I always reviewed under vlsope2@ , now this new system is crazy. First of all when is Deb going to realize she's an enabler she has cause Mikey's problems by not holding him responsible for his own fuck ups! She thinks because of Brian's money he should fix everyones problems, she even said "you owe my kid" all he owes Mikey is a swift kick and how Lindsey can be so blind to her actions, these two tools never act like there are responsible for crimes that won't go away or that money can't fix, it would serve them right to rot in jail for decades. I love your story, even if I get mad as a wet hen at the two most un-likeable characters. more chapters please.

I have really missed your writing. I want to know what happen to stupid mikey and the drama queen Lindsey. Most of all I want to know that Brian is going to be okay and maybe have gus with him, he is such a better parent than dulisional Lindsey.

Thanks to you I got to re-read your wonderful story, I hope fans get an itch to read it also. Unfortunately, the pictures are gone, Gus's train at home and Gus's room with the train decorated theme. I still can visonalize them because the story left quiet an impression. now on to Tricky and his love for Brian.

I love the interaction between Gus and Colin, with Gus being ignored by his moms he still loves Colin and is not jealous of his little brother. I can't belive the condition of Linz's kitchen it makes you wonder if JR is fed enough.

I don't put anything past, miss tears and madam bitch they are aways mean and nasty when they don't get their way,they don't think.. Brian could take care of a house plant much less his son

thank you, nice story. Any time mikey gets slapped or caught in his lies is a good day for me.

Hi Sweet Baboo,  Been rereading again, and hope Kevin will written in.Like Grandmom Jen is always saying Kevin is just full of love. Brian and Justin, and the rest of the house hold especially Gus has given Kevin a wonderful extended famly who loves and teaches him many things to like Brian teaching him how to kick a scoccer ball, or Gus helping him with his reading and for all the kindness and love they have shown him, Kevin has given back so much love.I missed reading about the child he makes the lessons they have taught him so important and special. Love you, your Sally

I really liked your story, Iread most of your work once I found ''Broken Angel'' I've been hooked on your writing.

Really, hershey bars,adult ice cream with all that wonderful fruit I was starving by the time I finished the chapter! Of course you only need a anti acid when mikey is around.

Liniz is right, mikey wants all the attention on him instead of Brian and Justin. mikey is just evil, he deserves to lose Ben, J.R., his comic store let his mommy tend to her baby for the rest of his life to be told every to do by mommy.

Well, mikey behaved he had only been threaten with the lost of comic store and the comics and his toys. I'm sure he will be back on the best friend train soon.Justin had his day Brian would do anything to make him happy. This is a great story and I'm so happy they got married in spite of Joan, Craig,and mikey

Brian gave Justin the wedding of his dreams and Justin gave Brian the reality of a loving family who loved him unconditionally they both are happy and I hope a few babies will enter their lives Sawyer and Teresa would love that.

I'm so happy, a new chapter !!! There is this little voice in my head it keeps saying ''The Ass Hole Supreme did it.''!   Yes good old whiny is at it again ! This jerk has the IQ of a spoon. Thank you so much for the new chapter I just Brian's mom and dad.

I loved your new chapter, Sam is always a trip, Brian may look like Sawyer but his bad boy appeal is like Sams. If you get Sam, Teresa, and Brian mad at you at the same time I suggest you have your will in order. So glad Mikey was told off and dismissed he is such an ass, the things he said to Justin were awful, I wish Brian had told Mikey that he had bottomed for his beautiful husband and Mikey couldn't compete in size with his lover in any matchup.

Mikey wants to remain fourteen, but he still acts like a two year old which his mother is fine with for some odd reason.

Em is good at taking care of people he cares about, he often took are of Justin and he was close to Ted he's the ideal best friend

It would take Em, Ted, and Cynthia to keep mikey at bay, but at least his true friends cared enough to protect him.

Deb is getting to be as stupid as her son, and neither of them have Brian's interest at heart, Jenn still cares about Brian and he trusts her.

In the qaf series after season one I found I really disliked Linz and mikey. Mikey was simple his character was to child like and he was as dumb as a stick also the actor who played him Hal Sparks I firmly dislike, Linz was suposed to be a dear friend to Brian and was constantly pitting Mel and Brian against each other so she could have both people hating each other and still have both. By season two I saw to me Debbie being hateful to Brian, she was classless, bossy, crude, and intrusive . Demanding people to do what she expected of them, she tried to run everyones life. She was loud and only saw her way of doing things, but what I hated the most was hitting Brian she often said these were love taps but she knew how his father had hit him since he was a tottler she should have known better .

