at Woody's and Babylon and meets the famous Brian Kinney but says no to him. One fateful night, Brian has lost his job and is drinking at Woody's, he is too drunk to get home on his own, so a certain blond helps and things get out of hand

 

Maybe some of you remember this story but somehow I didn't like the beginning very much because Brian was just too whiny and everything.. I started once again with this story and I hope you'll like it ;) 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Bdsm, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Justin/Other-Relationship Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 7887
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2011


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just spotted this and this was great.  Brian has control of his life outside his home but I think he was needing someone to control his life at home.  Great story.

 
The Business Trip by KAYLIN Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Business trips can be misleading


Categories: Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1098
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When I read this I never would have guessed who was who until the end.  Great story.

 
Forever Yours by Bob Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 1792]
Summary: Feature

In tribute to Bob Brown, who sadly passed away on June 27, 2022, we are placing one of his most popular stories at the top of the Most Recent Page.  You will be greatly missed, Bob.

 

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The Future of QAF after Season Five: Justin realized at once he didn't want to be in New York and soon calls Brian.  The owner of Kinnetik was on the verge of a nervous breakdown with problems at work and Justin's timing couldn't have been better. Gus needs them too.  Here's the continuation of the greatest love story ever told on TV. In time they and their friends take on the Holy Bible used against gays in the world.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Child Abuse, Hetero Sex, Humor, Minor Character Death, Minor's Sexuality, Out of Character, Real Life Issues, Romance, Violence, What If Characters: Craig Taylor, Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 192 Completed: Yes Word count: 436360
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2009 Updated: September 06, 2022


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Starting Over

This is wonderful.  I love how you started out this.  Thanks.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Family Secrets

What's happening to Gus makes me cry.  Now Justin???  This is wonderful.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Sting

You're right, Michael is f***ed.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Here Comes the Judge

I'm glad about Sap.  And Justin, too remembering his prom and Brian.  Great chapters

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Marvel

Way to go Justin!!!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Family Part Two

you left a cliffie!!!!!!!!  NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams

I would like to see the look on Craig's face when he finds out.  HA HA HA!!!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice

Two problems solved.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity

No tears here for the poor buggers.  Nice on the double wedding.



Author's Response:

My bad for not responding to this review; I was probably down with a health issue, and for a while we were not getting our email notices. Glad you enjoyed the chappie. Thank you for your reviews.

bob

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Church Street

Michael better not show up in the Pitts again or else...

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: New Beginnings

Now that is a bonus!!!



Author's Response:

WOW! Thank you for all the review hits on this story. I'll answer them later after I write the next chapter of my new novel. I'm very glad you like this enough to give chapter comments.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Billionaire's Puppy

Sounds like Jerry's in love.  Good for him.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Wedding Night

I worked as an architects assistant for 13 years and this is one gorgeous home.



Author's Response:

I'm so ashamed to have missed this review. I was under the weather back them but it's history today.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: A Star is Born

Seems like everything is working out for everyone.



Author's Response:

I like happy stories.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Who's for Dinner?

That is one awesome building.  Kinnetik Towers is LOOKING GOOD!!!



Author's Response:

That's the tallest building in Pittsburgh.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: We Can’t Afford Lunch

Man the money's moving.  At least Justin has his credit card.  This is a great story.



Author's Response:

Mr. Hamster and I had a lot of fun writing this story.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Surf with me Rage

They are definitely going to make a great fighting pair.  Nice pics of both boys especially Mark.  Hubba Hubba!!!



Author's Response:

He's a real hottie indeed. Glad you approved.  :P

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: Malibu

Gorgeous jet.  Brian and Justin are now living the high life.



Author's Response:

The jet will help them land many huge accounts in the future.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Changes

They are definitely having a wonderful year.



Author's Response:

Business is very good for Kinnetik.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50: My Other Girl

Way to go GUS!!!



Author's Response:

Yes!!!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$

The humor in this is great.  Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Gosh! Thank you so much for your chapter reviews. I'm on a roll writng my new novel but I'll answer them soon. You're the best reader a writer can get. Love you! Hugs!  :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Pirates !

That's a cool ship.  Nice that Gus got the account.



Author's Response:

A true Brian mini-me if there ever was one!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: What Every Pirate Wants

I like Gus' idea.  Great.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Gus is an amazing kid indeed but look who his dad is too! I'll answer all reviews soon; I have to write when the hamster is hot. Love you very much! Hugs!  :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67: Ireland

This sounded like fun.  Glad they did have fun.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69: Just my Size

Way to go Jennifer.  I hope Blake doesn't have trouble with John.



Author's Response:

Blake won't have a problem how he does things.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71: Action on the Set

Hope everything is alright.  Nice that Tyler was open with Justin.



Author's Response:

Everything works out for the best.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure

OMG!!!  Hope Justin is ok.



Author's Response:

I love Justin too much to really hurt him. Fear not!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78: I Want Mark

Love the pic.  This story is great.  That's what you get from watching too much porn.



Author's Response:

LMGAO !!!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79: Checkmate

I see someone took the porn tapes away from him and the drugs.  He looks much better now.



