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What if Justin's brain damage from the bashing was more severe --- In this story Brian's love is shown for the young man he needs in his life Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 38582 [Report This] Published: October 20, 2010 Updated: July 24, 2013
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Date: January 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I like this story.. it's kind of different. and you've made me read this twice in 2 days. Most of the stories I've read with angst from the family before, will be ended with Brian relented and forgave them even though there're their mistakes. and as usual, Brian would be the one who will bear all the charges and accusations. but it's different with this story, where Brian cut off all the ties he's having with the so called 'family'. no need to harsh in words, but enough with the actions. also like the way Justin was in charge to be upfront with all the claims and acted on behalf of Brian's interest. Debbie & Michael were so in denial.. when did they will realize that all the tips were from Brian? and Linds and Mel also still have the heart to spend all their money in Vegas, whereas Brian already cut the payment to them? and as 1 of the commentator mentioned, I think it would be better is you include Emmet & Vic in their 'now' loop of family & friends, as apparently Emmet was not with the 'family' when they turned on Brian. Summary:
Loose adaption of the movie - Justin and Brian are living separate lives in different cities, raising one twin alone; what happens when their two daughters meet unexpectedly as pre-teens? **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!**
Categories: Minor Character Death, QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Drama, Humor, Jealousy, Romance Characters: Justin, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 388729 [Report This] Published: May 24, 2011 Updated: February 20, 2014
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Date: February 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Man on a Mission Kim dear, Please update soon. The sooner the better!!! ;)
*hugs*
Author's Response: Hello, Sue, my friend.:) Always so great to hear from you, and to know that you're reading this one. I DO have most of the next chapter written; but need to finish it up, which I hope to do today (crossing fingers). My beta, Gloria, is wonderful at getting them back to me quickly, too, so I'm hopeful it will be posted at least no later than Wednesday (I really do have to work on some school grading - ugh!). Thank you so much for reading and for the comments, Sweetheart.:) That means the world to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: November 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: First Date LOL!!!! I really couldn't hold my laughter when they got busted by a patrolman. Author's Response: Hi, Sue! Thanks for reading and for the feedback, my friend. So glad that you enjoyed this one.;) I thought it was kind of ironic that Brian, the previous Stud of Liberty Avenue and the man who didn't think twice about using cuffs on a policeman himself, would wind up being busted for his 'friskiness.';) Thanks for taking the time to comment! I will get this updated again just as soon as I can. Probably have one or two more chapters to go before it's finished. Thanks again for the support. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
***Featured Story for January 2017*** Set approx. 1 month post-series: An accident leaves Brian with responsibility for raising his son. He gets a little help from his friends along the way, but will he be able to handle his new role of full-time father and everything that comes with it? This is Brian's journey...
Enjoy this playlist to go with this story; Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Minor Character Death, Real Life Issues, What If Characters: Ben, Brian, Carl, Cynthia, Daphne, Debbie, Gus, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Ted Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 216803 [Report This] Published: March 06, 2013 Updated: January 02, 2017
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Date: March 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Poses Yeah.. I agree with TheWickedStepmother's coment. Justin should just go back to NY and let Brian to tend all the problems by himself as he usually thinks he does, eventhough deep inside his heart, he needs Justin by his side. and if he does really need Justin, let him beg for it.. poor Justin, always has been pushed off Mt Kinney.. my heart goes out to him.. Author's Response: The saga of Brian and Justin. Brian can't seem to stop being an idiot and it's very frustrating for me, too! Thank you for reading and commenting :)
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Date: April 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Black and Blue my heart goes for Justin... if ever Brian was not so stubborn & tried to 'rule' Justin's life, his own life would be much nicer and happier.. Author's Response: haha! You make a good point - Brian does seem intent to prohibit his own happiness. thank you for reading and commenting! :)
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Date: July 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Naked Love Please.. please ... please...No more roadblocks or unfortunate things thrown in their path. They both had suffered long enough. Really hope you could throw more great and fortunate things to them.. Btw, I also like the way you made Brian so vulnerable when he felt Justin's doubting him, and he's thinking wisely the answer to give, to prevent both of them hurt themselves again. I really love it!
