Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Penname: purpledee [Contact]
Real name: Deb
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Member Since: November 06, 2016
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Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for May 2016***

***This story is now completed.***  Post episode 220.  Ethan and Justin are in a monogomous relationship.  Tragic circumstances cause Justin's downward spiral into a state of depression and Brian is asked to intervene.  Will he be willing to swallow his pride in order to help Justin recover?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Ethan Gold, Jennifer Taylor, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 48621
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2010 Updated: May 01, 2016


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: August 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Hi, just read this story, although, think I may have read it before! You know what it's like when you get to the point of reading so many stories.

Really enjoyed the premise of this story and look forward to reading more of yours, which I will do next.

Thanks

Deb



Author's Response:

Hi, It's so nice that this story has new readers after all this time.  I am so thankful that you were kind enough to leave a review.  This was one of my favorite stories that I have written.  Hope you enjoy the others!  :)

 
Fatherhood by sfscarlet Rated: R [Reviews - 439]
Summary: Feature

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This is a sequel to The Stripper and A Man's Gotta Know When To Ask For Help.  As promised, Brian and Justin think about a family.  Banner by Marny. Thank you so much.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY Characters: Brian, Cynthia, Daphne, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Completed: Yes Word count: 193857
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2015 Updated: November 15, 2018


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: November 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54- Epilogue

So this is the end of a long journey!

I really liked this story and think it is the best of the trilogy.  I really enjoy your writing and look forward to the next story.

Thanks 

Deb



Author's Response:

Deb:

 

Thank you.  I'm so glad that you enjoyed all the stories.  I will be writing for the QAF gift exchange and plan to possibly extend a few stories that are one shots.  Who knows, I may revisit this universe or try something totally different.

 
Summary:

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The slave trade is alive and well in our AU society.  The community is mostly split half and half on the issue; half of society is for slavery and half is against.  However, Brian Kinney had never put much thought to the subject, despite the fact that his best friend, Michael, and Michael's mother, Deb, were both major players in CAST, a group against the sexual slavery of men and women.  But this all changes when Brian accompanies Michael to a slave auction, where he is introduced to a beautiful 18 year old slave named Justin, just now coming up for bid.  Born a free man, Justin's life was turned upside down when his father sold him into slavery at the tender age of 15, only three years before he was to be sold.  Chaos ensues.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family, Alternate Universe, Abuse, Angst, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Rape, Romance Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Chris Hobbs, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Emmett, Ethan, Gus, Hunter, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Joan Kinney, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Molly Taylor, Ted, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 28486
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2015 Updated: January 18, 2018


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: January 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mothers and Pseudo Friends

I would love for you to finish this.  I don't usually read incomplete stories that haven't been updated for a long time, but read this by mistake.  So please please finish this as it's very good so far and well written.

Ta

Deb

 
Holiday Happenings by PA Boi Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 506]
Summary: Feature

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Brian & Justin are established partners.  This story take place about 3 years after 513.  This is how I think they celebrated Autumn & Winter Holidays. Sequel to "Sickness & Health, Good Times & Bad."


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: Together Forever
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 191342
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2016 Updated: December 05, 2017


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Just a quick hello to ask if are still doing another sequel to this story line, cos I'm really looking forward to it!

Your story telling is very, very good.

Hope to hear from you soon,

Deb

 
Summary:

What happens when Justin's need for food, Brian's need for something (but he doesn't know what) and Michael's need for attention clash...

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Hurt/Comfort, Toppy! Justin Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Carl, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Emmett, Justin, Kiki, Michael, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: Food of Love
Chapters: 90 Completed: Yes Word count: 288078
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2017 Updated: May 07, 2017


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 76: GETTING MARRIED IN THE MORNING...RIGHT?

Comuppance at last! Can't wait till next chapter.

 
Misstep by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

Brian's offer to help his partner has some unforeseen consequences. 

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Brian, Daphne, Gus, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 22518
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2017 Updated: July 30, 2017


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: July 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Show and Tell

Loved this story, as always with your stuff.  It cheered me up, as I just finished reading a story with a suprisingly depressing ending!