Author's Response:

He's a nice clean hamster now.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80: Yes

Those are nice digs.  Hunter definitely is living in luxury.



Author's Response:

Working for Kinnetik has its perks.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84: The Offer

They are going to make a beautiful baby.



Author's Response:

Forgive me for not answering all your wonderful chapter reviews for this story yet; I've read them all and could not be more grateful. I'm still in writing mode for my new novel "Partners in Crime". With your help this story could make history with 2,000 reviews on MW soon. Love you very much!  :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: The Dad Test

I'm glad Mark approves of Toby.  Cute hamster by the way.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Mr. Hamster is a true ham.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91: First Gay Love

Glad their first time was great.



Author's Response:

That's a magical moment for any gay boy.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94: L'Helicoptre par Hermes

Nice little toy.  Justin will like.



Author's Response:

I would love to own one too.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 98: Somebody's Missing

Now he is precious.  What a cutie!!!



Author's Response:

Grins!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101: Made in China

Liberty Avenue would not be the same without Debbie.



Author's Response:

I totally agree.

 
Summary:

My dear friends, today is the second anniversary of the posting of my very first story. I can hardly believe I've been doing this for two whole years, but they have been among my happiest ever. The fact that so many of you have been so kind to me and told me you enjoyed my work is the icing on the cake and I will be forever grateful. In honor of your support, I offer you a solution to the mishap the producers of QAF called Season 5. This is my version of what caused the Season. It is a What If. I hope you will enjoy it. I promise the ending will be nothing like our last scene during the actual show. LOL!

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Canon, What If Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5326
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2009


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: It Was Only A Dream

I loved this ending.  I wish that was the way the series ended.  Thanks for the dreams.



Author's Response:

How wonderful to hear from you again Balrogtweety.  The only good thing to come out of the ending on the series was the fascinating ways that our writers have come up with to make the ending more fun.  I'm so glad you enjoyed my own version.  LOL!  Thank you very much for the comments.  Big hugs, Grammy

 
For the love of Kai by snow Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 497]
Summary: Feature

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NEWEST CHAPTER REVISED 

Season 4. Brian discovers he has cancer and decides to end his relationship with Justin before his partner finds out the truth.

Angry and hurt, Justin is quickly distracted by the discovery of having a very young brother (Craig's other son) with autism. This is the story of Justin growing up, taking charge, taking legal guardianship of his brother, Kai... and what happens when he finds out the truth about Brian.

 

Thank you, Fran, for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Real Life Issues, What If Characters: Craig Taylor, Debbie, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Completed: Yes Word count: 89209
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2011


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Fresh air

This is heart retching.  Nice going.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The phone call

This is going great. 

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Sometimes it's not enough to know

Wonderful that Justin has a brother.



Author's Response: Yes! And Justin is determined to be a great one! :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Settling in

This is great.  Going to read next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks!!

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: clock it in (episode 408)

Wait til Justin finds out about Brian.  Great about the movie.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: intermission

Nice that Justin is doing this.  Michael now knows.



Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: TGIF

Wonde what's in store for Justin?  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: time will tell

Sometimes I think Michael is a shit.  But a good one.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The smallprint

Justin will have a fight on his hands.  I see you took this in a different direction with Brian.  Great way to do it.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Butterflies and Hurricanes

great chapter.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Bygones

Brian can be a shit.  Justin sure has patience with Kai.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The sum of us

Sounds like Justin had fun.



Author's Response: :)

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Hilt

Now I know why Brian didn't want anyone around.  This is his problem.



Author's Response: Poor Brian :(

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: All's fair

Sounds like Craig changed when he left his family.



Author's Response:

He certainly did!

 
Broken Open by Gina Marie Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Feature

Brian owns a private detective agency. Justin's an ex-cop from NYC looking for a change. Both have pasts that are about to catch up with them. What happens when their paths cross and their destinies entwine. This is an AU story with our favorite characters. I hope you enjoy, this is a new venture for me and I've no idea where it's going!

Thanks to foreverbm for the lovely banner!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: Chris Hobbs, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Kiki, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 299229
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2012


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: April 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

I just read this in three days and I can't believe what I just read.

This story was AMAZING!!!  I loved the banter between the two of them and the cases they worked on.  And finding out that Brian had a brother was out of this world.

There were times I laughed and times I could have punched a wall with Joan's head.  I'm glad everything worked out for our two lovers.

Amazing as ever.  Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  So glad you enjoyed it

 
Partners in Crime by Bob Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 1029]
Summary: Feature

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Detective Brian Kinney was about to quit the force at the Pittsburgh PD when he heard he was getting a new rookie for a partner until he met the young son of the Chief; Taylor made just for him.  For years Brian didn't look at another man until he saw new junior detective Justin Taylor; a hot young virgin rookie given to Brian by Chief Craig Taylor; trusting his beautiful very young son with his best gay detective. Together they are a very powerful undercover unit, and one soul united.