Jus's photos are funny can just see how he and Brian elevate their sex play. It always makes me mad how mikey and Lindsay just treat Brian's door almost like a revolving door and just come in uninvited and kinda made the decision for Justin what to wear to the club they didn't their sex life talked about all over Liberty Ave, I enjoyed your story very much

Cute and so like Justin. I'm glad your writing again I've been reading some of your earlier works  again and enjoy them as I did the first time, missed you. 

I really don't like cats I've been afraid of them all my life. But Brian is a softy when it comes to furballs be they puppies or cats. I read a story where he feel in love with a tiny kitten just a day old a little gray girl kitten, he even wore her like a live scarf and people were unnerved when the little gray scarf opened her big blue eyes! Funny this one was Justin's and the eyes had green eyes and was called Munchkin before the night was over bet Brian was cuddleing it and trying not to get caught. I loved your story a good follow up would be Gus and others meeting Munchkin, he is really cute!

I like this story, but it would serve Brian right if ended up with Justin's little problem

The boys eating habits who turn any sane person running from the room.

Justin is a food magnet and the only person that has really tacky taste (more than Em)is Debbie.

cocholate on mashed potatoes yuck!!!

The way mikey buts in is amazing. no one ask or wants his opinon. As far as I'm concerned he is 2 year old in the body of an ugly 40 year old 

I can remember on the series and from other stories on MIDNIGHT WHISPERS Brian was always pissed off when he had a cold, and the cancer Justin was always on his case about eating--either finishing meals or just trying to get him to eat more--sorry Justin Karma is in deed a bitch.

mikey just had to tattle, I don't know what he had to gain, but it sure isn't Brian

talk about stress release!

the twink needs his twinkies, and you were talking about the snack cakes if it wasn't storming I would have taken a cab and brought home my own stash --evil person

Justin 25 --skanky Linz (-) 0

 If only Deb could have given mikey the tough love she gave Brian maybe she would have raised a man instead of a 40 year old spoiled infant. 

clothes from the Big Q that ought to have Brian fainting away

I love their games, almost as much as they do

I adore Daphne she does not suffer fools gladly.While everyone else pussy-foots around dear delicate mikey, she tells the unvarnished truth, he just can't accept it, his view of his entitlement is grossly inflated

I always enjoy the stories that include the Browns. they  always  respect and love the men Brian and Justin. they may be clients of Kinnetic but enjoy each others company.

 Loved the names Justin used to explain what you wouldn't want in a name F A T, Z I T, and of course D I C---no telling what Brian will threaten in jest to his husband.

I guess it isn't "ian"gold or Brandon, Justin would know them right away. With the heavy clothing I guess the nut doesn't realize Justin's exspecting. I hope he doesn't ruin a perfect weekend for the guys

The boys and their gamess, and Justin is working on Brian about those twinkies

 If there is such a thing as karma, mikey will become a deaf mute. I wish a bear had helped mikey outside then the ever lasting shit out of him. With a bit of luck Brian will have the pleasure of doing that himself. mikey is more than dumb, he's evil he likes hurting people and blames them by saying I just told the truth, not my fault if he couldn't take it--truly a asshole

 I loved your story! I always found it strange that according to Brian he doesn't do love, he doesn't do romance, when he showed Justin love every look, touch,every time when they were alone, guess he didn't think it was manly to show his feelings but everyone with the exception of dumb mikey and the delusional Linds saw the changes in him and how much he did love Justin just like he adored Gus. They were the losers nobody loved them as much as they loved themselves. I always enjoy your stories you in your stories always find ways for B/J to show how their love always endures.

OK, you did good. I loved the picture, except for the ugly right hand lower picture of that moron! The story was great, hearing him tell mikey that it would never would  never be him, even if there was never a Justin. Only problem I'm greedy woman. it was short three chapters : 1) mikey goes to mommy --mommy breaks the speed of sound to rip into Brian, 2) mikey calls Lindsay to tell how abusive Brian was to him and it's Justin's fault, and 3) mikey talks with Joan who rushes to tell her son he's evil and going to hell! The best part of your first story was the tatoo (who would think Brian would mar his beautiful body) the best part of story #2 was telling mikey he never loved him and he never would, and mikey seeing the tatoo. You made my day, thank you sweetie!