I had to wait till this was finished as I can only follow so many B/J stories and keep them straight (pun intended) in my head.

Ta

Deb



Author's Response:

Hi, Deb!  I know what you mean about trying to keep the plot lines straight, so I totally understand. Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.  It is greatly appreciated. And thank you for the encouraging support as well. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.  ~Kim

 
Blaze of Glory by Lupin111 Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Feature

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Does destiny choose the person, or does the person choose their destiny?

He's supposed to be just another guy. Just another notch on Brian's belt.

But Justin has other ideas; a whole other master plan that's going to shock Brian about everything he's ever known.

One thing is for sure: whichever road Brian takes, his life is never going to be the same again.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Drama, Sci-Fi Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 25495
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2017 Updated: January 16, 2018


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: January 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Really enjoyed the story. You write very well.  I tend to only read stories when I see that they are finished, because I have started stories, got really into them only for them to become abandoned. So hence I review at the end.

Thanks for your writing.

 

Deb



Author's Response:

Hi Deb,

Thanks so much for reading this fic, and also for reviewing! Your compliments made me smile!

 
About A Divorce by Teinisydan Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 76]
Summary: Feature

Almost a decade ago Brian and Justin got married so that Justin would get his green card and could stay in the USA. They haven’t seen each other after they got married and now Justin has found someone he wants to marry for love. There’s only one thing in the way. He’s married to Brian. Now his job is to get Brian sign the divorce papers, which might turn out to be harder than he thought.

 

This story is complete!

 

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Justin/Other-Relationship Characters: Brian, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 30309
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2018 Updated: February 05, 2018


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: February 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 and Epilogue

This was a really good story, thoroughly enjoyed it!

Deb



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks hon! I'm glad you enjoyed it :). Thank you for the comment.

 
Summary:

Continuing the story of Brian & Justin's life together that started in "Sickness & Health, Good Times & Bad

 

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Thank you Marny for this beautiful banner, you are an artist!!!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: Together Forever
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 20562
[Report This] Published: April 24, 2018 Updated: November 12, 2018


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: April 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for getting this out for devotees of this story!

Great as usual, looking forward to the next chapter.

Deb



Author's Response:

Hi Deb, glad you enjoyed this latest update.  I appreciate your kind comments and hope you continue to enjoy this story.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!   Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: September 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just decided to read this first chapter again.

Not sure I understand as they already found out the sex of the twins and announced it in 'Holiday Happenings'

I know I'm impatient but really want to get back to the original story.  How did Michael do in the intervening 3 months at Kinnetic? Did Justin ever confront Mel about the school issue? etc

Hope for update soon.

thanks,

Deb



Author's Response:

I guess we can chalk that up to forgetful author.  

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: November 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This was good!  But must say I am really looking forward to 'Twins'!

I really want to know if Michael is still hanging in at Kinnetik.  After all he must have been there at least 3 months by now, as this is spring break.  Or has Cynthia had him hung drawn and quatered?!

Can't wait for the new story, please don't make us wait too long?

Thanks, take care,

Deb.



Author's Response:

The first chapter of the new story will be up soon.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

 
Keep holding on by BritinLover Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 134]
Summary:

20 year old Justin Taylor is a college student bullied for over a year by his homophobic classmate Chris Hobbs. Mockeries, insults and humiliations are his daily life.

25 year old Brian Kinney is an ad exec during the day and an advisor at the gay helpline "Keep holding on" by night, since a drama changed his life 9 years ago.

Little does Justin know that one call, one night, would maybe change his life...

Story will be updated once a week


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death, Out of Character, Romance, Suicidal Thoughts, Violence Characters: Brian, Chris Hobbs, Daphne, Debbie, Emmett, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 75064
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2018 Updated: December 22, 2018


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: September 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hi, I really like this story.

I know this is fiction and I don't wish to be critical. However, you have set this story in college/university not high school.  All the protagonists are adults and as such Justin would easily have recourse through the police for assault, harrassment and vandalism. He has witnesses in Daphne and Molly.  Also a Dean of a college/university could not simply ignore these things happening in his college as this too would be illegal and would not only jepardize his reputation/job but also the college.