My very best to Daphne Angel for the outstanding banner with two beautiful sons. You go girl!  I answer all review comments because I love you.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Hetero Sex, Humor, Incest, Minor Character Death, Real Life Issues, Romance, Unsafe Sex, Violence Characters: Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 98 Completed: Yes Word count: 219319
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2010 Updated: October 16, 2010


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal

I like how you put this into this story.  Feels like I'm reading 'Forever Yours'.



Author's Response:

You read that epic tale? I hope I don't repeat myself too much, but I love for the boys to have money.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86: New Wheels

Nice wheels.  Love the color.  Hope Craig can find the boy.



Author's Response:

Craig is just like his father; have no fear.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit

Molly sure needs to grow up.  She will learn one day.



Author's Response:

I hear being with child can be very emotional. Let's hope that's all it is.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

Seems like Brian's family is reaching out for help.  Hope things go well.



Author's Response:

I prefer to make happy endings with a few bumps in the road on the way.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

You get well, Bob.  Stories can wait your health can't.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

That was a couple of weeks ago; I'm all better now. Heah! You're my 1,100 reviewer which means the next chapter is dedicated to you balrogtweety.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: The Trap is Set

Nice to see John get a second chance with Brian and Justin.  Looks like the evidence case is wrapping up.  Great story.



Author's Response:

I was having a hard day with car trouble on a 2008 for crying out loud; then I got all these fantastic review comments from you. That was followed with some good luck personally :P  You brought up my spirits and gave me luck today! I have to decide how to continue this story or close it soon.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

Now this was a surprise.  Criag going from gay to straight.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Craig is so beautiful he can have it all. I guess Marsha is so good in bed a gay boy would love it too. Thanks for commenting balrogtwety; I love to see your comments.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

I'm glad Gus did that for Tim.  Now Tim is in love with Andy.  Lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

It was Brian's son, Charles who fixed up Tim but I know what you meant. My hamster was grinning when he told me this plot. He's very fond of young love. Thanks again for commenting.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94: Wes

WEll this story is definitely heating up.  Wes is a hottie.



Author's Response:

Wes could eat crackers in my bed anytime but I don't think John will let him go for me to get a chance. I loved his face and hands especially; very elegant looking and beautiful. Thanks bal.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

Sounds like tings are going well for everyone.



Author's Response:

Yes, for now but who knows what the future has in store? The Hamster won't tell me until it's time to type it. Thanks very much for your comment balrogtweety.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96: The Family Way

This is going to be interesting on how this works out.



Author's Response:

Kids having kids; what's the world coming to? I promise a very happy future for all. The question is will it be a boy or girl? Perhaps the Kinney family needs some balance happening. Thank you for commenting very much.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98: In Conclusion

I would like to thank you for the most interesting crime story I have ever read.  It was nice to see something end on a good note.  Wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Please check out the new story with Justin as a vampire bonded to Brian. It's called No other Blood for Me. It's nothing like Embraced by the way.

 
My Sunshine by AStephens Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Brian POV. After marrying Justin, Brian recalls the events that brought them to that point...

Timeline: Throughout Seasons 1-5 and beyond... :)


Categories: Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Out of Character, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 589
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2010 Updated: January 30, 2010


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Sunshine

This was totally awesome.  It brought a tear to my eye.  Nice going.

 
Home by AStephens Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Something's wrong in Pittsburgh--just when Justin's come home, Brian doesn't seem to want to spend much time welcoming him back!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, One-Off Fic, Out of Character, Romance Characters: Brian, Debbie, Jennifer Taylor, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 682
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2010 Updated: January 30, 2010


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Home

I knew Brian wouldn't leave him.  Nice going Brian!!!

 
Release by AStephens Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Justin realizes he has to do one last favor to move on...


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Drabbles, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death, One-Off Fic, Out of Character Characters: Ethan Gold, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 313
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2010 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Release

This was so sad.  *wipes tear*

 
Summary:

On business in New York, Brian runs into something that becomes infinitely more important...


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Rape, Violence Characters: Debbie, Ethan Gold, Jennifer Taylor, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 4136
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: September 11, 2011


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was wonderfully written.  Loved how Brian rescued Justin and they ended up together.  Great fic.

 
Ranch Vacation by Henny71 Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Feature

*FEATURED STORY FOR SEPTEMBER 2013*

Brian goes to a dude ranch in Colorado where he meets Justin.

banner for story


Categories: Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 9424
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: September 21, 2013


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: September 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was definitely a switch to find Brian owning the ranch. Great fic.

 
Taking Care Of You by Sling Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Brian is a succes in the ad-world but not everyone seems to like that. Ben, the head of Brian's security man hires a new guy, who turns Brian's world upside down. 

NOTE: Not a Ben/Brian story even though the banner may suggest that. It's definitely a Justin/Brian one ;) 


Categories: Alternate Universe, Hurt/Comfort, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 7320
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2010 Updated: July 21, 2010


Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: July 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great start.  Loved that Brian wants Justin by his side.

 
Reviewer: balrogtweety Signed
Date: July 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Amazing how some people use Kip as a scapegoat.  Thanks.  This was great.  Looks like Brian got his Prince Charming.