My sweet Baboo, As usual I failed to address situation within your story, the act of two boys that found shoving and useing hurtful words like retard against Gus and Kevin, then the two boys mother ask if Gus couldn't make friends with regular people instead of retards! So we see how the womens treatment of others made an impression on her children and she found nothing wrong in talking that way! This is much the same way that Mel and Lindsay treat Kevin, as if he was invisiable. Our person in the oval office often treats people like this--he calls mexicans animals, lazy, rapist,etc. black men and women are ex cons, drug addicts, act uppity, and dishonest in every way, women are only good for groping and fucking on occasion and no doesn't mean anything. Other countries sit back and openly laugh at us and have interest in coming to our aid and oh yes gays are trying to break up hetro marriages. This man has to be mentally challaged or has a serious illness. If your heart didnot break when you saw babies and mothers torn away from each other than it's to late for us. The way our leader talked about the late senator from Az. and made fun of him dying of brain cancer I knew all was lost if he was mean and petty in McCain's final days and now almost 600 children may never find their parents Trumps responce? Well, they won't try to come here again, we showed them what we could do that's Trumps legacey, McCains will be honer, duty and love of country.Trump even  made fun of John being a POW. I'm not now or ever will be a GOP supporter but I would never take his actions it's not about party it's about the right way to treat others. Sorry about the soap box but this chapter hit a nerve about teaching your children principles, manners, etc. your chatterbox Sally

My sweet Baboo,   I just knew this chapter was going to make me happy when it had such a lot about Gus and Kevin. When you started your three stories who would have guessed that John and Peter would be so protective of the little guys, even Joe got up and started searching for Gus and Kevin.Brian and Justin have turned into loving role models.  That's exactly what John and Peter needed, enjoyed Patrick and Josh and the patience and love showed to Kevin was wonderful--and of course they all love Grandma Jen. I was afraid Lindz's entitled behavior was going to put a damper on everyones fun, but Brian won't let that happen, sorry Nina,Daddy, and Teddy Man have to be around the three grumpy pants Lindz, J.R., and Mel. So glad dumb ass mikey isn't there. If he was it certainly wouldn't be the happyest place on earth any more! Love ya, your Sally

I just saw this story today, hadn't seen your story before. I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. I loved the children especially Justin's youngest two how the little boy emulated Brian. Jackie was wonderful, no breaks in life but was so loveable and Brian needed a brother who could love him, not for what he could do for him. This is the first I've heard of you but will certainly be looking for more stories from you.

Sweet Baboo, just when I think Mark's parents can't get any worse they then raise the bar of their stupidity! Hope if it goes to court the judge tells the bigot off and he loses and ends up with court cost! Bet Gus looked adorable dressed like his daddy...he's so much like his dada and has sweetness Brian would have had if he hadn't been raised by wolveas or worse. Bet Brian suddered the entire time at the car dealership yellow car with brown upolstrey! Gus singing and dancing at the babies was so sweet, his daddy and papa made sure when the babies arrived Gus absolutly certain of their love and showed love for his baby brother and sister instead of jealousy. Wish Mel could understand that Linz is the reason she hates Brian, she pitted Mel and Brian against each other enjoying them fighting over her making her feel I don't think that had anything to do with her illness. I hope Mel will come see Gus (after checking with Brian no one needs a surprise drop in, leave that to mikey....he's a fool)I love this story and the growth of the family. Love ya, your Sally always  

Hi Sweet Baboo, your not a bad baboo just consider it a Baboo boo boo. Now a new review, Jay's father needs custody, Jay is damaged emotionally has no friends a mother who does indeed needs to be hosed if not by Brian then by the legal system . His mother is sadly lacking in the skills as a mother just look how  Justin brought him home with him when she was hopitalized and she had no back up plan. She is didn't even appreciate  her child going home with Justin and be looked after her only concern was Justin and Brian were gay! I really like Joe he's  the son the weasel (mikey) should have been and it was so sweet between him and granny and feeding one of the babies also love his relatiomship with JR. Now for Mel she prides herself on her independence and how she doesn't need  anyone, how's that working out, bitch? She wanted everyone to butt out and she got it, but now wonders why people aren't there for her , you can't have both ways--she's suppose to be a top attorney her attitude turns people off. she should crawl to Ted, Brian and Justin they don't like her either but will never allow their feelings about her hurt an innocent child. Seems like there is litle hope where Linz is concerned. personally if I never heard the names of mikey and Lindsay ever again--Linz didn't cause this new problem it's just Karma fixing her wagon for the years of her metteling in everyone's life. Feel like Mel would have been a better person with Leda. Off my soapbox. Have a Merry Christmas and a safe New Year......then write about the prople we love! love ya your Sally   