Sos I had to say that cos it was bugging me.

But I can't wait to read more!

Thanks

Deb



Author's Response:

Hi!

I know and I got your point. I didn't want my story to be set in High school for Justin to be older. I know that some actions I described sound more like High School and I know that it can't make sense at some point. About Justin having easy recourses, I agree but he has to be agree to use them. Same for the witnenesses. Daphne knows that Justin doesn't want to talk, and even if she doesn't understand it, she doesn't want to be the one who will reveal everything. It can be hard to understand but I think it can be a way of seeing things. Just like Brian and Michael who never talked and never did anything when they were young.

Don't worry, I have nothing about criticisms lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Audrey

 
Summary:

The latest continuation of the story started in "Sickness & Health, Good Times & Bad".  It is not necessary to read all the previous stories but this will make more sense if you do. 

 

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Thanks to Marny for this beautiful banner!!!!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: Together Forever
Chapters: 44 Completed: No Word count: 245302
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2018 Updated: July 17, 2023


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: October 29, 2022 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

So happy to have an update! Really enjoyed as usual.

Can we have more Mad Mikey?  His mad ideas/delusions about Brian have been missing lately and you know I luv me a bit of anti-Mikey, for comic value if nothing else.  Lindsay's in the nut house, so comic value with her.  And Leda seems to controlling Mel's antics.

Thanks and hope for an update soon.

Deb L



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the update.  Thanks for letting me know!!!!   More Mikey is an unusuak request, I'll put on my thinking cap and see what I can come up with.  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: October 29, 2021 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Thank you for the new chapter.

I'm glad Granny put Kate in her place.  I knew you were building up for something to happen with Linday, by her eratic behaviour.  I'm presuming she will end up in a facility again.  Interesting twist with the Mel domestic abuse line!

What's happning with Mad Mikey?  You haven't mentioned him in a while?

Hope you're jabbed and safe.

Deb L.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 16, 2024 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Please, please, please can we have a new chapter or a closing chapter to finish this series.  I have loved this series from the start and as they in America, I need closure!!

Thanks

Deb

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 16, 2024 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Please, please, please can we have a new chapter or a closing chapter to finish this series.  I have loved this series from the start and as they in America, I need closure!!

Thanks

Deb

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 16, 2024 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Please, please, please can we have a new chapter or a closing chapter to finish this series.  I have loved this series from the start and as they in America, I need closure!!

Thanks

Deb

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: April 22, 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thanks for another update.  It's great!

Nice to see Mikey in the story again, being his irritating self!  I can almost hear the whine from here.

Take care,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Mikey is something we can count on, he is unchanging!!  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 08, 2023 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Another update.  You are spoiling us!

I still forward to this story and this series is def in my top 5.

'Granny' Janet needs to sort her life out & get a grip!

Thanks.

Deb



Author's Response:

trying to be a bit more frequent with updates.  Glad you are still reading and enjoying.  Janet needs to understand that if she wants acceptance she must fully accept the entire family.  Her family appear to be slow learners.  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: July 01, 2022 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Yes, an update!

Please don't stop writing this story as this and the whole series I have loved pretty much from the start.

I know I don't write reviews as often as I should but I would really, really miss these stories.  Also we need to find WTF is happening with idiot comic boy and the rest of the 'family'.

Thanks

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Well if I inspired you to write a review, I guess a long delay was a good idea.  A long-time reviewer from when I first started writing this 9 years ago has stopped leaving reviews and I thought maybe that was a sign to wrap up this saga.  Guess it night be quite that time yet.  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: August 25, 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hi, you know I love your writing and I totally understand you are busy in these, very trying times, but if at all possible could we have a new chapter soon as it's been 10 weeks and I'm really desperate for my fix!!!

I just want to say, as I think your profession lies somewhere in the medical field (assuming from previous posts), that all you guys are the best.  We do the whole clapping and make noise in recognition in the UK, hope you get that recognition in US.

Okay, feel guilty now for requesting update.

