Charades was truly twisted - I loved it.

Very cute - I think Michael should win!

Nice - Gus getting married just might give B/J a little jolt to do it themselves.

I really enjoyed the story.  Thanks for posting.

Loved this - truly loved it.  The intelligence of the two men comes screaming through, as does the sexuality, the humor and the love.

I just read all twelve chapters in one sitting and wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your writing.  I'm looking forward to updates.

Author's Response:

Wow, I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you so much.

More soon, I promise.

I hope you'll continue this story.  I would enjoy reading more a great deal.

Fascinating chapters on Truth or Dare & the responses of the characters to the shooters.  I am enjoying this quite a bit.

Beautifully written.

This one made me laugh out loud - mostly at Justin's creative genetic engineering.

Just wanted to drop a line and let you know I'm enjoying this story.

Just wanted to drop a line and say I'm enjoying your story and am looking forward to updates.

On that absolutely hilarious note, I think I'll go to sleep with images of Justin's dance in my head.

Excellent tale.

Loved the rooms.  I do believe that you're right, Brian would be more careful to ensure all kids are treated equally.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the rooms :D

Yeah, Brian is like tht, he remembers what it was like when he was a kid and wants to do better.

Thanks.

I am reminded of the criminal master-minds that got caught for tax evasion rather than murder. 

Really nice story line.

Another good chapter.  I am amazed by how quickly you come up with the plot twists you produce.

Author's Response: Thank you Annjeela. There's a  hamster in my head who comes up with these ideas--honest! Other writers have a plot bunnie but I got stuck with a hamster; go figure huh? Glad your enjoying the story.

I think you've just made an interesting neighbourhood.  I'm not sure if Mr. Rogers would like it, but most of your readers will.

Author's Response: Hehehe! Thank you very much Annjeela. I truly appreciate you reviewing each chapter too. Readers who do that made me the most respectable review count on MW. I try hard to entertain you folks.

A 12-step program for pedophile vampires.  i can honestly say in years of reading fiction & tons of vampire fiction - that's a new one.  It is what keeps reading your stories interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you Annjeela for your review. I don't think that most of the vampires were really pedophiles but mostly overwhelmed by the beauty and charm of all those gay twink boys in one location. Older vampires remember a time when age didn't matter and they only have to be educated that this is a new age with different rules for the game. Add to that they were stupid and had no clue how to attact a young mate. Their hearts were in the right place but they didn't realize the seriousness of the age difference and how illegal it was and they had to learn despite this being a closed vampire community; they don't get to do as they pleased in Kinneyville. Many men screw up taking my a teenager's beauty and only have to be reminded it's wrong to act on it.

Justin's emotional response makes a lot of sense - how many times is everybody saved?

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewiing Annjeela. The fact that all the boot camp boys agreed to embrace before knowing their vampire so he could get the extra money is what moved him.

five days?  even with superhuman powers - I'm amazed they can stand (LOL)  That was fun to read.

Author's Response: Thanks Annjeela; it was fun to write too. I'm a fan of sailing and rent a boat once or twice each summer to keep up the skill. The boat that Justin bought can be rented for about $600 a day where I live in the USA.

The good news about getting behind on reading is that I don't have to stay on the cliff you're hanging us over for very long (LOL) - excellent cliffhanger.

Interesting concept - I'm immortal, in love & have a great life, but parts of it are so bad I don't want to pass it on.  I'm glad they talked Brian into it.  (Another good cliffhanger - you do love them.)

It appears surrogate parenting is a great deal all round.  Another excellent chapter.

Hard choices for a sixteen year old.  I must admit I'm surprised - what's the hurry if you live for hundreds of years?  Great ideas as usual.

Thanks for the story.  Hope to see you again when life permits.

Interesting idea.  I'm looking forward to see where you're going with it.  Please do keep going.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'll be posting more "snapshots in time" soon.

this is a hilarious story-line.  I hope you keep catching brian & justin in interesting situations.

Author's Response: I'll try my best ;) The summer is quite long so I guess I'll come up with a few more situations hehe any idea for one?
Hugs Tina

AS I read your story, I keep asking myself could this really be Brian as a young man.  So cynical and so open at the same time.  If a lover like Justin let him down, would he become Brian on the show?

The best compliment - I can't decide, so I keep reading.

I'm really enjoying this story.  I especially like the fact that Cynthia/Daphne had to work to get them together.  Neither one of the guys would have made the effort (LOL).

This last chapter's image of a very nervous Justin on his first day - excellent.

I really enjoyed the story because Justin kept standing up for himself and Brian.  I always thought he could have done more of that in the show.

Thanks for Posting.

That was great.  I really thought you captured the guys perfectly with a nice light sense of humor.

Really hot scene.  I like a story that knows when to switch - lighten it up a bit, because real life is like that.  Things swing from serious to touching to hilarious without too much warning.  Well written

This is a brilliant story.  Well written, as close to canon as I've ever seen while still expanding it.

I am finding it absolutely compelling. 

Thanks for it.

Another amazing, touching chapter.  Thanks.

Yet another heart-wrenching, beautifully written chapter.

Thank you

I have no idea how you come up with the way to slowly bring it all to light, but I am really enjoying watching you do it.

You know what's interesting to me as I read the reviews is that when I think about the guys past, the only one who broke the rules was Justin.  Brian held to them scrupulously.  He's always forgiven Justin for breaking explicit agreements.  It wouldn't be fair for Justin to stay angry over this when monogamy isn't one of their rules .  Especially when you think about 513 when Justin talks about 'the Brian Kinney he knows' being all over the hot stripper. 

So, I think Justin had a right to be disappointed , but unforgiving?  Not fair at all.

Very well written

I like the realizations slowly hitting folks.

Once again, beautifully written.  I like the writing style of everyone except Brian's thoughts while staying focussed on him.

Okay - I love your writing style, but your storyline - aaahhh!  How on earth are you going to get B/J together given the plot so far.  I am assuming you are planning to have them meet - I could be wrong.

Really well done.  I could see it playing out that way and your discriptive phrases are excellent.

Please keep writing.

I am completely hooked.  I am trusting you to finish this - because I'm sure I'll be reading it every step of the way.

I just wanted to drop a line to say welcome & that I quite enjoyed your insight into Brian's mind. 

Please keep on posting.

Poor Justin.  No self-confidence and Brian catches him and teases him about it.  As a friend would say  - awkward turtle moment.  Of course Brian made up for it with that kiss.

Mostly - just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story & hope you keep on writing:)

I enjoyed this.  Thanks for putting it out there.