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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 125446 [Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 22, 2008
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like the advance of the timeline. Reading on...
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Poor Gus; I figured someone at Babylon would know him and it would get back to Brian and Justin. Holy crap.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I can almost see the future plot unfolding now.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I can't wait to find out what Gus is up to.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I see New York will happen; Gus will fall in love and be a bottom; Brian will think the doctor isn't good enough for his son. Sorina will be a ballet star and fall in love with her male partner on stage in the future. Am I close? I'll have to read and find out.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 OMG!!! Will Blake spill the beans?
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The good doctor will cure the patient in due time. :P
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I've heard that Spain is wild too.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 That went well; blond says so little.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 You go Gus baby! Bottoms up :P
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 LMAO! Lindsay is so messed up; Melanie too. JR is more accepting and blunt. I see Gus's virginity near ending.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 What the hell is Lindsay up to and will Brian kill her for it?
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 I could slap Daphne right now. I hope B and J slam her good.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I'm ready to kill Lindsay; and Austin better watch it.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Damn, I hoped Gus has more courage; he's going to lose his man. I hope a woman doesn't excite him at all.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 I'm choking the living shit out of Lindsay right now.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 I hope Lindsay is destroyed before this is over.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 I'm very happy for Gus. I'm digging a hole for Lindsay and getting the family to gather the stones; big ones too.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Damn; a stoning to the death would have been so much fun. :O I'm very happy for Gus though.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 LMAO! Somebody is going to ballet school in New York. :)
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Gotta love that blond boy to death. Great chapter.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Those girls are amazing; plotting years in advance.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Triple wedding? Brian fooling Yury was priceless!
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Wonderful wedding Michele. I think I saw one more story in this series. Author's Response: Thank you, JT. I'm thrilled that you are enjoying this series. Forgive me if I'm getting to your comments slowly, but I'm in the middle of editing a new novel, and my time is limited. I really do appreciate every little note you've sent me. It's been great reliving this story through your eyes. All my best! Mickie Summary:
sometimes Brian and Justine need some hellp Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 24516 [Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2008
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Date: January 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I too found this one mentioned at Get it Here and got interested. You know I love your work and this one also runs away with kuddos of powerful prose. The opening chapter sets up the entire show to follow. Great plot idea Elsa. Author's Response: the sign of a perfect son - loving my writing
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Date: January 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 LMAO! This was a terrific chapter and the grey hairs - a perfect ending! Author's Response: Thank you dear - love it when you find something I've written and read it
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Date: January 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Moving right along. The creek beside the house is a theme I remember reading before; one of your stories, perhaps? Author's Response: I live in a 'creek beside the house' kind of place - so I suppose it creeps in here and there - love ya for reading and writing a review Summary:
Banner by Masterglory, grazie mille cara I hated the was CowLip ended the series. This is my idea of what should have happened. Categories: Alternate Universe Characters: None Challenges: None Series: Happy endings Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 21804 [Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2008
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Don't push That is how Cowlip should have ended the story. WELL DONE! Author's Response: Thank you so much :D Do you know that there is a sequel? 'Married at last'
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The morning after Great chapter. Gotta read more now. Author's Response: Thanks :)
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Meeting I like the gallery's name. I'm loving your take on season six very much. Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it was a great idea for a name :) Thank you so much.
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Rehersal dinner I hate to be the grammar Nazi but it's bid not bit. I loved the exchange with the IC of Lindsay and Michael so open and raw. Author's Response: Yeah, this story was from before I got my beta. I suspect there are a lot more mistakes. I'm glad you liked it :)
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Mikey's reaction Michael can be so stupid. Author's Response: That he can :) Thanks.