All my best wishes to you,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Not in medical field at all, sorry to destroy any illusions.  I had a brother and have a niece who are doctors.  I am well but real life has had some challenges but I am working on am update and hope to post it this week.  I aologize for the delay and U know what it is like to wait for an update to a favorite story.  Thanks Deb for the kind words!!!!!!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: June 12, 2021 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Hi Hun, know you're busy, but an update would be really welcome.  Been 8 weeks since last update.

Sos, don't wanna push.  But I Love, Love, Love this series so much, it's like an addiction!!

Take care,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry real life is hectic at the moment but should update in the next couple days.  Just doing some final edits.  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: June 09, 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hi hun.  Any chance of a new chapter soon?  It has been nearly 4 weeks.

Don't wish to hassle you but ..... okay I am hassling you.  I need a new chapter real bad!!!  You know how much I love this series and your writing!

Thanks

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Finally a new chapter today.  I am a bad author and should update more frequently.  I promise to try harder to make the update gaps shorter.  Thanks Deb!!!!   Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: April 07, 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thanks for another chapter!

Deb



Author's Response:

Happy to know you are still reading!  Thanks for the review!!!!   Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: June 19, 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Okay, I will try not to sarcastic but thanks for the eventual update. (I said i'd TRY!!)

Anyhoo, good update but not a lot happening.  Although you have cunningly set the seeds about for future chapters.

What will Brian and Justin do about Gus' contact with his contact Moms'?

How will they find out about JR and the whole neglect/daycare thing?

What will Michael do next?  Also, whilst on the subject of dear little Mikey, why has no one pulled him up on his treatment of Justin anytime he enters the Building.  If Brian hasn't noticed surely Ted or the eagle eyed Cynthia should have?  We know that the other receptionists don't like him, so would have no problems dobbing him in.  And, Cynthia has an in built radar for office gossip.  If I was part owner of a company and someone treated one of my co-owners like this, they would not only be fired but feel my foot up their arse!!!

Thanx hun,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Bad author!!!  I think Brian and Justin will follow Lena's advice and only arrane a meeting when they are sure it will be a positive experience.  I think Debbie will provide a place for JR & Gus to get together.  Justin ignore Mikey, he is secure in Brian's love.  To me, Mikey is like Brian's brother - too much history to just break off all contact with Mikey.  All Justin would have to do is to tell Cynthia to fire Mikey and he would be gone.  That would make all interactions with Debbie very awkward.  They prefer to iognore Mikey rather than making a family situation unpleasant.  If it was all just about Mikey's behavior he never would have been hired in the first place.  Debbie's tears get him the job.  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 23, 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's great to have another update sooner than later.  Still really loving this series!

Keep churning out the good stuff!

Thanks

Deb



Author's Response:

Happy you ate still reading and enjoying!!!   The babies seem like they will provide a lot of plot lines.  Thanks for the nice comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: July 21, 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Just a quick line to say hi & hope you're okay, as we haven't had an update for a while.  I hope nothing is wrong and life is treating you well.

Take care,

Deb L



Author's Response:

I am well.  I apologize for long delay.  Busy RL & a bit of creative block.  Hope to have an update posted soon.  Thanks for checking in,  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: August 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Please, please, please, can we have an update Bill.  It has been over 2 months since the last one.

You know how much I enjoy your stories in this series, but it is very frustrating waiting so long for the next chapter.

I understand that life can get in the way of things and hope that life is treating you well and nothing is going too wrong, or that writers block is kicking your proverbial!!

I need to know what is happening with Craig's bitch and Michaels non-work ethic and above all how Brian and Justin are going to thwart the entitled bitches and their plans to move to Florida without informing Brain.

I hope Brian is going to release the hounds, or in this case the three headed dog that guards the gates to WASP hell. Those three heads being Jennifer, Daphne and Justin, he he he!!

Well, sorry if I seem pushy, but I'm getting desperate!

Take care, with all best wishes to the contrary,

Deb L



Author's Response:

It did eventually appear and I hope not to have a long delay like this again.  More to come soon.  Not pushy at all just frustrated by the delay and I understand that!!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: August 30, 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yes! An update and a good one too!