testing to see if it works 

Sweet Baboo, hit the submit by accident. I feel sorry for Joan she led a horrible life not so different from Janet except she has just about killed herself with the drinking.Her daughter in jail but to scream at Joan after all the mistakes the daughter is as delusional as weasel boy, Brian was the one that was abused his whole childhood. I'm waiting for Granny to do a smackdown on weasel boy, that will give him a reason to whine.            your loving Sally

I had high hopes we were done with Harkins family even if the trouble maker was a cousin.The family must teach entitlement from womb. Parents pay mega bucks to get their children in that school that prides themselves on the "anti bully policy", I find it odd no teacher or counsilour every sees these bullies maybe teachers feel threaten if any thing is said especially by a Harkins who think they are important.Hope Janet takes Jen seriously about still acts like Brian doesn't exists Justin will never accept her and let her be around her grandchildren if she doesn't respect Brian,hope Brad and Ken get in trouble for Brad saying Ken did slap Janet but it wasn't abuse if their crowd sees this spread in a divorce charge against Ken he will be shunned by the people whose opinion he needs to maintain his large ego.Loved granny and Alice preparing Brian's favorite foods just because he was so upset by Liam being ill and they wanted to show their love for him, everyone who lives at Britin love and respect him, he had no respect from Joan or Clair in his adult life I'm glad others know the man he is. Love ya, Sally

Hi Sweet Baboo, great chapter, hope Janet is playing it straight other wise Jen, Justin and Brian will have to hide a body!Always found Craig not worth the air he breathes now that he's gone Brad and Ken are even worse. Hope Janet files for divorce and uses abuse as a factor the newspapers will show what a piece of shit they are. Kevin and Gus were adorable standing watch over the twins. don't worry about chapters being in a timely manner, you were and are worth the wait! love you, Sally

Sweet Baboo, forgot during my raving...so glad your still using sweet Kevin in the story, you have some of your characters that have become as important to the readers as the original ones we met in 2000 on Showtime and seem just as real.  Love Sally

My Sweet Baboo, Happy to see this new chapter, still waiting to see Justin's granny. I hope she loves Brian I think the babies will win her over. Surprised Mel realized not only is this good for Gus but for Linz as well. Linz is not mentally well enough to be the mom that Gus needs but mikey wants Brian to pay his lawyer for JR to live with mikey but wants his mother to actually raise her so he can be with her but not spening any money. Unless I've forgotten something I think he still works for Brian (doesn't really work, just mostly shuffles around) he isn't really parent materal it's just a way to be with Brian.Joan's storyline is conflicted for me she was an abused wife, but never stopped the hell Brian was going thru, I know she is old and sick but in my head I keep hearing her words "God gae you cancer for a reason" she really hurt him. LOVE SALLY

Hey Sweet Baboo, After posting I looked at some of your other fans to see what they felt,  I read your reply about kleenex and about having a spare baby   Brian and Justin could not survive that they deserve their happiness after Craig , Joan,Jack and meddleing others if you must kill a child there is always mikey or JR we know mikey is an idiot and as far as JR we are aware Lenz and Mel are not good parents they arew to self centered with their own problems to pay attention to Gus's sister, love Sally

Hi Sweet Baboo  , S0 glad your still writing this story!  I hadn't been able respond as my laptop had a major meltdown after searching for a week the store said it would take time to diagnosis 3 weeks later buying a new laptop. Now about the chapter: what planet are Mark's parents   from, they are all about power and control. They don't have friends and don't want their children to have any (they may find to have a thought and realize their family is disfunctional)the car was one more way to control. Now with the Leda Mel may come to terms she has lost just abo all the "family". and loved how Leda told her she can't keep telling everyone Brian took her son and been shouting about Brian uses his money to destroy her....holding her sons toys fro m him was so wrong never seeing Gus or calling him may have made her realize she was hurting Gus not Brian, and finally, mikey invited hisself to Britin and try to force JR to talk with him while she and Nina want to play together. such a jerk! love ya, your Sally

Hey Sweet Baboo, I didn't mention mikey I really can't talk about him without cussing like a marine. Just wondered if maybe Cynthia could go off on him and shock him so bad that he can't speak, or in his case whine. silence sweet silence.