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Mel and Lindz Well done. One more small typo: losing not loosing (just in case you might want to fix it). Love the story. Author's Response: Thanks. I'll look at it :)
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Best man "He always does." That line was loaded! Ted was the perfect choice. Author's Response: Thanks :D Yeah, he was :)
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: What to call Justin Pops, how cute that is. Why do I expect a shoe to fall soon? Author's Response: Thanks, I thought so. You just have to keep reading :)
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Ghosts from the past Taking in the boys is that shoe I was expecting. Now Craig could be the other one. hehehehe I love leaving reviews and raising your count and stars. Not enough people leave reviews without blackmail (withholding chapters until they give you a review, etc.) Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you liked my little surprise. I love getting reviews and I do try to leave them too.
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Manor of his dreams Justin is so thoughtful; creating the boy's rooms. Saying apart the night before is good luck for a marriage before the wedding; nice touch. Author's Response: Justin is thoughtful :) It is, thank you :D
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The night before the wedding Hummm...I foresee a lamp post start perhaps. Well, that's how I'd write it. I like how you use canon without repeating it. We already know it. Well done. Author's Response: You'll see :) Thank you so much.
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The wedding Great wedding scene; Babylon was perfect. Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Hope you'll like the party.
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The party The speaches were excellent. The ending dance a great touch to remember. Author's Response: Thank you :D
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Showing the house to the boys Yeah, raw is so much better; you got that right. Author's Response: Yeah, now on to the sequel ;)
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Showing the house to the boys I didn't realize this was the last chapter. This was perhaps one of your fiirst stories as I see your writing has changed since then perhaps (for the better). The plot idea was perfect as how they ended it was dumb. You're a very good writer with wit and humor at all the right places. Yes you have some typos but so do my stories so I'm in no position to be picky. I enjoyed this story very much and I'm going to go read "Married at Last" now to follow up. Thanks for a great read Edom. Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I do think/hope that my writing has gotten better, the first chapter of this story was the first thing I ever wrote! I hope you'll like the sequel too :)
Summary: I was very, very bored one day, this is the result.
Categories: Poetry-QAF Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 24 [Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008
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Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: B.R.I.A.N. Well it won the shortest story on MW award! Summary:
I am pants at summaries, so I apologise in advance! Here goes - an evil-doer wants to destroy Justin and Brian. Mayhem, violence, pain, pathos, angst and laughter ensue. Not advocated for the faint of heart! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 38007 [Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2010
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Damn that is one powerful beginning chapter. Author's Response: Thank you! You made my day! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Two chapters and I'm hooked :) Author's Response: Is is wrong that I am happy you are addicted to my fic!? :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 You give great angst; I smell Chris Hobbs and it stinks. Author's Response: So very happy you think I give great angst!! I think your 'rat nose' is very clever!! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Very intense story here. Author's Response: YAY! You think it is intense - does happy Snoopy dance around room . . . cat looks at me very strangely! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Crash cart cliffie; I wonder how you will explain a cardiac event for a broken leg? :) Author's Response: This one I can answer as my eldest is a nursein Accident and Emergency! Justin would have had a monitor, he didn't just get a broken leg although the compound fracture is bad enough in itself. I imagined him having a finger monitor on and the alarm would have gone off when his pulse rate changed. Yes I have been placed on one after a car accident and I also had bruised ribs and like a burn mark from the seat belt (the airbags did not deploy). I loosened the finger monitor and all hell broke loose when the alarms went off . . . and yes my caring wonderful daughter told me not to be an idiot and keep my bloody hand still! (She is wonderful with other patients and the staff and patients alike think she is brilliant - as do I!)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Great plot; attempted killing. There has to be security videos available. Hospitals have tons of cameras. Oops, I'm not writing this story. :) Author's Response: Damn in Aus we have only a few cameras, ond those we do have are often not switched on - sorry about the big plot hole!!! Gald you didn't fall in and it spoinl it completely for you! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I have to change into my boots since the plot sh!t is getting deeper now. Author's Response: I just had a vision in my head of you in rubber boots hunched over your puter!! Tee hee! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Glad to see Justin is home but is it safe? Since you mentioned Hobbs at the beginning of the story I still feel he is the perp of this story; looking forward to find out who it really is. Some of your writing tells me you may be a Brit. I love the UK and have visited twice. Author's Response: Not a Brit - a colonial! Well an Aussie anyway! (South Australian actually) What expressions gave it away?? :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 This just get more interesting as I read on. Author's Response: I sparked your interest!? Fantastic!!! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Now I really wonder who is the prep. I'm sticking with Hobbs though. Author's Response: Gut instinct is usually the best way to go! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 What a cliffie you made here; Michael is an interesting twist or worse. Author's Response: Yippee I made you think!! Love it that you enjoyed the twist enough to comment! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Only Michael could get into the loft and were was the body guard/nurse at? Author's Response: Well only Michael had the combination as far as we know but there are many different ways of discovering information that we have no business knowing! Or at least so the tabloids and media tell us! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It has to be Hobbs now. Author's Response: A gold star for you!!! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Lurkers; cute. Why the perp took out the body guard and didn't finish the job is a mystery now. Author's Response: I think Chris wanted to torture to make up for the Posse incident. Yeah mu second eldest daughter gave me a very hard time for lurking many years ago! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 He could be in the house. Justin should have a gun too. Author's Response: I rather liked his clever idea with a pencil! I would also be worried about them shooting each other! Thanks for the fb! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Well we finally know it's Hobbs. (does happy dance in his chair) :) Author's Response: Yeah you guessed right from the beginning! There goes my career as a mystery writer!! :( Damn I wish I could see that happy dance!! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 This is so intense!!!!
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Glad Chris got hurt too. Reading on... Author's Response: Well I couldn't really have him so close to the blast site and escape unharmed - I enjoy pushing the envelope on what is believable but that would venture into the ridiculous! So glad you are still reading! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Got to read on; I've commented every chapter to raise your number up. Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! It is wonderful to hear from readers and know there is someone reading who feels inspired to respond! (I really appreciate the increase in numbers too!) :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 I hope you add more chapters soon. I see I'm almost caught up now. Author's Response: This is a fic I had published elsewhere, so I am just giving it a polish and check and then adding the chapter. I am using it to get back into writing. So I have been trying to put up a chapter a night, but I am now back at work and it may be a bit difficult! :)
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Oh shit. Brian get your gun... Author's Response: Absolutely . . . although there is still that problem that he may shoot himself in the foot! So great to know you are still reading! :)
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 I loved my chapter reviewers so I felt you might like it too! Several words are spelled in a Brit manner unlike we spell them in the USA and you said "pants". Did I find a hole in the plot? What about the ex-marine bodyguard in the cabin? Didn't he die in the fire and shouldn't Chris find his body? Great story here and looking forward to more chapters. Author's Response: Well thank you!! I was very appreciative of your comments. I am sure there is more than one hole although I kind of pictured our poor marine blown to unrecognizable bits as he was closest to the explosions, and after he found the knotted sheet I didn't think Chris would waste time looking for more evidence - he is manic in his approach and following his own kind of logic - that killer instinct to wipe out what he hates (or thinks he does). More eps on the way! You have no idea how wonderful I feel when I know people have actually been thinking about my fic and then I go back and reflect on what ideas I had at the time. Should I have made it more specific I think sometimes I take too much audience knowledge for granted but I don't want to 'talk down' to readers or have them think I am being condescending or treating them like idiots. More to ponder but I'm off to put up the next chapter! Hope you like it . . . or something! :)
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Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 I'm pulling out my hair over here in fear of what's next. Please save what few locks I have left soon. :) Author's Response: Errrr . . . I hear baldness is all the rage these days!! Hmmmm . . . hair transplants? I got plenty and only a few greys at the moment! Thanks for commenting! :)
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Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 I'm enjoying the story too much to look for plot holes. Thanks so much for the update. Author's Response: That might be the very best compliment I have ever received!! I'm trying to update each night but work and home sometimes interfere! Thanks for the review! :)
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Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Here is your spanking. Thanks so much for the new chapter. Love this story.