Look forward to the next one, but please, please, please don't leave it 3 months again if you can help it.

Thanks

Deb L



Author's Response:

I know I have been very remiss in updating and promise to do better.  Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks so much for the review!!!!!!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: November 21, 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hi just want to say thanks for great update.  I also think they should look at some sort of order of protection, that if they move Gus/JR out of state, it would be considered kidnapping and Mel/Linday could be charged.  They should also make everyone aware of what's going on and Jen should drop a word or two in Mel's bosses ear, so that she is aware of their machinations and intentions.  This wil hpefully clip their wings enough!

Thanks 

Deb L

PS; Please can we have shorter update periods? (last update was, I think, 7 weeks ago)



Author's Response:

I know I am a bad author.  I will try and get better at updates.  I like that you have a new job for Jennifer to take care of.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: January 08, 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update, an excellent chapter.  I love it when the bitches, especially Mel get verbal smackdowns.  She got a shot between the eyes from not only Jen but Justin too!  Jen is right, she really is a slow learner!

If this does go to court I hope you add all their apalling attitude and actions, including the reason Brain gave up his rights; the 'green card' episode.

Regardless, I think Mel's future looks very bleak, with the Jen/Justin tag team on her arse!

Thanks again,

Deb L



Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed the latest update.  Kind of amazing Mel is still on her feet because she got some serious put down from the Taylor T** team.  She got advised to face reality but still seems to be avoiding it.  I think the more Gus becomes like Brian the harder it is for Mel since she has always been so jealous of Brian.  Thanks for the review, I LOVE to hear from the readers!!!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: February 12, 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Really enjoyed this new chapter.  Mel needs a slapdown, the self righteous bitch!  I think she will be suprised about Joan testifying on her behalf.  Joan is a total bitch but only she herself can mess with her family not some outsider like Mel, who is a lesbian as well!

Thanks

Deb L

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: February 26, 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Did I detect a little blackmail & from a priest too!

Can't wait for Mel & Lindz to find out B & J are going for full custody.  I'm sure Michael will have something to say about that too.  There may have to a pitts wide warning for screeching, screaming and whining!!!

Thanks.  Looking forward to next chapter.

Deb L



Author's Response:

Fr Bolton knew the right words to get Joan to agree. Blackmail for a good cause????  I don't think M&L will have a positive response but they have pretty much sunk their own ship.  Michael will not be pleased!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thanks for another chapter.  Can't wait for Mel to get the suprise that B & J got there first with the custody applications!!

Deb L



Author's Response:

I don't think it will be a happy surprise for Mel.  I truly appreciate you taking the time to review and let me know you are still reading and enjoying!!!   Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: April 11, 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thanks for update.  It definitely makes things better while we're all on 'lockdown'!!

Take care,

Deb L. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!  Stay safe!!!!  Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: May 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It's a shame nobody recorded Melanie's visit to Britin, as they coud have her charged with endangering a minor.  That would surely ensure custody to Brian and Justin.  Although, maybe their written statements will add weight.  Also Jen needs to get in contact with Mel's boss again and appraise her of the situation?  She doesn't need much more to fire Mel and then she would really be out on her arse in the cold!!!

Thanks for another update this soon.  I love this story and can't wait to for the next! 

Take care in these bad times and I hope you're well enough to keep writing the good stuff!!!

Deb L.

 



Author's Response:

I think everyone was just too shocked by Mel's behavior to think about recording it.  I don't think they will need much more to ensure they get custody.  I am well thanks, hope you are staying safe, such s carzy worl right now!!  Thanks for the review Deb!!!!   Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: June 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Mel and Lindz are such sefish bitches. 'Gus is so demanding of my time.' Really, well she shouldn't have had children in the first place should she!

Your stories do get me riled up and you know I love anti Mel, Lindz & Mikey!

Just a thought, the boys have been living there for a year now, as John's birthday is soon & he had a party just afte thay arrived.  But I don't recall mention of Gus or Peter's birthdays.  Did I just miss reading this?

