Oh wow!!!  This was awesome.  I know I am rather late to the party but I wish there was more to this.  How I wish the show ended this way instead of the soul destroying way it did.  Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us!!!

Terri

I wonder what Lindsay is going to do now.  She is so devious and jealous of Justin!!!  I don't know if I have commented recently but I have been reading this all along and love this story.  It's nice to read about B&J in a stable, loving relationship without all the turmoil.  

You are an amazing writer.  Thank you very much for the enjoyable story!!!

I meant to add to my review that although it's so kind of you to offer free books to people, I want to buy my own and review it.  Why?  Because your hard work SHOULD be compensated.  I work and I expect to get paid and why shouldn't you?  

I always feel lucky that so many talented writers give us these amazing stories...take time from their own lives to create and write and entertain us...for free.  And previously, before I got a clue, I didn't even leave a review because I thought nobody would care.

I review now every time I can, which is most always, and I will happily purchase your book because based on what you have written, why wouldn't I?  It's money well spent in my opinion.  

This is getting better and better!!!  Looking forward to the next.

Just...beyond hot.  But sweet at the same time.  I love when Brian teaches Justin and then goes into protective mode.  Is there anything better?  I think not.

You have a gift and I am so glad you share it with us!!!  Thank you.

The only word for this story is....beautiful.  Your way with words is just so lovely.

This is shaping up to be a great story.  I wish I had the imagination to come up with such clever ideas.  The thought of slavery is so disgusting, and the thought of little Justin being a part of it is hearbreaking.  But, Brian being Brian, I know he will somehow fix things.  

It's so crazy reading the way people think about slavery that participate in it.  Like there are people, and then there are slaves.  How one gets themselves to that place is a scary thing.  It is just so inherently evil and yet it goes on still to this day.  

Now onto happier things, I hope.  Watching Brian and Justin get to know each other has al lsorts of potential for hotness.  I love B/J hotness.  Looking forward to more!

this seems quite promising!!!  Looking forward to more!!!

I am loving where this is going!!  Brian and Justin on a plane together can only be a good thing.  And when they land?  Who know, but I am excited to find out!!!

As soon as Brian gets the whipped cream and strawberries out of the fridge, one naturally pulls up a chair to watch!!!  Seriously though.  Brian.  Justin.  Food play, including ice and whipped topping that sprays out of a can?  Yes please!!!  So many opportunites for sexy, hot awesomeness there and you were up to that task.

If that is how you write flashbacks then I say, more please!!!  Love this!!!!

Wow. I can't believe this is your first story, really.  To me, being able to capture somebody's attention and give them that happy glow with so few words is a gift.

And that's what you have done here...it feels like Justin.  It sounds like him.  I can feel his pain and his joy and his hope for the future.  You did all that in very few words.

Well done!!!  I would love to read more.

Ahhhhhh!!!!  Now I know what happened and it was hot!!!  These two together always are, but it's amazing what you did with some fruit, ice and a can of whipped cream!!

I really enjoyed this and hope you write more!!!!

Oh no!!!  So, like, what happens now?  This is not good.  I feel so bad for both of them. Having cancer once must be awful.  Twice?  Beyond imagination.  Life can be so harsh.

Enjoying the story very much.

That was awesomely fun!!!  Especially the part about the matching Vera Wangs.  Left me smiling which is always a good thing.

It's hard to know who I am more angry at right now...Brian for pushing Justing away yet again, or Justin for letting him.  Grrrrh!!!!!  Don't these two get that they are IT for each other?  We all do. :)

Having said that, this story is very promising and I think you could do a lot with it.  Very well written and already I am on edge waiting to see how long they continue to torture each other before they get back together......where they belong.

Well done!

"The blinding smile Brian was on the receiving end of convinced him that this wouldn't end well.  At least not for Justin's boyfriend."  Awesome.  Hee,hee!!

I love this fic, you really have B & J spot on, and whiny Ethan?  Well, what can I say...I can't wait for him to just go away.  Never liked him, never will.  

But I LOVE this story!!!

Are they ever going to have sex?  I am so hoping this paves the way......:)

I really do not understand why people feel the need to be so rude about somebody else's work.  My feeling?  If you don't like it, just don't say anything.  I do find that it's usually an "anonymous" comment and that it's from somebody who doesn't submit anything of their own to be read.  There is such a thing as constructive criticism and comments such as "I don't like it" do NOT qualify.  It's not helpful, or even relevant.  I mean, there are lots of things I don't like but imagine if I just randomly went around and told people?  It's called manners and IMHO some people really need to get some.

OK, done with the rant.  This is a fun story.  I almost peed my pants when the frisky little dog was named Michael the second!!!  So perfect.  And of course Brian would hate that environment, but so what?  He does need to have some more fun in his life.  Thanks for sharing this with us.

I couldn't have worded it better myself. ~bob

Hey there,

They just posted a copy of the rules for this forum and it looks like I AM the confused one and am wrong in addition to that.  So I would like to say sorry for asking about this. Again, I meant no disrespect, I was just triing to figure out if MW was changing it's content so that I could just move on elsewhere and find what I enjoy.

Good luck with your story!

I like this!!!  I also love that you are posting daily.  I am already looking forward to tomorrow.  This is fun.

Oh Kim.  Justin in the driver's seat is extremely hot here.  I was wondering how long it would take Brian to figure things out and be brave and it was quicker than I thought.  I am so glad because this was so great.  Sweet, hot, sexy and adorable all at once.  Poor Brian, having to wait until age 40 to figure things out!!!  I am SO enjoying this.  Can't wait unti tomorrow.

Terri

I am sitting here grinning like a fool and I couldn't care less.  This is so beautiful and I think it is a perfect story.  This is the way it should be and I am so warm and fuzzy right now.  TFS!!!

Ugh.  So Brian.  Well, as always we will wait for him to wake up and smell the coffee!!  Great story.

This is beautiful.  You should write more!

I haven't even started this yet but just want to say that I am SO excited this is here!!  I finished the first one and felt a pang of sadness, like a friend had died.  Thanks so very much for sharing your work.

Best Valentine's present ever!!  This story has it all.  You are so very good at this and I am so grateful you continue to share your work with us.  XOXO Terri

Oh this is breaking my heart......those poor, stupid men!!!  They belong together and I can't wait until they figure it ous.  This story is excellent btw and i look forward to more.

That.  Was.  Ah-maaaazing!!!

It must be such a satisfying feeling to be able to put words to paper and weave a story that others enjoy so much.  I am always humbled by the talent here and this story is no exception.  Since I was small I have always loved to read.  Always.  There is just something about reading that is unlike anything else in the world. 

The best thing is when you find a book or a story that grabs you and draws you in...it's like your birthday and Christmas wrapped up in one.  It's a gift unlike any other and I thank you for this gift.  Looking forward to more.

Terri

I really enjoyed this!!! I can't believe it's your first one either.  You really spoke for the characters and it felt real to me.  I can SO imagine Ethan thinking he was the best thing ever to happen to Justin when in reality....yuck.  B&J belong together and I love hearing their thoughts as they finally figure it out.  TFS.