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Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 "You're so wicked! Holding chapters hostage for reviews. Of course I've never done such a thing. :) Author's Response: Oh no never!! Tee hee! Besides your fics are so good you don't need to resort to that type of behaviour! Who moi?? Wicked (puts broom away and takes off point hat, pats black cat then walk away whistling!) Thank you so much for your honest reactions, love to read them! :)
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Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Chris needs a big stiff dick up his ass. Author's Response: Of dynamite!?? LOL! Thanks for sticking with it!! :)
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Glad to see some action; dying in freezing water is almost just as painful as fire. Chris deserves what he gets. Author's Response: DO I detect your KI coming out? I think it would be a horrible way to die! Let he/she who is without sin cast the first stone! I don't know about you but my glass house is very vulnerable!! Thanks again for your wonderful reviews! :)
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Oh you're good. Author's Response: Puffs up with pride!! Then discovers head is too big to fit through door! Oh well! Thanks for the happy! I'll put the final ep up tonight! Thanks for sticking with it!! :)
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Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Wow! Fantastic final chapter. You had me hooked right to the last. Hobbs can rot in hell as far as I'm concerned. Debbie was so in character in your story. Give us more of your work to enjoy. Congrads on the blue ribbon award for excellence; they are rare. Author's Response: Truly chuffed!! Thank you sooo much. I love to hear that I managed to keep people in character! I have posted another - more light-hearted with a bit of black humour thrown in! Hope you like it too! I was rapt with my blue ribbon! Got a shock when I saw it! Thanks for all your support - love reading your work too - even more than cute Hammy! :) Summary:
I liked this challenge idea for some fun and had some basic ideas for how I'd start it so hope you guys like it! Categories: Brian/Justin, Alternate Universe Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 19804 [Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: April 17, 2009
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Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 My don't you pack the emotion in a story! Lol! am glad u think so.
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Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Angsty!
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Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 very interesting story line
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Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 stir the pot..... Well it wouldn't be B/J if there was no stiring.
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Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 pant pant pant.....
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Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Really cute story here. Summary:
No. Never. My heart belongs to Brian, Justin thought. This was written for the second chance theme at the qaf_challenges community. Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters. Categories: Justin/Other-Relationship, What If, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5935 [Report This] Published: March 14, 2008 Updated: March 14, 2008
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Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Promises People suck for giving you low stars. Let me raise this. You deserve to be encouraged. Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. Summary:
After the end of the show I started writing my own virtual sixth season. The first episode picks up three weeks after Justin left for New York. I assume S5 ended in the fall of 2004. Vic died in February, Justin was gone for three months and according to my research the election would have taken place in November. I bent the timeline a bit, but I figured since CowLip wasn't that meticulous about it themselves I'll get away with it ;) . Warning! This is a scriptfic. This story is completed now and everyone who doesn't like WIPs and therefore didn't start reading - maybe you'd like to give it a try now. I still appreciate your feedback :) Categories: Canon, Could be Canon Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 309771 [Report This] Published: March 15, 2008 Updated: September 26, 2008
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Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Trailer episode 6.01 Script flictions are not my usual read but I have to see were you go with year 6. I hated how they ended it. Summary:
Has Daphne crossed the bounderies of her friendship with Justin? Will she cause the end of a fifteen year relationship? Many thanks to my beta, Shellie, for all her help with this story. My icon is made by the amazing graphic artist, marilla_pm67, aka luv_Sam. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Alternate Universe, Real Life Issues, Romance, Unsafe Sex Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 142542 [Report This] Published: March 16, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2008
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love your writing; so I'm going to attempt this epic series. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm delighted to have a new reader! Welcome to my Karma universe. Mickie
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Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A shrink mental case Daphne is quite the plot twist. Doctors make the worse patients I've heard. Author's Response: Lol! Amen to that. I work for 6 surgeons:)
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I did not see that coming until the end. Wow! Author's Response: I'm glad you were surprised!