Thanks for this chapter, can't wait to see what idiocies/demands Mad Mikey the Moron comes up with next.  Would love to see if he is actually stupid enough to demand Brian support JR and what everyone's reaction would be!!

Take care

Deb L.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: January 10, 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thanks for update! Happy New Year!

 

Okay, rant over.  Take care,

Deb L

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Deb, I agree!!!!  Don't want to stir up too much controversy.  Happy new year to you!!!!!!!!!   Bill

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: April 28, 2021 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thanks for update!  Glad Justin put the other grandparents in their place.  I hope Michael gets his smackdown soon.  If anyone else was a rude about the owner of the company he works for, he would be fired long ago!!

Looking forward to more,

Deb L.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Deb, truly sorry not to have responded sooner.  Justin always protects his family.  Brian has too much past with Mikey to completley abandon him but it Mikey comes close to Brian's breaaking point.  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

 
Summary:

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It's Christmas, and Brian and Justin have very different views about their Christmas Tree.


Categories: QAF Gift Exchange LJ, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Christmas Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3998
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2018 Updated: December 19, 2018


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: December 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Tannenbaum Schmannenbaum

I loved your Christmas one shots on here!  But then you are one of my favourite writers, I just wish you would update your chaptered stories more often than once every 1/2 years!

I absolutely love your 'Homecoming' series and wish 'Homework' could go quicker on LJ.

I also wondered why on this site, MW, Homecoming shows as complete at chapter 14, when it has 43 chapters on LJ.

Ok moan over! Happy Christmas and happy travels,

Deb

 
Summary:

AU End of season 2. At the Rage party, instead of leaving with Ethan, Justin left both Ethan, and a shocked Brian. He also never cheated with Ethan. This is nothing like season 2. It's just how I would have liked it to go.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 14833
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2019 Updated: February 04, 2019


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: February 07, 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Really liked this story and your style of writing.  It could do with a bit of help on the grammer and tenses though.

I think you may have aged Justin a bit prematurely as he would have been only 19/20, not 22, at the beginning of your story, according to cannon.  But that is just a minor glitch!

Looking forward to reading more from you,

Regards

Deb.

 
Sugar Baby by Teinisydan Rated: R [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Justin had a sugar daddy who died, leaving him very well provided for, and now he’s ready to pay it forward to someone else.

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 12679
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2019 Updated: August 04, 2019


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: August 05, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Really good and I loved the different take on how Brian/Justin started a relationship'

Kudos to you!

Ta

Deb L



Author's Response:

Thank you :). I'm happy you enjoyed this story! Thank you for the comment. 

 
This Time by YumYumPM Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 409]
Summary: Feature

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Wanting to change certain aspects of QAF led me to write this.  Maybe THIS TIME things go better.  Hope you enjoy these changes.  I plan to post every Sunday.


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Chris Hobbs, Claire, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne, David Cameron, Debbie, Emmett, Ethan, Gus, Hunter, Jennifer Taylor, Jim Stockwell, Joan Kinney, Justin, Kiki, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Molly Taylor, Mysterious Marilyn, Original Character(s), Ted, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 108413
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2019 Updated: January 04, 2021


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: April 12, 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Episode 29 (The Leper, Hath the Babe Not Eyes?)

Oh dear, Debs will not be pleased.  Can hear the screeching from here!

Thanks for update, take care.

Deb L.



Author's Response:

She deserves not to be happy.  She took Vic for granted.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: June 07, 2020 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Episode 37(Rage Against This Machine)

Not fair leaving such a cliffhanger!  You should be punished!

Now we have to wait a week to see what happens to Mikey the Moron!!!

Ta

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Cliffhangers.  Well, I had to stop somewhere.  Sorry.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: November 02, 2020 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 Chapter 56 (The Election)

Deb is turning out quite nasty in this,  Love it!

Hope now that Michael got involved in this, Brian cuts him out too. 

Also can't wait to find out what Lindsay is up to.  Prob not preggers at all!