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Poor Mikey, you wish such bad things for him.  He remains sure he is correct and the rest of the world is wrong.  You made me laugh...  your sweet Baboo

Hi sweet Baboo, Holy Cow! when started the new story, you sure got everyones attention! Well Craigs dead, who knows where he will go--God doesn't want him he has broken every commandment more than once--and even the devil doesn't want him. His brother Brad sounds like he is a jerk. I wonder about Craig's parents, how do they feel about Jenn, Molly and Justin or is Brad voiceing his own view? Justin and Molly will be devastated when they learn he took his own life, it seems like he did this as the final fuck you, to make them feel guilty. When the babys are born they soon forget about Craig. I was surprised by Peter wanting to call Justin "papa" somehow I think it's about the newborns coming home and he feels that Justin won't love him anymore. Great chapter. love your Sally

 Hi Sweet Baboo, I always miss you, especially when I'm all wrapp Ced up in one of your stories. It's a shame Craig never got to know Brian, but it is own fault being a bigot and being ashamed of Justin he really deserved the life he had at the end. Brian and Justin showed the type of people they are in buying the merchandise and trying to take care of Craig's employees. When Brad and Craig's girl friend find out how and who he left to take care of his affairs they  will self cobust. I don't think when they find out Jen, Justin, and Molly told Craig's parents they were ask to not attend the funreal but they made up their minds. Something is not right about Brad's actions. Anyway it seems to be BABYTIME!!!As you know I LOVED this chapter as always, your Sally

My Sweet Baboo, this goes back to  chapter 2 (sorry) with all the drama I forgot about Peter, thought ILMAO when Brian was working his eyebrows and rolling his eyes when Peter was using as many papa's  as he could when telling Brian if he keep making faces  he might have to call him daddy, as smart and as loving as he is, peter is still a child, his grandmother wouldn't take him in,his mother cared more for drugs, and a loser father abandoned him until he thought he  could get some money from Brian and Justin. I think Alice understands his uncles but Peter isn't sure about being kicked to the curb again the hardest thing is  Gus is going to hurt by his daddies when the twins come, add that to Peters "papa" both are going to feel left out. Love ya Baboo, Sally

Hey my sweet Baboo, Don't make me hunt you down and kick your butt. Stop referring to your series Together Forever as a long saga. Every word of every chapter are truly beautiful. There are around seven authors that you have common thread you all write with such detail that the characters are real we really see them as family. I read about 12 hours a day so it's good I'm retired. You and your fellow authors bring us into the stories televison doesn't even try anymore they feel reality is the housewives of whatever. We appreciate the stories from everyone, spread that to your fellow authors.Your Sally

My Sweet Baboo, Your last chapter was really great. Your introduction of Jay and his    parents were eye opening, I think the mother couldn't meet her parents expectations and has put such pressure on Jay I felt so sorry for him and she even has his summer planned for him and she was just bitchy to her ex. Must be hard on a child especially when his dad was pleased with him. Itt was nice Peter and John were also honored those boys have come so far since being with Brian and Justin. As usual when mikey visited the twins he was as clueless (his usual state) he still doesn't understand why the men lived in the country and are absolutly in a dazed state with the love they feel for the twins and each other. I think who ever coined the phrase "dumb as a rock" met mikey. I think Kevin,John and Gus are enjoying the babies and love them to pieces if Mel and Lindsay think Brian is too selfesh to be a good parent perhaps they should purchse a a mirror. Love ya, your Sally

hey Sweet Baboo, I just thought of something ironic. In the series on tv I was always on Mel's side I always thought Linz played Brian and Mel against each other trying to gain each others trust. Linz was always a entitled brat who could turn on the water works in a blink of an eye and gaining their trust meant more money from Brian and taking what ever she could from Mel, always thought the c word described Linz to a tee, and the word is not CUTE !  I personally don't believe a word that comes out of her mouth. Love again Sally