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 The good doctor needs to get over his self. I love your writing. Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really happy that you're enjoying this.
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Daffie Daphne at her very best. Author's Response: Hang in there...
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The bloodly gall of that girl!! She had to want it done naturally; what an idiot. Author's Response: Poor Justin almost turned to stone, lol! She's going a little crazy right now.
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I'm dying to see where this goes next. Brian's right on with his analysis. Author's Response: Brian has always had a sixth sense about things...especially ones that involve Justin.
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 I could just bitch slap that girl for causing my favorite blond and his man all this damn drama! Go Emmett... :P Author's Response: Ahh, Emmett is one of my favorites. Love that man:)
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Oh how you can weave a story line. Author's Response: You are sweet, and I thank you for reading so many chapters in one gulp. Mickie
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 LMGAO! Drama, angst, humor. Magic! Author's Response: LoL, thank you-I'm glad you're enjoying this:) Mickie
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Reaching for the Kleenex... ;( Gus was way cool however. Author's Response: Aww...I'm sorry...
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 I can almost see the light at the end of this major angst tunnel...almost. Author's Response: Unfortunately, you're not there yet. I'm so pleased that you are really into this novel. Thanks for all the great comments!
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 You have the most wicked imagination! Author's Response: Laughs! I have that in abbundance:)
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 That was way too funny.
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Gus angle is very interesting. I still don't see what men love about fake boobs anyway. Oh yeah, I'm gay. duh! :) Author's Response: Gay or not, I'm in total agreement. Fake boobs so suck, and not in a good, life affirming way, lol!
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Boys will be boys; Brian will go thermonuclear. Author's Response: Lol, that he will. His precious vette!
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 I wonder how to punish that. Brian handled it very well. I found your Yiddish/Deutsch interesting. You're a very gifted writer. Author's Response: Thank you! You're very generous with your praise and I'm grateful.
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Go Emmett! Sweet. The punishment fits the crime. Author's Response: I thought so:)
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Zen Sex Ed 101? Author's Response: I guess...
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 The future family plot thickens... Author's Response: Yes, things are getting wonky...
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Very impressive developments indeed. Your skill with words amazes me. tears... Author's Response: Oh, tears... Thank you for that last statement. I'm humbled...
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 You give really good smut :P Author's Response: Yes, it that wild imagination you were talking about earlier, lol!
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 You have to love a ploting Brian; I see magic in the air. Author's Response: It's always good to have BK in your court.
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Date: January 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 I'll die if she loses this one. Author's Response: Would I do that to you??? Not a chance...
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Brian handled the car and sex talk really well. Gus was very lucky. Author's Response: Brian is a great dad!
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Is Justin afraid to bond with the twins. Is he regreting letting them go? Author's Response: Keep on reading...
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 I bet Justin has issues with being Daddy J for the girls. He promised Gus that only he would be calling him Daddy J. Perhaps I'm really into your story. :) Author's Response: Perhaps you are, but I'm thrilled that you are so engaged in this. Thank you!
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 I bet Justin regrets giving up his babies. Got to read and find out what is his problem.