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Snicker.  When you find out what Lindsay did, I think you'll be very surprised.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: July 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

You keep adding more mysteries!  We need some answers! LOL

I really want to know what Justin's parents were thinking.  And shouldn't child services or the police be after them for child abandonment?

Has mad moron Mikey been in cahoots with a locksmith?  

Thanks for this update.

Deb L.



Author's Response:

First you'd have to find them.  Molly's in safe hands with Justin.  As for Mikey, that would be a good guess.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: November 29, 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)

I am loving this story so far. It reminds me of a few others, but better.  

Love your stuff, here or on KD.

Thanks

Deb L



Author's Response:

Glad to know you're loving this.  I'm hoping not to repeat certain things This Time.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 -Episode 25 (Hypocrisy: Don't Do It)

Still loving this!

Deb L



Author's Response:

Glad to know.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Episode 26(Pride)

Thanks for this chapter.  I am really loving this story.  Are you still going to post this on KD?

Deb L



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're loving this story!  I only have 16 reviews so I pulled it from KD until later.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: May 31, 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Episode 36 (The Dangers of Sex and Drugs)

Michael is such a loser!

I hope Vic lives longer in your timeline.  I always liked his character.

Will Justin have any interactions with Ethan?  And why is Debbie being so off with Justin this time around?  So many questions.

I love this story!

Thanks

Deb L.

 



Author's Response:

I liked Vic too.  So I'm hoping he'll be around for a long time.  Yes, Justin does interact with Ethan and Deb for some reason wasn't as taken with Justin as she was the first time.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: June 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Episode 38 (You say it's your birthday! I could care less)

Thanks for new chapter.

Just a point, it was Justins 19th birthday in season 2 when he met Ethan at the concert & Brian ordered the hustler, episode 38.

Still really loving this!

Deb L.



Author's Response:

I seem to have mess up with my chapters.  I've been using transcript because watching Michael hurts and it turns out that one of the chapters wasn't what it should have been. sigh.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: July 26, 2020 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Episode 44 (House full of children)

I wondered when Jennifer would show up again, Definitely not as nice this time around - bitch! LOL.

Not sure if I missed something, but I thought Justins laywer was Marcus, so who is Ezra?  Perhaps I've had a senior moment!

Ta for new chapter, still really good,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Melanie's cousin the lawyer is Ezra Marcus.

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: December 09, 2020 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 part 1 - Episode 60 (Escalating Violence)

Is Lindsay still pregnant?  I thought I read in a previous chapter that she had lost her baby too but can't find it?  Did I imagine it?

Look forward to the next update.

Thanks

Deb L.



Author's Response:

If she is or isn't Justin doesn't know. 

 
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: January 04, 2021 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 -Episode 60 part 2 (Escalating Violence)

I really enjoyed this, although it seemed to end rather quickly.  Not sure if that was the original intention but I loved it.

Thanks

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Sorry it ended so soon, but I got stuck trying to bring the Jenny Rebecca birth to a conclusion to satisfy people and then the characters stopped talking to me.  Who knows if I watch the last two seasons I might come up with a sequel.

 

 
Michael Always Knew by Draccone Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Something that the muse came with out of left field. Hope you guys enjoy.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family Characters: Brian, Debbie, Emmett, Justin, Michael, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2511
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2020 Updated: January 13, 2020


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: January 14, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really good one shot story.

Hope you will update your other ones soon.

Thanks

Deb L



Author's Response: I was stuck for a bit and then the muse came with this little bit. It actually got me writing for the other stories so expect something soon.

 
Summary:

Don’t people just love neighbors? Especially those loud, obnoxious, annoying, way too confident, hot as hell wall bangers, or more like floor bangers in this story. Doesn’t this sound just like a dream? Or maybe, your nightmare?

THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE! 

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Drama, Humor Characters: Brian, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12137
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2020 Updated: July 30, 2020


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: August 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good, humorous story.  Just what the Doc ordered, to cheer us up in these difficult times! LOL

Thanks, really enjoyed it.

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Hah, you're right, people should have something to chuckle to! Especially now that the situation is what it is. I'm glad you found this as a good medicine ;). Thank you for the comment! 