Author's Response: Well, there will be more great things coming; whether or not they are also unfortunate is up to you to decide! :) (sorry, I had to tease!) Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D
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Date: August 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Silent Lucidity I'm begging you again. please.. please.. please let Brian terminate Jesse and hire new PT for Lindsay.. and cut Jesse out from their life for good!! I really hate him very, very, very much..
and I know for sure, the new villain in Rage will be based on Jesse character, right? and also I think the nightmares were caused of Justin's uncomfortable with Jesse around. so, please get rid of him, immediately!
I just wonder about the potrait of Brian? you didn't mention it in this chapter, whether Brian likes it or not, and what he /Justin's going to do with that potrait
Author's Response: Jesse won't be around much longer - I can tell you that much :) Thanks for reading and commenting! Summary:
Gus comes to visit the boys for spring break; havoc ensues. Featured Story for April 2019!!
Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family, Brian/Justin, Challenges, Easter, Humor, Romance Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 20455 [Report This] Published: March 31, 2013 Updated: April 08, 2013
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Date: April 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue Kim dear.. what a great story.. Ireally like it when Brian took his own of 'revenge' on Melanie.. she deserved that! reading through chapter 2, I was thinking, 'is it Cujo?' but sadly, it was a rabbit. I think it's been a while we haven't heard any story about Cujo/Tricky. if you have time, could you please create an update story about him? *hugs*
Author's Response: Hi, Sue! Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend. You weren't the only one who was hoping Tricky would show up in here. He would have been a natural fit, but part of it was the time constraint to get this finished before the deadline. So ultimately I had to, alas, leave poor "Cujo" out of the picture. But not to fear, as soon as I can finish up one of my other stories, the boys' wedding will be making an appearance in a new story, and Tricky will be making a prominent and chaotic return in their lives, along with maybe a 'puppy' accomplice to help stir up the mayhem even more.;) I'm glad you enjoyed the story, though. Thank you again for reading and for the feedback; that was very kind of you.:) *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
When Melanie and Lindsay conspire to keep Brian and Justin from attending Gus' high school graduation, the two men and their son have all had enough.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Anti-Lindsay, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 7200 [Report This] Published: April 08, 2013 Updated: August 23, 2013
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Date: August 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 really hate Mel & Linds! I've never liked them in the series, always blamed Brian for everything, and yet took an advantage on Brian because of Gus, and never felt guilty of that. way to go Brian & Justin! I love how you wrote about them, to stand up for Gus, be there for him. I hope once Gus reach his 18th birthday, he'll choose to stay with his dads and leave his evil moms behind. please update more soon! Summary:
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Anti-Lindsay, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hetero Sex, Humor Characters: Brian, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: Body Swap Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 5517 [Report This] Published: April 14, 2013 Updated: April 17, 2013
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Date: April 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I do not know why, I just couldn't accept this, because I feel sad for Justin. as we can see how 'reluctantly' Lindsay to be fucked by Brian, I don't think Justin would do the same thing with Mel. not ever... never.. and I don't want to see any broken hearts here, esp from Justin & Brian. Author's Response: Welcome to MW. Justin and Mel; no I won’t be taking the fic there. LOL In the tv series we see Justin cheat, Mel cheat, Lindsay cheat and Brian hurt Justin so many times with his tricking, plus we read about them cheating in so many fictional stories and after all that, I just love it that my little fic can stir emotions in you. I like that you can feel so much for the characters. Thank you for the review I really appreciate it. Cheers Summary:
If you're wondering why the title... yes, it was inspired by "With Arms Wide Open" by Creed. I've been thinking of making this song into a story for years... and it finally came to me today. I sincerely wanted to get this done earlier, because my original purpose of writing this was to wish Predec2 a Happy Birthday! That's right, KP ;) I wrote a story for your birthday, cause I had to do more than just send a simple Happy Birthday wish. I was trying for sweet, fluffy and happy, and while I managed the sweet and happy, the song that inspired the story just led to a bit of angst. I made sure there was still smut and lemons though... what's a Brian/Justin story without that? Not to mention, it's one of my stories. Happy Birthday Kim! This story's for you! Cheers, Laura :) xoxo Categories: Song Fic, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, One-Off Fic, Romance, Unsafe Sex Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4763 [Report This] Published: April 15, 2013 Updated: April 15, 2013
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Date: April 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 oh.. what a nice & sweet story.. it's very rare we got to see Brian being so open like this.. btw, I too, would like to wish Kim @ Predec2: Happy Birthday!!! May your birthday bring a smile to your face, happiness to your heart and many blessings to your life.. ;) Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and compliment. I had to do something for the person who inspired me to write fanfiction, and I couldn't think of a better way than with a story dedicated to her with all the best about Brian/Justin: love, sweetness, family, romance, lemons and family. Cheers, Laura :) Summary:
Justin never went on the Liberty Ride with Brian, and he so wanted to make love under the stars. Camping can be fun, but a lot of work. Who is the more experienced camper and where could they go and still have the privacy they want?
This was a part of the Great Outdoors Summer Challenge, but wasn't posted in time. I'll keep it as part of the categories, though, cause it started out that way. It has been completed, though. It’s a stand-alone story. If it happens to fit in with one of my universes it would be purely coincidental. Part of this story was inspired by Jackie Mag’s newest story: Moonrider, and it’s dedicated to her as well… Happy Birthday Diane! <3 U girl! Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Challenges, Romance Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 26021 [Report This] Published: July 14, 2013 Updated: August 26, 2013
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Date: August 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: You Send Me this is one of my favourite stories. and I kept coming to this site to see whether you've already updated it or not. Finally, you did! thank you dear for sharing this beautiful story. you've brought me to the another world, while I was imagining how the camping site would be look like, and now, how the mansion would be look like during summer. I've already known from the start that the camping site was on their own 'Britin' backyard, because Brian seemed like trying hard enough to create a 'story' of the owner to Justin. btw, why there's no sunshine's symbol to this story? Summary:
Brian opens up a new ad agency in California and develops a new hobby in his off hours. Little did he realize that he would discover another passion.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Summer Fan Fiction Challenge Characters: Brian, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 71256 [Report This] Published: August 14, 2013 Updated: September 09, 2013
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Date: August 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Surfin' USA drooling session has started.. ;-) Author's Response: Hi, Sue! I'm always delighted to hear from you.;) Glad to see you reading this one.:) And, yes, 'drooling' is a good word for it, and it's going to get even more pronounced now, although it won't be smooth sailing at first for Brian. I just posted the next part, and the boys will be getting better acquainted.;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: August 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Fun, Fun, Funnel... I'd rather if Justin played hard to get, and refuse to get a day off, because it obviuosly was benefactored by Brian. but then, this story would be, hmmm.. may be 30 chapters long? and I don't want to wait that long for a beautiful ending of them.. however, I also like how this story's leading. and really hope their sweet & beautiful 'reconciliation' won't happen under that gazebo. as people will see & talk, and I don't want that sweet moment reach to Craig' ears. can't wait for more. please update soon dear :) Author's Response: Hi, Sue! Thank you for reading and for all the feedback! Don't worry; they WILL finally have that first time together, but it will definitely NOT be under that gazebo. I have something more romantic in mind for them, but hopefully still within character for Brian. I should be able to post another chapter shortly. Thank you for all the support, Sue! I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: August 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: It's In His Kiss was Justin still in his uniform swimming trunk, while riding the bike and went to vintage car show? love to read the 'un'romanticness side of Brian.. Author's Response: Hi, Sue...yes, I hope perhaps you can suspend just a little bit of concern over that.;) Probably not the best attire for riding a bike, but at least he was behind Brian on the seat, so I'm hoping his pale little legs didn't get chafed or burned while they were riding;) Thank you for reading and for the comments; I will have the next part up sometime today. *Hugs* ~Kim