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Well that went better than I expected. He was only overwhelmed in love with the babies. Now I must find the next story in the series. Author's Response: Book two in this series is Gene Pool. Thanks for all the comments! Mickie
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Date: February 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Awarded Best Fan Fiction Classic Summary:
Banner by Masterglory, grazie mille cara. Sequel to "No more pushing." Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Anti-Ethan, Anti-Michael, Could be Canon, Unsafe Sex Characters: None Challenges: None Series: Happy endings Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 29631 [Report This] Published: March 17, 2008 Updated: May 03, 2009
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Married at last This boys will be a handful. Peter will bring John around perhaps. Author's Response: Yeah, but they will.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: First day at school John is coming around faster than I expected. I like how they share the parenting of the boys. Justin's a natural. Author's Response: Yeah, I'm no good at writing conflict. I know in RL it would probably take a lot longer, but I wanted to get on with it. Justin has a great role model in Jennifer, most of the time. Thanks.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A sleepover planned The parental grilll went better than one might expect. Too many parents hear "gay couple" and run for the hills. Author's Response: I know, I wanted them to have some new friends, someone outside the gang.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Meeting the parents That was a very good chapter. The irony of a small world didn't escape me either; the owner of the art suppy stores and contractor for example. Author's Response: Thank you. I figure that it's a pretty small town. I know that Pittsburgh is a little bigger, but well... :)
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Party Michael bashing is one of my favorite passtimes. You magnified his character in a realistic way. If I was Ben I'd dump the little shithead but that's me. Even with HIV he could do better. Author's Response: Mine too :D Thank you so much. I'd have never hooked up with him in the first place, but that's just me.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Claire visits. I wonder if Joan had some liquid courage before going to Kinnetik for that. Like duh? They are the legal guardians now; Claire is a moron if she can't see it. I wonder if we have heard the end of Saint Joan yet? I almost doubt it. Author's Response: Doesn't Joan always have liquid courage? Claire is not the quickest deer in the forest.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The 'devil' returns I fear that wasn't the last of Chris Hobbs for sure. He gets fired and hits the skids and will blame Justin and Brian. Gotta read what happens next. Author's Response: Go forth and read :) Not gonna tell what happens next.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Set-backs at work and the honeymoon Did you research the falls hotel or have you been there? Often in my stories I use places I've been to like England and Scotland, New York, Dallas, etc. That was a fun chapter. Author's Response: I reserched. I've never actually been to America or Canada. I'd love to go though. Thanks, I'm glad you thought so.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Family And the cast of characters grows; Cat sounds very interesting. Looking forward where we go to from here. Author's Response: That it does :) Thanks.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Meeting Cat and her family. I like adding Drew back into the picture. Author's Response: Thank you. I always liked him for Emmett.
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Horses and electronics I wondered when Craig Taylor would rear his ugly head. You've pretty much run the list of canon characters here. I think you forgot Cody though. hehehehe Author's Response: LOLL, I know, I haven't put in Dr. Dave either :)
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Tay-Kin Art I like how you explained the American loathing Canadians have for us Americans. Actually it's only bad with the French Canadians to be honest with you. Good evolution of the girls coming home. What country are you in if I may ask? Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have never seen or heard it for myself other than on movies and TV shows. I wanted the girls and the kids home where they belong. I'm from Denmark :)
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Christmas at Britin A mending with Joan was a nice touch; isn't fandom fun where we can create the QAF universe like we want to? Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I love to play with our boys and bend them to my will ;)
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Show Very good story. Your English is excellent I may say; better than many Americans would write. Thanks for another wonderful read. Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot to me :) Summary:
Brian and Justin have lived together in NYC for several years now. Brian comes home upset one day when he finds out his newest client needs him to go on a business trip...on a slow moving train to Chicago instead of a quick flight. Brian is even more upset that he will have to leave Justin behind, due to artistic committments, for such a long trip. But maybe Justin has other ideas in mind. Let's all take a journey on the Love Train. Thanks to Eka for the beautiful banner....my first one...and Becky for helping me with her beta skills.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Romance, Unsafe Sex Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 19624 [Report This] Published: March 17, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2008
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Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Honey I'm Home...And I've Got News I skip your one shots and seek the next story with chapters that interests me. Others did too but perhaps this banner sucked me in :P And the thought of sex on a train....oh baby!
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Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Let's Sit Down and Discuss the Problem I'm on a vacation from writing having created over a million words in one year and how better to spend it than reading your work? Justin knows how to bring Brian to his knees by getting on his knees. How sweet! |
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This is a sequel to my fic Karma. You should read that one first or this will make no sense. Thank you to my Beta Shellie for all her help and to Marilla_pm67, aka Luv_Sam for her beautiful icon. Is it Karma or luck that determines the outcome of our lives?
banner by Alyssa