 
Eighteen by Teinisydan Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Justin wakes up in a hospital after suffering a head injury.

THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Other-Relationship, Could be Canon, Friendship, Justin/Other-Relationship, Minor Character Death, Post-513 Fic Characters: Brian, Debbie, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 30989
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2020 Updated: December 29, 2020


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: January 04, 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Really enjoyed this story

Thanks

Deb L.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this story! Thank you for the comment!

 
I can change that! by Clarissa Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

It's my story and I'm writing whatever I want. Unsuccessful and poor Justin dies in New York few months after leaving. Brian can't stand it and he commits suicide. But...he doesn't die. Brian Kinney gets a second chance. He wakes up in the past so he can fix all the mistakes he made in the previous life. Brian is determined. In this life he wants only one thing. Happiness for him and Justin. Together. Because now...he believes in love.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Out of Character, Post-513 Fic, Spoilers, What If Characters: Brian, Craig Taylor, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Ted, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 65415
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2020 Updated: May 27, 2021


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: December 18, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Time for art show!

This is very good, look forward to next chaper.  By the way the ageof consent in Pennsylivania is 16 and was at the time of the show.

Thnks

Deb L.

 
Summary:

Justin and Daphne are working as servers for the summer before their senior year of college.  One night Justin is given a table of business men to serve. He never expected to get the best Tip of his life.

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Daphne, Justin, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2912
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2021 Updated: November 12, 2021


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: November 14, 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this.  It was well wrtten and a great read.

Thanks

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Just  a fun little distraction.  

 

 
Summary:


Brian and Justin have moved the family to Atlanta for the summer.  Justin planned to focus on his art students and his own work. J.Jay, his assistant, would be helping him at the gallery and with the other young artists that would come and go throughout the summer.

Brian had a couple leads for new clients he planned on working on this summer but his main plan was to spend as much time with his kids as he could.  He especially wanted to spend time with Gus.  Since Lindsay had come back to the states, Brian felt like he was missing out on so much more and Gus was growing up so fast. Henry had come along to take care of the kids. A housekeeper had been hired to do some of the cooking and to clean while they were there.  It was the perfect home away from home for the Tyler-Kinney clan.

Kevin had started the center years earlier and now had bigger plans for Legacy Atlanta.  Tom Butterfield had been running the place since Kevin had moved to Pittsburgh.His wife, Natalia, had been working with Brandy and Sally, Kevin’s adopted daughters and he couldn’t wait to meet his newest granddaughter, Kelin Cae, who had been named after him.  They planned to open a new, expanded Center that would be able to help more struggling, young adults.

 

Another benefit to the trip was to get away from Craig Taylor.  If it was the last thing they did, they were keeping full custody of Aaron. Craig may have donated sperm, but that was his only contribution.  He was still on parole so he wasn’t allowed to leave the state….or could he.



Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Joan Kinney, Justin, Lindsay, Molly Taylor, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: Legacy
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 71619
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2022 Updated: March 28, 2022


Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: March 13, 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hi I've just caught up wih the whole of his series.  I love your writng, just got behind with it. 

I'm a bit confused.  In A Son's Admiration, B & J get a restraining order against Craig after he hassles them, at Britin, at 3 am but  in Legacy 1 it's impied there is no restraining order.  Also if there was a restraining order, surely he would not be able to be at the laywers office at the same time as them?  Unless it only applies to their property in Pennsylvania and not their persons.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks,

Deb L.

PS  The reason their house is called BRITIN in the series is because Justin thought it was 'cheesy' to have the first 3 letters is Brian's name and the last 3 letters of his name and it stuck, hence, Britin.



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoy my stories.  I may have missed a detail but I am fairly sure the restraining order, if not said was implied, that the restraining order was expired and the fact they were out of state made a difference, too.  I did remember the restraining order so I addressed it in there somewhere.  I never reread my chapters. One of these days I am going to go back to the first story and see what I wrote. LOL  If I'm reading, I'm not writing, and I love writing.  If you ever have a story idea or a plot within a story let me know.  This whole series was started because of plot bunny someone gave me.