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Date: August 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: I Wanna Make it with You... oh babe.. I really love this story very, very much.. I love how Brian didn't even hesitate or flinch to say taht he love Justin in front of Justin's family. ahhhhh...*dreamy* and I also like when there're no Deb, Lindsay, Melanie and most of all, Michael in this story. It's kind of like a world in peace without them interfere. but I kind of miss Theodore though. Thought would read a bit about him, being an accountant for Brian at Kinnetic. job well done dear.. congrats! ~hugs & kisses~ Author's Response: Hello, Sue - thank you for reading this story and for your comments. I couldn't help throwing in the "I Love You," even though Brian might never have really said it. I almost put Ted in there as the comptroller, but finally decided it could work without him. Thank you again for all the kind words; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
Brian, Justin and the gang spend a summer weekend in Provincetown, MA (also known as “P-Town”), one of the most famous, gay, vacation spots on the East Coast. Join them in this light, frolicking, fluff of fun. Sincere thanks to my beta Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Summer Fan Fiction Challenge Characters: Ben, Brian, Original Character(s), Ted Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 17347 [Report This] Published: August 15, 2013 Updated: September 09, 2013
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Date: August 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love the possessiveness side of Justin towards Brian.. can't wait for more! Author's Response: I love it, too. And I like that Brian isn't making a stink about it. I'll be updating soon, thanks so much for reading and commenting. All the very best, Laura Summary:
Takes place six years after Justin leaves Brian at the Rage Party. Brian and Justin haven't seen or spoken in six years. What happens when they not only see each other but have to work together? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: Brian, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 24903 [Report This] Published: September 15, 2013 Updated: September 22, 2013
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Date: September 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ooohh.. that was so sweet to end this story the only thing I missed out, is how they worked together at VanGuard after they got back together. I'd love if you mentioned about that a little bit in previous chapters. but........ who cares, right? as long as they were together, that's the only thing that counts. Summary:
Sequel to "A Haunting We Will Go." Through a case of mistaken identity, an amorous ghost latches onto Brian and won't let go. Who you gonna call? *STORY IS NOW COMPLETE*
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Humor, Jealousy, Romance, Halloween Characters: Brian, Emmett, Justin, Mysterious Marilyn Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 22036 [Report This] Published: October 26, 2013 Updated: November 04, 2013
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Date: October 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: "Mine" "Signing off now, Brian." hahaha... I love it. as if they're on skyping, instead of phone calling..
Author's Response: Hi, Sue! Thank you for reading and for the comments; I"m delighted that you're enjoying this one. The plot is about to thicken; I just added the third chapter which explains why our spook has such a fixation on poor Brian.;) Thanks again for the feedback; I hope you continue to enjoy the story. *Hugs* ~Kim Summary:
So here you are.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin Characters: None Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4230 [Report This] Published: March 10, 2015 Updated: March 10, 2015
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Date: March 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: And Then... He Leaves oh dear... you've made me shed tears twice today. 1st, when I read the 'Unpredictable Together' this afternoon. and 2nd, tonight, when I reead this. it's so sad.... Author's Response: I actually think "Unpredictable Together" is pretty optmistic, if rather cautiously so. This is sad, yes- but I can't see their parting as being any less gut-wrenching for Brian. He's come to love Justin so deeply that having him leave is like being torn apart. Brian is very set in his habits, and relies on continuity, even if he pretends not to. It's sad, but... what can I do? Blame CowLip! XD |
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